Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 23
Yes they are up to no good I just want Edward and Bella to get there HEA.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 23
Bella and Edward just need to get married.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Hi
thank you so much for your review
fiona( Robsessed73)
Date: 15 Aug 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
I know they are to something. Edward better get show Bella the crap text from Tanya and then get rid of them. If he hides things from her then it will be trouble. Great chapter. Yes please a teaser. Hurry back with more
Author's Response: Hi. thank you for your review. I am just finished the next chapter. Here is a teaser. "Fuck." Edward ceased his attack on my neck. He hitched one of my legs up to his waist, positioning his cock at my entrance as he wrapped his other arm around my waist, and thrust into me. It didn't take long for me to start clenching around him, my walls beating against his throbbing cock. Edward then pulled out which almost killed me. "Edward, why are you stopping? Move…please." I grabbed his ass, trying to move him forward. "I want to make it last longer." he said with hooded eyes before entering me again, this time thrusting more carefully. He plunged into me over and over. I ran my fingertips up and down his back, my breath catching every time he slammed into me. "Harder." I moaned, bitting his shoulder. He slammed his hips into me more forcefully, gritting his teeth and squeezing his eyes shut. Yes, Yes, Yes," I cried out, cluching at his shoulders. "Bella…Bella…" He chanted my name as he came and buried his face in my neck. You're beautiful." he said, pulling out of me and bringing his hand up to caress my cheek. "I love you." "I love you too." I smiled, kissing his chest. "This is the first time I have ever had shower sex. Thank you for sharing this first with me, my love," he said.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
Yeah the night is officially fucked. Hopefully how ever it is fucked doesn't end up in the tabloids.
Date: 30 Jul 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it loved the bath and I would love a taster please love you new fan
Author's Response:
hi.
thanks u so much for your review.
here is a teaser for chapter 23
this is unbeta'd
She slowly opened her eyes and gasped as she looked around the penthouse. The entire room was covered in different color flowers and a path of rose petals led the way to the bedroom. I walked over and opened the door.
The bed was covered in more rose petals and roses. champagne and apple cider were lay in the ice bucket next to the bed along with chocolate truffles and strawberries. I could feel Bella coming up behind me and wrapping her arms around my waist.
"Why Edward? Why did you do all of this," she asked.
I turned around and took her face in between my hands.
"Because I love you baby and I wanted to spoil you, even if it is only for one night," I said, pressing my lips softly to hers. I swept my tongue across her lower lip seeking access into her mouth which she willingly gave. I left her lips and travelled down to her neck sucking and kissing it before pulling away. I rested my forehead against hers, still breathing heavily.
"I love you so much Bella," I purred.
"I love you too Edward, forever," she whispered.
"Bella there is something I want to give to you love," I said, sitting her on the bed. I took out the little box that I had close to my heart for the last month and kneeled down in front of her.
Her big brown eyes went wide and she started to shake a little when she saw the little black box in my hand.
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2013 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
Oh. My. God!! What are Jacob and Tanya up to? It's bad enough that Tanya was going to be there but to have Jacob as her date, well, nothing good can come out of it. Edward and Bella will need to keep their distance, stay close to their family and friends.
Alice and Rose are always getting in the way of Edward and Bella, they'd only just got in that bath when Alice started banging the door down. *huffs and folds arms* Those two need to give Edward and Bella more space and time to themselves. *nods head* Lol.
I'm looking forward to seeing how this party turns out. I hope it isn't completely ruined by the jealous losers.
Jane x
Date: 30 Jul 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward needs to be the better man and ignore the trash. He needs to stay glued to Bella. Edward also needs to warn his friends, so he has extra support. He should also tell his lawyer to check on putting sexual harassment charges on Lisa. He should not have to put up with her crap.
Date: 29 Jul 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 22
as I, Lisa, and Sylvia are pathetic. but even worse is skankya and jerkob black. e is being so sweet.
