Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 33 - TPOGI Pt 4
loved the chapters looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 31 - TPOGI Pt. 2
Holy shit!!!! So Jacob is bi too?!? Damn! This is getting good!!!
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 30 - The Price of Good Intentions
Rose is an effin bitch!!!! Emmett is an asshole and Jacob and Leah need to be brought down a few notches and have the shit beat outta them!!!
Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Road Trip! Pt. 3
I would have loved it if Bella could have laid the smack down on the
Bitch twins!!!! Lol Bella needs to talk to Edward about that.
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Road Trip! Pt. 2
Oh possessive Bella should be fun!!!!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Road Trip!
Lmao!!!!! Esme the Dome?!?!? Love that!!!!! Babyward hopefully
learned his lesson with Bella!!! Lol Loved it!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 3
Hmmmm road head is sooo much fun!!! Lol
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 2
I will sooo be giving THAT haircut to a lucky guy!!! Lol
Loved it...immensely!!!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 29 - Road Trip! Pt. 3
This has beena great escape for me frm all the shitty news recently. Thank you !!!!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Road Trip! Pt. 2
oh wow, yea I can see her cutting Carlise hair>>>> uhhhhh Edward said I don't think so.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 3
hmmm that was alittle evil of jasper, and poor edward tried that morning. Seems he is always getting left out, i'm sure J & B had a lot of sex while he was recovring
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Unexpected Skills
Loved it!!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Road Trip! Pt. 3
Glad the bopsy twins werent too bad, and sex under the tree NICE.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Road Trip! Pt. 2
Sounds like were going to have a jerry springer episode coming up soon.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Road Trip!
OMG, I think i would DIE if thats what I heard at a families hous for teh holidays.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 3
Road head, what a glorious way to pass time on a road trip LOL
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Road Trip! Pt. 3
I absolutely love this story. I'm a very big fan of E/B/J, and when you put them together and I can't get enough. Looking forward to the next chap.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 2
AWWWWWW, nice way to give a haircut, may have to try that one.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Road Trip! Pt. 3
looking forward to more
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2
lets kick some ass..... Im loving everything about this little story so far.
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Road Trip!
looking forward to more
Date: 26 Jul 2012 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Details Pt. 3
Love the parental's... Poor Edward, hope we find out soon whose behind this.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 2
loved the chapter
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:50 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2
LOVED IT
Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
Ok im going along for the ride. there's something about E/B/J story that, um yeah. Just does it for me.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2
Glad to see he pulled his head out of his ass!!!!
Loved it! And I love this Esme and Carlisle
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 22 - When Panic Sets In
Oh Jasper you are an idiot!!! But we still love u! Lol
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2
I think leah is seth sis n jacob girlfriend.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Details Pt. 3
Oh shit!!!! I think it was Jacob that hit Edward. It was done with a bat!!!!
I hope they figure it out soon. Oh and Edward needs to tell them about the pics!
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Details Pt. 2
L.C Waters better watch her ass!! Lol!!!
Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details
Leah Clearwater?!? Lol great chapter! I'm glad the boys
called her on her non orgasmimg ass! Lol
Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2
well im glad he is manning up!
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 22 - When Panic Sets In
well c& e took it well and are understanding and have valid ooints about how it would look if or when it got out
jasper is scared running what a fool!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8 - She's Gone Pt. 2
Okay I normally rewiew stories when I am caught up with the story. But this chapter I had to say something. As a resident of the Tampa Bay area and a lifelong fan of the T.B. Bucs..........THANK YOU VERY MUCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Oh yea I like this story very much.
Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2
Thats right Esme put your foot down!!!!
E/k
Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 22 - When Panic Sets In
WAIT!!! Was Jasper the target?
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Details Pt. 3
Well you just created a circle of people who are realated, huh! I see what you did. lol
E/k
Author's Response:
You're not the average bear...stay tuned!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2
looking forward to more
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
GREAT STORY!! I like the bella ,jasper Edward dynamic and love the well thought out story behind the steamy lemons.. also loving the quick updates
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Details Pt. 2
So Leah and Jake, huh! I hope we get to see them get it. She was the woman with him. Could they be thier stalkers too?
