[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 9:35 PM Title: A Hard Place
Lauren that tucking bitch needs to be sleeping with the fishies!!!! Poor Aro. He had no clue his ex was so sick! I hope they Damion soon! Loved it!!!
Date: 20 Oct 2012 5:42 PM Title: A Hard Place
holy shit! lauren is a dead woman any way you cut it but it was smart to try to press charges... i guess it gives her a few more days of life.
nice to see ed and bell reconect after all of that. and for ed to see a little of what bella has gone through over the years with police, jail and separation...
Date: 20 Oct 2012 2:10 PM Title: A Hard Place
I just don't know quite what to say...Everytime I sit down to read this my stomach is always in knots. Lauren DESERVES everything that is coming to her. You DON'T rapte 13 or 14 year old kids when you are an adult, NO FUCKING WAY!!!!!! She fucked up his live from that. He was a certain type of kid when he was young. I love Mr. Fuckhot and BeBella.....their love is so special.....I am not sure if I can wait until Wednesday to see if Dammon is okay. I want Sonny to find him and talk him into coming back to the house so that, as a family, theyt can help him and try to heal. I know that one thing, Edward didn't even tell Aro what Lauren said that must have hurt Daimon more than anything, that she called out the "Skip's" name. I think Aro is going to have some choice words to say to her once they are back at her house.. Please, can we read about that because I love Aro too, and he deserves some sort of retribution also. THANKS FOR THE MOST FUCK AWESOME READING. One more fucking thing, that lemon between Mr. Fuckhot and BeBella was SO FUCKING HOT AND I LOVED READING IT. Sher
Date: 20 Oct 2012 8:35 AM Title: A Rock
wonder if she even remembers what she did
Date: 20 Oct 2012 6:29 AM Title: A Hard Place
Poor bebella and Edward... So much bullshyt but infant wait to see what happens with Lauren. BITCH!!!!! Karma is a bitch ;) and I can't wait or Lauren to meet Karma.... Buwahahahahahahahaha!!! How arethe kids gonna handle this? Lets hope Dame can work they this with the help of his family and Amelia.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 6:08 AM Title: A Hard Place
Perfecto Lexi. This chapter was exactly Edward and bellA.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 5:52 AM Title: A Hard Place
WOW, I'm speachless Edwards POV's are the BEST...i'll never get enough of this story.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 4:22 AM Title: A Hard Place
Yeah that was a fuckhot lemon. Dang, talk about getting your aggressions out in a healthy way;-). They're the healthiest people on the planet, haha.
i would of never guessed it would go down the way it did, that beyatch Lauren is evil. Arghh.
i can't wait to hear what's up with the kids. And Kylie is a hoot. So funny.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 4:16 AM Title: A Hard Place
well hot damn
happy hot friday in deed!
well hell
i think the fact that bella nearly shot her head off was awesome
and i wonder what edward has planned its final lauren must die. Doesnt matter how they should stage an accident. fucking light the bitch up i tell ya. She has some nerves!
Date: 20 Oct 2012 3:39 AM Title: A Hard Place
Love the update. is it wrong that I'm looking forward to Lauren getting whack whenever you decide to do it.
Date: 20 Oct 2012 3:14 AM Title: A Hard Place
you can never go wrong with CARA NO hot chapter update soon!!!!! SOONER!!!!! even better!!
Date: 20 Oct 2012 2:35 AM Title: A Hard Place
I feel for Edward, I was scared too. I don't blame Bella for wanting to strangle Lauren though. Wonder what Lauren will do next? Does she really think having a restraining order will save her? So glad Bella got out of jail and loved their time together back home. When Edward mentioned her always being his mooshmonster it brought tears to my eyes. I've been re-reading A Quiet Storm and it was sweet to see him remember those times. :0)
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 1:25 AM Title: A Hard Place
Ohhhh my lord!!!! Awesome chapter!!! That dumb cunt lauren hope bella and edward torture that nasty bitch. Andholy shit thatt was one hottt lemon! You amd cara are both fantastic writers now add you two together...just mind blowing!!! Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 1:08 AM Title: A Hard Place
DAMN SLexi! *pants* Wow, THANK YOU Cara No!
