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Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 3:53 PM Title: Titanium

Ok first. Love your series. I blew through the last 2 stories and I am almost caught up with this one. Little torn intue whole Sonny/Maggie marriage.  Always thought it would be him and Katie, but I like seeing Sonny happy. Katie needs to wake up and see her mom for who she is. Lauren that Bitch I wish she was killed years ago. I hate what she did to Dame.  i hate seeing Dame in so kuch pain. 

 

I also hope Aro and Sonny can put the bullshit aside. I love the dynamic between Aro/Edward/Bella. The friendship is hate it if this came between them.  I think your an amazing writer and I can't wait to see where this all goes.  

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 4:16 AM Title: Crumbs

holy shit a rat in their midst! thankfully sonny killed that fucker but i get what ed is saying about sonny still doing a wrong. can't have people doing whatever even if it all turns out ok later. i wonder just what their fbi guy will find that they have? a vaycay for ed and bell will be awesome time to enjoy the freedom of grown children at least a little.

love the quote at the end. and i love that after all this time and all the shit ed and bell still love eachother so much it can bring them both to tears.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2012 3:54 AM Title: Crumbs

Lex- there are a lot of crumbs that Edward now has to clean up to keep everyone safe.  Wow C was a rat - I  had no idea.  But really, where did all the money come from?  Great, great chapter.

Reviewer: Lata525 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 11:57 PM Title: In Between

Sorry I am only leaving this until now.  Thanksgiving was shitty to say the least....anyway here we go.  I wish I was creative in my reviews like our girl Najs but sadly I'm not.  Wow where to start.....I think Bella is going through a rought time which is understandable.  Alot of shit has went down and because she is the Mama Bear she receives the brunt of the emotions.  She is trying to be strong for her family and it is not easier.  I am glad that Bella and Edward recognized the role they played in getting Dame and Amelia together.  They recognized this as being a mistake in nudging him too strongly when he might not have gone for it himself.  But they both recognized that getting with Amelia was the last thing he needed at that point in time.  I have said this several times and it is what it is.  Now this drama with Amelia and Dame.  From the beginning there was something fishy about Amelia.  From the first night they were together she schemed to trap him.  Him being a med student going in with no rubber the first night dumb move on his part.  She confirmed said entrapment to copping to the fact that she lied to him about taking the pills when at the time she said she was.  SHADY BITCH FOR REAL!  It is pretty obvious she had to have been given an incentive to go through with this.  All signs point to her Dad and this is really upsetting and to her admitting he offered her money to continue her relationship with Dame. To push your child to do something like this is low.  Even she realized this now....let's see where this goes from here.  I don't think this is the last we will hear from Amelia.  Her coming back with a bs excuse after they broke up solidifies this.  I love the Dame and Jordan dynamic but they need to keep it casual for now.  Let's see how this goes because we all now Dame doesn't do casual.  He needs to focus on school and his own emotional well being.  If he can do this, then I am all for him getting into a serious relationship with Jordan.  He deserves to be happy and she seems like a nice and stable girl.  He needs stable after enduring the crazy ride he had with Amelia.  Can't wait to see how things will play out for these three!  Love this story it is deep in my heart for real.

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 10:49 PM Title: Crumbs

I like a lot the Edward POV, how he takes care of his family, his wife, his children, how he protects them. You are very talented, it's a blessing.

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 10:22 PM Title: Crumbs

WOW a lot going on. Can't wait for the vacation, Bella and Edward have never gone away! I forgot who Heidi is and what the situation was with her...... Will where will they find her? I know they will.  Is everyone ok? Can't wait for the update.   

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 9:02 PM Title: Crumbs

Stealing from a dead man!  I love it.  Thanks for Edward POV...I've missed him.  I think the small island of Antigua/Barboda is in order. The plane ride is relatively short, and you can go on an all inclusive, relax and drink to your hearts content!  

Thanks for the update, always looking for more.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 5:38 PM Title: Crumbs

Loved it as always :)

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:05 PM Title: Crumbs

Love it

Reviewer: emma217 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 2:33 PM Title: Crumbs

Love the update. Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 1:48 PM Title: Crumbs

C-bag a rat??? I did not see that coming! Great chapter!

