Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want
DAMMMN!! Edward is so f***ing hot in this chap. Love when he man up on Bella.
He could order me around anytime. haha
ek
Author's Response:
Oh yes, a demanding Edward-So fucking HOT!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want
I LOVE this story :D
Date: 01 Apr 2010 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want
I can't believe that Alice and Jasper were going to watch Edward and Bella get their groove on! That was hilarious!!
Great chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Oh those two, they are so bad! =0 J
Date: 01 Apr 2010 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want
I like Alice and Jasper
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 01 Apr 2010 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want
LOL ha ha ha ha ha ha!! that was greatness... I am still laughing
Author's Response:
So glad to make TSO laugh. =0 J
Date: 01 Apr 2010 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 19: The Good Boy Edward: Please, Please, Please, Let Me Get What I Want
:)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 30 Mar 2010 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Bad Girl Bella: I Wanna Love Ya
Thats a great story. I do hope there's more. will be waiting on pins and needles...
I love Edward in this one. He does learn quick. lol
ek
Author's Response:
Oh yes, more, posting every other day and the sequel is on it's way. =0 J
Thanks for reading!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Bad Girl Bella: I Wanna Love Ya
*smoking a cigarette* It was good for me. Was it good for you?
Author's Response:
Most definitely.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Bad Girl Bella: I Wanna Love Ya
okay, I am once again heading for the shower... a nice cold one. Awesome job. Can't wait for more.
Date: 29 Mar 2010 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Bad Girl Bella: I Wanna Love Ya
I am so glad that they finally did it...AND it was super special because it was on their prom night!! The entire night sounds so magical. Great job on this chapter!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Mar 2010 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Bad Girl Bella: I Wanna Love Ya
Yummy!
Date: 29 Mar 2010 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 18: The Bad Girl Bella: I Wanna Love Ya
:)
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Good Boy Edward: Welcome to My World
oh hell that was hot and sexy... loved it!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Good Boy Edward: Welcome to My World
I am enjoying this story! I can't wait for the next installment!
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Good Boy Edward: Welcome to My World
Goddammit! How are you going to leave it there?!!! I totally understood that E had a little too much going on to really think about what B was saying and doing, but I'd like to know. As in, what is going through that pretty little innocent head of his while B talks to him like that.
Date: 28 Mar 2010 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 17: The Good Boy Edward: Welcome to My World
:)
Date: 27 Mar 2010 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Bad Girl Bella: There Are No Words
Love it, love it.
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:43 AM Title: Chapter 16: The Bad Girl Bella: There Are No Words
LOL I love that last line.. makes me think naughty things..... LOL
Date: 26 Mar 2010 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Good Boy Edward: Down, Down Baby, Down By the Rollercoaster
well that was nice and hot...
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:32 PM Title: Chapter Six: The Bad Girl Bella: The First Fall Is The Hardest
So, I just found this story, and I don't normally review on an old chapter, but PLEASE tell me I'm not crazy. That whole scene was paying homage to Some Kind of Wonderful, right? One of my favorite movies EVER.
Author's Response:
Yes, that was the inspiration for that scene. That is one of my favorites too and I have been waiting to use that. I really want to do a exb story like that, but I can't seem to make Bella like Watts. Good catch, not many got that. =0 J
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Bad Girl Bella: There Are No Words
Gah! He is too cute!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Bad Girl Bella: There Are No Words
Jacob is such an a-hole for ruining the bonfire. I am glad that Edward stood up for her an I can't wait to see what happens when she sees Edward play that guitar!
Date: 25 Mar 2010 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 16: The Bad Girl Bella: There Are No Words
:)
Date: 25 Mar 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 15: The Good Boy Edward: Down, Down Baby, Down By the Rollercoaster
This is my new favourite story. Cant wait to read more. I'm feeling very protective of Edward and i hope Bella doesnt hurt him.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Good Boy Edward: This Is Where the War Begins
Did not even think of that! Now stop replying to responses and write more! Lol
Date: 24 Mar 2010 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Good Boy Edward: Down, Down Baby, Down By the Rollercoaster
That was super hot! I can't wait for our boy to get his too!! Please hurry up an update! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing so many times. Lovely of you to do that! We are posting every other day.=0 J
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Boy Edward: Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic
Edward took the news really well. You can tell that they're falling hard. This is another great chapter!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Bad Girl Bella: Smoke and Mirrors
I am glad that Bella beat Tanya's ass! Those girls are bullies and they need to be put in their place! Great cliffie!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Good Boy Edward: I Like The Way You Ride
Great pool scene!! Bella is slowly changing Edward...he's cussing out the 3 witches AND Breaking and Entering! WOW.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:31 PM Title: Chapter 10: The Bad Girl Bella: Put On Your Dancing
Their date was great!! Edward was so sweet to surprise Bella with the dancing. I can't wait for more!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Good Boy Edward: Redo and Make It Up
WOW that was hot!! Edward is so sweet to tell Bella that she's beautiful! This is a wonderful story and I am loving it!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:56 PM Title: Chapter Six: The Bad Girl Bella: The First Fall Is The Hardest
That's cute that bad girl Bella blushed! Their chemistry is palpable! Great job.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Good Boy Edward: Minions to the Army
Oh my god!!! I hope Edward doesn't drink too much that he hurts himself! This can't end well...I am so exicted to read the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Keep reading, you'll find out =0 J
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Bad Girl Bella: Men Are Too Easy
I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Bad Girl Bella: The Stakes are High
Favorite line:
"He needs something to knock that fucking smug smirk off his fucking face and remove the prude pickle from his ass."
