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Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 30

Wow I could believe what happened to bella & edward to see them go through this!! This ch. truely had left me on the edge of my seat. This truely is a very captivating ch. unbelievable!! I am extatic there is going to be a sequel!! YAY!!

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 30

love it hope jacob dies slowly and painfully love the baby names

Reviewer: LuvinTwilight143 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 30

OMG I hope they find Bella soon before something bad happens 

 

Once again your welcome for the name :)

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 30

Love it.  Now I just hope they find Bella before Jacob does his damage. How the hell did they think they would get away with splitting up the kids and raiding them separately. Obviously not on touch with reality. 

Hope the next chapter comes quicker than the last.

 

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 30

I'm here, excellent chapter....will these two ever catch a break

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 30

I would have threatened the bitch not to mention going to the press about her.    Can't wait for Jacob and Emily to get what's coming to them.    Better get nice long prison sentences to be someone elses biatch.   No easy death for them.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 30

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: TeamEdwardgirl1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 29

Just a quick question. Last chapter Bella was told that her son was 3lbs 6oz and her daughter was 3lbs 2oz. This chapter Edward was told the reverse, his son 3lbs 2oz and his daughter 3lbs 6oz.

Sorry, if I am being a pain, just thought I would let you know. Love you story and can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

hi.

Thanks so much for pointing that out. I will go back and fix it.

 

Glad you are enjoying the story

 

robsessed73

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 29

I love their names!!!  I keep waiting for Emily to reappear, terrified that she's gonna get close to Bella or the babies!  I love this story and am excited that you're planning a sequel!  Can't wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 29

Welcome arabelle and riley!!!

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 29

Very cute names. And I'm still surprised that Edward hasn't demanded that he be transferred to the same hospital as Bella and the babies. 

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 29

LOVE IT !!!!

Reviewer: edwardgirl27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

Crying.. So good

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 29

Great chapter. I am so happy that Edward and Bella finally got to see their babies.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 29

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

Awwwwwwwwwww, so sweet. 

Emily needs to be put down. That bitch crazy. She needs to stop blaming Edward for everything. She didn't have to get an abortion; she could have been a single parent, that wasn't his baby so he shouldn't have been held responsible. Why isn't she mad Jacob? He's the one who left her high & dry. Ask for her mother, she's the one who crashed into Edward & caused the accident not the other way around. Emily is fucked up. 

Reviewer: chinadoll381282001 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 29

I can't wait to read the next chapter.....

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 29

I was expecting slutty nurse to be in on a plan with Emily to hurt Bella and the babies.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 29

IT'S SAD TO THINK THERE ARE ONLY 2 MORE CHAPTERS BUT KNOWING THAT THERE IS A SEQUEL WELL THAT MAKES IT OK. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 29

I am glad Edward was able to go to the other hospital. He and Bella needed to see each other and their babies. I love the names they picked out for the babies. Great job...thanks!!!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 29

Love it.....

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 29

I am so glad that they finally got to see their babies.  I can not imagine going that long and not seeing them. The note that was left for Edward scares me. That is a messed up girl. Can't wait for the next chapter.  Great job. 

Reviewer: LuvinTwilight143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 29

So happy they're back together and I love the names the girl name was my suggestion on fb :)



Author's Response:

I didn't realise this was your name on twcs. I remember you suggesting this name and it simply stuck with me. I will give you a mention as thanks on the next chapter. Thanks again for the suggestion

fiona (Robsessed73)

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 29

Love it

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 29

RIFL for Slutty Swanson.   Hate women like that.  Gives us all a bad name.

Sweet Baby Names.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 29

looking forwqard to more 

Reviewer: tawelephant Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 29

So so good. 

 

Reviewer: twilight25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 29

Love this update! Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 29

:) loved this

Reviewer: wolf76265 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 29

I loved and can't wait for the next chapter ! 

Reviewer: 1SadAngel-Luvs-VampWolf Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 28

My only idea is that Tanya,  Emily,  and Jacob suffer.  I would also like Charlie and Renee to show up and for both Alec and Bella to tell them to fuck off heartless bastards.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 28

Thankfully everyone is going to pull through and be together. I'm sure Edward is signing himself out AMA as we speak to get to Bella and the babies.  

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 28

Dang emily got to edward. Alec you are such a brave soul. Bella omg so much you have been through or heard. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 28

 Good chapter, hope the next one is soon. Glad to see Alex finally in the story more. Didn't make sense for her twin to stay away. It will be a great reunion with Bella, Edward and the babies. Hope they get to see the twins for the first time together...sweet.

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Feb 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 28

Love it !

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 28

Wow...what's in emilys letter?????

Reviewer: bird1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 28

emily is one crazy person. its sad that she just cant accept that edward dosent want her and never did. so happy that edward is awake. im with bella i would want to see my babies to in the worst way. cant wait for the next update.

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 28

So glad to babies are okay and that Edward finally woke up...it'd be great if they could see the babies for the first time together.

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 28

Yay! Things are looking up!

Reviewer: sweetmeadow Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 28

Thanks for update :)

Reviewer: sjdavis84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 28

Just found this story, and I love it! Can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 28

Yeah, everyone is healthy and safe. Now all they need is some time and everyone will be out of the hospitals.

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it. Please update again soon. Can't wait for more

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 28

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 28

I can't believe all the shit they're getting thrown at them. Please don't let E have amnesia!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 28

Yay!  Edwards awake!   Babies are here and alive, and on the path to growing strong! 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 23

Aro Smith! Really? LOL!

Reviewer: natalie Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 28

did esme ever forgive her parents?