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 12:31 PM Title: Crumbs

Wow.  the storm is still brewing.....I hope that it is nothing too bad and I certainy cannot wait to read about Bella and Edward's vacation.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sher

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 9:28 AM Title: Crumbs

:)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 6:26 AM Title: Crumbs

i get the feeling you want to kill off edward....i hope not that would be to painful. i was happy to find an update but now i'm a little worried. UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 5:30 AM Title: Crumbs

What a great chapter!  Man Edward has a lot to keep track of, who killed who, who's doing what job. So maybe they will go legit.  That would be awesome.  I keep worrying that the Feds are going to come in & find that $ and he'll get busted for  

PI just love reading your writing, thanks so much for writing.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 5:18 AM Title: Crumbs

another great chapter, cant wait to read more. I love when its Edwards pov.... I miss it.....

Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 5:17 AM Title: Crumbs

Edward's an ass & I really hope Santino don't listen 2 anything his fucked up father said about marriage & his wife & kids. I hope he learns from his father's mistakes & don't follow them. Great chapter & hope they find Heidi & I really hope Heidi isn't Jordon in disguise. Lol!

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 5:01 AM Title: Crumbs

RICO OMG NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! worried

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:32 AM Title: Crumbs

Great chapter... Knew there was something up with C-bag :)

If things move forward with Jordan - can't wait to hear how she reacts to the family business...

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:29 AM Title: Crumbs

OH.MY.GOODNESS....they chaos that could have ensued if Caius had ratted...And all this time Sonny has been saying that he just didn't trust him...

Also, I miss Sonny and Maggie! I really wanna know what's going on with them....and will Heidi make a reappearance??? Fabulous as always :)

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:58 AM Title: Crumbs

Another epic chapter, Lexi!  I love that Edward, Skip, is basically just the same as he's always been!  He just can be relied on to react the same as always!  He may be a bit mellower in some ways, but he's just as scary to his employees and loving to his family as always.  He and Bebella are the heart of this story, all these stories; everything always comes back to them.  I don't know what else to say except I get so much pleasure jumping into this world with each new chapter....I remember when you weren't going to write this, that it was just going to be a 10 chapter epi to Weather The Storm. I'm so glad you changed your mind as this has taken on it's own personality, almost standing alone!  I'll read this as long as you write it!  When you get a publishing deal for the Storm series, don't compromise! Don't let them chop at these stories until they're unrecognizable! 

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 3:52 AM Title: Actions Speak Louder

Wow

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2012 3:11 AM Title: In Between

Loved it as always :)

Reviewer: mirrorlight31 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 11:23 PM Title: In Between

Loved this chapter! Bebella and Skip are so funny! Loved Dame as well!

Reviewer: Rgwmnks Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 7:34 PM Title: In Between

I really like this calm, happy Damion. Glad to see he's making an effort not to jump in another relationship feet first, but I have a feeling she is good for him. He needs something "un-connected" in his life uf you know what I mean.
Loved this chapter.

Reviewer: Celi Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 4:33 PM Title: In Between

That was a refreshing chapter.. I can't wait to see this free-er(dont know if thats a word) Dame lol.. I'll be waiting for a new update ;)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:06 PM Title: In Between

I love reading this and all your stories. The characters show such emotional vulnerability and are always growing and learning and it feels like I am along with them.

Awesome reading, thanks so much for writing. Reading your stories is one of my great joys so definitely you are someone I give thanks to this Thanksgiving.  Hope your holiday was everything you wanted.

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 7:25 AM Title: My Girl

Poor, poor Dame.

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 6:50 AM Title: In Between

HAPPY THANKSGIVING TO YOU AND YOUR LOVED ONES AS WELL. YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW MUCH I LOOK FORWARD TO YOUR UPDATES THEY MAKE ME SMILE WHEN LIFE SUCKS SO THANK YOU FROM THE BOTTOM OF MY HEART FOR THE JOY YOU SHARE WITH US THROUGH YOUR STORIES.