Date: 29 Jul 2013 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
Man these two seem to have so much against them. I really hope they can get through it all. I'm really terrified for Bella since she is so young and pregnant. She seems to sweet and innocent to know how to handle all these sharks that are circling them. Can't wait for the next update! And yes, I would love a teaser.
Author's Response: hi. thanks u so much for your review. here is a teaser for chapter 23 this is unbeta'd She slowly opened her eyes and gasped as she looked around the penthouse. The entire room was covered in different color flowers and a path of rose petals led the way to the bedroom. I walked over and opened the door. The bed was covered in more rose petals and roses. champagne and apple cider were lay in the ice bucket next to the bed along with chocolate truffles and strawberries. I could feel Bella coming up behind me and wrapping her arms around my waist. "Why Edward? Why did you do all of this," she asked. I turned around and took her face in between my hands. "Because I love you baby and I wanted to spoil you, even if it is only for one night," I said, pressing my lips softly to hers. I swept my tongue across her lower lip seeking access into her mouth which she willingly gave. I left her lips and travelled down to her neck sucking and kissing it before pulling away. I rested my forehead against hers, still breathing heavily. "I love you so much Bella," I purred. "I love you too Edward, forever," she whispered. "Bella there is something I want to give to you love," I said, sitting her on the bed. I took out the little box that I had close to my heart for the last month and kneeled down in front of her. Her big brown eyes went wide and she started to shake a little when she saw the little black box in my hand.
Date: 29 Jul 2013 7:52 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 29 Jul 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 22
That's soooo wrong...
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 22
Fun chapter with some angst. Hope to here from you sooner than later!!
Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
I never like seeing Jacob! I just hope Bella's night isn't ruined. I want her and Edward to have their own after party with a lot of sexing. Thanks for writing. I would love a teaser.
Lisa...Gail Cullen
Author's Response: hi.
thanks u so much for your review.
here is a teaser for chapter 23
this is unbeta'd
She slowly opened her eyes and gasped as she looked around the penthouse. The entire room was covered in different color flowers and a path of rose petals led the way to the bedroom. I walked over and opened the door.
The bed was covered in more rose petals and roses. champagne and apple cider were lay in the ice bucket next to the bed along with chocolate truffles and strawberries. I could feel Bella coming up behind me and wrapping her arms around my waist.
"Why Edward? Why did you do all of this," she asked.
I turned around and took her face in between my hands.
"Because I love you baby and I wanted to spoil you, even if it is only for one night," I said, pressing my lips softly to hers. I swept my tongue across her lower lip seeking access into her mouth which she willingly gave. I left her lips and travelled down to her neck sucking and kissing it before pulling away. I rested my forehead against hers, still breathing heavily.
"I love you so much Bella," I purred.
"I love you too Edward, forever," she whispered.
"Bella there is something I want to give to you love," I said, sitting her on the bed. I took out the little box that I had close to my heart for the last month and kneeled down in front of her.
Her big brown eyes went wide and she started to shake a little when she saw the little black box in my hand.
Date: 28 Jul 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
Can't wait to read more please
Date: 28 Jul 2013 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
Well, Eddie dear, you better just suck it up and not let Jacob ruin your night out on the town with Bella! Do you want to ruin the evening for Bella? Because this very public appearance is important!
Lisa is a f*cking slut! Silvia too
Date: 28 Jul 2013 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. Well the only thing he is doing with her is teaming up with the other crazy people to her Edward and Bella. What they don't realize is Bella has a crazy pixie as a friend. Yes a teaser please. Great chapter.