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 28

God, it is so good to get a new chapter. Please update soon. I know you have to resolve the Emily drama and Edward needs to meet the babies. Great chapter.

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 28

Love it! 

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 28

LOVE this!!!!! I was so excited to get your update. I am so glad that Edward has woken up and that the twins are ok. I can not wait to se what Edward thinks of his babies!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 28

Great job.  Reasonable medical stuff too.   Emily is one sleazy, slimy, sneaky biatch huh?   E needs a guard in his room at all times with that psycho on the loose.

Reviewer: Lisalou Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 28

I'm glad everyone is ok. Thanks for writing,
Lisa..Gail Cullen

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 28

OMG!!! This is so crazily fantastic!! I love it and I am dying for more!! More!! MORE!! :D

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 28

I want Emily to die, but I want her to suffer first,

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 28

excellent chapter

Reviewer: edwardgirl27 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:38 PM Title: Chapter 28

very good..

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 28

:)

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 28

Love it

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 28

I'm so sad that Edward couldn't be there for the birth of his babies. :( But I am so glad that he & the babies are going to be alright. :) I just hope that they catch that crazy bitch Emily before she can do any more harm!

I hope it's the little boy that looks like Edward. LOL

Can't wait for more! ;)

Reviewer: marycullenblack Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh I hope nothing happens to the babies, that would be just too much for Bella to handle

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 28

Tiny babies. Many twins are. What did Emilys letter say?

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 28

Yeah, everyone os OK.

Reviewer: tawelephant Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh thank God the babies are safe. Poor Bella has been thru so much. I bet Ed is out of his mind over what happened to him leading to his babies coming early. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 27

I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER THEY ARE SO GOOD

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 27

wow. I hope all will be ok. I have bad feeling they are going to try to get to bella again. I hope the don't suceed on it. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 27

Just found your story and caught up to this chapter. I have really been enjoying it and look forward to more. I was surprised that no one has mentioned to Esme about Carmen. I think Esme might have dumped a lot of guilt on herself instead of Edward, she did,  after all, send the girls to live with her.  And, it will probably be devastating to Eliazar even if he is still in shock about what his wife did.

i do have a suggestion. Instead of worrying about someone taking the babies, I wouldn't discount Bella's parents adopting them out.  While Esme has guardianship she could give permission for them to marry. 

 

 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2013 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 27

How horrible. I hope that Edward doesn't have brain damage. And he is just going to be beside himself that he missed their birth. Poor Bella hasn't the girl gone through enough. They need to transfer one if them so that they can be at the same hospital at least. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 27

This chapter is so sad. These 2 need a break.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 27

Oh No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 27

Poor Edward and Bella. They cannot catch a break. I absolutely love all the drama though. Its a really great story. I can't wait til you get the next chapter posted. I hope Edward won't miss too much of the twins life. 

Reviewer: LuvinTwilight143 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 27

Oh no please don't let Edward miss the twins being born that would suck and kill him knowing he missed it I really hope they can stop it 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 27

Poor Sam being run ragged.   Skankya needs to get a life.  

Reviewer: pamspastime Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 27

Thanks for the update :) how sad this has to happen to them at a time like this...being seperated is even worse. Please say the babies will be okay. Looking forward to the rest and sequel.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 27

Omg labour and coma...

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 27

ALL of those crazy bitches, plus Jacob NEED to go!!! It's such a shame that Edward is going to miss the birth of his babies, & who knows what else. :( I hope that they are alright, along with Bella.

Can't wait for more! ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 27

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 27

looking forward to more love this story

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 27

Where is Emily?  I am surprised she hasn't shown up somewhere. 

Reviewer: Ketia Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:40 PM Title: Prologue

I won't dislike it unless it doesn't end well (lol).

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 27

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 27

Omg!! Please update soon!! I need more. Lol happy new yr!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 27

I am so glad that Edward did not die. I feel so sorry for Elizabeth and Ed Sr. I just hope the twins are ok. Can not wait for your next update. 

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 27

OMG!! OMG!! OMG!!! I can't beleive the shit they are going through now!! I wish they could at least be at the same hospital! I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more!! :)

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 27

I was worried that would happen. Time for a stay at the NICU. Bella is going to feel so quilty for the babies being born early. I did. Hope everything goes okay. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 27

Thank you for updaing.  Poor Edward and Bella

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 27

Wow can this two not catch a break

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

Thank you so much for the update. It was a lovely Christmas gift. It is an amazing story. I have followed it from the first posting.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 26

Oh god. That is horrible. Carmen really had lost it. They are not going to be able to keep this from Bella. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 25

Edward has handle all this so well. I'm glad he didn't hold in his emotions and was so open with Bella. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm so glad that Edward reported Tanya to the police. 

This is in no way meant to be negative critism, but I can't help but think that you have never been pregnant. Because while I enjoyed your love scenes, they are just a little unrealistic for a women that is 27 weeks pregnant with twins. Even if she is carrying small the shower scene would not work at all. Lol

Please don't take that the wrong way. Because I truly love this story. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 23

Of course they had the fight spun that way. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 22

These two can not catch a break. God I hate Jacob. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 21

I wonder how long they will last in separate rooms. 

Reviewer: rammi Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 26

This is amazing, i love the story line and the way it is written, contine to write more and please give faster updates xoxo

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 26

Well at least Darkens dead !

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 26

Well, I wasn't expecting that, at all.  Carmen got what she deserved when she decided to try to kill Edward.  Now we need to see psycho Emily get hers and Jacob get his.  I'm glad that Bella stood up for Edward against Bella, she had no right to say what she did and she should know better than that.

Jane x

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 26

Wow I sooooo didn't see that comin!!!!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 26

Loved it :)

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