Reviewer: ced2010 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:47 AM Title: In Between

FINALLY, Dame! I thought he'd never give her the boot! I'm kinda nervous with him trying to jump so quickly with Jordan because I like her character, I don't want him scaring her off too soon :) Anyway, another great chapter and as always I'm looking forward to the next!! I hope you had a Happy Thanksgiving :)

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:03 AM Title: In Between

oh empty nest for bella and eddie! dealing with the pain of wanting to fix things for thier kids and knowing that they can't do anything but be there. kids growing up sucks sometimes....

dame finally ended it with the pysco! yay!!!! and kinda gonna try to go slow with jordan! they are gonna be so cut together. so proud and happy that he is growing up and healing.

happy thanksgiving! i am thankful for my family and for my grandson who will be here in february, and that i am getting used to being a grandma at 35... :) enjoy your chicken! hope you get to hit a sale or 2 or just relax a bit.... oh and write...lol... never stop writing i love your stories!! =)

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:22 AM Title: In Between

Lex - Happy Thanksgiving.  Great chpater as always.  I like the check in with Bella.  But the stuff with Amelia was awesome!  She was never on the pill - she lied the entire relationship.  And then she still wanted to go to Sonny's family event - psycho chick for sure.  And her parents invited themselves to Sonny's - this is so going to go bad isn't it. 

Just so you know everytime I get the notice of a new chapter.  I am giddy and can't wait to read it.  I know someday you will have to end this story so I will just have to go throught and read the saga again.  Great job.

Reviewer: Sunshine-Sue Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 1:26 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

about time dame came out and told amielia he thought the baby was a lie. so glad when that whole thing will be officially done.

nice to see dame and sonny and maggie working things out.

and awesome to see dame acting like a normal coledge guy, he needs it.

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 1:25 AM Title: In Between

so glad to see Damion get his life somewhat get his life back... I truely love his character... for some reason I like the underdog..

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 10:36 PM Title: In Between

HAPPY THANKSGIVING TO YOU AND YOUR FAMILY !

Reviewer: niux Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 9:35 PM Title: In Between

Oh, my :) This was so... so... fantastic :D When E, B and Ed Sr sat locked in bathroom... I almost piss myself 'couse I laughted so hard, hihihihi and Kylie, OMG :) The best part:

My father-in-law stared down at me. "You look horrible."

…………………………

When he was gone, I turned to my husband. "I look horrible?"

He wiped under my eyes with his thumbs. "You still have makeup all over." His thumbs were black.

"Ugh!" It came out squeaky as I scrambled to my feet. Looking into the mirror, I saw my sad reflection. It straightened my head, cleared it of the fog for a brief moment. I had mascara all over my eyes. I resembled a raccoon, and my hair was messy and knotted. "You fucked me while I looked like this?" I pointed to my face.

My husband was too busy playing with the bathmat.

"Edward!" I stomped my foot.

"What? You're beautiful. Shut the fuck up."

I kicked at him. "You shut up."

He did; he didn't say another word.

"Edward…?" I asked.

He shook his head. "What'd you say?"

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It's priceless :)) I love them, absolutely :-)

And Damion. I wish him the best. This Jordan is cute, I'm sure all his family will love her :)

I don't remember when I laughed so much :)) Thank you Lexi, you're amazing :))

I wonder what is going on with Skip and Sonny. What are they up to??? Hmm ;)

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 9:31 PM Title: Lies

Oh Dame, you poor baby. Edward is so sweet. The Skip can be heartbroken? Kidding.

Reviewer: Caligyrl4cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:42 PM Title: In Between

Awwww... Poor anxious Bella and horny Edward. Dame is slowly getting better... Less crazy in his life will hopefully help. Wonder how that will pan out with NJ though.

Can't wait for the skip next!!!

Happy turkey day!!!

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:26 PM Title: Truth

These two make my day. Is she the one for him, though? I hope so.

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:18 PM Title: In Between

amelia . . . definitly looney. good chapter. happy thanksgiving

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:16 PM Title: In Between

Can't wait for EPOV:-) LOL....... the SAHARA really Edward......... So  what's up with Caius's death are they investigating it.........god that would kill Bella if Edward went back prison.  Dame and Jordan interesting, lets see where it goes. I think Amelia as lost it, what does that mean for the relationship with Luke and Elena?

hope you have a great Thanksgiving.  At least chicken is a bird like turkey:-)

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 7:30 PM Title: In Between

I have this really bad feeling about Amelia, Is she going to try to get Damion Killed. If she does SKip is gonna go ape shit. 