That was fuckin tense AND hawt! Fuckin green cop...
Lauren needs to take a permanent vacation, say? *cocks eyebrow*
LOVED IT!!
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2012 12:55 AM Title: A Hard Place
I have loved these stories right from the start! They're raw, hard and f*ckhot! Just like our main man! This last telling of the trilogy is just as good as the rest and I love all the characters, flaws and all. Up to now, I've been unable to review as I've been reading through Internet Explorer and apparently it's not compatible with TWCS system....
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Till then
Sandy
Date: 20 Oct 2012 12:44 AM Title: A Hard Place
This is the best fucking shit ever!!! From Bella's crazy choking of Lauren, something I would do if it were my son, to Skip's following and backing her up, to the hottest sex porn I've read in FF in maybe fucking ever, there is no comparison when the 2 of you team up like this! Bravo! Magnificent stuff....I'm almost afraid for all of Aro's family on this one. We KNOW that Lauren is gone, dead, finished, but what about that man friend of hers? These repercussions are going to be so far reaching.....Seriously, you've got to consider publishing this saga.....it's better that what's out there now!!!
Date: 19 Oct 2012 11:55 PM Title: A Hard Place
Freaking loved it!!!!! Can't wait for more. Absolutely wonderful Cara No
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 11:38 PM Title: A Hard Place
Awesome chapter & very, very, very good lemon. ~Babs~
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 11:24 PM Title: A Hard Place
AWesome as always... Can't imagine how Lauren believes she's getting out of this alive!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 11:11 PM Title: A Hard Place
Wondering what's happening with Sonny and where Dame is. I'm sure the boys are going to find out about Bella..........wonder what they will think. Do they even know what there mom really is capable of?
Smiles........Lauren's days are numbered and you know I've been waiting for a long time for that. I don't think Bella is going to be sitting around waiting until her grandchild is born. She wants justice for her son. With Lauren molesting Dame and screaming Skip does Amela think Edward cheated on Bella? Does Dame? Is that also why he is so angry with his father? I don't even know how you start to help heal this. He needs counseling for PTSD but can he even get it? Does Edward have anyone on his payroll? Plus there is patient confidentiality but I'm not sure where the line is drawn with murder.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 10:43 PM Title: A Hard Place
Awesome as usual
Date: 19 Oct 2012 10:20 PM Title: A Hard Place
FANTASTIC CHAPTER!! That was one very intense chapter. I was rocking back and forth in my chair like a mad man. Can't wait to see Edward take care of Lauren.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 10:18 PM Title: A Hard Place
Awesome! You really had me worried there that Bella was going to end up in the legal system. I waiting for the Feds to sweep in, even on a holiday and try to get Lauren to become a witness, etc. Thought your handling of Dame and Sonny - their relationship with Edward is great. That both Bella and Edward don't quite know how to handle everything they have learned about Dame is well done too. Believable all the way around. Looking forward to see how they all handle the fallout from the news of his sexual abuse. I do think that experience would have detrimentally effected him in many of the ways you have portrayed him.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 10:16 PM Title: A Hard Place
Another great chapter, Bella needes to take care of Lauran, because she will never rest easy about the whole thing. I think the statue of limitation should be like when u kill someone but then again thats my opionion. my spelling is all messed up today.... lol
Date: 19 Oct 2012 9:54 PM Title: A Hard Place
Lauren needs to be iced.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 5:36 PM Title: A Rock
I would have been right there with Bella. You mess with my baby, all my sense of right and wrong goes out the window. I would go straight to kill the bitch mode. She has ruined Damians life. He is so messed up, especially since she called out his Edward's positional name. That just made it 100 times worse for Damian. Lauren has to pay. I hope they can save Dame. He is such a good boy in his soul. He just has a whole lot of hurt that he is fighting. Now that this is out in the open, he can deal with it and he will be a better and stronger person and hopefully happier.