Author's Response: hi. thanks u so much for your review. here is a teaser for chapter 23 this is unbeta'd She slowly opened her eyes and gasped as she looked around the penthouse. The entire room was covered in different color flowers and a path of rose petals led the way to the bedroom. I walked over and opened the door. The bed was covered in more rose petals and roses. champagne and apple cider were lay in the ice bucket next to the bed along with chocolate truffles and strawberries. I could feel Bella coming up behind me and wrapping her arms around my waist. "Why Edward? Why did you do all of this," she asked. I turned around and took her face in between my hands. "Because I love you baby and I wanted to spoil you, even if it is only for one night," I said, pressing my lips softly to hers. I swept my tongue across her lower lip seeking access into her mouth which she willingly gave. I left her lips and travelled down to her neck sucking and kissing it before pulling away. I rested my forehead against hers, still breathing heavily. "I love you so much Bella," I purred. "I love you too Edward, forever," she whispered. "Bella there is something I want to give to you love," I said, sitting her on the bed. I took out the little box that I had close to my heart for the last month and kneeled down in front of her. Her big brown eyes went wide and she started to shake a little when she saw the little black box in my hand.
Date: 22 Jul 2013 12:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am so glad that they are working out the problems. Emmett and Rose are great. These two are going to need all the support they can get.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm so glad that Edward reported Carmen and Emily, you just can't let people get away with breaking into your house, trashing the place and threatening your lives. I think Edward's done the right thing by taking Bella and himself to live with Emmett and Rose for a while and also for getting Seth to be her bodyguard. Alice will still be able to talk to her on the phone and she'll still be able to see her, it's not like they're living on the other side of the country from each other.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 21
I wonder if she heard him??? LOL love this a lot, can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2013 11:40 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
She is a NUTCASE! love it
[Report This]Date: 08 Jul 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 20
I loved this so much. I am alwaus playign catch up, but this story is so worth it. YAY!
Date: 07 Jul 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it!!!!
Date: 06 Jul 2013 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 21
Glad they got restraining orders at least....not that they do much until after something usually happens. ah well. Hee hee for bella running away at the end. Like this nice Rose
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 21
love em and rose
i think edward needs to give her sometime
loving it
Date: 05 Jul 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 21
Ugh y did she run? Can we get together soon....please....
Date: 05 Jul 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 05 Jul 2013 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 21
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 21
That was a very sweet moment. Embarrassing but flattering. Wondering when they are going to give into each other.
Date: 04 Jul 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it1 so happy Bella and Edward are getting closer again.. and that they are able to go and live with Emment and Rose. looking forward to more so please update soon. And like the sequel idea and title!
Wil this be a HEA for them?
Date: 04 Jul 2013 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am glad they brought the police in to protect them. I like that they are getting closer. thanks for writing.
Lisa
Date: 04 Jul 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter. I think they forgot that jake is back too. Hurry back with more. A teaser would be great.
Author's Response:
Hi. thank you for the review. I love reading them all and I take all ideas into consideration
fiona xo
Teaser for All Alone Chapter 22.
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I looked over to where Emmett was talking to Aro Smith the director. I decided to waited until he was finished so that we could leave until I saw him pinching the bridge of his nose. It was a sign that he was getting agitated or uncomfortable so I walked over to them and tap him on the shoulder. Aro turned to me with a sick smile on his face.
"Hello Edward. Thank you for coming over because at least I can talk sensibily to you since your brother refuses to do so," he smirked.
I knew that smile. He only smiled that way when he was up to something. I was about to say that I did not want to hear it but Emmett jumped in instead.
"Aro! I have told you already that there is no way that I will agree to it and even if Edward agreed, then I would take her myself," Emmett spat furiously.
I looked from Emmett to Aro wondering what the fuck was going on when suddenly a light bulb went on into my head.
"This is all about Bella. Isn't it? You don't want me to escort her to the party because she is my pregnant girlfriend! Well before you say another word about the subject, let me talk. Bella is my life and I am going to proudly show her off tonight and there is not a fucking thing that you can do about it," I spat, my mouth full of venom.
"But Edward. Lisa and I have been talking and it could ruin your popularity, not to mention this film if you turn up at the Beverly hills hilton with a pregnant 16 year old. We are only thinking about you," he said smugly.
I could not believe what I was hearing. I could feel myself getting angrier with every word he spoke.
