Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow I could believe what happened to bella & edward to see them go through this!! This ch. truely had left me on the edge of my seat. This truely is a very captivating ch. unbelievable!! I am extatic there is going to be a sequel!! YAY!!
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love it. Now I just hope they find Bella before Jacob does his damage. How the hell did they think they would get away with splitting up the kids and raiding them separately. Obviously not on touch with reality.
Hope the next chapter comes quicker than the last.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
I would have threatened the bitch not to mention going to the press about her. Can't wait for Jacob and Emily to get what's coming to them. Better get nice long prison sentences to be someone elses biatch. No easy death for them.
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 29
Just a quick question. Last chapter Bella was told that her son was 3lbs 6oz and her daughter was 3lbs 2oz. This chapter Edward was told the reverse, his son 3lbs 2oz and his daughter 3lbs 6oz.
Sorry, if I am being a pain, just thought I would let you know. Love you story and can't wait for the next update.
Thanks so much for pointing that out. I will go back and fix it.
Glad you are enjoying the story
Date: 01 Apr 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 29
I love their names!!! I keep waiting for Emily to reappear, terrified that she's gonna get close to Bella or the babies! I love this story and am excited that you're planning a sequel! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awwwwwwwwwww, so sweet.
Emily needs to be put down. That bitch crazy. She needs to stop blaming Edward for everything. She didn't have to get an abortion; she could have been a single parent, that wasn't his baby so he shouldn't have been held responsible. Why isn't she mad Jacob? He's the one who left her high & dry. Ask for her mother, she's the one who crashed into Edward & caused the accident not the other way around. Emily is fucked up.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 29
I am so glad that they finally got to see their babies. I can not imagine going that long and not seeing them. The note that was left for Edward scares me. That is a messed up girl. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 29
So happy they're back together and I love the names the girl name was my suggestion on fb :)
I didn't realise this was your name on twcs. I remember you suggesting this name and it simply stuck with me. I will give you a mention as thanks on the next chapter. Thanks again for the suggestion
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
Good chapter, hope the next one is soon. Glad to see Alex finally in the story more. Didn't make sense for her twin to stay away. It will be a great reunion with Bella, Edward and the babies. Hope they get to see the twins for the first time together...sweet.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 28
emily is one crazy person. its sad that she just cant accept that edward dosent want her and never did. so happy that edward is awake. im with bella i would want to see my babies to in the worst way. cant wait for the next update.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm so sad that Edward couldn't be there for the birth of his babies. :( But I am so glad that he & the babies are going to be alright. :) I just hope that they catch that crazy bitch Emily before she can do any more harm!
I hope it's the little boy that looks like Edward. LOL
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 01 Jan 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 27
Just found your story and caught up to this chapter. I have really been enjoying it and look forward to more. I was surprised that no one has mentioned to Esme about Carmen. I think Esme might have dumped a lot of guilt on herself instead of Edward, she did, after all, send the girls to live with her. And, it will probably be devastating to Eliazar even if he is still in shock about what his wife did.
i do have a suggestion. Instead of worrying about someone taking the babies, I wouldn't discount Bella's parents adopting them out. While Esme has guardianship she could give permission for them to marry.
Date: 31 Dec 2013 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 27
How horrible. I hope that Edward doesn't have brain damage. And he is just going to be beside himself that he missed their birth. Poor Bella hasn't the girl gone through enough. They need to transfer one if them so that they can be at the same hospital at least.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
Poor Edward and Bella. They cannot catch a break. I absolutely love all the drama though. Its a really great story. I can't wait til you get the next chapter posted. I hope Edward won't miss too much of the twins life.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 27
ALL of those crazy bitches, plus Jacob NEED to go!!! It's such a shame that Edward is going to miss the birth of his babies, & who knows what else. :( I hope that they are alright, along with Bella.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 03 Dec 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm so glad that Edward reported Tanya to the police.
This is in no way meant to be negative critism, but I can't help but think that you have never been pregnant. Because while I enjoyed your love scenes, they are just a little unrealistic for a women that is 27 weeks pregnant with twins. Even if she is carrying small the shower scene would not work at all. Lol
Please don't take that the wrong way. Because I truly love this story.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well, I wasn't expecting that, at all. Carmen got what she deserved when she decided to try to kill Edward. Now we need to see psycho Emily get hers and Jacob get his. I'm glad that Bella stood up for Edward against Bella, she had no right to say what she did and she should know better than that.