Date: 19 Oct 2012 10:24 AM Title: A Rock
wow....don't know what to write- getting more intense.
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2012 12:09 PM Title: A Rock
WOW! I am so excited you will be updating on Saturday! I cannot belive all that just happend! I really hope Damion will hear Bella out. Amazing chapter as always!
Date: 18 Oct 2012 5:42 AM Title: A Rock
Damnable u go Bebella. I would do the same dumb skank Laurent....
Date: 18 Oct 2012 5:08 AM Title: A Rock
Wonderful chapter, looking forward to more. :)
Date: 18 Oct 2012 1:32 AM Title: A Rock
daaaaaaaaamn girl!
nice cliffy!
xoxox
ba
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 6:47 PM Title: A Rock
Holy Shit! Damn so much for a nice family supper huh? I don't blame Bella not one bit. If I were in her shoes I'd do the same damn thing!
Whew Saturday can't get here fast enough lemme tell ya!
Great chapter. Kept me on the edge of my seat & I'll be dangling from the edge until this weekend. :-)
Date: 17 Oct 2012 2:30 PM Title: A Rock
Wow! I'm so glad that Edward and Bella know what happened to Dame. I really want to see Lauren get what's coming to her, but if Bella shoots her now there wouldn't be a way to hide it would there? She made it known that she was there and angry. I hope Sonny and Maggie find Dame before he does anything crazy. Wonder if Amelia is really pregnant. I hope she's able to mend things with Dame. Bella handled that all wrong. ha ha
Date: 17 Oct 2012 10:32 AM Title: A Rock
Don't ever stop writing this story, I don't think I could be without it. Xoxox
Date: 17 Oct 2012 7:41 AM Title: A Rock
OH SHIT!!!! kill the bitch bella kill that bitch... man i would kill a bitch too if she ever messed with my son!!!!! lmbo PLEASE UPDATE SOON !!!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 5:03 AM Title: A Rock
Lauren has caused so many problems over the years that she kind of deserves to get hers. She and her ideas are largely to blame for Sonny and Katie not being together too. She is an ungrateful witch.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 4:56 AM Title: A Rock
holy shit! i knew thanksgiving was gonna be interesting but.... holy shit!!!! bella is doing the right thing the mom thing fuck with my kids i'll fuck you up. how will eddie stop her? who is the random guy? did ed kill him? what will aro think of all of this? will sonny and maggie find dame before he does something stupid? is ameilia pregers? so much left hanging here....
holy shit!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 4:11 AM Title: A Rock
Freakin good chapter!!!! Love this protective Momma Bella :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 3:51 AM Title: A Rock
Omg omg omg damn u cliffy
My heart is racing, if I would have known this chap would be this
Intense I would have waited till saturday to read both back to back!!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 3:51 AM Title: A Rock
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGRRRRRRRRRRR!!! kill the bi...!! why the suspense?! pleae come back Lex!!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 2:38 AM Title: A Rock
I'd do it.. plain and simple, pull the trigger, consequences be damned. Bella's killed before always to protect her family. I bet Edward stops her but either way Lauren's DEAD. How fucked up is that .. to say Skip as she climaxed and all this time Damion blaming Edward? God, I hope Damion doesn't try to hurt himself.
Saturday can't get here soon enough!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 2:36 AM Title: A Rock
Wow I'm just blown away!!! I knew once Bella found out she would go nuts. No wonder Dam is so messed up. Amazing writting
[Report This]Date: 17 Oct 2012 2:03 AM Title: A Rock
Damn!!!!!!!! I'm so glad the truth came out. Hopefully Dame can start healing and he won't be just another Carlile knock off. He deserves to be happy & in a loving relationship like his mom -- and I'd hate to see Sonny & Maggie go through what Bella and Edward did.
Lauren totally deserves to die -- but what's that gonna do to poor Kylie & Gio?!? And what about Katie& Sonny's ability to co-parent... The impact of this revelation is too immense -- it's blowing my mind!! I can't wait to see where you take this story.