Loved the mellow of Bella and the skip loved the sexie times. Was hawt. And then smoking up a joint was hot damn lol. 

LOVED IT!

i love damion I loved that he wants to heal and find little mush monster and give him a hug 

SIGH!

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 7:20 PM Title: In Between

This new Dame & Jordan pairing seem a bit ordinary - but if that's his HEA, so be it.  I wish he could find a way to balance his mafia killer & sweet doctor personnas -- but if he's gotta choose one or the other, I'm glad he's foudn some peace. 

I'm thrilled Amelia's out of the picture -- at least until she boiils Dame's rabbit... LOL ;)  I gotta believe there's no way she's going quietly..

I'm glad Edward & Bella -- as well as Maggie & Sony have that crazy passion + the mafia craziness. 

Still curious about Kylie & Gio's story...

Reviewer: Jdonovan09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:26 PM Title: In Between

Love it 

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:17 PM Title: In Between

I loved it, new beginings for Dame! I loved the pot heads, the giggles, but then they needed to go eat up the kitchen, order pizza something, lol........I still wish Dame was in the family business, my mind see's him as Edward's shadow????????? Oh well I enjoyed thank you

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:44 PM Title: In Between

:)

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:34 PM Title: In Between

HaPpY ThAnKsGiViNg!!

I'm happy 4 Dame. I hate that he & Amelia didn't work out, but she turned psycho & that just isn't cool! :) Glad 2 c Damion can bounce back-find some light. I'm curious 2 c how he & Jordan play out.
What is Luke Drasso's deal?? Hidden agenda??

I'm so addicted 2 ur characters it's almost embarrassing!! :) (notice I said *almost*!) It's that good!
Thanks 4 ur frequent & awesome updates. Every chapter is a winner!!
:)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:26 PM Title: In Between

Okay best Dame has been in a while. So Amelia pressured to do the deed because of daddy. Not a good thing and the fake pregnancy is beyond bad. That deal is done.

 

Jordan seems level headed.

Bella is the same and older. She still in love with her husband. Good. I think that Ed telling Kylie that Papa has demitia is so darn funny.

 

Happy thanksgiving to you and yours.

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 4:08 PM Title: In Between

I somehow think that Dame reLly is the source of Amelia problems....He put her THROUGH it when he went after Maggie and just lost it in general....i understand why she told Bella, and I feel horrible that Dame doesn't recognize that that was a good thing....Fabulous as usual! 

Reviewer: twilightgrrl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 3:16 PM Title: In Between

Amelia is such a stalker psycho & I have a feeling she will cause trouble 4 Dame & Jordon, if their arrangement gets out & I am so thrilled that Jordon won't put her dreams, career etc on hold 4 a guy, no matter how attracted she is 2 him & I am glad Dame is getting better & happy now. As 4 he & Jordon being fuck buddies, that's going 2 be a complication in itself. ~Babs~

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 2:43 PM Title: In Between

I hope Damion and Jordan become more than friends!!!!! Great chapter!

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 2:36 PM Title: In Between

This chapter was certainly uplifting.  A little less drama and I am glad that the Amelia thing is finally done and over with.  Maybe he will be better with Jordan because of the fact that he is  healing.  I am sorry that you had to work today, but when you are in the medical profession, that shit happens.  I thought i was going to have to work on Saturday as I work in a lawfirm and we have a trial coming up.  THANKS FOR THE FUCK AWESOME WRITING.  Sher

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 2:01 PM Title: In Between

Loved it!

Reviewer: logan671 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 1:25 PM Title: In Between

Great chapter, thank you

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 12:48 PM Title: In Between

ok....first part....Skip and Bebella...what a fucking hoot! What a great glimpse into how they are together now, later on in years! The getting high secretly is so funny! Her subtle complaint about lack of foreplay is said so matter-of-factly that it's almost like she's talking about a new recipe or something! No anger, just a kind of "0h well" attitude, said with a sigh....then she wonders the same about her son!  I loved that whole part. Very light hearted for those 2....Then there is my lovely Dame....I am glad he finally got his answers and ended it with Amelia. It looks like he is too! Isn't it a pattern with him that he's right on to the next woman....a serial relationship artist, that one!  I really like him with Jordan. I like her! I like his butterflies when he's around her.  Maybe this one will be it for him....It's good to see him happier.  Another immensely satisfying chapter! Thank, Lexi!!

