Date: 22 Mar 2013 10:28 AM Title: New Edition
Wow, I feel about as lost as poor Dame! And I kinda know what's going on. What's this about Amelia calling Maggie? Dame calling her ain't going to settle to well with Jordan. Glad she got to meet the family. Why they keeping dame in the dark? Did grampa toast Alistair? Can't wait to get EPOV
Date: 22 Mar 2013 4:02 AM Title: New Edition
Great chapter, loved it.
Date: 22 Mar 2013 3:34 AM Title: New Edition
It's good to hear from Dame again! It sounds like he's kind of on the outs with the rest of the family, but maybe that's a good thing! Man, have I missed this story. So happy to read a new chapter! I wonder what Amelia is up to and how she will react to Dame's call....and will he tell Jordan? It hard to tell if the old Dame is still there somewhere inside him....I suspect the potential is still there. Maybe he will be honest with Jordan after all. I loved what he said about her being the first girl who he believes loves him...or something like that....anyway, I hope all is well with you and that the muse has returned for a while this time....
Date: 22 Mar 2013 2:44 AM Title: New Edition
THANK YOU FOR THE UPDATE!!!
Date: 22 Mar 2013 2:40 AM Title: New Edition
Omg, this update was like waking up on Xmas morning when I was a kid!!!!!! You are the best writer ever I loved it, just loved it.........THE SKIP is next , that's when I'll think I've died and gone to heaven.........cause it was hell withour your updates
THANK YOU !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! going to read it again
Date: 22 Mar 2013 1:17 AM Title: New Edition
I think i may actually have a full blown breakdown when this ends, tears and tantrums an all that horrible stuff!! lol Thanks for another great chapter you beaut! :)
Date: 22 Mar 2013 1:07 AM Title: New Edition
Thanks for the update
Date: 21 Mar 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 42
Great start to a story
Date: 20 Mar 2013 10:14 AM Title: Bella
Am hooked on this story...please update soon
Date: 10 Mar 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 42
Love this story! Can't wait for more. Please update soon.
Date: 08 Mar 2013 1:43 AM Title: Bella
I am so hooked on this series....I just cant keep from thinking about this....it creeps into my thoughts daily....you are phenomenal sugar :-)
Date: 06 Mar 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 42
Another great chapter! I can never get enough of these characters. Thanks for the update! :)
Date: 05 Mar 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 42
Lexi is this the last chapter? I have waited forever for an update and walruses that twcs was having hat update date problem so I just found it. I loved all of this series. Great job. While I am not loving tribute yet I am still following. There was just something so compelling about this family that I loved. I would love to know a little more about the skip. But if this is it, it was a mighty fine run.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 42
OH MY!!!
looks like things are about to change! Will Sonny now be in power?
Date: 02 Mar 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 42
Love it. U rock ;)
Date: 01 Mar 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 42
you're ending this aren't you? i kinda expected it now, well, at least don't kill off our stars ok? let everyone live when you end it. thanks
Date: 01 Mar 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 42
He is passing the torch already? I dont think I am ready for that....neither is Sonny!
Date: 01 Mar 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 42
OH MY ROB , YOU ARE BACK ! Thank you, that was a great chapter. Edward really is 2 persons in one body.
Date: 01 Mar 2013 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 42
I so missed your words too, at least for this story, I've really been enjoying reading Tribute and just read Outside the box which was great fun, that snarky Bella was hilarious too.
Thanks so much for all your writing, makes my day;-)
Date: 01 Mar 2013 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 42
Are you tired of hearing how much I love these guys? Seriously! On one hand Edward's cold, ruthless able to kill Heidi without a second thought and then when he's home and seeing Bella describing her as his happy place, he makes my heart melt. By the end of the chapter it kind of sounds like he's ready for change. Will he hand things over to Sonny? Is Sonny ready for that? Love getting these updates.