Your first 2 Quiet Storm books were awesome -- and this one is just as intense and entertaining. Thank you!!!!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 2:02 AM Title: A Rock
Whoa. That would be so bad if she killed her because probably everyone in the apt complex heard her. She'd get busted. Edward would never let her serve time in jail, so Edward would end up in jail for life when this all done. Or maybe they could kill that guy too & anyone who came forward. Another blood bath coming up? I wonder what Aro will do about her killing his kids Mom?
Wow, what a "Home for the Holidays" on steroids chapter this was, I loved it. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 1:48 AM Title: A Rock
Holy smokes, what a chapter! Just when I think you can't possibly come up with something else shocking, you hit us with this. Awesome chapter! I only feel bad for Peto because that is his mom. I hope that Damion will forgive Amelia.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 1:05 AM Title: A Rock
Oh my GOD!!! I don't know what to say, but I love the story and you have made me cry to two chapters in a row.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 12:16 AM Title: A Rock
FANTASTIC CHAPTER!! Can't wait for Saturday.
Date: 17 Oct 2012 12:07 AM Title: A Rock
I'm speachless I want more now, OMG....this was good, sad, shocking....How can I wait until Saturday, Crying........
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 11:12 PM Title: A Rock
Chapter 24/
10/16/12
I wonder if E can talk B down or will he finish it himself.
I truly am rooting for Sonny & Maggie to work out. They seem to fit.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 10:58 PM Title: A Rock
Holy fuking shyt!!!!! That's CRAZY!!!! She had it coming though... I just hope it gets settled without Ny of the immediate family in trouble. Hope Dame gets his shyt straight and Amelia stays around... Poor kids, all of em including B and E. but can I say a quick GO BELLA!!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 9:18 PM Title: A Rock
OMG........ This was one hell of a roller coaster chapter, I've been waiting for this. Bella is just in her motives but there are to many witnesses right now with the scene she caused. How would Edward be able to protect her. If Bella doesn't kill her I'm sure Edward or Sonny will. I'm sure Dame will come looking for mom when he's calmed down. Amelia possibly pregnant? WOW, so many issues to deal with.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:39 PM Title: A Rock
Woot woot! Oh so good, Lexi! Wow where do I even start... Firstly thank you for moving the story on cause I'm still not a Maggie/Sonny fan. Don't get me wrong he deserves to be happy and I'm glad that he's found a way to move from the stupidity that is Katie (can't stand her even more) but I'm just not feeling them as a couple. Maybe it's the age gap or I don't know ... But eh it is what it is and I'm still loving the fic. My heart goes out to Dame cause the kid is truly a product of his environment. And with all that shit that went down with Lauren I am seeing truly how fucked up he is. The people he counted on the most weren't able to protect him and that's something they're going to have to work through. And Amelia's explanation seemed to hit it right on the head. I am hoping for the best for Dame/Amelia cause they seem good together and she is what he needs. I reallyike Alex a lot always have and I hope that she can get through this with Carlisle. Even if I never could stand him cause he was just so disgusting. I think its funny the comment that Sonny made in the last chap reaping what you sow seems to fit Carlisle too. He spent years making B&E's life hell and now his own nephew pulled the same shit he did for years with Bella -- hmmm well Karma IS a bitch. Now speaking from a Mom's perspective - you go Bella!! It is a beating that was more than 10 years in the making! And a beating that only a momma can give to protect her child even if said child is grown up. I'm all for Bella putting a bullet in between Lauren's eyes. In their world they can't simply run to authorities and have this woman simply arrested - no dead would pretty much cover it. I feel for Lauren's kids even misguided Katie but she's never really been much of a mother to them so whatever! I am so excited for the update - I'm like vibrating!!! Awesome chappie, story as always!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 8:20 PM Title: A Rock
AS ALWAYS YOU ARE AMAZING.............SATURDAY CAN'T COME FAST ENOUGH.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:27 PM Title: A Rock
This is the most intense cliffy I have ever read. Not to seem bad or anything, but I really enjoy this plot twist, and it totally makes sense. I appluad you my friend. Things just got interesting. Oh, and I hope Lauren dies.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:23 PM Title: A Rock
Well the cat's out of the bag now....god damn Lauren!! wait until Katie finds out what her mother did....I feel bad for Amelia! And Dame!!! I have so many feelings about these characters, I really am invested in and care about what happens in their lives! Damn, this is good! Thank you so much, Lexi, for writing such an engaging and riveting story! I really hope that Dame lets SOMEBODY help him....my ex-husband was raped, abused by his own mother at age 14! He never told anyone until he was dying of AIDS over 50 years later....this made him twisted in so many ways that it changed his entire life. Even when he told me, finally when we became friends many years after our divorce, he still referred to it as having sex with his mother and felt shame about it! He never accepted it as abuse....it was too sad....sorry for the spill, but this chapter made me think of that....and he's been dead now for 6 years....
Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:09 PM Title: A Rock
First of all you are awesome for updating a day early. I squealed again this morning when I say it. What can I say about Chapter 24....crazy rollercoaster ride as promised. When the shit hits the fan.....it hit it hard. Dame and Amelia are on rocky ground right now. Her standing by him is commendable but lashing out at other people is not cool. What she said to Maggie in the kitchen was downright bitchy. Then to turn around and say shit to Sonny about Maggie even more shady. Her confession to Bella was a long time coming. She sat on that secret for awhile now and she should have pushed Dame to tell his parents but she did not. Her getting mad at Bella at the aftermath was ridiculous. I used to like Amelia....now not so much. I get the whole situation with Dame has her stressed but damn girl put your big girl panties on. Her being preggo right now is the icing on the cake. Both are at fault, it takes two to tango. It is simple to say kill Lauren....because as a Mom I can see Bella's pov. But makes things complicated is that her children are and/or were involved with Sonny and Kylie. This such a tangled web. Can't wait until Saturday....it is going to be epic just like this chapter...I have a feeling. You are a masterful storyteller...keep doin' what you are doing.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 7:07 PM Title: Shaky and Jack
Maggie just might be Sonny's Bella! That would be awesome.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 6:12 PM Title: A Rock
Okay, was that the end of the chapter or there are some words missing from my screen. I had to reboot my internet thinking that maybe I lost connection while loading this chapter.
What a cliffy, now I wish I could time travel to Saturday.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:37 PM Title: A Rock
OMG is she going to kill her? She deserves what ever she gets. She is the reason their son is the way he is. I so cant wait till saturday.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:21 PM Title: A Rock
Damn what a place to leave it!!!!! Saturday better hurry up and get here
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 5:09 PM Title: A Rock
HOLY SHIT!!!!
That was...WOW...no words to describe how awesome this chap was!!! First, Amelia saying that virgin shit to Maggie-NOT cool! Then the EPIC reveal from Amelia to Bella. Then Ant/Dame. Then the Bella/Damion event (poor Dame w/his shame) with Amelia/Edward in the background! (I think Amelia is dead-on w/her psych assessment of Dame as is Bella of her "Maggie realization" as to her appeal to Damion.) Finally, Lauren getting the smack down she so rightly deserves-& much more-to the cliffie of "Did Bella shoot Lauren"???
U rock Sexy!!
I was jumping 4 jOy that u updated early!!! Thank U!!
I agree w/the others...I'll still b reading this if u write abt the grandbabies!!! Ur that good...This story is that awesome!!
Keep 'em coming!!! :)
Heather-Davidson, NC
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 4:14 PM Title: A Rock
Holy SHIT!! Go Bebella!!!!! *cheers her on*
Awesome chapter, SLexi!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 3:38 PM Title: A Rock
Holy shit this was an eventful chapter!!! Lauren deserves everything she gets, but can Bella live with herself if she caps Lauren? I know I would feel no guilt or regret if I was in Bella's shoes. Child molesters have a special place in Hell!!