Hilarious!!!
Bella's got her work cut out for her!
Date: 24 Mar 2010 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 1: The Good Boy Edward: This Is Where the War Begins
This is a great story! I like what you've done with the characters...especially giving us a bad ass Bella! You've set up a good conflict for the two! I love it!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Good Boy Edward: Down, Down Baby, Down By the Rollercoaster
wow...does anyone else have the sudden need for a cold shower?
Great job, cant wait til the next chapter is up.
Author's Response:
I know I do after Eddie's chapters. Woo *fans self* So glad that you are enjoying. We are posting every other day. =0 J
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Good Boy Edward: Down, Down Baby, Down By the Rollercoaster
:)
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 15: The Good Boy Edward: Down, Down Baby, Down By the Rollercoaster
*banging my head on my desk* Why? Why must you torment me by leaving it here?! *fanning myself* Must. Have. Update!!! *laugh*
Author's Response:
I do that quite often myself. Sorry for leraving you hanging, we are updating every other day right now. =0 J
Date: 23 Mar 2010 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Bad Girl Bella: How Sweet He Is
Wtf?! That's where you leave it? Argh! I get sooo impatient! This is why I try to keep to completed work. Lol. Can't wait for an update.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 9:53 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Boy Edward: Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic
I was just wondering about the bet. Glad to see how E handled it.
Author's Response:
Yep, but will he tell her that he knows?
Date: 23 Mar 2010 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Bad Girl Bella: Smoke and Mirrors
I love a good geekward. But I especially love that you've given him social skills and confidence. It suits him.
Author's Response:
I do to, and we wanted to make his confident. Most definitely. =0 J
Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Bad Girl Bella: Put On Your Dancing
Damn you both! If it wasn't for this story I would be sleeping now!
Author's Response:
I've read of few of those myself. =0 J
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Bad Girl Bella: How Sweet He Is
Awesome chap..I gotta say I can't help but to re-reading this as I followed it on FF but damn if it's not twice the fun to do this again.
I gotta say this is a Bella that never seems to annoy me and I've got you girlies to thank for that..
Author's Response:
thanks, wow, thanks for re-reading
I love this Bella, hard to give her up.
=0 J
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Bad Girl Bella: How Sweet He Is
The only thing I would like is a notice of when the next chapter is out. I was lucky and read 14 chapters at once.
I am going to plug it on Facebook Twilight.
Thanks for the good read, it's now 1:30 a.m., can't wait for the rest! :)
Author's Response:
Make sure that you have this story in your favorites or the author(s) in your favorites, that should guarantee your alert when the new chapter comes out. I know that there have been some issues with hotmail accounts, so hopefully you will receive. We are posting every other day.
=0 J
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 5:00 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Boy Edward: Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic
What is PDA?
I am from a different generation, I look at my watch to tell time, and I use a cell phone to talk into, not text. I also thought BFF'S was Best Fucking Friends, but my daughter informs me that I am wrong. I thought it was good.
PDA Personnal Development Association!
Great Story!
Author's Response:
PDA is Public Display of Affection.
Thanks-Glad you are enjoying.
=0 J
Date: 23 Mar 2010 4:56 AM Title: Chapter Six: The Bad Girl Bella: The First Fall Is The Hardest
Yum-mmy.
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 23 Mar 2010 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Good Boy Edward: Minions to the Army
Well at leats he's not an idiot.
Author's Response:
One can always hope. =0 J
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Good Boy Edward: I Like The Way You Ride
That was hot!
Author's Response:
That's what we are aiming for. =0 J
Date: 23 Mar 2010 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Bad Girl Bella: Men Are Too Easy
You just know she was talking in her sleep! And she def said E's name out loud.
Author's Response:
Oh most definitely. =0 J
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Good Boy Edward: A Little Birdie Told Me So
Love it. Young Love!