 

Reviewer: EdwardCullen-izor Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 2:48 AM Title: Gotcha

I love Sonny and Maggie!

Reviewer: Evelyne-raconte Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 9:34 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Damion must be a very difficult character to write, and you excel in describing his way in life. That was an other very good chapter. Thank you.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 6:01 PM Title: Webs

Sonny was pretty messed up to leave the door open and really what was Damian suppose to do walk in on them while they were having sex. He wasn't standing there watching. He was waiting for them to finish. Maggie should have made sure everything was locked up, since she saw the state Sonny was in and she said she would call Edward when he got home. She broke  her word and cause her own problem. I am actually getting sick of Maggie playing little miss innocent and victim. She isn't innocent and she started persuing Damion. He is just having trouble stopping. Everyone said she was too young for him, yet it is ok for Sonny who is older. Damion didn't want to be the predator like Lauren. I also don't think Amelia is being truthful. He needs to keep his sperm away from her until he knows for sure. As some one who does Ultrasound you can pick up an embryo at 6 weeks with a transvaginal ultrasound. It will even have a heartbeat.

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 9:13 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Loved it--as always!!! Thanks bunches 4 ur loyalty 2 this story!! I love the Storm series & will always read every word-& love it!!! U bring such life 2 ur characters. Makes me feel like I'm living right along side of them!! Only great writers can do that!!! I find myself thinking of these characters frequently during my days while going about my life!!! THAT takes talent 2 have that kind of an impact!!
Thank U!!
:)
HaPpY ThAnKsGiViNg Sexy!!! :)

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2012 8:59 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

good

Reviewer: mirrorlight31 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:37 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

I loved this chapter! I'm team Jordan. I really liked her....

I love the industrial bra! haha I'm one those chicks....no lace and thrills for these boobs!

Great chapter!

Reviewer: akemp17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:24 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Damion is crazier than a bed bug but I can't help but love him. Can't wait to hear from Bella next.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:16 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Lexi - Once again great chapter.  Are we ever going to know what Amelia's deal is?  Because I totally think she is being shady.  I do beleive that she was rpbably pregnant now, but not so convinced before. 

Great job but I was really stressing out that Ameila was going to have Damion followed and then whack Jordon (I know look at me and my lingo - right?).

Thanks for bridging the gap between the brothers.  Great job. 

Love, a loyal reader!  Vicki from Wisconsin

Reviewer: Cleos Cooper Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 2:15 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

I would be so happy if Amelia was gone!  She is such a pain in Dame's butt!  Jordan is such a different change of pace...plus she's chubby!  I can totally relate...

I hope Jordan and Dame can work out their arrangement...it's nice.

Sonny is such a great friend and big brother...I'm glad they are working on their relationship...including Maggie.  Sonny has a real knowledge of family, and I'm glad he's giving Dame the opportunity to figure out himself.  Thanks for the update...looking forward to Bella's 2 cents!  

Reviewer: Siobhan_Whitlock Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:14 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Absolutely loved this chapter!  I think we needed to see into Dame's head, I know I understand him better now.

 

And what the fuck is up with Amelia?!  That chick is messed in the head or something... yeah, that shit was a lie, I dont think she was pregnant.

 

Loved it all, SLexi doll!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:08 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Glad Dame and Sonny are good. So Amelia and Dame are over?  Did she try to trap him?  Who is gonna be Dame's one?  I don't think it's gonna be Jordan who I thought was a guy.  Can't wait to hear from Bella.  Is Layla gonna be stalking Sonny? 

