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Reviewer: li-spar1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2020 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 17

Good story so far. He seems remorseful but there's no way I could take him back as more than a friend after he slept with all those girls after her. I'd just keep remembering them everytime we got close. 

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2020 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 32

Love it

Reviewer: Twilightgirl94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 32

Sounds good when will it be available to read

Reviewer: Twilightgirl94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2019 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 32

Sounds good when will it be available to read

Reviewer: Wiseoldsoul Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Feb 2018 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 23

i am enjoying your story very much. though unrealistic, i loooove that edward

says whatever he wants to those women in front of whoever is around...he 

doesnt allow any insults against bella...he immediately puts those women in

their place. i love it. in majority of fics, we don't see this at all which is so 

frustrating. keep it up. i love protective edward who will say what is in all of 

our minds and not let those women get away with their tantrums or attempts

at seduction.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2017 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 32

Love it

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2016 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 32

IT WAS GREAT CANNOT WAIT TO START SEQUEL

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2015 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 32

At least they're getting their HEA

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Jacob, Emily, and Nurse Swanson need to be brought to justice for what they've done.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 30

Hope is good,

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 29

A sweet moment in time.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 28

Emily has to be mental to behave the way she does. At least the twins are healthy and safe and Edward is awake.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 6:51 AM Title: Chapter 27

I knew that was gonna happen. Can hardly wait to read on.

Sherry

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Date: 01 Jan 2015 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 26

Well at least one crazy bitch is gone.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2015 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 25

Edward held a very professional conference meeting, but he should have addressed that last question.

Gotta be Emily in the car, or Tanya.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

Glad Edward is finally doing this the right way, but he still has anger issues, he needs to learn to control himself better. Poor Bella can't catch a break.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 10:06 AM Title: Chapter 23

Famous last words Edward. Something is gonna go wrong.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 22

This can't end well.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 8:40 AM Title: Chapter 21

I don't think they'll be in different rooms long.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 7:04 AM Title: Outtake (Emily)

Yep, Emily is crazier than her mother, Carmen.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 20

Emily is as crazy as her mother, Carmen.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 19

Poor Bella can't catch a break.

Sherry

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Date: 31 Dec 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm delighted Carlisle spoke to Edward on Bella's behalf.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 17

The Emily story was so heartbreaking. She sure did a number on Edward. Hopefully Bella can give him a chance to make things right.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

Oh bloody hell. I didn't see that coming.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

Though Edward has been an ass thoughout, I hope Bella gives him a chance to redeem himself.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 14

About time Edward realizes what he's done and what his actions have caused, now to start redeeming himself.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 13

It's a good thing Alice and Bella got away from Carmen.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 12

Carmen is up to no good. Her daughters are just awful human beings. I kinda feel bad Eleazar is related to them. I'm hoping Edward will start having a change of heart soon, as well as redeem himself.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

Irina is a real jewel, isn't she? Bella needs to toughen up a bit, or she's gonna have a hard way to go. I'm glad Elizabeth is her GYN and is being supportive.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:49 AM Title: Outtake 1

I want to know what Emily did to Edward to make him the way he is. The dude is deplorable. Well played bu Carlisle and Esme, recording him admitting to everything was perfect.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 10

Good for Bella for starting fresh, but Edward really is a douche. I know I keep saying that. I can't wait for things to change for these two.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

Renee and Charlie are a real piece of work. By leaving it looks like things may be looking up for Bella.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 8

I really want to junk punch Edward.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 7

I thought Edward was 21. He's a real douche.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 6

Edward is a real douche. I thought Bella would bring 'something' home with her.

Sherry

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Date: 30 Dec 2014 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 5

Why do I think that was Tanya on the phone? Bella really should have had that conversation with Edward before getting into bed with him again.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 4

Something tells me Bella will be taking something home with her.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 3

I love Emmett, fantastic things worked out for Angela to attend also.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Dec 2014 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 2

I kinda feel bad that Riley will get his feelings hurt over a bet. Alice and Bella are on cloud nine with excitement.