Author's Response:
Oh young love, I remember those days. =0 J
Date: 23 Mar 2010 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Good Boy Edward: I Dub Thee Sir Prudeward
I always love a bad ass B. It makes me want to pull her hair. Hopefully E will at some point.
Author's Response:
Hmm, maybe. =0 J
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Good Boy Edward: Minions to the Army
One of the few stories Bella isn't whining it!
Author's Response:
I know, Right! =0 J
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Bad Girl Bella: Men Are Too Easy
This get's better and better!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Good Boy Edward: I Dub Thee Sir Prudeward
Love this, well written, carries you right along at a good pace (not slow).
Author's Response:
Thanks. We all enjoy a good pace. =0 J
Date: 22 Mar 2010 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Bad Girl Bella: How Sweet He Is
;)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 14: The Bad Girl Bella: How Sweet He Is
awwww.. how romantic......
Author's Response:
Oh thank you! So glad that you are enjoying. We are posting every other day, so you won't have to wait long for the next chapter.
Thank you for making it a featured story. =0 J (chartwilightmom)
Date: 22 Mar 2010 5:03 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Boy Edward: Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic
awww.. she lost lolla....
and I am going to read it on here if that is okay... I put it up on featured stories I will just wait for you to update and get your reviews up here....
Date: 22 Mar 2010 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Bad Girl Bella: Smoke and Mirrors
LOL go bella!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Good Boy Edward: I Like The Way You Ride
LOL I love she knows what time Black rides around the school ha ha ha ha.. that is great..
Author's Response:
Holy shit, you are reading this one tooo?!! Wow, again, so honored. Well, don't spoil it for you. This one is completed on FF and the sequel has started. Oh yes, good times to be had with these two. Eddie's dad comes in to play later, as well as Charlie. Enjoy reading more.
Thanks for reviewing. You have made my day, well night, since it is midnight in the States.
=0 J
Date: 22 Mar 2010 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Bad Girl Bella: Put On Your Dancing
oh no LOL this will be interesting......
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 9: The Good Boy Edward: A Little Birdie Told Me So
Happy jig! ha ha ha ha
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Bad Girl Bella: Making Waves
ha ha ha ha ha! He thought it was hers not his.. I bet..
what's the go with edward's Daddy huh?
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Good Boy Edward: Redo and Make It Up
awww..... hmmm wonder what he will think if he finds out about the bet.. hmmm.. disaster no doubt..
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:29 AM Title: Chapter Six: The Bad Girl Bella: The First Fall Is The Hardest
LOL loved the first kiss....... hot........
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 5: The Good Boy Edward: Minions to the Army
LOL oh poor eddie.. ha ha ha ha
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 4: The Bad Girl Bella: Men Are Too Easy
LOL ha ha ha ha just a little awkward.. yep
Date: 22 Mar 2010 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 3: The Good Boy Edward: I Dub Thee Sir Prudeward
LOL oh she is taking the bet seriously then!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Bad Girl Bella: The Stakes are High
LOL this is fun! okay got to keep reading.. love the bet.. there is some terms there!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 1: The Good Boy Edward: This Is Where the War Begins
LOL this is great start.. I can't wait to keep reading!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 7:49 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Boy Edward: Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic
:)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 5:34 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Boy Edward: Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic
*doing a totally DIFFERENT version of my happy dance (which could be a bit dirty)* Ohhhhhh yeah. VERY nice! Can't wait 'til next update!!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:17 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: The Good Boy Edward: Every Little Thing She Does Is Magic
yay i am glad she called it off .. and even happier that Edward heard her and isn't pissed at her!! :)
Date: 19 Mar 2010 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Bad Girl Bella: Smoke and Mirrors
lmfao! that is something i would do! love it!
Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:55 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Bad Girl Bella: Smoke and Mirrors
go bella
Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Bad Girl Bella: Smoke and Mirrors
*doing my happy dance and singing* Edward's being corrupted, Edward's being corrupted, Edward's being corrupted.... *happy sigh* I do love a bad Eddie.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, a corrupted Eddie, he is going down the rabbit hole. =0 J
Date: 19 Mar 2010 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Bad Girl Bella: Smoke and Mirrors
:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 7: The Good Boy Edward: Redo and Make It Up
It seems like Bella's changed Edward since when they first started.He was listening to a hard rock song.He's usually playing piano music or Sinatra and other classy shit.
Author's Response:
Oh yes, they are changing each other.
=0 J
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Good Boy Edward: I Like The Way You Ride
:)
Date: 17 Mar 2010 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Good Boy Edward: I Like The Way You Ride
i loved this chapter!!!! this was a lil tease... lol....