Reviewer: SherriB Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 1:06 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Wow....Daimon is always just so fucking intense.  I really feel bad about all the shit he has done and gone through.  He needs to get his shit together.  I love him but I really think that he needs therapy.   I also feel  really bad for Amelia.  I think that he cannot forgive her for telling his Mother about Lauren.  They had a good thing going.  I guess only time will tell.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. Sher

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 11:35 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

I like the nerd Dame....the sweet boy.  I am guessing that contained within him are both the nerd and the monster....Another great fucking chapter, my dear!  Such creativity....and I like Jordan a lot!  It seems her body type suits him, right? Wasn't Julie round also?  I love Dame. He is my favorite Cullen, next to Skip and Bebella, of course.....

Reviewer: twinmamma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 9:24 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Glad to see Dame is starting to act normal around Maggie.  And I'm happy he's moving away from Amelia.  Once the trust is gone, the love follows...  I can't wait to see where you go with Dame's character!  I don't want him to be a miserable psychopath - but I do kinda hope he has a role in the family business... He's too interesting to just putter away in some county hospital or doctor's office.  How you'd actually go about striking a balance between the two worlds is a tough question - but that's why I'm just a reader...  :) 

Your Quiet Storm Bella and Edward were/are so amazing - but the kids have pulled me in just as much!!  I get so happy when I see a new chapter is posted - I can't wait to see what's going on with them.

Assuming you don't post again before Thursday - Happy Thanksgiving!

Reviewer: becky Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 9:02 PM Title: Titanium

who could hate annything you write! your note about peps hating this chap was nonsense! if anyone hates anything you write they are just mean with no taste!!!! love these peps and love your writing!  pls give us some skip? miss him! however i am happy with whatever you share!

Reviewer: emma217 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 8:43 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

What a great chapter. Can't wait for more thanks for updating 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 6:16 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW
i loveeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeed it 

that was awesome 

they love each other and they had that long awaited chat that was important! 

Reviewer: gitgit Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:49 PM Title: Maybe

hahahaha 

Freaking loved the chpater 

aro the cleaner 

i wonder what kind of plans are up with the skip im sure he will give sonny and aro hell for it hahah. MAn that was great loved that he talked to lisa at the end. And go maggie she gave sonny hell lol 

Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 5:44 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Aww i loved this chapter! Im really not likeing amelia at the moment i think she faked the whole pregnancy and if she ever finds out about jordan there will be drama. But i like jordan and dam together! Cant wait for more! (Rpattz luvor)

Reviewer: tdjpeaches Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 4:19 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Jesus Pleasus Amelia is really Esme incarnate, WTF. I am soooo glad Dame's finally kicking her ass to the curb. At first she seemed like a sweet, caring girl. Someone Dame could just be himself with, that understands the family business. Lately she's become a manipulative, lying, clingy, whiny PITA....(pain in the ass). FUGGEDABOUTIT!!!!

I am really not one to condone cheating but this is a dire emergency exception to help him move past Amelia and her crazy ass suffocating ways. I'm glad he's dodging the bullet and moving on and away from over bearing.

Dame needed this and honestly so did Jordan...LOL. Hey, she knew what was up and they are both adults and she SEEMS mentally competent and I truly hope this leads to more for them. I want Dame to find his ONE as much as Sonny did. Not go through the hell Carlisle had to for years to finally reach his true love.

I have a good friend who prefers his lovers have more cushion for better pushin.

Doesn't like the bones appreciates the beef with beautiful full figured women so I get it.

Beauty is only skin deep as we see with Amelia. Dame has so much pressure with school and family in general he doesn't need or deserve more having to deal with Amelia.

I'm really glad that he and Sonny have talked and are back to being brothers. That last phone call brought tears to my eyes...B&E would be so proud of their boys!

great chapter as always....  ;)

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 3:40 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Loved it as always :)

Reviewer: farsideomoon Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 3:27 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Great chapter.  I'm glad Amelia didn't come by & interrupt Dame & Jordan.  It was nice to see Dame having a moment where he felt normal not that being abnormal is bad or that you have to do what everyone else does, but Dame seemed to need it.  And that was really touching them telling each other I love yous.

thanks for the update, you are awesome!

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 2:37 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Poor Dame.....he's such a complicated character that you can never get a read on him.....I hope that things get better for him....fabulous as usual!

Reviewer: tracip Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 2:05 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

As usual, I don't think ill ever get enough of these characters. Great chapter. 

