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Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 31

There too good, Im thinking

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 22

So they are the cookie cutter stuck in the 50s kind of parents, huh?

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 27

Yeah Edward, explain that one.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

LMAO

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 24

kkkk, you could easilly get lost in Bella's mind, kkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 22

Ohh the joy of being a daughter-in-law!!!!

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 21

That's way I prefer tradicional food, kkkk

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 20

WOW, wasnt expecting for Edwards parents to be that old. But it still makes the story just as funny if not more so.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 18

Uh oh, momma has the phone again. Edward's going to be in serious trouble now.

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 15

Now thats what im talking about

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 13

Could we be getting some lemony goodness?

 

 

The pic is easy, cum in my mouth

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 18

HOLY SHIT! AHAHAHAHAA

Reviewer: RPatzonly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 20

Love it!  Can't wait for more:)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

HAHAHA You gotta love Charlie no matter what.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 15

*sighs* young people in love... LOL

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

your having fun with the naughty emoticons! LOL

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

that's a squirting gun that got you.... ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

hahahaha do you honestly want me to answe that?

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 20

"the menopause" ROFLMAO

OMG No wonder! Esme is 65! ROFL OMG -

Though *cough* the older you get, the hornier you get... so who knows!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 19

LOL OMG Edward needs to grow a pair. LOL

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 18

OMG ROFL! Edward needs to get a lock on his phone. LOL

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 16

Hee heeh hee. I'm liking this Charlie even more.

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 14

ooooooooooh nice kinky Edward!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

?3===D~~~ O:?

If the O wasn't completely circular, I would say BJ, but as it is closed...

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 19

Esme has a problem with privacy!!!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 12

ROFL Okay, now I have an intersting Edward Patrick impression in my head.

 

8===D~~ kinda squirts, oh I mean speaks, for itself;)

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 18

Even I understood, kkkkk

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

oooh I do hope we get to hear about Edward's kinky fuckery

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

kkkkkk, I can't believe that he went to her house to take over her bed!!!!, kkkkk

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 11

The worse is that the first and the second I undertood, kkkkkk, the rose was the problem, kkkkkk

Reviewer: Vampqueen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

Someone's cranky! LOL :))))! I was sent this fic from TWCS, I love it, it'll be fun to follow it.

Reviewer: Chanzz83 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

Hahaha hilarious!!!!!! Moms and emoticons ;) 

 

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 10

Aack! I've caught up! Can't wait to read more:)

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 10

What is the meaning of the thing that Edward put in the end of his message??? @>--;-- 



Author's Response:

It's a Rose hun x

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 9

ROFLMAO!~

Yeah, I would so not want to be Bella right now. Well, I have been known to say things I probably shouldn't in front of people I should't - and I am always tweeting things I shouldn't, so who am I to talk?

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

ROFL! So you took that image for real. LOL So what does '8===D' stand for anyway?



Author's Response:

Ha ha ha, cock babe, it's a picture of a cock. 2 balls, the long, thick shaft and then the head :D hehehe xx

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

ah oh... lol something tells me this is about to get interesting!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:47 PM Title: Chapter 6

oooooooooooo sextward!

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 5

ROFL! So Bella is from a classy family *snort*

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 3

ROFL

OMG I can just imagine the man-child with his Mighty Mouse pillowcases

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 2

*snicker* So, Bella hangs around with some people who need to learn what a condom is.

Reviewer: IThinkINeededThat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

ROFL! Omg - can't wait to see where this goes!

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 10

Asshole LOL

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

kkkkk, poor innocent Esme, kkkkkk

 

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 9

wtf? why does esme still have his phone????

 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

OMG, that one was to die for, kkkkkkkk

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 8

AHAHAHAHAHA HIS SMILE!!! LOL

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 8

LMAO

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 7

He can cum and check on me too! ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

Have I told you how much I love Bella's cat name? He's my favorite brother ;)

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 6

Kink and sexting are AWESOME

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 5

HAHAHAHAHA CHARLIE COOKING IS ALWAYS HILARIOUS! 

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 3

Men are always children on the heart and in mind too!!!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 4

Bella's snarky in this I take it? Great job.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:31 PM Title: Chapter 4

That could be a good insurance plan for all music teachers... LOL

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

Man child indeed, but at least he sounds sweet.

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

kkkkkk, better yet, stop having sex with 10 different people every week...

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 2

LOL I guess they all missed the STD lecture back in HS! xD

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 1

LMAO... oh boy, this is gonna be a fun ride, I can tell!

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 3

Mighty mouse LMAO

Reviewer: franmasen Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 1

She's so right, kkkk if he proposed than she sould get a ring!!!

Reviewer: A Jasper For Me Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

Oh, TER ... I just love you! :)

Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 1

I cant wait to read this doll. the DYAC prompt sounds promising.

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