Loved the chap!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 3:34 PM Title: A Rock
Jesus Christ that was intense. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 3:28 PM Title: A Rock
Holy crap Lexi. You never let me down. If she shoots this has huge implications on everyone. I mean Katie and Gio - just wow. Wow!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 3:26 PM Title: A Rock
Wow, great chapter. I cried when Bella found out about Lauren. Can't wait to see what happens in the next chapter
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 3:12 PM Title: A Rock
I have no words to describe how scary shocking and exciting this is. I hope dame can get the help he needs eye opening To understand his feelings toward his Dad finally
Date: 16 Oct 2012 3:01 PM Title: A Rock
What an awesome chapter! I was on the edge of my seat! OMG GO BELLA!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:48 PM Title: A Rock
OMG that fucking bitch Lauren! I hope Bella pulls that damn trigger!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:40 PM Title: A Rock
There is something wrong with my iPad. It stopped with Bella pointing at Lauren's head.... I want more damn it. I love your evil brain my dear leaving us wanting and panting for more. Bravo.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:38 PM Title: A Rock
I love this chapter...it's intense...and it brought out the Bebella and Eward that went through everything together.
Your writing is simply amazing, I really hope things work out between Damion and Amelia... She is good for him. Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:14 PM Title: A Rock
Holy shit. I always wondered if Lauren would ever get what was coming to her. Hated her since the beginning. Can't wait for the next chap.
Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:05 PM Title: A Rock
Now that everything is out in the open, I really hope Dame can heal. I hope Sonny is able to calm him down. I don't know what will be worse for Lauren, having Bella kill her or having to live with the shame and everyone knowing what she did....and I mean everyone. Great chapter! I was on the edge of my seat the whole time!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 1:43 PM Title: A Rock
:) brilliant chapter
Date: 16 Oct 2012 1:38 PM Title: A Rock
Bella still kicks ass!!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 1:36 PM Title: A Rock
Holy shit!!! Damn this poor family, but so glad bella found out. I hope she kills the bitch. Poor damnion he is just so messed up but i love him! Cant wait till the next update!
Date: 16 Oct 2012 1:17 PM Title: A Rock
Love it Love it
I know Bella would kick that bitch arse. I've always hated Lauren.
I feel bad for Dame but I'm glad everyone has found out. but i hope that Amelia isn't pregnant it would break Dame.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 11:56 AM Title: A Rock
holy shit batman !
IT WAS coming OHHHHHHHHHHHHHH man. OOOOOOOOOOOOH MAN!
i wonder if shes going to shoot her head off and then edward will have to clip the mofo thats there.
and DANG she yelled it out loud too eh.
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2012 2:15 AM Title: My Girl
What a surprise!! :) Thank U 4 the update!! & "See u Wednesday!"...oh bless u Sexy!! :)
I think Lauren's "Skip" moment w/Damion is what's fucking w/his head. Biotch!!
I Flove Maggie & Sonny together...I want them to work out I just hope she doesn't get preggos-she doesn't need anymore ridicule from the bitches @ school or her family. I'm glad sonny came to her rescue! I agree w/Edward, Dame is acting out b/c he doesn't know how to handle all of these feelings. I think Bella & Amelia should go kick Lauren's ass *when* they find out. *hint hint, wink wink*
U da best! Thx bunches for the surprise update. It's GREATLY APPRECIATED!!!!
Have a great one! :)
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:33 PM Title: My Girl
I just love these stories so addicting and so well done can't wait for the next chapter!!!!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 8:25 PM Title: Truth
I think that Sonny should marry Maggie. They love each other and she is old enough. They are smitten just like Edward and Bella. It isn't going to change with time. It is meant to be and if it makes it easier on her parents than that is a plus. Maggie is smart enough to get into another school in New York, so school will not be a problem. I think Kylie needs to go to Texas to grow up. She is babied too much. She manipulates all the males in her family. Gio doesn't have all the money, so she won't get everything she wants. She will have to live on a budget and stand on her on 2 feet. It will be good for her. She is such a bratty child.
