[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow things keep going from bad to worse. I only good thing that happened is Carmen is dead. At least I hope that was her & not a lookalike that was paid to do that.
Date: 30 Oct 2013 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well at least Carmen is dead. I hope Edward has a guard with the babies also. The platt women are going crazy. Esme is being horrible. Edward has done nothing wrong, since they were officially together.
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2013 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
ESME IS BEING A BITCH WHY IS SHE SO DOWN ON EDWARD HE'S DOING HIS BEST TO MAKE SURE BELLA AND THE BABY'S ARE SAFE WHY CAN'T ESME SEE THAT? I HOPE EDWARD WILL BE OK AND HIS DRIVER ALSO. BELLA NEED'S TO STAY STRESS FREE FOR NOW FOR THE BABY'S HOW ARE THEY GOING TO TELL HER OF EDWARD'S CAR ACCADENT?
[Report This]Date: 30 Oct 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks for the story and thanks for showing fanfic that we don’t need them.
Date: 30 Oct 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
Carmen tried to hurt or kill Edward and now she's dead? WOW! Emily is really crazy. Where did she get the information about the babies? I like that Bella can see past Edward's fake smile to know that something is going on with him.
Date: 30 Oct 2013 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 26
I do not understand why Edward did not get someone to follow Emily or why they did not call the police and try to keep her there when he was talking to her. Then he went and sat and thought for 2 hours and did not call the police to tell them that he had saw her. Edward mess up there. If Bella finds out about Edward being in this wreck her blood pressure is going to go out the roof. I was a little surprised with Bella and Esme's conversation. Thanks for updating. Loving this story. Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Oct 2013 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 26
Can't wait for more
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 26
Emily needs to be put away for a long time or put down. Esme is getting annoying now. poor Edward and Jared. At least Carmen is dead. Wonder how Emily found out about the babies?
Date: 29 Oct 2013 9:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
of course the whackjob will blame all of this on edward.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wow a lot of stuff going on!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
FIRST: A LONG WAIT. SECOND: A SHORT CHAPTER. LAST: YOU LEAVE US HANGING!! OH YOU ARE EVIL!!! ( HE HE HE ) CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPDATE.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh Wow I do think even though Bella needs to know whats going on, there has to be a way of telling her without endangering her and the babies, especially now that Edward is in the hospital. I trully hate Esme, it isn't Edwards fault that Bella almost lost the babies, yes it's the whole stress thing but she isn't making anything better by stressing more.
And what supid detectives, they don't probably even think there is any danger around..
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ok so Carmen lost her damn mind and attacked Edward. At least she is dead. Esme is gonna lose Bella if she isn't careful.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
looking forward to more, thanks for sharing
Date: 29 Oct 2013 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 26
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well that's one down only what three to go Emily,Tanya and Jacob lol I'm glad that bitch Carmen is dead but hopefully Edward and Jared are ok
Date: 29 Oct 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 26
Is there any way you can adjust the format so it isn't one giant paragraph. I can't read it like this. Chapter 25 was perfect.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 26
OH MY GOD!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Oct 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 26
At least Carmen is gone.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh I hope the agony ends soon. Emily needs shot. :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Oct 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
I'm so glad that Bella's labour was able to be stopped, all she needs now is to be waited on hand and foot until she's ready to pop. I get the feeling that Edward may not have heard the last from Victoria. Is this someone new popping up now to annoy Edward and Bella or is Tanya still rearing her ugly head?
I get that Esme is more than concerned about Bella and the babies but she's going too far. Her comments about Edward will only stress Bella further, she's going to need to hold her tongue.
Jane x
Date: 18 Oct 2013 10:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
Still a good story. Patiently waiting for an update.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
hmmm Esme needs to chill before she stresses B out more. Good conference besides Vic the biatch.
I'm thinking its Emily or Carmen.
Author's Response:
Date: 08 Oct 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 07 Oct 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 25
Oh Oh! Emily? cant wait to for more! I really love reading your stories..:-)
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 25
Emily. Love this story!!!! Thanks for the update.
Date: 02 Oct 2013 12:31 PM Title: Prologue
My recommendation is In Pursuit by sarges girls. Great story.
Date: 02 Oct 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 25
Who is the voice? I can't wait. I actually understand Esme's anger. I believe she will come around as she witnesses Edward loving, caring for and protecting Bella and the babies.
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
It could be anyone in the car from Emily to Tanya, anyone. I'm glad the babies can stay in Bella for awhile longer like they are suppose to. NICU isn't a bad place but the absolute best incubator is a mother's womb.