E/k
[Report This]Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2
eh, still haven't decided if I forgive him or not. Thank you for all the udates this after noon and this evening !!!!!!
Date: 25 Jul 2012 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 22 - When Panic Sets In
Jasper needs a fucking ass whooping
Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Details Pt. 3
oh I am so upset, you hurt my baby, that makes you a big ole meany stinky pants. Love the carlise and esme reaction. Raises hand I volunteer to remove the cathetar
Date: 25 Jul 2012 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Details Pt. 2
shit I thought you were gonna say Charlie was eaten by a bear, I was gonna frreak but then I remembered you said it was a heartattack, I think. Anyway. The guys a or shoudl I say JAsper is learning.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Details
lc, leah clearwater??? Bitch.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Details Pt. 2
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 8 - She's Gone Pt. 2
Phew...I'm glad that she took the phone without a fight! I'm glad that she no longer has to suffer alone, and I hope that she'll let Jazz and Edward take care of her and help her out of her rut! Loved it!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone
Those two are just asking for trouble, but they're so damn cute! Boys...bring your woman home! Loved it!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
do nto slow down, I love the posting schedule and the tempo of the story. So did Edward have the meeting with peter? anyway. Love this poly family !!!!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Date Nights Pt. 2
so a little bit of info there, Alice is bi. And someone else besidesd me woudl rather have choclate cake for brakfast, knew I loved Edward for more thanhis dick and fingers, and tongue.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:15 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3
For a self-proclaimed homosexual, Jazzy sure did seem to enjoy himself! Can't wait for more of these sexy times! Loved it!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2
Nothing like some hot three-way action! Loved it!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up
Looks like Eddie boy's having second thoughts about sharing! Lol! I hope that he will come to his senses and learn that two is always better than one! Loved it!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3
Wow...didn't see that one coming! I hope Bella doesn't run! Loved it!
Krazi
xoxo
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Date Nights
hmmm, kissing in front of the whoel resturant that picutre will be up next I guess. Wonder who the follower is? Embry?? anyway, I forgot last chapter, I always considered JAcob the monster no matter what his eyes.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
Hah...Jazz is lazy that figures! Got me hungry for more after that hot action! Loved it!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
I don't know why ppl aren't reviewing, but you sure as hell have my attention! Lol! I'm such a flake when it comes to reviewing her, because I read on my phone and it's a hassle, but I'm going to make it a point to send you some love for each chapter! I'll be sure to send anyone who'll listen your way! Great start...can't wait to read more!
Krazi
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
H E L L NO!!! Do not slow down. I love it. WOrried she might get attacked while they are on there little get away.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
no dont slow down at all i absolutely love how this story is progressing and cant wait for more. keep up the amazing job
Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
This is great! Only slow down if you need to. ;0)
Date: 24 Jul 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Occasions Pt. 2
To be fair, I live in louisville, ky and went to UofL so I have a leg up! These updates are great! Thanks for posting. :0D
Date: 24 Jul 2012 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 14 -Occasions
No worries, dear! :0).
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 14 -Occasions
Loved it xx
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2
The more graphic the better. hehe
E/k
Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up
I am liking Bella.
E/k
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
Don't u dare slow down!!!! Lol I love this story. Ur doing fine!!!
Bella really is perfect for them! I think Esme and Carlisle will
be very supportive of them. I can't wait for more!!!!! Ur my new
addiction!! Lol
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 8:07 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Date Nights Pt. 2
I can't wait for Alice to arrive!!! I wonder if the person taking
those pics of them is that female reporter? I bet it is. That or its
Embry. Edward really needs to tell them about the pics, like NOW!
Loved it!!!!
E
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Date Nights
Awwww Jazz is soooo sweet and romantic!! I really hope
no one took a pic or noticed them kiss!! That could cause
big trouble! Loved it!!!!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
Huh!! Still feeling hinky about him. Need more info. C U Soon.