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:58 PM Title: My Girl
Oh please please let dam twll about lauren sleeping with himas a child and calling out skip/edward bella would beat her ass...loved itd!!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:06 PM Title: My Girl
OMG being a parent of adults is so hard sometimes. Youb are proud of them, but any time something is "off" you always feel like you did something wrong in the raising of them.
Great chapter girlie! Loved it, even if it did make me cry @ the end.
*MWAH!*
Date: 15 Oct 2012 11:54 AM Title: My Girl
well i stayed up till 1:30 reading and was up at 5 to finish, seriously i'm blaming you if i turn into a bitchy monster today...lol
dame is still feeling a lot of shit he needs to work through from his childhood, the shooting, the trips away, the rape, the insecurity. a lot of shit to work through but shit being on the table now should help. bella and eddie will not let him backslide anymore.
nice to see we have made some peace with sonny and carlisle. i hope aro lightens up on sonny soon too...
Date: 15 Oct 2012 7:20 AM Title: My Girl
thinking lauren really screwed him up. wonder what b/e will do if they find out - thinking they might. also wonder what aro will think/do if it gets out
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:27 AM Title: My Girl
Good chapter. Something about Sonny and Maggie still don't sit right with me but I'll come around eventually. I understand Dame's reasons regarding Sonny & Maggie. I liked his explanation. If only the others could too. It's very selfish of Sonny. I'm still loving this story though. I'll be here till it ends. If it ends. You might be writing about B & E's grandchildren next lmao.
Date: 15 Oct 2012 6:12 AM Title: Lies
dame is so fucked up. not sure where he is gonna end up at the end of all of this.....
he now has carlisle, sonny, eddie and kilie after his ass in some way and if he keeps it up the list will grow.
what did carlisle do to alex? what is waiting at home? fuck off to the next chapter. if i am tierd and bitchy at work tomorrow it will be all your fault! i hope you're happy... lol
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:59 AM Title: My Girl
Awesome as always!!!!
Really happy u decided to got with the 3rd installment it's coming
Out great just like the previous two!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:13 AM Title: My Girl
Wow amazing chapter, what happened to Dam with Lau, has affected him. The end where he and Edward are talking intense
Date: 15 Oct 2012 4:04 AM Title: My Girl
aaaaahhhhhhh!!!!!! AWESOME!! can't. wait. O.O!
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2012 3:33 AM Title: My Girl
I look forward to all of your updates they make my day!!!! Love the different point of views. I am curious to find out what Damion will do...If he will continue on the path he is going... or if he will focus on himself and Amelia.Damion also said Amelia knows everything... Did he tell her the truth or just some more lies?
Sonnny and Maggie are becoming my favorite characters. I really enjoyed Maggie's point of view. Thank you for this amazing story! Cannot wait til Wednesday!
Date: 15 Oct 2012 2:18 AM Title: My Girl
Translated with google. He pretty much told her what was said. Poor Dame.......he truly is mentally fucked up. Hopefully the talk with his momma will help. When is Aro going to give Sonny a break. Hopefully he drops it now Edward said something. Does Amelia know everything that is going on...... Is she going with to talk to Bella? Maybe she dros the bomb about Lauren.
Can't wait until the dinner....... Is Kylie going to show up at Maggie's school to help with the girls?
[Report This]Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:56 AM Title: My Girl
Lexi you are doing an amazing job. Edward and his breakdown then his talk with both Bella and damion were well written. Love you Lexi. Thank you for writing such high calibur stuff!
Vicki - Madison, WI
Date: 15 Oct 2012 1:49 AM Title: My Girl
What else is going on with Dame? I can't guess. Loved this chapter too. Had to laugh when Bella said she wanted to have Dame committed against his will to a psych ward, I don't know why but I find that funny. I must be sick. I just thought it was cute, what she's got is a chip off the old block.