Who do you think of when picturing Jordan? I cannot for the life of me get a permanent picture in my head! HELP!

As much as I love her, I kind of like the idea of killing off Jordan and Damion maybe becoming a "made man" to avenge her death. Maybe not for everyone but I thought it'd bring some more action to the story.

Great chapter, the suspense of Jordan not being there was getting me nervous.  Not that I thought you would do something to Jordan but that stuff that went down with Kylie and Bella was really creepy suspicious so ya never know.  I'm just glad that Dame's feelings are reciprocated.  Love that she didn't flinch at Maggie's remark of her needing her own gun when she became a Cullen, she just rolled with it.  Very hopeful;-)

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Awesome chapter!  It is so great that Sonny and Damion are becoming "brothers" again.  Too bad Damion and dad have not made the same progress.  I cannot wait to find out if everything is as non-dangerous as they have claimed.  Everytime they said they were in no danger I wondered if they were tempting fate.  Love, love, love this story!

Lexi..I cannot tell you just how much I ejoyed reading this.  I am just so happy for Daimon and all the kids.  they are really enjoying themselves and each other.  It is truly wonderful.  I am go glad that Jorda came to see them.  I know just how much it means to him and now he can tell his Dad that she came to be with him.  They really a tight family.  I certainly hope that it will stay that way at least for a little while.  THANK FOR THE FUCK AWESOME READING. JUST WHAT I NEEDED AFTER A LONG HARD DAY AT WORK. Sher

Nice chapter! Sibling dynamics don't change much, huh? :D And poor Peto! That is funny to me. 

Also, the CaraNo lime...I have been reading one of her ebooks and I was thinking of it while reading this! :)

Awesome monster chapter, I loved it!!

Please update soon!!

Ok. Once again Lexi I love this story. I still think flip. And sonny need to talk bu then again they are guys. And you are writing them well. I do think the brother interaction, trust, bond, love etc has been a strong theme in this series and while the one with Carlisle and Edward was ready eataihed we get to see this one from the beginning.  

Btw Carlisle did have a good point. Who will counsel sonny?  

I guess we are in the transition of moving Sonny into the "top" position.  I am glad we were able to hear from Carlisle as we have not heard from him in quite some time.  It was nice for Sonny and Dame to finally have an honest and slate clearing talk.  I hope that it all works out for Sonny to handle this business for his Dad and show him that he can do the job.....I am also hoping that with Sonny taking over, that we will see some Edward and Bella time.  I know that the story is going to be centerine around the younger Cullens, but I am sure you will sneak them in occasionally for some sexy times.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING.  Sher

Still lovin' ur story!!! Saw ur post on fb and if that's ur new story, I'm totally stoked!!!

Ur such a great writer, it's a disappointment to read other stories! No offense to other authors, but u and those who u rec, truly set the bar high!!! :)

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The brother bonding made me cry.  Beautiful.

I fuckin loved it.

well looks like things are moving towards a battle and a half thats for sure

I loved damion in this chapter. And while I am a loyal reader I am so glad you spelled this out for me. This was a great chapter. And sonny is right Amelia is conniving. 

Hi,

well, I really like this series - even if i never left a comment (shame on me).

Well, but with part three you really got me in a rollercoaster of feelings towards the kids.

First, I liked Dame, then i hatetd him, then i felt absolutly sorry for him.

He's a reall fucked up mixture between scary Skip and Whorelistle - but mots of it is to blame on the time at weather the storm and the fuck lauren did to him - hope they find a way out of this.

And katy? she's a brat, but somehow i still like her :D wll, hopefully she will not turn into a second esme - like bella tought shortly.

Sonny - I really don't know how to feel about him.

He had to be the tough guy, and always protect his siblings. He had a hard life, was heartbroken because of Katie.

But then, somehow he brougt Damion to that scene - even if it was by accident. He should never have given him the jobs he did - after that fist kill, witch saved his life, he should have kept him out of it - or told Edward from the beginning, so Dame could be a "real" member of the Mafia-Family.

But if not, would Dame murder somewere else?

I really hoped he would work everything out with Katie, but with every new chapter, it was more obvious, that she's changed and they don't fit. I don't understand why she hates bella that much, but i think Lauren planted the seed - hope they will work it out as mother and grandmother - but at this time, i doubt it.

Well, Maggie - I'm happy that sonny is happy and finally found love, but I really don't understand why you always choose those age gaps - Carlise and Alex, Sonny and Maggie - don't get me wrong, I like this girl, and i totally get the love they have, but something with this rush bothers me, something with her being that young does not sit right - it's a gut feeling.

Well, and in this chapter, I did not like Sonny at all. Well, that weird proposal might be ok, and kind of sweet - but then -

why rush now? with the baby coming soon, with Damion?

and he kind of persuaded her in doing it now - he knows there's no going back, no divorce for a mob- wife - and he dooms an 18 year old to that?

Yes, he said they have a big wedding after, but that's not the same for the family - belive me, I know, my sister had a small, fast wedding at another continent, and a big one a year later with all the family, but it did not feel the same for the families.