Sherry

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2014 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Every teenage girls dream to see their idol.

Sherry

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Date: 29 Dec 2014 10:56 PM Title: Prologue

Interesting start.

Sherry

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 32

cool story im glad theres a sequel ;) a few points though when edward was recovering there was no mention of the broken arm? in emilys o/t she said she hadnt seen him in 6ys but it would of only been 5 ? when bella was taken she was only gone for about 12hrs but in her pov it sounded like days? but i did enjoy the story though and am looking forward to the sequel ;D

Reviewer: bird1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 32

just finished reading all alone, but i dont see the sequel. are still going to write it. this was a good story.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 32

J'aime cette fiction, c'est une bonne histoire.

Merci.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2014 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

Je viens de lire cette bonne fiction, Merci.

Carmen est la mère d'Emilie, la jeune fille qui a fait souffrir Edward, c'est un morceau de nouvelles.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 9:20 PM Title: Prologue

C'est le bon début, j'aime!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 32

Loved it :)

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 32

I love the title of the next story!

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 32

I just don't understand Edward's way of thinking when he says that they are too young to get married, yet they weren't too young to have sex, live together, or have a set of twins?! Not to mention the fact that Edward has already lived a pretty wild life - traveled extensively, lived life to the fullest, & sowed his oats far more than most men ever have - young or old! So him saying that they are too young is just ridiculous! I think it's nothing more than just a scapegoat for him...a pathetic, hurtful excuse that doesn't make sense. :(

I'm not saying that they should get married just because they have children together, & I DO realized how young Bella still is. However, they've made these life choices together & they claim to love one another deeply, not to mention that they already live together, so what's the hold-up?! Him waiting around makes it seem as if Edward wants to keep his options open, or doesn't really want to committ...which is bad for poor Bella in more ways than one! :(

If he'd marry her, maybe then some of these skanks & naysayers would hopefully finally realize that he's serious about her & loves her...chose her. As it stands, everyone pretty much thinks that he's only with her because he knocked her up. :( It would also soothe a lot of her doubts & self-esteem issues where he's concerned & show her that he IS in it for the long haul - that he's sticking around, truly loves her & wants to be with her for more than just their children's sake.

He NEEDS to put a ring on Bella's finger & marry her, or at least ask her to marry him ASAP!

Can't wait for more! ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 32

I am so happy you are continuing this little families story. Can't wait.

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 32

A good read, looking forward to the sequel.

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 32

Thank you I've enjoyed the story.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 32

can't wait...loving this

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jun 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 32

Glad the babies and b are ok.

TY for writing and sharting.

ty

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 11:05 PM Title: Chapter 32

Finally they are together as a family! !!!!!!!!! Loved reading this story.  Can't wait for you to start the next one

Reviewer: Cockerspanmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 32

Nasty skanky nurse. Loved it. Enjoyed the story throughly. Can't wait for sequel. 

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 32

I am extatic you'll be writting a new sequel!!

This truely as been a beautifully captivating & intriging story. I have looked forward to each & every update. I can't await to begin reading the sequel!!

Reviewer: amwine Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 32

The family is finally all together. I love it! Great job...thanks so much!!!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 32

YES IT'S SAD TO LET GO BUT... LOOK FORWARD TO " NOT ALONE ANYMORE " YOU MENTIONED ANGST BUT I HOPE THERE'S NOT TOO MUCH THESE TWO DESERVE TO FINALLY BE HAPPY AND MARRIED!!!!! READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 32

Love it!! :)

Reviewer: msbullcullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 32

Can't wait for the sequel!!! Loved this story.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:45 PM Title: Chapter 32

loved this story.  Looking forward to the sequel

Reviewer: LuvinTwilight143 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 32

loved it and can't wait for the sequel 

Reviewer: BigMac34 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2014 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

I really enjoyed this story, and look forward to the sequel, hopefully it will not be too long. Many thanks for an excellent job.

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 7:28 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Well, after everything I hope there's no more danger to happen to Edward, Bella and their twins. 