E/k
Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
You got my vote... I love polys, so I'll definitly be back. I'm worried about Jazz right now though.. Time will tell
E/k
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Occasions Pt. 2
Bad bad Edward!!! Lol
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2012 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 14 -Occasions
Awwwww they missed her bday!!! Poor Bella!!! That's just
like her to not say anything. I can't wait for her reaction when
she sees what they did for her!
Loved it!!!!!
Date: 24 Jul 2012 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
I can't help but get the feeling that Bella is the third wheel in this menage a trois. I don't like that, since as they have all mentioned many times, there's supposed to be 3 in this together. These past few chapters, especially, have emphasized that point. Sure, they took her out on dates, but who did they end up at night with? Not with her, and I didn't feel like Edward and Jasper connected with her as much as they did with each other. I hope you can find a way to really balance this.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
loved the chapter
Date: 24 Jul 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
i love poly fics. its very hard to find well written ones. i will give yours a chance. there is a great one on ffn by atypical-swan. its also a b/e/j fic. it is my all time fav fanfic. ive read it many times. its called *a garden bursting into life*. give it a try. thanks for writing.
Author's Response:
thanks for the rec, and I've read it and loved it. It's a bit more sedate than this story, but the subject matter is a bit different. It's a great fic, and I loved it as well. I hope you'll hang around to see where I take this one. There's a lot that goes on, trust me....
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
There is absolutely no need to slow down. I, for one, am anxious to see where these little plot points are going to lead.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
love this story.
Date: 24 Jul 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Date Nights
looking forward to more
Date: 23 Jul 2012 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Welcome Home...Pt. 2
God yes, I am with you, time to take a shower, but I won't find 2 guys there either. adding to favs and alerts
Date: 23 Jul 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Welcome Home
oh I love it what she did and taught JAsper
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Welcome Home...Pt. 2
I just found this story and I must say it is truly HOT!!!!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Take Me Out to the Ball Game
oh I like it, The Call of the Swan !!!!! Sweet
Date: 23 Jul 2012 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 9 - She's Gone Pt;. 3
awww getting broken up already, they just got started. trying to keep the faith you will make it work in the end
Date: 23 Jul 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 8 - She's Gone Pt. 2
subtle, giving her the phone. ANd Iwoudl just be eating peanut butter, I hate celery
Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone
:)
Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3
worried about Edward and his jealousy
Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2
well done my lady , A+ not to graphic for me, but ya Fanfic would have died, LOL
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Welcome Home...Pt. 2
Omg well panties combusted. I hope you continue this story.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up
I love Epov being bigger, he always coem in first for me !!!!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3
wow so that was an awful fucking lot to take in about Bella. I'm still here and reading so we will sww where it goes.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
so he is lazy, and admits he is a fuck up . Wonder how this will go
Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
I'm game for your story. I love a good poly story and E &B & J is my favorite flavor !!!!! But JAsper really seems like a lazy lover (typical man) Like Edward said.
Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 9 - She's Gone Pt;. 3
Hi there! This is a great story. The first "threesome" story I've enjoyed! Your writing is terrific and you capture each character in an honest way. There is a small error though: St. Louis's farm team is in Memphis. Louisville has Cincinnati's farm team. Thanks for posting this!
Author's Response:
And...I'm eating my words! I'm a moron and you were right. I'll fix it when I post the next chapter and I'll go back and fix it in the other chapters. You'd think I'd have known, but no, I'm a dumbass! Thanks for pointing it out!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Welcome Home...Pt. 2
Love this!!!!!! So fuckin HOT!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
still like
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
Wow is an interesting bar hmmm
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Welcome Home...Pt. 2
Hott damn!!!!!! I soooooo want to be the girl in that hunkwich!!! Lol
Absofuckinglutely LOVED it!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Welcome Home
Oh I hope they beat the shit outta that asshole!!!!!
Loved the reunion!!! Totally hottttt!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Take Me Out...Pt. 2
Damn, I hope Embry doesn't cause trouble!!!!
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 23 Jul 2012 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Take Me Out to the Ball Game
Oh I think Jasper will answer that call!!!! Lol
Loved it!!!!