Date: 01 Mar 2013 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 42
Please tell me that this isn't the last chapter
Date: 01 Mar 2013 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 42
I guess that Edward is finally getting tire of his ow profession. He wants to be with his wife and family and just enjoy them and he made his "bones" so why shouldn't he. He can his organization ut still be ve with his family. THANKS FOR THE MOST AWESOME WRITING. Sher
Date: 01 Mar 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 42
Great development of Edward's character - it's good to see he's not the same bloodthirsty kid he was back in QS.
Date: 01 Mar 2013 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 42
I hope that doesn't mean the skip is stepping down. Because I dont think Sonny can be boss and neither can Damion. Well maybe they will just all walk away, nahhh I dont think that either.
Date: 01 Mar 2013 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 42
This feels like the end of the story may be near. Edward feels older, somewhat removed from the life, as much as he can ever be. He talks about torches being passed for a reason....I loved the stuff in the desert between him and Aro, what with Edward playing around with Aro, about the snakes and scorpions and such...funny stuff....I'm glad they didn't kill Heidi's son. Looks like WIT SEC isn't all that good at keeping people alive....Thanks you for pushing through what life threw at you and giving us another marvelous chapter in this epic. I'm so glad you're pulling QS to publish!
Date: 28 Feb 2013 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 42
I so loved the SKIP update thank you so much!!!!!! This is the best story ever written, I'll never get enough of your SKIP never !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 42
Oh, that wa so tense I was just waiting for something terrible to happen. I thought Edward and Aro might've been set up.... Phew glad it all worked out and they're all home safe. Thank you
Date: 28 Feb 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 42
Aw, I thought the Ski was cute at the end, wanting to just cudle...
So, Heidi is gone, and it seems Maggie still has a beef with Edward.
Thanks for the update, can't wait to read what happens next.
xoxoxox
Mina
Date: 23 Feb 2013 4:58 PM Title: Drama At Twilight
I love Damion!
Date: 22 Feb 2013 7:44 AM Title: Bella
I just discovered this series about a month ago and have really enjoyed them. I appreciate the efforts to make it realistic, dysfunctional and gritty - it would have to be, right? I wasn't sure how I'd feel about Riders, that was a large time jump, but hearing the kid's version of events has really helped shape the story and give us a more complete picture of what is going on in the lives of this family. Thank you for putting up with the bullies and writing the story you wanted to write. I hope you finish this one, I'll be checking back regularly to see if there is an update.
Date: 18 Feb 2013 8:08 AM Title: Lost Time
This hasn't been updated in quite a while.. Hopefully we'll get a new chapter soon? Please? :(
Date: 16 Feb 2013 5:36 PM Title: Lost Time
all caught up finally.......now i need more please!
Date: 12 Feb 2013 4:05 AM Title: Bella
I LOVE THIS STORIES!! How much longer till part 3 is finish?
Date: 10 Feb 2013 3:24 AM Title: Lost Time
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 3rd which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 39 not 41!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!! This is truely an such an amzingly well written story than so many people don't even realize it has been update & will believe it hasn't be updated since then ssssooooooooooooooo please fix!!!
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Date: 09 Feb 2013 9:38 PM Title: Lost Time
well shit! everything was going so well with all of them. and now this?!?!? is alister being a creep or just taking a call? will the girls get back home safe? will this fuck over the stories latter?
Date: 09 Feb 2013 8:43 PM Title: Chicken
Awwwwwww. No Damion sexy scene. Man I love those. I get excited when I see that it's a Damion chapter. He's so intense!!!!
Date: 08 Feb 2013 10:21 AM Title: Lost Time
I am loving this story, thankyou for expanding this epilogue. I have only just discovered this series. Cant wait for your next update.
HMP
Date: 07 Feb 2013 3:15 AM Title: Change of Pace Part Two
I love Damion !
Date: 06 Feb 2013 6:57 PM Title: Actions Speak Louder
Extremely stressful chapter. Sonny and Katie need to be together. Enuf said.
Date: 04 Feb 2013 10:21 PM Title: Bella
Please finish the story!!!!!!
Date: 04 Feb 2013 12:12 AM Title: Lost Time
Loved to finally hear from Sonny and Maggie. Don't make us wait too long to hear from Bella and Kylie again! Wait on this update for a long time--was afraid that you discontinued the Storm Series!