"No, you are only fucking thinking about yourself and as for Lisa the whore who continues to hit on me because she cannot take no for an answer, she is nothing more than a jealous cunt. Now I will be at the welcome back cast party with my beautiful girlfriend who will be accompaning me and there is fuck all that you can do about it," I spat at him before storming over to my car.
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great Chapter, curious how Emily will be able to get to Bella though. Can't wait to see how Rose & Emmett's characters will be. I like that Rose is a Chef instead of all about cars that is different.
Also I really like the idea that you are considering a squeal. Are you looking at letting Bella & Edward get closer sooner than later? I would really like a teaser.
Update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review. I really love reading them all and I take all ideas into consideration.
fiona xo
Teaser for All Alone Chapter 22.
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I looked over to where Emmett was talking to Aro Smith the director. I decided to waited until he was finished so that we could leave until I saw him pinching the bridge of his nose. It was a sign that he was getting agitated or uncomfortable so I walked over to them and tap him on the shoulder. Aro turned to me with a sick smile on his face.
"Hello Edward. Thank you for coming over because at least I can talk sensibily to you since your brother refuses to do so," he smirked.
I knew that smile. He only smiled that way when he was up to something. I was about to say that I did not want to hear it but Emmett jumped in instead.
"Aro! I have told you already that there is no way that I will agree to it and even if Edward agreed, then I would take her myself," Emmett spat furiously.
I looked from Emmett to Aro wondering what the fuck was going on when suddenly a light bulb went on into my head.
"This is all about Bella. Isn't it? You don't want me to escort her to the party because she is my pregnant girlfriend! Well before you say another word about the subject, let me talk. Bella is my life and I am going to proudly show her off tonight and there is not a fucking thing that you can do about it," I spat, my mouth full of venom.
"But Edward. Lisa and I have been talking and it could ruin your popularity, not to mention this film if you turn up at the Beverly hills hilton with a pregnant 16 year old. We are only thinking about you," he said smugly.
I could not believe what I was hearing. I could feel myself getting angrier with every word he spoke.
"No, you are only fucking thinking about yourself and as for Lisa the whore who continues to hit on me because she cannot take no for an answer, she is nothing more than a jealous cunt. Now I will be at the welcome back cast party with my beautiful girlfriend who will be accompaning me and there is fuck all that you can do about it," I spat at him before storming over to my car.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 6:27 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
I lost my review whilst it was trying to post.
Emily is completely delusional, I think she's a brick short of a load. In fact I'd go as far as saying she's a psycho and the rest of her family are the same apart from Esme and Eleazar. Edward and Bella need to get a restraining order out against her, she's dangerous and Bella's in the firing line.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 29 Jun 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward should have called the police, Emily broke into his house and assaulted him, she's caused so much trouble and she's still doing it, it's time she got her comeuppance.
I'm glad that Edward and Bella are getting on better. They need to be together now more than ever. Bella needs his support and Edward needs to part of the whole experience, it will help him bond more with the twins when they're born and also the support he can give to Bella will deepen their relationship. You can't take things too slow when you have babies due in a few months time, they're going to need both their parents.
Jane x
Date: 13 Jun 2013 4:37 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
There must be a crazy gene in Carmen's dna. All her girls are crazy. Edward and Bella need to be very careful. Edward might want to get a security guard to be with Bella when he can't. She should also go to school online, so she can be protected. There are too many people threatening her and the babies.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh Bella you are going to get yourself into big trouble!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:51 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
Wow She is a hateful, nutty Biatch.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow Emily and Carmen both need to be put away. They need to get the police involved. Between the letter and emily assaulting, i'd think they could get a restraining order at least.
Date: 10 Jun 2013 3:58 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
Loved the outtakes.
Date: 09 Jun 2013 2:37 AM Title: Outtake (Emily)
I hope all of Carmen's daughters and Jacob will be exposed for who they truly are.
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 10:10 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
Well Emily is coo coo for coco puffs! LOL. Talk about off her rocker! Wow!
