Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 30
Wow I could believe what happened to bella & edward to see them go through this!! This ch. truely had left me on the edge of my seat. This truely is a very captivating ch. unbelievable!! I am extatic there is going to be a sequel!! YAY!!
Date: 10 Apr 2014 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 30
love it hope jacob dies slowly and painfully love the baby names
Date: 10 Apr 2014 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 30
OMG I hope they find Bella soon before something bad happens
Once again your welcome for the name :)
Date: 10 Apr 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 30
Love it. Now I just hope they find Bella before Jacob does his damage. How the hell did they think they would get away with splitting up the kids and raiding them separately. Obviously not on touch with reality.
Hope the next chapter comes quicker than the last.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 30
I'm here, excellent chapter....will these two ever catch a break
Date: 10 Apr 2014 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 30
I would have threatened the bitch not to mention going to the press about her. Can't wait for Jacob and Emily to get what's coming to them. Better get nice long prison sentences to be someone elses biatch. No easy death for them.
Date: 10 Apr 2014 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 30
looking forward to more
Date: 02 Apr 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 29
Just a quick question. Last chapter Bella was told that her son was 3lbs 6oz and her daughter was 3lbs 2oz. This chapter Edward was told the reverse, his son 3lbs 2oz and his daughter 3lbs 6oz.
Sorry, if I am being a pain, just thought I would let you know. Love you story and can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
hi.
Thanks so much for pointing that out. I will go back and fix it.
Glad you are enjoying the story
robsessed73
Date: 01 Apr 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 29
I love their names!!! I keep waiting for Emily to reappear, terrified that she's gonna get close to Bella or the babies! I love this story and am excited that you're planning a sequel! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 29
Welcome arabelle and riley!!!
Date: 24 Mar 2014 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 29
Very cute names. And I'm still surprised that Edward hasn't demanded that he be transferred to the same hospital as Bella and the babies.
Date: 24 Mar 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 29
LOVE IT !!!!
Date: 23 Mar 2014 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 29
Crying.. So good
Date: 23 Mar 2014 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 29
Great chapter. I am so happy that Edward and Bella finally got to see their babies.
Date: 22 Mar 2014 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 29
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 21 Mar 2014 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 29
Awwwwwwwwwww, so sweet.
Emily needs to be put down. That bitch crazy. She needs to stop blaming Edward for everything. She didn't have to get an abortion; she could have been a single parent, that wasn't his baby so he shouldn't have been held responsible. Why isn't she mad Jacob? He's the one who left her high & dry. Ask for her mother, she's the one who crashed into Edward & caused the accident not the other way around. Emily is fucked up.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 7:43 AM Title: Chapter 29
I can't wait to read the next chapter.....
Date: 21 Mar 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 29
I was expecting slutty nurse to be in on a plan with Emily to hurt Bella and the babies.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 29
IT'S SAD TO THINK THERE ARE ONLY 2 MORE CHAPTERS BUT KNOWING THAT THERE IS A SEQUEL WELL THAT MAKES IT OK. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
Date: 21 Mar 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 29
I am glad Edward was able to go to the other hospital. He and Bella needed to see each other and their babies. I love the names they picked out for the babies. Great job...thanks!!!
Date: 21 Mar 2014 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 29
I am so glad that they finally got to see their babies. I can not imagine going that long and not seeing them. The note that was left for Edward scares me. That is a messed up girl. Can't wait for the next chapter. Great job.
Date: 21 Mar 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 29
So happy they're back together and I love the names the girl name was my suggestion on fb :)
Author's Response:
I didn't realise this was your name on twcs. I remember you suggesting this name and it simply stuck with me. I will give you a mention as thanks on the next chapter. Thanks again for the suggestion
fiona (Robsessed73)
Date: 21 Mar 2014 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 29
RIFL for Slutty Swanson. Hate women like that. Gives us all a bad name.
Sweet Baby Names.
Date: 20 Mar 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 29
looking forwqard to more
Date: 20 Mar 2014 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 29
Love this update! Can't wait for more!
Date: 20 Mar 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 29
I loved and can't wait for the next chapter !
Date: 26 Feb 2014 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 28
:)
Date: 13 Feb 2014 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
My only idea is that Tanya, Emily, and Jacob suffer. I would also like Charlie and Renee to show up and for both Alec and Bella to tell them to fuck off heartless bastards.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 28
Thankfully everyone is going to pull through and be together. I'm sure Edward is signing himself out AMA as we speak to get to Bella and the babies.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 28
Dang emily got to edward. Alec you are such a brave soul. Bella omg so much you have been through or heard.
Date: 03 Feb 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
Good chapter, hope the next one is soon. Glad to see Alex finally in the story more. Didn't make sense for her twin to stay away. It will be a great reunion with Bella, Edward and the babies. Hope they get to see the twins for the first time together...sweet.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow...what's in emilys letter?????
Date: 31 Jan 2014 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 28
emily is one crazy person. its sad that she just cant accept that edward dosent want her and never did. so happy that edward is awake. im with bella i would want to see my babies to in the worst way. cant wait for the next update.
Date: 31 Jan 2014 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 28
So glad to babies are okay and that Edward finally woke up...it'd be great if they could see the babies for the first time together.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 28
Yay! Things are looking up!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
Thanks for update :)
Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 28
Just found this story, and I love it! Can't wait to read more!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 28
Yeah, everyone is healthy and safe. Now all they need is some time and everyone will be out of the hospitals.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it. Please update again soon. Can't wait for more
Date: 30 Jan 2014 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 28
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 28
I can't believe all the shit they're getting thrown at them. Please don't let E have amnesia!!!!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 28
Yay! Edwards awake! Babies are here and alive, and on the path to growing strong!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 23
Aro Smith! Really? LOL!