Date: 01 Feb 2013 2:18 AM Title: Lost Time
Lex - I have missed the Storm. Yes Ia m reading tribute but I do love the skip, bella and Family. This chapter was interesting. I have never felt sorry for Kylie before - the way she is written she seems not very smart and exceptionally unobservant. I would have never have guessed that she realized that she was so "watched". The end with the ex boyfriend was very intense. I totally beleive that he was up to no good on the phone.
I miss edward though. Aro too. Great job. See you next time.
Date: 01 Feb 2013 1:52 AM Title: Lost Time
Love the chapter and the whole story in itself. Hope to continue reading more chapters soon
Date: 30 Jan 2013 9:58 PM Title: Actions Speak Louder
Amazing chapter- wow. No one does it like you!!
Date: 30 Jan 2013 2:44 AM Title: Lost Time
Sorry nothing original to say, but loved this chapter. I really am hooked on "Tribute" now but I was really missing this story and these characters.
I kinda cringed when Bella flipped out about Kylie going to Burger King but being a parent, been there done that, and no you don't want to take it back but you also don't want to drive your kid away or to do something you know they'll regret.
Skeezoid, was creeping me out too, more than creeping, I think I might a just been picking up on Bella's paranoia. But, I gotta say her instincts have kept her safe, especially in A.C. For all the wrong Carlisle has done I can't help but adore him, the way he jumps right up to be there for her and his family, well, maybe not Esme so much.
thanks so much for updating my favorite, fav.;-)
Date: 30 Jan 2013 2:21 AM Title: Lost Time
Wow loved this chapter. Getting Bella's point of view with kylie was great. Glad to see sonny an Maggie work it out.
Date: 29 Jan 2013 10:18 PM Title: Lost Time
So, who was Alister on the phone with? Is someone after Bella and Kylie? What Edward up to? Can't wait for the update? Now what's the posting schedule with tribute?
Date: 29 Jan 2013 11:30 AM Title: Lost Time
Wow....A lot happened in this chapter. I am glad that Sonny and Maggie are trying to back to themselves. They really seem to love one another. I feel bad that Rose and Emmett are having issues, but that is life. it is alwayss not roses and sunshine. It also sucks that Bellan cannot even go out for a night and let off some steam withough having to be scared and paranoid. I wonder if Allistair wsa talking shit on the phone. THANKS FO RTHE AWESOME READING. Sher
Date: 29 Jan 2013 7:39 AM Title: Lost Time
good. wonder if he really was up to something
Date: 29 Jan 2013 3:26 AM Title: Lost Time
Holy crap... I love me some tribute but hope an update for this happens soon. Cuzz Bella's spidey senses are never wrong... That's all I'm saying ;)
Date: 29 Jan 2013 1:19 AM Title: Lost Time
OMG... I hope this twist doesn't mean that Edward is gonna be under suspicion for Heidi.... Loved Sonny & Maggie reconnecting. I also like how the tight squeeze thing is genetic :)
So happy to see a new chapter & really enjoying Tribute...
Date: 29 Jan 2013 1:17 AM Title: Lost Time
Well it started out with Kylie being a little bratty with her opinion of Bella but by the end I think or hope seeing Bella stay calm and how she handles this situation might make her respect her mom a little more.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 11:39 PM Title: Lost Time
I am so sorry that ff cancel your story. They have been taken over by the TEA PARTY. but I am glad I can read it here. Also could you put all your stories here. I appreciate each and everyone. You are my favorite writer out of everybody. Even JOHNNYBOY.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 11:34 PM Title: Lost Time
That was one monster chapter! There's a lot going on here. I'm happy that Sonny and Maggie are back on track, really glad to see it! Sometimes Kylie irritates me, what with being so whiny. I forget that she's been pampered and protected all her life. She doesn't get how much danger they could be in at times and just goes off on what she wants to do, like skipping out to Burger King while Bella is sleeping....It's ok. She will learn. She really is young! I wonder if Bella's radar was spot on and detected danger from Alistair. His calls on his cell were quite suspicious. The Rose and Emmett thing, their being emotionally distant these days, was hard to hear. I guess all couples can't be as close and Bella and The Skip are....