Looking forward to seeinng what's going to happen next.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 9:36 PM Title: Prologue
OMG!!!! Carmen is a snake in the grass! And that Emily is crazy!!! Hope they can all keep Bella and the babies safe. Love this and can't wait for more! Please update ASAP! :-))
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 6:32 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
Wow, delusional much?
Talk about nuts, it's a whole family of crazies.
Date: 07 Jun 2013 4:25 AM Title: Outtake (Emily)
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
man edward is a prick and i hope karma bites him big time
i am just worried about bella and her parents such a good kid and a mistake changed her life
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
wow edward has some growing up to do or a reality check.
it is funny cause his friends see his error in his ways but he does not
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
wow edward is an ass, shame on him
too bad bella the virgin caught up in the moment and unfortunately it has changed her life
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 5
bella was silly to jump again when she knew what type of guy he is to begin with
so i don't think she should be upset he didn't promise her anything
and edward should know better than to sleep with someone without protection stupid
Date: 07 Jun 2013 1:13 AM Title: Outtake (Emily)
Emily. Delusional much?
Date: 06 Jun 2013 11:32 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
OMG!! She is insane! How can she even blame Edward when it wasn't even his baby?
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 10:56 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
What I want to know is WHY everyone, especially Edward, lets her spew her bullshit without correction?! If that were me, I'd be more than happy to not only correct her delusions, but remind her crazy ass that the baby she aborted was NOT even mine in the first place - it was Jacob's, which is who she SHOULD be angry with! He IS the one who knocked her up, while she had a boyfriend no less, and then told her to try to pawn it off on her boyfriend, which happened to be poor Edward. What kind of scum bag does that? And to his own foster sister no less? Jacob, that's WHO!
She IS the one who cheated, not Edward! She IS the one who chose to get an abortion instead of being a woman, owning up to her responsibilities and having it, not Edward! She has NO ONE but herself to blame for her misery...and Jacob, too, if she can get her head out of her ass & realize that! Jacob used her, plain & simple! He told her he didn't want his own child, NOT Edward! Her anger is soooooo misplaced. And for Carmen to allow this lunacy to continue is just ridiculous!!! That whole family is NUTS!
All I'm saying is that instead of Edward wasting his breath by telling Emily that he loves Bella, and doesn't want her, he NEEDS to just lay it all out - the TRUTH, like I stated above - & try to get through to the nut bag, instead of pissing her off more. He also should've called the police while Emily was there, and pressed charges on her for breaking & entering, trespassing, property damage, & assault, and then got a restraining order. Instead, he chose to be an idiot, and have a freakin' cookout! Now, it'll be her word against his...and she's the type that would definitely falsely accuse him of something, & get him into trouble! He's going to be a dad soon...he NEEDS to start using his brain! He also needs to take Bella somewhere unknown, & safe until Emily is taken care of. Hire bodyguards!
One last question...If he's such a big movie star, then WHY doesn't he have better security/bodyguards, etc. ? Emily should NEVER have been able to get that kind of access to him, or his home.
Looking forward to the next chapter! ;)
Date: 06 Jun 2013 6:41 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
I think he needs to pack them up and run...run really far! Emily and her mother are very sick people. Thanks for the bonus chapter...always wanting more!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 4:34 PM Title: Outtake (Emily)
:) loved this
Date: 06 Jun 2013 7:42 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
Date: 06 Jun 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward to mroe
Date: 06 Jun 2013 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm so glad that Edward and Bella are starting to support and believe in each other. I hope that he can really protect her when they get away, but what would be the fun in that though? A story isn't any good without the drama and these two have had their fair share. Anyway, great chapter and I can't wait til the next. A little teaser is nice though.
Date: 05 Jun 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 20
cant wait for more
Date: 05 Jun 2013 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 20
Wow does crazy bitch ring a bell? Excellent update...worth the wait!
Date: 05 Jun 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 20
Just going to say protecting Bella back fires .Danger magnet!