I'm glad that Bella is going to be okay but I wonder how long she'll have to stay in the hospital?
Well, next chapter please
Date: 01 Oct 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am so glad that they got Bella's contractions to stop. I feel sorry for both Edward and Bella. Boy, Mama Bear has come out in Esme!!!!!! :) I am thinking that the person that called out to Edward at the end of this chapter is either Tanya or Jacob.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
Edward can never get a break. He is not a bad person. Even when he was single. Yes, he slept around, but guess what, no one made those girls sleep with him. He was young and single and all the girls wanted him. I wanted to strangle Esme. She is being so rude and mean. She needs to step back and let Edward take care of Bella.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 25
Loved it! Poor Edward!
Date: 01 Oct 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 25
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 25
loved this. Is it Emily?
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2013 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 25
I think it is going to be Tanya. I love this story and I am looking forward to an update soon.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it! Poor Bella and Edward!
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
I think it is Emily. Great story. Can't wait till the next chapter. Hurry back with more.
Author's Response: Hi. Thank you for your review. I know that it might spoil the next chapter for you but yes you were right. It is Emily. You were the first one to guess correctly so as promised I would like to recommend as story and author of your choice. Could you please let me know who you would like to recommend. thank you. fiona (Robsessed73)
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love it. No, Tanya and Jacob will not leave them alone. Not sure about Bella and the babies. Could be preemies ( not unusual for multiples). Edward handled Aro and Marcus perfectly. Told them what for didn't he?
Lookimg forward to updates. Keep 'em comin'.
Date: 15 Sep 2013 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awesome chapter! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 24
It's no wonder that this is happening to Bella and the twins with all the stress she's been under. I hope, once they get to the hospital, that they can stop the contractions. If they do she's probably going to find herself being told to take more rest and no stress. I'm glad that Edward's making more of a stand against those that disrespect Bella, their babies and their relationship.
Jane x
Date: 11 Sep 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
Hmmm so what does Lisa have on aro???
Date: 09 Sep 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
The stress finally got to Bella. Tanya and Jacob need to be stopped.
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 24
So long as she's not 4cm dilated they should be able to stop the contractions.
Yeah a restraining order? That's not going to stop them.
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 24
I hope Bella and the babies are going to be ok. It was all that great sex that Bella just had. Lol. I am glad that Edward fired Marcus. I am a little worried about Aro. I am afraid that he is going to try to do something to Edward.
Date: 08 Sep 2013 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
A restraining order is mostly a joke but its at least something. Wow Marcus is an idiot for messing with his gravy train. Hope Aro listens now and gets rid of Lisa. I'd love to see a sexual harassment suit. Oh no. Poor Bella.
Date: 08 Sep 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm sure there is no way Tanya and Jacob will leave them alone. Sadly. But I loved that Marcus was fired.
Date: 08 Sep 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
Omg 28 week twins....excellrnt update!!!!
Date: 07 Sep 2013 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
Noooooo it's to soon for the twins to come! Please let Bella and the babies be ok! So I loved loved how Edward put Aro, Marcus and Ted in their place and then ended up firing Marcus! And especially loved how he stood up for Bella and said they are a package deal! go Edward.. Hoping the babies will be ok and not come to soon as well as Bella!
thanks for another great chapter and looking forward to reading more and the sequel! I am so loving this story!
Please update again soon..
Is their an update day for this story?
Date: 07 Sep 2013 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
I am so happy to see Edward standing up for Bella like she deserves, but I feel like we haven't seen the last of Marcus. I don't think a restraining order is going to do anything to stop Tanya and Jacob, and if Emily is involved, that just makes it worse. Hopefully Bella and the babies will be okay.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
loved this update looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2013 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 24
loved this. So glad there is to be a sequel
Date: 07 Sep 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 24
So good, love this story, it is one when I see it hit my inbox I read immediately. Love when he said to Ted & Aro, I hope nothing happens to the twins. No that will not stop Jacob or Tanya. Please update soon, I know that real life gets in the way but this is so good.
Would love a teaser if you are sharing.