Sorry Tribute got pulled from FFN. I got used to reading it here anyway as there is not the censorship here like there is there.
Date: 28 Jan 2013 10:59 PM Title: Lost Time
Hmm allistar was creepy as hell! Skip aill end him just for making bella and kylie nervous! Loved it as usual and lol bellas convo with carlisle loved her "code talk" (rpattz luvor)
Date: 27 Jan 2013 3:00 AM Title: On the Road
This story is not showing up under most recent any longer!! It showing u haven't updated since Jan 3rd which I know is untrue because u were only at ch 30 not 40!! Many people who are reading this story is not going to realize it has be updated or new chapters have been posted since then PLEASE FIX U PROBALLY HAVE CHANGE DATE 4 IT SHOW UP UNDER MOST RECENT BUT PLEASSSSSSSSSE FIX THIS AWSOME STORY!!! I had to do a search for this story to even check if it had been updated. Thanks 4 all ur hard work!!
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:58 AM Title: On the Road
The good old days... Gah! Can't help but miss them!
Date: 27 Jan 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chicken
Awww. I loved when she stole the chicken.
Date: 27 Jan 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 38
Maggie is pure hearted luke Bella.
Date: 27 Jan 2013 1:14 AM Title: OOC
Oh fuck. Long live the Skip.
Date: 27 Jan 2013 12:04 AM Title: On the Road
Loved...... Updating soon?
Date: 26 Jan 2013 11:45 PM Title: Eclipse at Midnight
Sonny needs a Dame hug!
Date: 26 Jan 2013 10:42 PM Title: Drama At Twilight
Kylie is very much like her father. Baddest bitch evr.
Date: 26 Jan 2013 6:48 AM Title: Dinner
Maggie is so cute. Damn, i missed the angst.
Date: 24 Jan 2013 10:20 AM Title: On the Road
Hi I looove ur stories especially the storm series. Just wanted to know when u will b updating riders of storm. Thanks
Date: 23 Jan 2013 10:33 PM Title: In Between
I should take Dame out for cupcakes and wine. That makes me happy, haha
Date: 23 Jan 2013 3:55 PM Title: Blazing Guns
Im only haft way thru this chap and im already cry. I think edward put so much of his time grooming sonny that he completely overlook damion's need. Anyways got more reading to do. Cheers greet story. And sorry if im a whiney readr/follower. Lol. I've had your stories on alert in FFn though its just last month started reading them. They are so good that i completely by pass the comment/reciew department, i just kept on reading. Lol. Kudos! Great work.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 3:11 PM Title: Titanium
Oh well, i officially hate sonny. Selfish bastard. If i recall right, during the siix flags event, they werent suppose to go but sonny whined and whined so bella ends up sending them with lauren. So i blame sonny for the fucked up shit damion went thru. Grrrh. By the way sexylexi your r an amazing writer, even though i hate sonny. Lol.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 1:22 PM Title: Dr. Jekyll & Mr. Hyde
The way Jordan is described sounds like Snooki.
Date: 23 Jan 2013 4:01 AM Title: On the Road
Sorry I have not reviewed each chapter but I just couldn't stop reading. This is an amazing story and I've loved everything about it.
Reading what sonny was going through was tough and having the guys beat him was even tougher. But I know it's all part of the story.
i had forget what Lauren had done to Dame, I am do happy to seeing getting through it and I really like him with Jordon. Time will tell if it will all work out.
Kylie is Kylie love her smart mouth and love her interaction with Edward. Bella is the part that keeps them all together. I cracked up when they were in the bathroom with Grandpa smoking pot.
You are doing an amazing story. I am sorry to read about all your nasty reviews. Don't people know its fanfic and if they don't like it no one is twisting their arms to read it. Looking forward to more.
Date: 22 Jan 2013 10:09 PM Title: Maybe
I love Aro so much. He is just so pure!