Reviewer: artri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Great story.

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 May 2014 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Thank God Bella didn't go through anything more. 

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Glad the drama is over. Now for the healing.

Reviewer: Melany333 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

CAN'T WAIT!!!! READ YOU SOON.

Reviewer: bri Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Loved it can't wait for next chapter,hope not to long .love it.great story .

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Loved it :)

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

*wipes tears* This is fantastic!

Reviewer: AMCLARK Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Loved the update and soooooo looking forward to reading more and especially the sequel!! How soon will they post?? 



Author's Response:

I hope to have the last chapter up in two weeks and I already started the sequel.

 

Thank you for your continuing support

 

fiona

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

This truely has been such a beautifully captivating story!!! I am extaticic that there will be a Sequel yay!!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

looking forward to more

Reviewer: Purple Passion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Loved it!......Can't wait for the next Chapter.

Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

So glad they got to her in time!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

So excited to get this update.  Glad that they got to Bella before Jacob could do anymore damage to her. Can't wait for her to be united with her children. 

Reviewer: heimk Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Finally those crazy people are behind bars, bella and edward are back together cant wait for the next cahpter 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Wow  Some messed up psycho's in this story.  

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

:)

Reviewer: she-rah Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

There are a couple things about Bella's condition that have not been addressed:  she has just given birth.  Therefore, her breasts are well on their way to getting engorged.  Very painful unless addressed.  Also, she is also bleeding (like a heavy period).  Why would Jacob want to rape a woman in that condition?  Is he just that much of a gross creep?  



Author's Response:

I understand what you are saying but remember that the twins were four weeks old when she was taken so the bleeding would be stopped by then and jacob didn't care less about if her breast were engorged or painful. He is that much of a creep. I hope this clears things up for you

 

fiona (Robsessed73)

Reviewer: LilCullen454 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 May 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2

Love it!  So glad they found Bella!

Reviewer: ChecheCarol Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 30

God you sure do like keeping people on their toes!!! Awesome story! I couldnt stop reading, god I can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Lunarchild21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 30

I hope she knows where Bella is. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 30

I just hope that they find Bella before Jake can do anything to her. Bless her heart. She just had twins four weeks ago. Her boyfriend is in the hospital. She has really been through a lot. LOVE this story. Thanks for sharing with us. 

Reviewer: canada02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2014 12:35 AM Title: Prologue

Très belle histoire

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 5:15 PM Title: Chapter 30

Wow. And he didn't even have to play along. I would of told her anything she wanted to hear. 

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 30

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING. I love this story and watch for updates each day. Wow! what a plot twist.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 30

I feel so bad for Bella and Edward. These people are crazy. I hope Bella learns from this not to leave the bodyguards behind. She and the babies need to be protected from crazy people, who think they know Edward. She has to be smarter and grow up. She will never be a normal teenager again. She has people who depend on her now.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 30

loving this

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 30

READ YOU NEXT WEEK.

Reviewer: NeNee246 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 30

WOW! I didn't expect that!
Edward probably should used his acting skills to trick 'crazy' into talking!
I wonder if it is going to be worth it for Edward to be in the room to hear what 'crazy' is going to say!?! I can't wait to read more!! :)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 30

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: Islandgrits Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 30

This chapter is worth the wait. I'm on edge what will Nurse Slutty have to say. Will she help? I'll be waiting.

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 30

Ahhh who is this nurse? Why did she agree to be a part of this? Craxy bitch...

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 30

I'm going back a few chapters because I've forgotten too much.

Reviewer: GrandeDame Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 30

Emily & Sophie must be smokin' crack cause those b***hes are CRAZY!!! I HOPE Jacob doesn't rape Bella! That would be beyond awful! Heaven forbid, if he were to get her pregnant! *Puke!* :(

I have to say though that all of the security is pretty lame, since it hasn't been too hard to get to either B or E. I just HOPE that the babies stay safe & protected!!!

I HOPE that all of these evil, crazy people get what they've got coming to them, pronto!!!

Can't wait for more! ;)

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