Reviewer: lovingit3 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 1:23 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

Loved seeing Dame's point of view, really glad he was smiling again. I don't know how to feel about amelia.!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 12:26 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

:)

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 10:06 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

I'M GLAD DAMION IS FINDING HIS WAY TO A BETTER RELATIONSHIP GOOD FOR HIM. AS ALWAYS DO YOUR MAGIC AND UPDATE SOON.

Reviewer: Sassy12345 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2012 7:26 AM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde

What a nice surprise I enjoyed as always!!!!!!!!!!!! thank youi

Reviewer: Daisy Crazy Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 4:44 PM Title: Maybe

Aaaawwww!  I love me some Aro!  Great chapter!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2012 6:41 AM Title: Maybe

wow what a ride!!  Sonny kills Caius!  I think that shit will come back to haunt both Sonny and Aro somewhere down the like....could Skip kill his own son?  could he kill Aro?  I guess anything could happen..but Bella would either leave or kill Edward if he harmed her son.....I really love this story, all of these stories....they're so gritty and twisted....you are one helluva story teller, woman!!

Reviewer: becky Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 5:08 AM Title: Actions Speak Louder

crying my eyes out over here!

Reviewer: bab1067 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 3:29 AM Title: Maybe

Enjoyed APOV.  I'm guessing Edward really does like Maggie.  Figured maggie was calling Layla out on her wanting sonny, definitely thing she needs to go. But I think Sonny is gonna need to keep an eye on her, she's a little more falters attraction like sonny eluded to.  Was interesting to see Maggie come and get sonny was reminiscent of Bela going after Edward. Edward was correct in that Bella would go decked him.  Whose POV is next?

Reviewer: almoncla Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 3:23 AM Title: Maybe

So glad to see a chapter from Aro 's point. Love Maggie

Reviewer: becky Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 2:25 AM Title: Baby Girl

oh i stopped reading this story for awhile. i read the first two like 4x each. i wasnt sure how i felt about the pov changes. i am so glad a started reading again. your an amazing author. i cried threw this whole chapter. only awesome authors can make you cry and laugh out loud!

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:18 AM Title: Baby Blues

NOOOOO!!!! I had such high hopes for Sonny and Katie! I remember how cute they were together in WTS! It's sad that things didn't work out for them....and its odd that Dame is so happy, especially in light of what he did to Alex...can't wait until the next post!

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:17 AM Title: Breaking the Habit

It was so great to hear from Bella again! It's amazing to note how much she's changed since the first decade or so of her marriage to Edward!

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:15 AM Title: Old Habits, New Days

Love Edward and Bella "more than there are stars in the sky" :)

You have an amazing talent! Thanks so much for sharing it with all of us!

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:14 AM Title: Change of Pace Part Two

DANNGGGGG....Amelia is the true ride or die chick! It's funny how she was so down with what happened...it might be because she's Luke's daughter but I have the feeling that Kylie would have freaked if Gio had been put in the same situation....Keep 'em coming!

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:12 AM Title: Change of Pace

Maybe Amelia will hep Dame with whatever it is that causes his crazy behavior...like you said, what could possibly go wrong now....Keep it up!

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:11 AM Title: Actions Speak Louder

OH MY GOSH....Now THAT was intense!!! I was not expecting that at all!! You've got talent Lexi!! I'm anxiously awaiting the next update...

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:08 AM Title: Talk is Cheap

can't wait to see how this continues....fabulous as always....

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:07 AM Title: Edward

I love that Edward and Bella still smoke together....again, they are the mosy hip middle aged couple that I have ever encountered...

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:05 AM Title: Baby Girl

I'm glad that Kylie and Bella's relationship has been put right again, but I still think that Kylie really isn't as mature as should should be...however, I have to admit that the girl has some balls for standing up to Edward in the way that she did...

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:04 AM Title: Damion Part Two

That was just very, very strange....my favorite part of course was Bella and the sprinklers lol...

Reviewer: Southern Belle 18 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 1:03 AM Title: Damion Part One

DAMION NEEDS HELP!!!! What kind of person does that??? I feel so bad for Alex because she's constantly putting up with shit....first from her ex Mauro, and then from people (Edward included) when she first got with Carlisle. Now Damion is messing with her too?? I hope that she gets past this....

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