Date: 26 Jan 2018 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
I love this story
Date: 02 Nov 2017 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 21
This has been a very interesting story. Thank You for sharing with us.
Date: 02 Nov 2017 4:26 AM Title: Chapter 20
I am glad to see that they are not always Master and pet.
Date: 26 Oct 2017 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 19
Beautiful ceremony.
Date: 18 Oct 2017 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 18
He asked her to marry him and she said yes. But do they really know each other? Do they ever just sit and table and get to know each other. Or is Master always in control?
Date: 18 Oct 2017 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 17
Did he just answer his phone? Really!!!!!!
Date: 16 Oct 2017 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 16
I agree they needed to be punished but I did NOT agree with their punishment here. To me that we wrong. Bella did not deserve the punishment she got. If anyone deserved the longer spanking it was Rose.
Date: 15 Oct 2017 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 15
Jasper forgave Bella for what she did. She called him Master to that lady. That could have caused them trouble with their relationship out in public. I think she should have just said boyfriend. I'm surprised the lady did not question her on why she called him Master.
Date: 15 Oct 2017 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 14
A good hard fuck is always enjoyable.
Date: 14 Oct 2017 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 13
I thought her ex that hurt her was Jacob. Glad Bella told him off.
Date: 13 Oct 2017 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
Let the kinky times begin
Date: 13 Oct 2017 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 11
Let the playtime begin
Date: 13 Oct 2017 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
Let the playtime begin
Date: 13 Oct 2017 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad Jasper gas patience
Date: 13 Oct 2017 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 9
Hope they have some sexy times
Date: 13 Oct 2017 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 8
Jasper will make sure her 1st time is very enjoyable.
Date: 13 Oct 2017 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
I like that they gave her time to read over the contract.
Date: 13 Oct 2017 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
She handles her punish very good.
Date: 12 Oct 2017 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can't wait to see how you proceed with this story
Date: 11 Oct 2017 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Who is not? And why does she have the gaming system? All that was a bit confusing.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
She mentioned telling Jasper she heard rumors. I hope she does not get into trouble a out that.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 2
Well well well......cant wait for more sexy things to happen.
Date: 11 Oct 2017 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 1
Very interesting
[Report This]Date: 28 Jun 2016 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
This chapter was done with gentleness and subtleties while introducing Bella to this lifestyle!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you, i tried to keep to the lifestyle but not to the point that some live it.
I like the subtleness, the gentleness and how he understood her
Date: 20 Jul 2015 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 21
loved this hope you write so much more sstories of bella and jazz oxooxx
Date: 05 Feb 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 1
I look forward to your new story. I don't review often as sometimes I just don't know what to say. I have found very few stories that I didn't like and I have read over 2,000; but I have found some that were hard to get through due to terrible editing.
Some stories have so many grammatical mistakes that I just don't continue as I shouldn't have to interpret what the author is trying to say for each line of the story. I understand a few errors and auto-replace in MS Word as well as language translators, but there is only so much forgiveness a reader can give to a shoddy piece of work; even if the story idea was good.
You story was none of those things.
I will try to give you more reviews, but I am only 1 person. Good Luck on your writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review, i do appreciate it so much.
I at times, get a negative review on the fanfiction dot net site, but apart from that i have a hand full of regulars who are avid readers of my writing. I am glad you enjoyed it so much.
If it is okay with you, i would appreciate it and be ever so grateful if you would allow me to count you as one of my hand full of avid readers, please.
thank you
wendy
Date: 04 Feb 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thank you. It was a good story. I followed it from start to finish.
Author's Response:
Thanks for your support, sweets, i appreciate it. I havent had many reviews, but i see the amount of times someone has clicked on the story to read, so that is encouraging.
I have another A/H one to put up and that is complete. so i will still do chapter by chapter, but it will be every couple of days, a week apart at most.
Date: 03 Mar 2013 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yes!
Author's Response:
glad you like it and am putting up another chapter next week some time
Date: 25 Feb 2013 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 13
really great story line so far....can't wait for the next chapter
Author's Response:
will be putting up another chappy in about a week
Date: 22 Aug 2012 1:26 PM Title: Chapter 1
Its fine take ur time
Author's Response:
glad you are enjoying it
Date: 22 Aug 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great story so far can't wait to see wat happens next update soon
Author's Response:
I will try, just so many to adapt and edit and convert to plain text.
Date: 12 Aug 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 11
Loved this chapter! Jasper is intent, yet considerate of her and how this will affect her body and soul. Gotta love him. This was warm and lusciously sexy. If you have a delay with what you want to do next, you could always add a chapter first on Bella's reactions to everything that happened on the plane. Thank you for all the hard work and your desire to get it as right as possible.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for the review.
I do try to get the perfect mix as i like a man who can be firm and yet sensitive and loving as well as carnal if the occasion arises. this time round he was as she needed him to be. I am glad it is liked and you allunderstood it. thankyou so much
[Report This]Date: 12 Aug 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 11
The Master is falling fast for your Sub (laughs). Glad it went well in the V-card goodbye. Now the Master will stop suffering in the bathroom (laughs).