Author's Response: Hi. I am so sorry that it took so long to get back to you. Thank you so much for the review. here is a teaser for chapter 25 Suddenly there was commotion outside of the waiting room, then the door flew open and in stormed Esme and Carlisle Cullen. "Where is she? Where is Bella," Esme demanded. Alice went over to her and tried to calm her down but Esme wasn't having any of that. Instead she looked at everybody before her eyes landed on me. "You! You promised me that she would be safe with you! You promised me that you would take care of her," she yelled, pointing her index finger in my chest. I didn't get the chance to say anything before my mother started talking. "Mrs Cullen? We have spoken a few times over the phone but we have never met face to face. I am Dr Elizabeth Masen, Bella's ob-gyn," she said, offering her hand to Esme to shake which she did. "Please? Tell me that Bella and the babies are going to be alright? What happened," Esme pleaded.
Date: 07 Sep 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
Looking forward to more
Date: 07 Sep 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love it! The T and J show along with a demented Emily....no wonder Bella is a little stressed. Aros treatment is all words, but marcus' treatment was physical...he may come back at him. My hope is that they can stop Bella's contractions with bed rest. Aro and his hussy Lisa are caught by wife Heidi. Jake and Tanya are busted doing something really stupid in a public forum with lots of people recording it on their cell phones! Oh, and Emily should be there too! Anyway, always looking forward to updates...thank you!
Date: 26 Aug 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
Edward better make a statement to stop Tanya and Jacob. Bella and Edward deserve the truth to be known. Marcus needs to go if he doesn't fix this mess.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
I can not believe the spin that Tanya and Jacob used on that fight. Wow!!!! They have some nerve. I am glad that Edward stood up to Aro and Marcus about his relationship with Bella. He really is putting her and the babies first.
I have really enjoyed this story. You have done a wonderful job writing it. Hope you update soon. I have enjoyed being able to read from chapter to chapter. Now I have to wait on the next update!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
hi.
thank you so much for all the reviews. i really enjoyed reading them all. i am so happy that you are enjoying all alone. i am thinking about ten more chapters to go and then I will be starting on a sequel called not alone anymore.
thanks again.
fiona (robsessed73)
Date: 19 Aug 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved the tub scene. I am proud of Edward not pursuing Bella to have sex. I am also proud of him for standing up to Aro about bringing Bella to the party. What the heck is Jacob doing with Tanya???? Now all we need is for Emily and her crazy mama to show up at the party. lol
Date: 19 Aug 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 21
I am glad that Seth is going to protect Bella and the babies. Glad that everyone was ok with Edward and Bella going to stay with Emmett/Rose. Poor Bella, she has been moved around so much during this pregnancy. I would love for you to do a sequel. I would love to see how Edward is as a father.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 11:57 AM Title: Outtake (Emily)
OMGosh!!!!!! There are some crazy people in this story. Emily has lost her mind. Does she not realize that it was Jacob that made or told her to get an aboration. She did not have to get the aboration. She could have had that baby. She is CRAZY!!!!!!!
Date: 19 Aug 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 20
I knew it was Emily or Jacob. Boy Emily is just as crazy as her mama, Carmen. I am worried about Bella and the babies. Loved that Edward was setting up a nursery for the babies. That was so sweet. I am wondering what Jacob is thinking about all of this and what he has to say.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 19
LOVED IT!!!!!! TWINS!!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!
I am so glad that Sandy got fired. I am worried about what Sandy and Carmen could do to Bella/Edward. I am thinking that Edward's guest is either Emily or Jacob.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 11:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
Why in the heck was Tanya in a baby store???? I am thinking that she had it staged and someone got it on tape or something, so she can cause problems later. I am glad that Edward has changed. Can't wait to find out what they are having.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 17
I can not believe that Carmen did not tell her family about her first daughter, Emily. Now, I knew why Jacob was introduced into this story. I can not believe that he was Edward's best friend. I just knew that Emily lied to Carmen about what really happened. I am glad that Bella listen to Edward. I hope that she forgives him but I just hope that she does not just jump right back in the bed with him. I hope she makes him wait a while.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 16
LOVED the interview. Boy the questions from the audience were hard on Edward. I am glad that Esme stood up for her girls. I will say that I did not see Esme and Carmen conversation going the way it did. I can not believe that Emily is Carmen's daughter. Why did the family not know about her now???
Date: 19 Aug 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 15
I am glad that Alec is there for Bella. Can't wait to read about the interview. Edward seems to truly have turned over a new leaf. I hope so. Can't wait to see what is Carmen's deal.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 14
I very first thought is that Alec came with Esme and Carlisle. I truly hope
Edward feels remorse. I think that Bella needs to make Edward work for his forgiveness. He has really put her through alot.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 12:35 AM Title: Chapter 13
What in the world is going on with Carmen????? I am thinking that Carmen or Kate called/messaged Edward to let him know where Bella was. I hope that Edward really means what he is saying for Bella's and the baby's sake.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
Well, I am glad that Elizaabeth did not have Edward come to the clinic. Can't wait to see what role Jacob is going to play in this story. Edward is definitely a man-whore. I can not believe that he sleeps or has sex with so many people. That is just wrong. What is his problem??