Date: 05 Jun 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 20
Great chapter. Yes do a teaser. I think he needs to get Emily and Carmen out of the way. I also would be worried about what jake is up to. Hurry back with more.
Date: 04 Jun 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! Can't wait to see what will happen next!
[Report This]Date: 02 Jun 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
Can't wait for the next installment of this great story! I think Edward's mystery guest might be Emily..I am happy that he is starting to man up towards Bella & the babies!!
Date: 29 May 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Emily? Jacob? Kate? The reseptionist he got fired?
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sandy is such a jealous bitch and she definitely deserved to be fired. If I remember correctly didn't she, on at least one occasion, invite Edward into the copy room with her? In fact, her behaviour was like a pavlovian response whenever she saw Edward, she'd arrange cover for reception and head to the copy room. I'm glad that Edward went to talk to Bella, apologised and told her what he wanted. I think Bella's initial requests were too restrictive to allow for much to grow between them, apart from the babies, lol. What's Carmen up to now and surely if she's put something in writing that's threatening Bella or the babies then the police should be involved? As for Edward's mystery guest. Well, I think that list is becoming a long one now and I'm rubbish a guessing, lol.
Jane x
Date: 19 May 2013 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
i think its that skank emily
Date: 19 May 2013 4:25 PM Title: Prologue
Is Bella legal to have sex at sixteen. Good start to your story
[Report This]Date: 19 May 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 19
Aw man! You are so mean. Cliffy with Esme and Edward. So mean.
Date: 18 May 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 19
update soon please
Date: 18 May 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
As always I love this story. I am so glad they are finally getting their crap together. Can't wait for the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Emily. Love it. Sandy needs to die!!!
Date: 18 May 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 19
Yea! Twins! Who is waiting on Edward? What is in the letter that Esme has?
Date: 17 May 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh there are so many possibilities of who it could be in Edwards house. You really love the cliffies don't you. LOl
I really hope that Bella can get over the hussies. They are in Edwards past and Edwards right they will come up from time to time. But she has to remember that he is trying to change and he can't take back the things he's done in the past.
Date: 17 May 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
Is the person Emily??
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Oh my goodness more please
Date: 17 May 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love/hate cliffies. I sure hope Bella stays very, very cautious with Edward. You don't normally go from humiliating and literally destroying someone in front of the entire world, to falling madly in love with them in a short time. It would do Edward well to get some intensive therapy. Yes, yes, yes, please send me a teaser for the next chapter. Thanks!!
Author's Response: hi. thank you for the review. I am sorry for the late update but here is a teaser for chapter 20 this is unbeta'd I watched as Edward walked away and headed towards his own home with a big grin on his face. I suddenly drifted into a dreamworld where everything was perfect with Edward and hopefully some day it will be. I was painfully unaware of my brother and friends stand around me until I felt a pinch on my left arm. "So are you going to tell us what is going on or am I going to have to torture it out of you?" Alice squeeled, jumping up and down. I started to feel dizzy simply by looking at her. "Well, Edward and I decided to go slow in our realtionship and he wants to do all the daddy things when it comes to our babies," I said enthusiastically. Suddenly the three of them were looking at me shocked with their mouths wide open. "What's wrong? Go I have ketchup on my face or spinach in my teeth," I asked. The three of them continued to stare at me and surprise, surprise, it was Alice that started talking first. "Bella, did you just say babies? As in more than one," she asked. "Shit," I muttered to myself. I wanted to tell everyone about the twins all together and with Edward by my side. I was about to answer her when I heard a crash coming from a few houses down. I looked down and saw a chair flying through a window. What frightened me more was that the chair came flying out of Edward's window and I could clearly hear the shouting and screaming that followed. Jasper looked at me and then went running towards Edward's house with Alice, Alec and I following closely behind.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
ugh, cliff hanger. my guess is it's Kate.
Date: 17 May 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
There's always a cliff hanger! Edward is redeeming himself, but it's two steps forward, one step backwards.