Author's Response:
Yes. The poor mn was suffering somewhat. But i do hoep it reads right for everyone. It isnt easy and i am trying to do as much research as i can in to this. But spoken from a sub on what should or could be in the story would be preferred. Oh well, such is life. I do hope you do not hang me when i do the next chapter. her past comes back to haunt her after there meeting master Jasper has to attend.
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 10
Hmmm this game tune (laughs).
Author's Response:
Umm, this will sound dumb, but what did thatmean.
Date: 10 Aug 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 10
Jasper may not have done it, but he certainly made sure Bella was more than contentedly cared for. In many ways not only is he perfect for her but she is perfect for him. You simply can't beat that! I'm looking forward to : a) the next update, b) the first time they both go all the way, and c) when Bella finally feels comfortable enough to share the pain s of her past with him.
Author's Response:
Thanks hon'
I appreciate these positive reviews.
The next chapter is coming up in a few days, then it may be a wee while until the next. This is only because i have slight problems in this area (D/S relationships) I am not in this community nor am i a Sub or Dom. So it isn't easy to do this. I had one Sub who's master permitted her to talk on things i need to know about it. But i havent heard from her for some time. I find first and foremost, if you know someone who is in to this then their knowledge is far better than text on a website. Fussy, i know. But that's just me.
And the other reason ch 12 is going to be a while is the other stories i have to keep updated as well.
I am having a little writers block problem at the moment. RL is getting the better of me for once. lol
So i will try to get at least ch 11 out within a few days.
Thank you for being a devoted reader.
god bless
Wendy
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 9
Is it deserves its own chapter. But is the jet? I noticed that since the last chapter and this chapter here, he speaks and thinks he will be the first and only to have her, he is showing the possessive side of the southern man he is.
Please update soon.
Author's Response:
If your sub wants to play with whats in the bag and the plane has a sleeping area, then why not. it is only a game they are playing after all.
god bless and goodbye
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 8
I thought he is a gentleman with her. In the hotel of the trip is for the sofa bed and the other one in bed??
Author's Response:
In the hotel of the trip is for the sofa bed and the other one in bed??
I am not sure i understand what you are asking me. It is somewhat... unclear, for lack of a better descriptive.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 9
I'm enjoying the way Jasper and Bella's relationship is " feeling it's way along". They are each learning, beginning to understand one another, and relate. Her trust does not come easy, but he has more than earned it. I'm looking forward to seeing how their relationship grows!
Author's Response:
Thank you. You are one of those rare reviewers who understand where we are pulling the characters persona from and where we are taking them in their persona.
I am happy you can see where things are going and that you understand it. I have one who seems to question everything about it. Frankly, playing a little on the jet is a good thing. She was, after all, a curious about the black bag;D
So thank you for understanding it and reading it for what it is.
god bless
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Well now she is legally his.
Author's Response:
Yes, she is. She is damn lucky too, many of us wish for it. lol
Date: 09 Aug 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm confused ...... she'll be in a BDSM relationship and remain a virgin??
Author's Response:
No, as the story goes along he slowly and surely introduces her to that part of it. But she also doesnt stay a virgin. Master Jasper believes as a man and a Southern man at that he is going to make sure it is not done in a play room and she will decide if she wants to do it while away or not. Keep reading, it will get better.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 5
I have no idea how to help you. But I think we start with punishment without explaining or debating point by point each item of the rules in which the two agree. For someone who is lay on the subject (only concepts) and virgin as Bella is supposed to be traumatic., I think.
Author's Response:
thank you
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 4
Well peaceful change. She works out and it paid?
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing this. I very much appreciate it.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 3
Hi sorry for disappearing, I forgot to put the story to your favorites, then I have not received the e-mail to read, and I suspected I was searching and found today.
As for the chapter, the fact that she spoke to answer what Emmett on the driver shows that it is not as submissive as well hehe, I believe that Jasper will end up picking up where she was living with him and will not like. Other than that, I want to see how it will do to take your v-card hehe. XOXO
Author's Response:
Well, lets see...
He said the driver is to help and she is in charge until he either pick them up or they drive home to him. So she was within her limits set by her master. Also, she rang him to make sure of it and report the incident. Don't worry, i hear Vegas in the city for all things to happen
Date: 26 Jul 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
love it!
Author's Response:
I am glad you liked it
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
Jasper is a kind of awe for Don (laughs). But I think that approving its Sub.
Author's Response:
Umm, I wasn't too sure how to take the review. NO OFFENCE MEANT TO YOU AT ALL. TOTALLY NONE MEANT.
But i could not understand it. With the name Don, did you mean Dom as in dominant? and coudl you possibly explain the review. Yeah, i know. I sound daft as plain flour. It has been one of those weeks so far. so sorry darl
BUT i am glad you are enjoying the story and that is all that counts.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 1
I liked its beginning, is welcome.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much.
I am a nervous wreck at times because the one person who is involved in that lifestyle or whatever it is called. she is a wonderful person, but has been sick and busy so therefore i do not have the assist i need with knowledge of this world. So i am trying my best and only hope you all understand and enjoy it