Date: 27 Feb 2018 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
i am enjoying your story very much. though unrealistic, i loooove that edward
says whatever he wants to those women in front of whoever is around...he
doesnt allow any insults against bella...he immediately puts those women in
their place. i love it. in majority of fics, we don't see this at all which is so
frustrating. keep it up. i love protective edward who will say what is in all of
our minds and not let those women get away with their tantrums or attempts
Date: 31 Aug 2014 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 32
cool story im glad theres a sequel ;) a few points though when edward was recovering there was no mention of the broken arm? in emilys o/t she said she hadnt seen him in 6ys but it would of only been 5 ? when bella was taken she was only gone for about 12hrs but in her pov it sounded like days? but i did enjoy the story though and am looking forward to the sequel ;D
Date: 17 Jun 2014 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 32
I just don't understand Edward's way of thinking when he says that they are too young to get married, yet they weren't too young to have sex, live together, or have a set of twins?! Not to mention the fact that Edward has already lived a pretty wild life - traveled extensively, lived life to the fullest, & sowed his oats far more than most men ever have - young or old! So him saying that they are too young is just ridiculous! I think it's nothing more than just a scapegoat for him...a pathetic, hurtful excuse that doesn't make sense. :(
I'm not saying that they should get married just because they have children together, & I DO realized how young Bella still is. However, they've made these life choices together & they claim to love one another deeply, not to mention that they already live together, so what's the hold-up?! Him waiting around makes it seem as if Edward wants to keep his options open, or doesn't really want to committ...which is bad for poor Bella in more ways than one! :(
If he'd marry her, maybe then some of these skanks & naysayers would hopefully finally realize that he's serious about her & loves her...chose her. As it stands, everyone pretty much thinks that he's only with her because he knocked her up. :( It would also soothe a lot of her doubts & self-esteem issues where he's concerned & show her that he IS in it for the long haul - that he's sticking around, truly loves her & wants to be with her for more than just their children's sake.
He NEEDS to put a ring on Bella's finger & marry her, or at least ask her to marry him ASAP!
Can't wait for more! ;)
Date: 05 May 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
Loved the update and soooooo looking forward to reading more and especially the sequel!! How soon will they post??
I hope to have the last chapter up in two weeks and I already started the sequel.
Thank you for your continuing support
Date: 04 May 2014 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 31 Part 2
There are a couple things about Bella's condition that have not been addressed: she has just given birth. Therefore, her breasts are well on their way to getting engorged. Very painful unless addressed. Also, she is also bleeding (like a heavy period). Why would Jacob want to rape a woman in that condition? Is he just that much of a gross creep?
I understand what you are saying but remember that the twins were four weeks old when she was taken so the bleeding would be stopped by then and jacob didn't care less about if her breast were engorged or painful. He is that much of a creep. I hope this clears things up for you
Date: 14 Apr 2014 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 30
I just hope that they find Bella before Jake can do anything to her. Bless her heart. She just had twins four weeks ago. Her boyfriend is in the hospital. She has really been through a lot. LOVE this story. Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 30
I feel so bad for Bella and Edward. These people are crazy. I hope Bella learns from this not to leave the bodyguards behind. She and the babies need to be protected from crazy people, who think they know Edward. She has to be smarter and grow up. She will never be a normal teenager again. She has people who depend on her now.
Date: 11 Apr 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 30
WOW! I didn't expect that!
Edward probably should used his acting skills to trick 'crazy' into talking!
I wonder if it is going to be worth it for Edward to be in the room to hear what 'crazy' is going to say!?! I can't wait to read more!! :)
Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 30
Emily & Sophie must be smokin' crack cause those b***hes are CRAZY!!! I HOPE Jacob doesn't rape Bella! That would be beyond awful! Heaven forbid, if he were to get her pregnant! *Puke!* :(
I have to say though that all of the security is pretty lame, since it hasn't been too hard to get to either B or E. I just HOPE that the babies stay safe & protected!!!
I HOPE that all of these evil, crazy people get what they've got coming to them, pronto!!!
Can't wait for more! ;)