But the most shocking - how cold he reactes to Damions fate!

he semms not to understand what his brother went trough - and then, Dame is there, in his office, spilling his guts tu Maggie - and TELLS THEM THE REASON for his feelings to her, tells them he sees her like he was - and sonny is so blind with stupid hate and jealosy, that he does not reconize that?

Sonny does exactly what Dame acused him to, but he things that is love - Dame is afraid Maggie will regret in in a couple of years, and that she will not go to college but play housewife - and first, Sonny tells her, she can do what seh needs, and suddenly, they get married, and then it is ok to knock her up because she's his wife? She tells him she's not shure, but he doesn't listen!

He manipulates her!!!!!

Well, i hope that does not end badly - and with all honesty, i really hope the next chapters are not so much about the both of them, and i hope my fears will not come true - in the end, Carlistle and Alex did work.

So, I'm so afraid of this family breaking apart - when Lauren gets killd, will it affect gio and Kylie? How will Katie react? Will ant and damon become friends again? will Carlistles Family and Edwads never be together again because of that serious shit dame put on alex?

Will dame heal?

It is the second time he pulled his weapon on sonny - i hope ther won't be a third.

Love Dame's POV.  All his actions now seem so harmless and forgiveable, but can't he throw Sonny a bone and explain himself just a little? Dang these tough guys are tough.  They don't make it easy for anyone, but at least they make it a lot of fun. I was imagining Dame running to hide behind Bella, like he probably did as a kid, when he ran to his room with Jordan, good times again.  Great chapter.

Please keep Carlisle outta trouble, I feel for his wife and kids.

I love dame and sonny! Can't wait for more 

I just finished and as I told you I JUST FUCKING LOVED IT.  I just hope that they can be brothers first and foremost.....even though Edward and Carlisle were aways at each other at some point, they always had eachother's back.   THANK YOU FOR MAKING MY ROUGH DAY BETTER JUST BY READING YOUR STORY.  THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING.  Sher

Love the Dame insight .....clears up a lot. Think he found his one in Jordan. Still not so sure about what Amelia is up to, don't trust her. That whole stunt he pulled on Sonny with the dog then running to E & Bs was hysterical! Can't wait for the next chapter.

know all good things must come to an end, will truly miss this series and its characters! Are you going to be working on Tribute and  Offbeat?

You make me LOL along this chapter. I love it. Thank you for sharing. STORM  really is a great serie.

So good as usual. Glad to hear from Dame and know his thoughts.

Great resolution for Dame.  I was a fan of his murder spree -- yet even I am happy for him that he's content with his career as a doctor after reading that chapter. 

No one mixes humor with the drama!!  I bow down to the Queen!!  That ham trick has me laughing so hard my stomach hurt!  :)

they are my favorite couple

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So good as usual! You are so talented.

Perhaps it's because I just like Damion more, but.. this Sonny story arc is really making me mad. I just don't want to hear from him at all! And especially Maggie. She annoys me.

More Damion, please!

Update soon...? :)

Lexi 0 Great chapter.  The Dame situation still leaves me confused. Because like Sonny his behaviour confuses me too.  And Sonny's AMelia scheme - I don't think it would have worked and I am pretty sure that thisi chick is gong to cause a lot more problems 0 right?  Great job.

You've given us another one of your sprawling, widely painted, gorgeous chapters!  I couldn't be happier for Sonny and Maggie! He wants so badly to be a dad, and now he will be!  I notice he didn't address Dame's remark, the one he made to Maggie, about a clinic that could take care of her. He was referring to abortion and that was quite rude of him!  I love Dame, but of all the kids, he has NO filter at all! The interaction between Maggie and Sonny just always floors me. There's so much love there. She is both a scared girl and a mouthy woman. I really love their dynamic.  Skip's relationship with his sons, the conversations he has with Sonny here, I just get very emotional reading this stuff..... I truly hope that Sonny forgives like he says he does. He ends up hurting Dame all the time....I wonder if someday he will go farther with that.....

Maggie is pregnant..  Dame is still so hung up on her it's scary.  Just like Carlisle was on Bella.

Love this story.. so good!!

Amazing chapter. I had a feeling Maggie was preggers. I feel some bumps coming though, and I can't wait!!!!

I gotta say I hate that Maggie is pregnant. Sonny is always saying she needs to experience life because she's so young but now she's tied down with a baby. And I'm not convinced she wasn't pressured into it by everyone. I hope you take no offense, the baby angle just isn't my thing.

This was one of the best chapters!  All the crazy, so typical of them and so entertaining.  But Damion?  I cannot quite figure out what is in his head, what drives his anger, what he is really afraid of.  So I am looking forward to the Damion POV so that maybe we will figure him out a little bit.  I do think that maybe Sonny should have let his mommy talk to Amelia though.  Knowing Damion, he may put in motion whatever is going to take Sonny's happiness away.  I really enjoyed this chapter!