Author's Response:
Oh, we like to tease. =0 J
Date: 17 Mar 2010 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Good Boy Edward: I Like The Way You Ride
Awesome chapter, I really love this story. Thanks for sharing it, I have such a great time reading it.
Author's Response:
Thanks. Posting every other day. =0 J
Date: 15 Mar 2010 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Bad Girl Bella: Put On Your Dancing
another awesome chapter!!! Loved the date! Keep writing...excited to see more :)
Date: 15 Mar 2010 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 10: The Bad Girl Bella: Put On Your Dancing
:)
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Good Boy Edward: A Little Birdie Told Me So
This was just brilliant! Loved it!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. Glad you are enjoying!
Date: 12 Mar 2010 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 9: The Good Boy Edward: A Little Birdie Told Me So
:)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 8: The Bad Girl Bella: Making Waves
:)
Date: 11 Mar 2010 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Bad Girl Bella: Making Waves
I am glad you update frequently this is becoming one of my favorite stories :)
Author's Response:
Glad you are enjoying. We like posting quickly. =0 J
Date: 11 Mar 2010 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Bad Girl Bella: Making Waves
Bella and Eddie sittin' in a tree, k-i-s-s-i-n-g. First comes boobs, then comes f*ckhot making out, then comes Bells with '67 SS! (Ok, not my best work, but snicker-worthy none the less... :P)
Author's Response:
I liked it. Very funny. Glad you liked the chapter. =0 J
Date: 11 Mar 2010 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 8: The Bad Girl Bella: Making Waves
awesome chapter!!! I am totally with Bella on the car thing... lucky bastard! LOL Keep writing... excited to see what happens next :)
Author's Response:
Oh yes, the car, just a dream. But she might get to take a ride in it sometime. Thanks-posting every other day. =0 J
Date: 09 Mar 2010 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Good Boy Edward: Redo and Make It Up
How awesome is it that Edward turned around Lauren's attempt at seduction into blackmail :) I think the Army of Darkness would be proud of him.
It seems our bad Bella is very inspiring for Edward. I just wonder if their little groping session will change how she treats him at school. Will she ignore him tomorrow.
These last 2 chapters were just the thing I needed to unwind from the stress of moving the server. Thanks for always having funny/sexy chapters.
Author's Response:
Yeah. So glad we can make this fun for you to read. Can't always promise that it will be fun, but we won't leave you hanging for long. =0 J
Date: 09 Mar 2010 7:41 PM Title: Chapter Six: The Bad Girl Bella: The First Fall Is The Hardest
LOL. Drunk Prudeward is total win. I love how handsy he got. Of course her Army of Darkness wants to corrupt Edward. That's got fun written all over it :)
Yeah, Bella is fucked. She enjoyed that kiss way too much. Eddie is definitely getting to her.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading. Oh yeah, Bella is totall fuced. Oh that kiss was awesome!
=0 J
Date: 08 Mar 2010 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Good Boy Edward: Redo and Make It Up
:)
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: 08 Mar 2010 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Good Boy Edward: Redo and Make It Up
*applauding wildly* Prudeward gets to grope boobage for the first time!!!! Yayy!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks. So glad you are enjoying. Posting every other day at the moment till caught up on FF side. Yep, the boy got some boob. Into the spank bank please! =0 J
Date: 08 Mar 2010 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 7: The Good Boy Edward: Redo and Make It Up
wow!! so awesome!!! Keep writing...can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks. Posting every other day. Please keep reading! =0 J
Date: 06 Mar 2010 11:22 PM Title: Chapter Six: The Bad Girl Bella: The First Fall Is The Hardest
:)
[Report This]Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Good Boy Edward: Minions to the Army
OHHH Goody I am doing the Alice clap waiting for the corruption to begin. :) Can't wait for the update poor sweet Eddie!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Good Boy Edward: Minions to the Army
:)
Date: 04 Mar 2010 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Good Boy Edward: Minions to the Army
*snort* Bella's Army of Darkness. I love it.
Between Bella's clothes and her unconscious moanings, poor Eddie doesn't stand a chance.
This drinking game is gonna be fun. Can't wait to see what everyone chooses to say, especially Edward and Bella.
Author's Response:
Luv came up with that phrase. Cracks me up every time I read it.
Oh yes, poor Eddie doesn't stand a chance in hell against Bella. I'm surprised his peen hasn't fallen off.
Oh Eddie drunk, let's just say that he is all hands.
Glad you are enjoying! =0 J
Date: 04 Mar 2010 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 2: The Bad Girl Bella: The Stakes are High
My car is named Lola!
Date: 04 Mar 2010 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 5: The Good Boy Edward: Minions to the Army
AWESOME!! EDDIE'S GETTING TRASHED!