Date: 30 Jan 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 28
did esme ever forgive her parents?
Date: 30 Jan 2014 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 28
God, it is so good to get a new chapter. Please update soon. I know you have to resolve the Emily drama and Edward needs to meet the babies. Great chapter.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 28
LOVE this!!!!! I was so excited to get your update. I am so glad that Edward has woken up and that the twins are ok. I can not wait to se what Edward thinks of his babies!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 28
Great job. Reasonable medical stuff too. Emily is one sleazy, slimy, sneaky biatch huh? E needs a guard in his room at all times with that psycho on the loose.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm glad everyone is ok. Thanks for writing,
Lisa..Gail Cullen
Date: 29 Jan 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 28
OMG!!! This is so crazily fantastic!! I love it and I am dying for more!! More!! MORE!! :D
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 28
I want Emily to die, but I want her to suffer first,
Date: 29 Jan 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 28
excellent chapter
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 28
I'm so sad that Edward couldn't be there for the birth of his babies. :( But I am so glad that he & the babies are going to be alright. :) I just hope that they catch that crazy bitch Emily before she can do any more harm!
I hope it's the little boy that looks like Edward. LOL
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh I hope nothing happens to the babies, that would be just too much for Bella to handle
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 28
Tiny babies. Many twins are. What did Emilys letter say?
Date: 29 Jan 2014 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 28
Yeah, everyone os OK.
Date: 29 Jan 2014 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 28
Oh thank God the babies are safe. Poor Bella has been thru so much. I bet Ed is out of his mind over what happened to him leading to his babies coming early. Can't wait for more.
Date: 12 Jan 2014 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THE NEXT CHAPTER THEY ARE SO GOOD
Date: 06 Jan 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 27
wow. I hope all will be ok. I have bad feeling they are going to try to get to bella again. I hope the don't suceed on it.
Date: 01 Jan 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 27
Just found your story and caught up to this chapter. I have really been enjoying it and look forward to more. I was surprised that no one has mentioned to Esme about Carmen. I think Esme might have dumped a lot of guilt on herself instead of Edward, she did, after all, send the girls to live with her. And, it will probably be devastating to Eliazar even if he is still in shock about what his wife did.
i do have a suggestion. Instead of worrying about someone taking the babies, I wouldn't discount Bella's parents adopting them out. While Esme has guardianship she could give permission for them to marry.
Date: 31 Dec 2013 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 27
How horrible. I hope that Edward doesn't have brain damage. And he is just going to be beside himself that he missed their birth. Poor Bella hasn't the girl gone through enough. They need to transfer one if them so that they can be at the same hospital at least.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 27
This chapter is so sad. These 2 need a break.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh No!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 27
Poor Edward and Bella. They cannot catch a break. I absolutely love all the drama though. Its a really great story. I can't wait til you get the next chapter posted. I hope Edward won't miss too much of the twins life.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 27
Oh no please don't let Edward miss the twins being born that would suck and kill him knowing he missed it I really hope they can stop it
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
Poor Sam being run ragged. Skankya needs to get a life.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for the update :) how sad this has to happen to them at a time like this...being seperated is even worse. Please say the babies will be okay. Looking forward to the rest and sequel.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 27
Omg labour and coma...
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 27
ALL of those crazy bitches, plus Jacob NEED to go!!! It's such a shame that Edward is going to miss the birth of his babies, & who knows what else. :( I hope that they are alright, along with Bella.
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 27
Looking forward to more
Date: 30 Dec 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
looking forward to more love this story
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 27
Where is Emily? I am surprised she hasn't shown up somewhere.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:40 PM Title: Prologue
I won't dislike it unless it doesn't end well (lol).
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 27
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 29 Dec 2013 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 27
Omg!! Please update soon!! I need more. Lol happy new yr!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 27
I am so glad that Edward did not die. I feel so sorry for Elizabeth and Ed Sr. I just hope the twins are ok. Can not wait for your next update.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
OMG!! OMG!! OMG!!! I can't beleive the shit they are going through now!! I wish they could at least be at the same hospital! I am on the edge of my seat waiting for more!! :)
Date: 29 Dec 2013 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 27
I was worried that would happen. Time for a stay at the NICU. Bella is going to feel so quilty for the babies being born early. I did. Hope everything goes okay.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you for updaing. Poor Edward and Bella
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 27
Wow can this two not catch a break
Date: 29 Dec 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you so much for the update. It was a lovely Christmas gift. It is an amazing story. I have followed it from the first posting.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh god. That is horrible. Carmen really had lost it. They are not going to be able to keep this from Bella.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 25
Edward has handle all this so well. I'm glad he didn't hold in his emotions and was so open with Bella.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm so glad that Edward reported Tanya to the police.
This is in no way meant to be negative critism, but I can't help but think that you have never been pregnant. Because while I enjoyed your love scenes, they are just a little unrealistic for a women that is 27 weeks pregnant with twins. Even if she is carrying small the shower scene would not work at all. Lol
Please don't take that the wrong way. Because I truly love this story.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
Of course they had the fight spun that way.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 22
These two can not catch a break. God I hate Jacob.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 21
I wonder how long they will last in separate rooms.
Date: 24 Nov 2013 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 26
This is amazing, i love the story line and the way it is written, contine to write more and please give faster updates xoxo
Date: 06 Nov 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 26
Well at least Darkens dead !
Date: 03 Nov 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 26
Well, I wasn't expecting that, at all. Carmen got what she deserved when she decided to try to kill Edward. Now we need to see psycho Emily get hers and Jacob get his. I'm glad that Bella stood up for Edward against Bella, she had no right to say what she did and she should know better than that.
Jane x
Date: 03 Nov 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow I sooooo didn't see that comin!!!!