I think I am addicted to your writing by the way.  I just finished Instructions Not Included, and the epilogue I stretched out for like a week because I hated to not have anything of yours to read.  If I get too desperate between updates I may have to re-read something!  :-)

Loved it thanks for updating 

WOW....this started out so crazy and made me nervous about the whole Amelia thing....with Sonny....I am glad that Maggie had such wonderful news for her Santino.  I am also glad that they went back to their FAMILY.  FAMILY fights, screams, hits sometimes, but they are FAMILY and will love you no matter what.  It is hard for Sonny to understand that Daimon is different.  He has had dome major trauma in his life and every person handles traum so very differently, just like grief.  Daimon, couldn't handle his Dad being "sick" and then he changed with Sonny was "shot." and then he was abused by Lauren.....That is a lot of shit for anyone to handle.....I am also glad to hear that Edward was going to be there for him and maybe that is what Dame needs.  I heard through Facebook that you may be ending this story and it may be continuning with Dame and Sonny.  I know that sometimes the stories need to be put to "bed" so to speak but I truly love reading about this wonderfuly family who just happens to be in the mob, but I LOVE THEM AND DON'T WANT THEM TO DISAPPEAR.  THANKS FOR THE FUCK AWESOME READING. Again, mazeltov on your new nephew......I know that feeling and it is fucking awesome.  Sher

OMG, OGM, OMG, you out did yourself this is my favorite chapter ever.....Everyone knowing but Sonny, then Skip going crazy ass happy and Bella kicking his ass, and this one I fell off my chair laughing at.............

"You-fucking-know!" He jumped into the air and lunged at me. "You're going to be a father, and I hope you have ten little fuckers just like you!"

And damn I sure hope you write about those 10 little fuckers!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Your the best writer ever!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Why I feel that something is going to happen to Dame?! ughhh no, I hope no!

I'm so happy for Sonny and Maggie's baby like if they were real... 

It's the calm before the storm,no ? The prom, in the next chapter, will surely be something fun to read. I can't wait. Happy Easter to you and your family.

I liked lovey dovey edward and bella.  I am still totally curious about middletown.  was it a reaL THREat? 

Sonny makes a ggood point about crazy amelia.  the rother jealousy issue is interesting. 

love this story Lex.  Great job.

First of all I begin with Edward and Bella. Wow they are so in tune with one another and still so crazy about one another after all these years. That is something to aspire to. I love how you have Bella bring up the quiet before the.....and he cuts her off. Simply genius! We get a glimpse at Edward and how he is preparing Sonny for the role as boss. Essentially he has made him boss all but officially. It will be interesting to see where Sonny decides to take things.

Now my favorite subject.....Sonny. I love him to death.....for a fictional character. My husband is lucky he is fictional and not here in real life because if he was I make no promises lol. He is loyal, confident, and strong. He has the traits to be boss. Him butting heads with Edward is Edward's way I think to prepare him but to also bust his chops a bit. Sonny's comments how Dame gets off easy are not really off the mark. I think Edward is trying not to get Dame involved with the life. How much that will work remains to be seen. If he wants an ordinary life and a future with Jordan I think he will keep his nose clean. Knowing you Lexi, I have a feeling something will happen that will pull him in. So excited that the story is heading into a Sonny/Dame arc. I would like to hear from baby girl a.k.a. Kylie too. Edward still likes to look at her as a a little girl but he is in denial lol. We all have to grow up sometime. With the direction the story is going in I hope we will hear more from Maggie as well. She has been through so much in this story. I love her as well even if some of the readers don't like her.

I will end this here I think.

Love this story,

Lata525 a.ka. GemGirl Fanfiction

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Loved as usual!!! I get so excited every time I see an update from you!

I think sonny is right Amelia is up to something........something big. Can't wait to see what happens and how the phone call goes.  Like Bella said the calm before the storm.....:-(

It really is coming to a close soon, isn't it? 3 stories and many many years of story time and it's all going to be over soon. I remember when this one was going to be a 10 chapter epi to the last one and look where it is now!  The torch will be passed before the end? Or maybe not....I like Sonny's point about Skip cleaning up  Dame's messes....a touch of sibling rivalry here....I love these stories, have for a while now, and savor every new chapter cuz I know they're ending. You have given us a masterpiece here, and when you publish it, I hope they don't make you change and/or compromise it too much....

Woohoo!  Another update so soon. I honestly can't wait for Sonny and Dame to step out front in this story. Don't get me wrong, I love Edward and Babella, but this feels like Sonny and Dame's story to tell.  Another war with Jerz?  I am on the edge of my seat.  By the way, I love how you always find the right time to bring back 'more than the stars in the sky'. It always makes me melt.  

Thanks for updating!  Glad it was regarding Dominic!  Great story!  I have loved this series!   Thanks for sharing your great talent with all of us!

So excited for an update! I love the characters and this story. I could read this forever :-)

YESSS, It's always a pleasure to read a new chapter of the Storm Trilogy. What is Amelia up against Maggie now ? Thank you for your time and your talent.