Date: 22 Jan 2013 4:56 AM Title: Webs
Maggie is tough, like Bella way back when.
Date: 22 Jan 2013 4:06 AM Title: Comfortably Numb
Sonny and Maggie have to be my new favorite thing.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 8:06 PM Title: Blazing Guns
I would have tortured Lauren more. Poor Dame. I can understand his protectiveness completely.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 6:09 PM Title: Titanium
Sonny is just so sweet.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 5:01 PM Title: A Hard Place
I miss them like this.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 9:27 AM Title: A Rock
I love Badass Bella.
Date: 21 Jan 2013 4:28 AM Title: Bella
I hope you are feeling better, I miss this characters so much, dont forget about them, I'm loving Tribute too BTW, but I miss so much my Santino and Mr Fuck hot, please dont abandon them! take care girl :)
Date: 20 Jan 2013 11:33 PM Title: Lies
I think Dame has some really big issues and needs something before some kills him and destroys Edward and Bella's marriage. Maggie is too innocent and she tried to avoid dame.
Date: 20 Jan 2013 7:39 AM Title: Crumbs
i missed this so muchn
Date: 19 Jan 2013 4:48 PM Title: Shaky and Jack
Wow great job. Not sure who is going to break who's heart. Maggie's innocence just pulled Sonny in and poor Dame doesn't know what he really wants
Date: 15 Jan 2013 6:22 AM Title: Eclipse at Midnight
Where can I find CaraNo sequel Grand Vendetta? She pulled it on FF and I dont see it on her blog.
Date: 15 Jan 2013 4:39 AM Title: Drama At Twilight
I just wanted to let you know I am still reading and I am still loving it. I am one of the closed minded people that stopped reading because the kids started having sex. lol. Its so funny now. You cured me of that. Thanks again sweetie.
Date: 14 Jan 2013 3:15 AM Title: On the Road
Cant wait. To see how this plays out. Love to see a chapter with sonny and Maggie
Date: 13 Jan 2013 10:55 PM Title: On the Road
Great chapter, as always. Yours is one of the best Mobward on the fandom.
I wish you all the best for 2013. Take care of you.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 6:37 AM Title: On the Road
short chapter. good though. It's weird that Kylie is so dependent on everyone else. I guess I never realized it either. And she is just so clueless. Why does Bella want to change her hair? Again, weird.
Date: 12 Jan 2013 12:18 AM Title: Actions Speak Louder
wow that was really an emotional chapter but very good.
Date: 11 Jan 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chicken
I feel like Sonny and Damion have completely switched roles...its almost as though now Damion is Sonny's keeper...Can't wait 'til next week!
Date: 11 Jan 2013 9:25 PM Title: On the Road
This was a pretty relaxed chapter...does this mean that the next one will be really action packed? Can't wait for it!
Date: 11 Jan 2013 9:53 AM Title: On the Road
Not the hair! lol! I do love a nice shaved head...but not Edward! Anyway, I loved this chapter. You had indicated last chapter that people might not like this chapter. I honestly found nothing about it not to like. Of course I never do. Your writing is so real, so believable for the lifestyle of the characters. Even the little things, like Kylie crossing the street and going to Burger King, by herself. Can you imagine? Well, I can now, and that is because of you. If I had plenty of money I would hire you to write just for me. That's how much I love your writing. And just so you know, I have never said that about another author even though I have read a LOT of fan fiction over the last few years and have read a lot of really good authors. I have only read this series from your work, but I cannot wait to find he time to read some of your other stories. You are so awesome!
Date: 10 Jan 2013 10:37 PM Title: On the Road
I thought for sure Bella was going with. Making Kylie walk to BK, now that was priceless:-) So is something going to come up and is Kylie going to see her mafia momma in action, protecting her daughter? So what's up with all the reminiscing? I'm sure you're going some where with this.
Hopefully there isn't too much trouble waiting for Aro and Edward when they get to Vegas. Bella is gonna flip when she sees Hs haircut and she'll have a heart attack if anything happens to Edward while he is gone.