Date: 18 Aug 2013 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 11
I am wondering why Bella feels funny around Carmen. Can't wait to find out. Not sure how I feel about Edward's mom being Bella's OBGYN. I am glad that Elizabeth did tell Bella that Edward has had some really hard times. I am just wondering if Elizabeth planned on Edward being at her office at the time of Bella's appointment!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 10
I hope someone whips Edward's ass!!!!!!!!!!!! I am glad that Bella is getting away from Forks and the gossip. I just hope that the media does not find out that she is in LA.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 9
Thanks for giving us some of Edward's background. I still think that he was hard on Bella and did not give her a chance to explain and talk to him about everything. I knew her parents would be upset but to disown her. No that is not right. I am glad that Bella has Carlisle and Esme.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is a JERK!!!!!!!!!!! I understand with him being an actor that there are girls out there that would try to trick him. I can understand that he is mad but he does not have to be so mean. I hope Jaspser beat some sense into him. Poor Bella. Bless her heart.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am glad that Bella has Alice and Esme to help her. Edward is a total JERK!!!!!
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well to answer your questions in your author note. Yes I think Bella should confront Edward!!!!!! No, we have not heard the last of Tanya. I think Bella is going to cry her eyes now that she knows that she is pregnant.
I am glad that Jasper hit Edward. He deserved it. I hope Edward was just scared and that he really is not that big of a jerk.
Date: 18 Aug 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 5
OMGosh!!!!! She jumped right back in the bed with him. What in the world was she thinking. I know what she was thinking.......A HOT HOT Actor wants to be with me, heck yeah I am going to be with him. lol!!!!!!! I probably would have done the same thing. I am thinking that Edward does not have a fiance. I am thinking that Tanya WANTS to be his fiance and Edward does not. Loved what Edward did to Jessica. lol
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh my God! I'm beginning to think that everyone that was involved with Edward pre-Bella is delusional. They are all complete no marks and dickheads. I know Edward wasn't very nice about Bella at the start but that doesn't give the rest of them to keep calling her names both behind her back and to her face, they don't even know her.
Edward shouldn't have deleted those messages off his phone. Tanya made threats against Bella and if anything happens to her they would have been evidence, plus they show how much she's lost the plot as well. Edward should get himself a new manager.
Jane x
Date: 17 Aug 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
WOW!!!!!!! Edward moves quickly!!!!!!! They did not waste anytime getting to his room. lol. Is Edward just being, as Alice put it, a "manwhore" or does he have some kind of feelings for Bella.
Date: 17 Aug 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love me some Emmett!!!!!!!!! Can't wait to find out what Edward thinks of Bella.
Date: 17 Aug 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 2
I can not believet that Lauren did kiss him. Wow!!!!
Date: 17 Aug 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 1
The girls are definitely excited to be going. Can't wait to see what Lauren does or says. lol
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
I think that Tanya has no idea what is really going on & is just willing to do anything to get Edward. Funny I was so into the reason for the fighting that I completely forgot how it looked to others who weren't in on the conversation; which was everyone but Edward, Jacob & Tanya.
Im glad that they still got to enjoy their night together though & at least some of their morning. Edward can't protect her from that forever, he's going to have to tell her so she before she finds out on her own.
Date: 16 Aug 2013 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
What a delusional group of kids you got! I can't believe Bella is the most mature out of them all. I do believe the poo is about to get deeper. Why isn't Edward being truthful with Bella? We all know that's going to back fire on him. Maybe Bella needs to read the paper and find out what's got him so upset. How far along is Bella at this point? She can totally do without this stress...maybe when the time comes, Edward leaves Hollywood and becomes a yard man?!? His temper is worrying me...anyway, thanks for the update, always love them.
Date: 16 Aug 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wtf happened...is crazy emily not enough...now lisa and tanya r nuts.
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Date: 15 Aug 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 23
I would have given the press the real story. I also would have saved the text messages for the police for the TRO.
Skanky and Jake are up to something for sure. Will prob work with Emily too. Hope Aro is smart enough to fire Lisa or at least get her off E's movie.
[Report This]Date: 15 Aug 2013 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 23
Tanya's deluded!!!