Date: 17 May 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 19
looking forward t omre
Date: 17 May 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think maybe Jacob is there. I would love to see what Carman wrote in the letter to Bella. I would love a teaser. Thanks for writing.
Lisa
Author's Response: hi. thank you for the review. I am sorry for the late update but here is a teaser for chapter 20
this is unbeta'd
I watched as Edward walked away and headed towards his own home with a big grin on his face. I suddenly drifted into a dreamworld where everything was perfect with Edward and hopefully some day it will be. I was painfully unaware of my brother and friends stand around me until I felt a pinch on my left arm.
"So are you going to tell us what is going on or am I going to have to torture it out of you?" Alice squeeled, jumping up and down. I started to feel dizzy simply by looking at her.
"Well, Edward and I decided to go slow in our realtionship and he wants to do all the daddy things when it comes to our babies," I said enthusiastically.
Suddenly the three of them were looking at me shocked with their mouths wide open.
"What's wrong? Go I have ketchup on my face or spinach in my teeth," I asked.
The three of them continued to stare at me and surprise, surprise, it was Alice that started talking first.
"Bella, did you just say babies? As in more than one," she asked.
"Shit," I muttered to myself. I wanted to tell everyone about the twins all together and with Edward by my side. I was about to answer her when I heard a crash coming from a few houses down. I looked down and saw a chair flying through a window. What frightened me more was that the chair came flying out of Edward's window and I could clearly hear the shouting and screaming that followed.
Jasper looked at me and then went running towards Edward's house with Alice, Alec and I following closely behind.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 19
My guess is that it is Emily.
Sandy seems to forget, that although she is angry with Edward, she, Sandy is the one who chose to have sex with him, at her own workplace and also chose to be horribly rude and abusive to a patient. She was unprofessional and deserved to be fired. She never had to say "Yes' to Edward in the first place:
she is just another whore trying to get her hooks into a move star.
Date: 17 May 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 19
Edward's past keeps biting him in the arse, but Bella knew this when she had sex with him. He is changing his ways, but his past won't change. She says she loves him well she has to love all of him. They past will die down eventually, but she needs to stand by him. They are having children together and are forever connected.
Date: 17 May 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 19
hmm wonder which tabloid Sandy will go running too. uh oh that letter seems ominous. yey twins
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 19
this has me wound tight... all these cliffhangers... WOO
Date: 17 May 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well Emily is back. Right? Poor Bella she needs a break. And Carmen needs put down. Hurry back with more.
[Report This]Date: 16 May 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 18
NOW that is a cliff hanger....
Date: 13 May 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
That was just plain mean.
Date: 11 May 2013 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 18
what sex is the baby, talk about cliffhanger.
[Report This]Date: 07 May 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 18
i love the story and in complete love with it! i hope the baby will be a boy, i think it would make edward very happy
Date: 07 May 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
oohhh....that was so wrong leaving that cliffy :-(
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Oh I definitely think it's twins, a boy and a girl, lol. I think Edward's sincere with his promise to make everything up to Bella and prove that he's worthy. I don't think it's going to be as easy to leave his past behind as he thinks, run ins with Tanya and Sandy have already proved that. As a movie star he's a bit of a target and all it will take is for one of his past conquests to make something up and then potentially, it's game over for Edward and Bella's telling him where to get off. I hope that doesn't happen because he really is trying.
I thought Bella was making it too difficult for them to get back together with her insistance that he could start regaining her trust by going back to a point where they would only bump into each other and then become acquaintances. Given their lifestyles I thought that really was making it near impossible for Edward but then it ends up they're living four houses apart so the chances of bumping into each other are increased and if Jasper is around more then Edward might be too. Saying that, I haven't bumped into my next door neighbour for months, yes they're still alive I hear them constantly banging doors and running up and downstairs, lol.
Jane x
Date: 04 May 2013 5:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
I loved the chapter and im glad Edward is trying (: