Date: 15 Oct 2012 12:56 AM Title: My Girl
Loved it! I feel for Dam. He just needs to sit down and talk it all out.
Orange County, California!!!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 12:38 AM Title: My Girl
Wow.... If that wasn't emotional!!!! Damn these kids and the heart aches of it all. I love this Fam... Dammit!!! Lol. Can't wait to see how everything keeps rolling out.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 11:32 PM Title: My Girl
It is about what Lauren did to him! Does he not even realize it? He needs to talk to someone about that. If he tells his mom, Bella will kill Lauren! Maybe she does deserve to die for fucking up a young teen...My favorite part of this chapter is the talk between Edward and Dame here at the end....I love how you write this shit! Love it! I really do think Sonny loves Maggie but who knows if years from now he will treat her like Edward treats Bella.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 11:26 PM Title: My Girl
SEEE! i was thinking that he would feel everyone hates him! Atleast he didnt do anything else that was stupid the edward and dame conversation broke my heart
and i cant wait to see how the talk with bella goes
i wonder will he tell her about Lauren. I hope that he does so bella can clip her ass. Man oh man what a chapter and once lauren is out of the picture katie wont have a bitch fueling her brains.
But wow that thing with Lauren really did screw him up.
I'm not a fan of maggie for some reason but i was really happy when Sonny showed up that was pretty freaking awesome. lol I guess those two will grow on me. :P
Can't wat for the next update :D
Date: 14 Oct 2012 11:05 PM Title: My Girl
OMG, he was so close to disclosing that fucked up Lauren shit. I just know if Bella ever knew she would personally put a bullet between those greedy little pedophile eyes. That's one hit I'm SURE all your readers are wanting. Damn, can that really be the root of all Dame's issues, that and seeing your own brother shot down would really stay with you. I do hope Dame truly gets his issues straightened out...he's too young to die.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 9:58 PM Title: My Girl
this fic is one of the best i have ever read, the caracters... omg they are so complex I love each one of them, like always can'twait the next update :D greetings from Chile ;)
Date: 14 Oct 2012 9:56 PM Title: My Girl
I am trying to stay away from my lurker tendencies... so, yeah...
Great chapter! I loved hearing from Maggie! And when Santino and Dame were talking about it, and Dame was sescribing the "bubble" I thought for sure Sonny was gonna pop him in the mouth *smirks*
I cant wait to see whats bothering Dame...
*hugs*
Date: 14 Oct 2012 9:53 PM Title: My Girl
Let Damion tell what Laren did so some can clip her ass. Still reading by the way.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 9:37 PM Title: My Girl
Oh man... It breaks my heart how frigged up Dame is. And the pain Edward & Bella are going through kills me. Their pain is palpable. I know you've got a HEA up your sleeve for Dame -- I just have no idea how you'll pull it off and what twists and turns we're in for on the way. I'm at the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter to see another piece of the puzzle.
And Sonny & Maggie -- I wasn;t a fan of their relationship at first -- but you've really sold it to me. I love them together now. it's the passion of Bella & Edwards early days -- but Sonny is much sweeter and Maggie is much more innocent. Their light balances the darkness of Dame's drama.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 9:29 PM Title: My Girl
Wow what a great chapter. Dame almost spill the beans on Lauren so close. That really did a number on him. Thanks so much for the early update. Can't wait for more.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 8:49 PM Title: My Girl
Thank you soooooo much for posting a weekend chapter! I almost died when you said we'd only be getting weekly postings! I'd love to see Alex and Carlisle work things out, and please keep Sunny and Maggie together like Bella and Edward!! Sunny needs to receive just as much love as he gives!!!
Date: 14 Oct 2012 7:50 PM Title: My Girl
Will Damion bring up what Aro's ex did to him as a child next chapter? He really needs to for others to understand better and for him to heal. You know? I almost thought he was going to say it towards the end of this chapter. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 14 Oct 2012 6:35 PM Title: My Girl
come on lets get damion striaght. I really like damion for some reason, maybe the underdog or something... but i just want him to get his life straight..
Date: 13 Oct 2012 1:08 AM Title: Lies
I don't know why everyone wants to hate on Maggie. I actually love her. She's so good for Sonny. I could tell pretty early on that Damian was a bad guy, but I held out hope that he would meet his own Bebella that would save him from himself. What a clusterfuck!!!!
Date: 12 Oct 2012 2:30 PM Title: Lies
I liked it. No worries but of course this is one of my favorite stories. :D
Date: 12 Oct 2012 1:25 AM Title: Lies
Damn girl this family is just one hot mess! I think Maggie and Amelia should R-U-N..and fast...just kidding, but seriously someone needs to straighten out all this craziness.
I think Momma Bella needs to channel Dirty Harry and get on with the ass whoopings.
For real...cause once she finds out what the hells been going down behind her back everybody needs to watch the fuck out! "Leave the drama for your Mama"
She needs to start with Lauren for seducing her baby..like that bitch should end up in traction for that shit! Lauren always wanted Edward and Damion being his doppelgänger was just icing on that scrumptious cake! (Just saying)
Then she needs to be like Cher with Nicholas Cage and smack Aro good and hard on his obtuse stupid head to snap the hell out of it, GET OVER IT!! His princess is far from perfect and innocent. Sonny's trying to do right by her and deserves to be happy. Aro sneaking around then running off to get married on the DL with Lisa..WTF, like he has room to talk...running his fucking mouth to Sonny..smack him Bella, come ON!
Damion, he's just, ugh. Why does he enjoy fucking with people's minds? That kid's gonna end up with a bullet in his arrogant head if he doesn't watch out. Do they have a scared straight program in the mob? How can he be so cruel to Sonny after all he's done for him. Then there's the Alex issue. Definitely mental, that one.
Sonny needs a beat down for allowing Dame to do hits, which was totally against the rules.
Carlisle that mother fucking hypocrite needs to get his balls stomped then handed to him. He's one to talk after all the sleazy shit he's done to Bella stoned and straight. It doesn't matter that she's his brother's wife and still he almost raped her and caused all that shit with Edward. HE has the audacity to beat Damion...I don't fucking think so...pull the damn trigger Bella, right in his sorry ass!
Edward, I pity the fool for NOT coming clean with Bella. She so knows something is going on with Damion and the shit will hit the fan.
Who needs a mob war when the Cullen family is ready to implode from their own stupid selves. I'm looking forward to how this all pans out. I do want Sonny to happy and I love that Maggie does that for him. I hope Damion gets his head on straight and comes back to reality. You shouldn't bite the hand that feeds you. ;)
Date: 11 Oct 2012 9:35 PM Title: Lies
I really like what you are writing with Bella's and Edward's kids. That Sonny is turning out to be the decent good guy is great, though I have to admit for a time I thought Damion was going to be that. Now with his evolution, it puts both guys, their relationship within the family and the mob world in a much different light. I particularly like Edward's interaction with the boys, his reactions and read on each of them is great. But that you're not neglecting all the other great characters you've created like Carlisle, Aro and Alex is what I find great too. You just keep expanding and building on the relationships you have in place - and doing it admirably well!
I'm looking forward to Edward having to lay out everything that has been going on for Bella - she's going to be pissed! Also, I'm anticipating the sitdown planned with Dame, and how he's going to react, as well as how he's internally going to deal with things. That he and Edward are very similar is one thing, but Edward's only now getting that he's even colder and disconnected that he ever was. I have to wonder how this won't end in tragedy. But I'm hoping. Thanks for continuing to write this story - I check for updates practically every other day!
Date: 11 Oct 2012 6:56 PM Title: Lies
Billy Joel's song...'only the good die young' keeps popping into my mind! I hope everyone survives! I can't wait for the next installment of riders...thanks.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 4:36 PM Title: Lies
I love this story. I keep thinking the story is going to bring out that Aro's ex-wife raped him when he was a teen, Bella, Lauren, Aro, Edward, and the rest of the crazy bunch will fight, get some needed therapy, and HEA. I hope everyone stays with their respected partners though. They all make sense now. You know? I can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:59 PM Title: Lies
Where does that heartless part come from. It's not either of his parents? I hope something gets figured out. I'm still sticking around cuzz I love these guys... No matter how frustrating they are. I may be too sappy but I wanna see everyone with their own HEA and Dame is making that very hard. I'm not blaming Maggie, she doesn't know better... But at least Dame isn't hiding shyt anymore... Just working on his consequences now. I liked Amelia too so I hope he doesn't fuk that up. All these loose ends!!!! Can't wait for next chapter!!!!
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:00 PM Title: Lies
dame needs to pull his head out of his ass :)
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:54 PM Title: Lies
No I blame dame. Great chapter. Dame is finally reaping his consequences. But mama bear needs to know all.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 2:40 PM Title: Lies
Awesome as always!!
Bounce? Ur kidding me right? I have to talk myself down off the ledge everyday I'm so addicted to this story!! I hardly know how I'm gonna make it a week in between uPdates!! I barely make it w/2 a week! But it's all worth it. Atleat u update consistently! I'm reading several
stories where I'm lucky if the update once a quarter!!! No kidding!! Some only do twice a year!!!! So trust...I'm grateful!!!
I love Every single character!! How can I not?? They r each awesome I their own right!! Love the different POVs.
*Wonder what Carlisle did to Alex? Wonder what she told him?
*Dame was a jerk in what he did w/Alex & Maggie! Shame shame. I hope he's just confused or something cause I really like him & Amelia together.
Until next time...*sniffles*...bye!
:)
Date: 11 Oct 2012 4:22 AM Title: Damion Part One
Jesus Damion is bat shit crazy.
Date: 11 Oct 2012 3:51 AM Title: Lies
Wow this story gets better every chapter. Dam is a mess and I love Sonny and Maggie being together. Non of this is her fault. DAM MISSED his chance with her.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 8:43 PM Title: Lies
Holy hell......... dame is sure the sit in a lot of trouble. I could never be mad at Dame....he's a product of His enviornment and he has repressed a lot. I'm sure Edward in jail then Lauren using him as Edward (I'm hoping it all comes out........and Lauren becomes a target). Hopefully everything with Amelia is good.......she's good for him. I love Sonny and Maggie together. Sonny found his "Bella":-) all of ths seems like similar situations with Edward, Carlisle, and Bella. Hopefully Alex is ok. Kylie is a hoot also. Bella is gonna get an earful. Wonder is Alex tells her everything. Sitting on my hands waiting for the next chapter!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:26 PM Title: Lies
Wow what a great chapter! I can't wait till next week. This story is getting so good thanks so much for updating
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:09 PM Title: Truth
I want to say first, I suck at commenting/reviewing! I often download updates to read at work( no internet connection) and forget to go back and review. I also don't read reviews from other people. I know what I like to read. I have read this series from the begining and love that is different from alot of stories out there. While I love Bella and Edward FanFic I think this story would be great no matter who the characters are based on. From your recent author notes I get the impression that some people are not happy with where you have been taking this story. Well, my suggestion is "If you don't like it stop reading it" I , however, wait with bated breath for every update.... Keep it up! I will read even if you continue the series with grown grandchildren!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:00 PM Title: Lies
I hate Dame right now. reap what he sows is right. poor guy, got the worst of carlisle and edward... should shoot him in the thigh or something
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:12 PM Title: Lies
No flouncing here. Great chapter. can't wait for next Wednesday
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:03 PM Title: Lies
Wow! Can not wait to see what happens in the next chapter. I bet it will be EPIC!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 5:27 PM Title: Lies
noooooooooo dont say next wednesday noooooooooooooooo dont do that@ well shit right now im thinking what LAuren Did really fucked with Damions head and that has a lot to do with why hes so messed up and i feel really bad for Damion i know he was causing trouble but his head is a really fucked up place so this could get insane as long as he doesnt leave or hurt himself right now he is alone. and edward and co are against him. I dont like that.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 4:26 PM Title: Lies
Another great chapter. I'm going to have withdrawls waiting a whole week...I think I've become spoiled! Still loving Sonny/Maggie and cannot wait for you next update.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 4:21 PM Title: Lies
Lexi,
As long as you keep posting, I'll keep reading. I'm so happy that Sunny has found (what I hope is) his HEA. I don't mind the rockiness, and I hope that Carlisle and Alex can work everything out. I'm saddedned to hear that you'll only be posting once a week, but please don't suspend the story! You have to complete it!!!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 4:20 PM Title: Lies
OMG!!!!! I DONT THINK I CAN WAIT TIL NEXT WEEK!!!! THAT DAMION IS SOMETHING ELSE!!!!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 4:05 PM Title: Lies
Screw the haters!!!! Lol Damion is a little trouble making shit!!!
I really feel bad for Edward, cuz he did do right as a dad.
Loved it!!!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 3:22 PM Title: Lies
Still with you and can't wait for next week.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 3:08 PM Title: Lies
NEXT WEDNESDAY!!! SOONER WOULD BE BETTER (HA HA) GREAT CHAPTER LOOKING FORWARD TO NEXT WEEK.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 3:07 PM Title: Lies
Oh shit, I cant wait to see what Carlisle did... oh shit, Alex...
Dame is in deep this time.
Love it SLexi!!! *hugs and runs to stare at Offbeat till it updates*
;)
Date: 10 Oct 2012 2:58 PM Title: Lies
Yeah, it's funny how everyone can be so surprised about Dame's feelings & actions about Maggie when everyone knew they were f*cking with him by setting up Sonny & Maggie to mess with Dame & make him jealous. They were trying to get back at him, everyone seems to of forgotten but Kylie. So now their upset with how he reacts to it? I feel bad for Dame, no one understands him he's messed up though.
Loved the update, thanks for writing;-)
Date: 10 Oct 2012 2:47 PM Title: Lies
Damn girl, exciting chapter, thank you:)
Date: 10 Oct 2012 1:47 PM Title: Lies
Oh boy Lexi.....you hit it out of the park with this one. Shit is starting to boil over. I hate to say it but Dame is going to get what is coming to him. Wow his head is a scary place to be in...he is conflicted. Hmm where to begin....how about that stuff he said to Carlisle. That was asking for trouble. Did he not think Carlisle was going to confront Alex about that? As if that wasn't bad enough....he is trying to put doubts in Maggie's head. That is the same thing he did with Alex. Carlisle coming after him was inevitable. Did he think it was cool to just say that and disregard it as a joke....wow that is messed up. His obsession with Maggie not cool either. I feel bad for Amelia now. Her behavior makes sense now. She can't keep her man in check......he cannot be controlled. Her being clingy is not going to stop his behavior. What Sonny said was right on the money....you reap what you sow. He needs to straighten himself out or else. I am proud of Maggie standing up for herself and Sonny. The way he kept coming at her is not cool. He didn't like it when Sonny gave Amelia a ride home but it is okay to try to get with Sonny's girl. Oh boy I can't wait for the next chapter...shit is going to get real for Dame.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 12:28 PM Title: Lies
WOW I thought for sure Carlisle would never find out about Dame! So intense! Cannot wait for the next update see how this all will play out!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 10:05 AM Title: Lies
Good chapter, you've made Damion so cocky he needed a smack down. I don't think it's going to change who he is. Don't know what planet Sonny's living on either. Being disrespectful to his family and the skip! Who does he think he is? This older Edward seems to have gone soft. Especially where his kids are concerned. Young Edward would not have tolerated this behavior from anyone. He didn't tolerate it from his brother Carlisle. I'm very curious to see where this is going to end up. All 3 kids seem to fuck everything up so far. None have turned out very well. I thought Bella may have gotten through to at least one of her kids but no.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:14 AM Title: Lies
No hate here for Dame, I got faith in The Skip he will get this all fixed, lol....Heck Kylie and Bella got this crap going in the first place.........
Date: 10 Oct 2012 7:04 AM Title: Lies
Dame is an ass & I don't blame Maggie at all. As 4 Carlisle he has every right 2 be pissed at Dame, but if he beat up Alex, he needs his ass kicked bc it wasn't her fault Dame stepped out of line. Great chapter, can't wait til next update.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:39 AM Title: Lies
I can't believe Damion right now... that little fucktard.. I sure hope he comes around and hopfully not take as long as Carlisle did.. poor amelia
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:31 AM Title: Lies
Is not Maggie fault that Damion has his blood shares with Carlisle!! he is doing the exactly same thing C did to Edward, more fucked up I guess... uhg, so no updated untill next week? u.u
I don't mind hear more of Sonny and Maggie, and like this mixed pov's is great idea!!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 6:04 AM Title: Lies
Favorite line: "...and that's what I call bursting in like a motherfucker." LOL
Seriously - I loved Dame's character -- but now I feel sad that he's another Carlisle. I thought he'd be more like his Dad and that finding his true love would balance out his psycho killer side. Now it looks like he's more dark than light. And I feel bad for Amelia. I thought she had some potential for being a kick ass broad who could roll with Dame (maybe a bit of a Bonnie & Clyde vibe) -- but now it sounds like she's just an Esme Jr. which is disappointing, especially with all this talk of her having the hots for Sonny.
The Sonny-Maggie storyline is too lovely. They are so sweet together - and I'm glad she's not harboring any feelings toward Dame.
I love your work and I will absolutely keep reading!
Date: 10 Oct 2012 5:57 AM Title: Lies
I don't blame Maggie at all. It is all on Dame as far as I"ve been able to see for several chapters but especially the one dinner where Kylie matched up Sonny with Maggie. Now I have no respect for Kylie at all either. SHe is ahorrible shit disturber and not in a playful way, she does crap not caring about other people, her brother and parents. She is not quite as soulless as Dame, she just appears to be not as bad because shes a pretty sweet "little girl". But at least all but Dame care on a basic human level about what they do to other people. I have respect for most of them for their loyalty and Dame is just a piece os SHT. I'm thinking Edward may end up in a spot that requires he clip his own son, sheese and I wouldn't feel bad. He intentially hurt Maggie trying to say Sonny was screwing others....He knew he was hurting her and he didn't care he is one of those people...what do they call them...I'm not sure is sociopath is the word but they truley have no remorse and don't care what the do to others they just want what they want. I feel sorry for Amelia too because Dame won't maybe can't' be faithful to her. Yeah Dame really turned out to be the big disappointment in this family.
Date: 10 Oct 2012 5:49 AM Title: Lies
Jesus fucking christ!!!! What in the hell is wrong with Dame? Does he have a death wish? I like him, I really do, but then I'm a pretty sick mf my self sometimes.....He doesn't seem to have any sense of right and wrong....he just wants what he wants....He really wants both Amelia and Maggie? Maybe he just wants what each can do for him, not really caring about either....do you call that a sociopath? Is that what he is? If Carlisle doesn't kill him, then Sonny just might! What's with these guys and their sibling shit! Edward and Carlisle, Sonny and Damion, the apple doesn't fall far from the tree! This is some really entertaining shit!! It makes for a really good read! Why would anyone want to flounce? I certainaly don't!!
Date: 09 Oct 2012 8:13 PM Title: Gotcha
Maggie needs to stay away from her parents. They abuse her. Before Halloween it was emotional and psycholgical abuse. I think there was a little neglect as well. They are wealthy, yet she had 2nd hand clothes and very little things. They may have wanted her to be a nun, but she should not have to give up material goods for her whole life. She deserves to enjoy life. The only thing she was allowed to do was charity work or school. Now they are physically abusing her. Maggie needs to stay at Edward and Bella's. She needs to finish school and she can date Sonny. If it works out, they can get married when she graduates. She can go to NYU or Columbia. They can make it work.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 6:07 PM Title: Shaky and Jack
I like Maggie and Sonny. He needs a nice girl that he could one day marry. Sonny has a big soft heart that he doesn't show very often to the general population, but his family knows. He is a caregiver. Maggie is an old soul in a young, inexperience body. She has been kept caged in by her parents. She has lived in her fantasy for so many years, but now she wants to live and she could get into trouble if she doesn't have proper guidance. Kylie is not it. Kylie is nothing, but trouble. Sonny will watch out for her and make sure she is ok. I think it is a good match.
Date: 09 Oct 2012 3:03 AM Title: Truth
Still enjoying your story. Just like your writing period. Love Sonny and Maggie!!! Although psyco Dame is still my fav....
Date: 09 Oct 2012 3:01 AM Title: Truth
You don't know how many times I have checked after this chapter if there is more, I can't wait!!! I love love love Sonny, but you write about Dame and than I love Dame, if you write about Aro, I love Aro, well no now, I'm mad at him for been mean to Sonny, can't see he the story with Lauren repeating on Katie?? .... I love Sonny/Maggie story, now I'm thinking how this is gonna develope after the baby is born? you can always send Katie to talk with the creator on heaven like Esme did, ;P
Date: 08 Oct 2012 10:25 PM Title: Truth
I have to tell you how much I love your Kylie! She seriously makes me LMAO!!! I especially lived reading her from EPOV! Great job on the story! I love it! :)
Date: 08 Oct 2012 4:58 PM Title: Truth
as always another great chapter update soon!!!!!
Date: 07 Oct 2012 4:13 PM Title: Truth
Great chapter lex. I liked the Kylie/mo interaction. Honestly if anything happened to Kylie, I don't know who would be the most violent. She is the baby loved by all - ya know. She has a special relationship with each family member. Everyone loves Bella, but they all feel as if Kylie is thier own special person. Great chapter.
Date: 07 Oct 2012 5:21 AM Title: Truth
Awesome chapter & I hope Sonny & Maggie work out & he doesn't treat her how Edward treats Bella sometimes. ~Babs~
Date: 07 Oct 2012 3:36 AM Title: Truth
My first review in a while. Trying not to comment on the Santino/Maggie thing until I read more. Still wish it was Dame/Maggie but thats just me. Dame/Maggie seemed like E/B all over again but now that Sonny took her V card, I'm hoping you don't write Dame/Maggie now. Guess I will just have to wait and see.
If you ever do a spin off of this story. I would love a whole story of just Dame. Can you tell I love me some Damion Cullen??? LOL.
I'm enjoying this story so much, thanks :)
Date: 07 Oct 2012 2:19 AM Title: Truth
LOVED IT!
i just finished re reading Quiet Storm and working through WEather the storm for the second time around I just love the story so much ;D cant wait to see what happens next!
And hmm i feel weird about Maggie. And awww Sonny is naming the baby Izzy too cute! and wonder what will happen with that angle
Date: 07 Oct 2012 2:13 AM Title: Truth
Another awesome chapter. I love the family connection they all have. And the ILY's!
the one thing I didn't care for was that the chapter ended, work on that will ya! Haha
Date: 06 Oct 2012 11:16 PM Title: Truth
Awe... I'm so in love with this story line. Can't wait for more.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 10:59 PM Title: Truth
I just love Sonny with Maggie. I love them together. Despite the age and cultural differences, they just fit! Sometimes you just know and this is one of those pairings. The pictures of them and their togetherness just jump the fuck right off the page in vividness with the way you write them. I'm not kidding, it's like I'm at the movies! Also I'm liking Kylie a bit better now. The interaction between her and Bella mellowed me out a bit toward her in this chapter. Their mother-daughter bond shows up big time here. You're the best! I'm just an old California woman and you make me feel like I'm really there in their world when I read this story....
Date: 06 Oct 2012 10:42 PM Title: Truth
I know Maggie's still so young but I really want Sonny to find his happiness. He deserves to have his one. From such a young age he's had to take on a lot of burden..when Edward was in jail, even now he takes charge of his sibs and all the craziness of work and family. I REALLY hope M/ S succeed happily in love!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 10:31 PM Title: Truth
i am loving the sonny-maggie thing she is so weet and cute1 they remind me a lot of the old fuckhot and bebella, but a little tamer...lol
thanksgiving is gonna be fun for these 2 and the whole family.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 9:54 PM Title: Gotcha
OMG, I really do hope Maggie and Sonny stay together! I think they are so much better than he and Katie but I'm glad he and Katie finally reached an agreement. Since Maggie has an idea of the Cullens mob ties will Kylie FINALLY be enlightened? If I were Kylie I really think I'd be pissed that so much was hidden from me. They all treat her like a fragile baby...it's no wonder she's so immature. Poor Edward after his day he's really gonna need that blowjob and lesbo porn to ease his stress level. Heey, I'm game!!! LOL
Date: 06 Oct 2012 8:05 PM Title: Truth
I think Maggie will be really good for Sonny. Lauren is a child raping bitch and Katie needs to be bitch slapped!! Lol loved it!!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 7:26 PM Title: Change of Pace
This is so very random but, have you ever heard of or seen
this show called Boardwalk Empire? This story,
but especially the first 2 installments of this series reminds me of
Boardwalk Empire. Lol
This isn't my review, but I'm not caught up with this one yet.
I`m actually on chapt 11, hence why my review is here. lol
Ty.
Date: 06 Oct 2012 7:22 PM Title: Bella
This update made my day! I love this story just can not get enough and Skip is my favorite Edward !!!!!!!!! I'm liking a happy Sonny and Maggie, maybe Kylie gets happy next, she sure needs it, lol...........
Date: 06 Oct 2012 7:11 PM Title: Truth
Sexy, UR my "very own brand of drug!"!!! :)
Riders is by far my fav story & I've read 500 stories this past year!!! I Flove Sonny! He's so loving & passionate! He loves hard like Edward, but b/c he has ExB as parents, he understands and expresses it more.
Ur writing is so good!!
I was in such a desperate need for more Riders after Wed that I started re-reading it from the beginning. I'm so glad I did b/c I picked up on things I missed the 1st time around. I love Sonny & Maggie & Amelia & Dame! :)
Until next time!! Keep up the great work!
:)
Date: 06 Oct 2012 4:24 PM Title: Truth
Love it bb, as always!
xoxox
ba
Date: 06 Oct 2012 3:18 PM Title: Truth
So in love with these characters! I love that Maggie will be moving in with Sonny!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:59 PM Title: Truth
Gah! I think I may love Sonny almost as much as I love Edward. Wow, never thought I'd say that.
Love the story & Great Chapter!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:39 PM Title: Truth
I'm glad we have heard from Bella I missed her. It made me smile when she was talking about going away to school. I had the same talk with one of my daughters once
But I love Maggie and I'm hopeing she doesn't get to nosey. I want her to sick around x
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:30 PM Title: Truth
Your story is just so fucking awesome and I love it immensely. I am so glad for Sonny that he has Maggie. She is thoing to be Edward's Bella for him. He deserves happiness. I hope that once Daimon sees that Sonny loves Maggie he will ighten up and they will have their relationship back bacause they were always best friends. Daimon now has Amelia and he should be working on their relationship. I just hope that Daimon will become a doctor still and not have too much involvement with the"thing" because he should do what he was meant for and that is a healer and not a killer. I know that he did it in the past, but he was just so unhappy and now he is not. THANKS FOR THE FUCK AWESOME READING. Sher
Date: 06 Oct 2012 2:24 PM Title: Truth
I'm loving Maggie & Sonny together more & more... Great chapter!
Date: 06 Oct 2012 11:23 AM Title: Truth
Thanks so much for the update. Love it.
Date: 04 Oct 2012 6:35 PM Title: Gotcha
I LOVE Sonny and Maggie together! Please tell me they're permanent?!
Date: 04 Oct 2012 12:15 PM Title: Gotcha
wow sonny is moving fast but it sounds real... at least for now. loving the sonny story so keep it up. loved loved loved the edward and kiley interaction, so sweet and crazy and cute.
Date: 04 Oct 2012 2:30 AM Title: Gotcha
Days of Our Lives In The Hood. LOL Well here is the deal. she is 18 and he is upset (her daddy) she can not live that way under his roof. He has that right. So. She just might be Sonny's BeBella. Why does Katy hate Bella? .............LAUREN oh let that part about Lauren seducing Dame come out and I bet shit will be all over the fan. IMO LOL
Date: 03 Oct 2012 10:30 PM Title: Gotcha
You done it again, this is my favourite chapter just like all the others lol.
I love Maggie but I don't trust Katie. Poor Sonny I think there will be tears before bedtimes.
Someone kick Mr Sullivan arse please.
You would think that the neighbours would be happy they have a gangster living on there street, It must improve the house value saying you live in a safe area. Well unless there's a war but it has great neighbourhood watch someone on guard 24/7 who could ask for more :)
Date: 03 Oct 2012 9:55 PM Title: Gotcha
Oh poor Sonny and Maggie! I really hope this works out!
Kylie and Edward are freakin' hilarious!!! I was at physical therapy
while I was reading this and burst out laughing and everyone just
looked at me and then laughed at me!!! Those two crack me up!!!
loved the chap
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:26 PM Title: Gotcha
WOW! What a chapter! Thank you:)
Date: 03 Oct 2012 2:58 PM Title: Gotcha
So amazing! I love reading about Sonny and Maggie. Really looking forward to more!
Date: 03 Oct 2012 12:36 PM Title: Gotcha
I thought Damion would be my favorite but I am soooo loving Sonny now! Really enjoying this story and cant wait for the next update!
Date: 03 Oct 2012 10:26 AM Title: Gotcha
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 03 Oct 2012 7:23 AM Title: Gotcha
I might be in the minority but I'm so loving this sonny/Maggie plot line. The only thing I'm worried about is that she's Irish. Don't the rules say they have to be Italian? Or is it just preferred?
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:44 AM Title: Gotcha
YOU BRING JOY TO MY DAY WITH EVERY NEW CHAPTER. UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:15 AM Title: Gotcha
i love kylie she is so much fun and carefree we need more of her she is the heat that warms up all the ice going on.
Date: 03 Oct 2012 5:00 AM Title: Gotcha
Edward! He's advising from experience.