[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3
Big shock for Bella. Alistair was an abusive dickhead and I can't believe Bella stayed with him for so long, I know some women find it hard to leave their abusive partners but if they hit you once, likelihood is they'll do it again. Thank God she did eventually get away from him with Alice's help.
I hope Bella thinks about this proposal of Edward's and Jasper's very carefully. Whatever they decide will take work and patience.
Jane x
Date: 02 Aug 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 52 - He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not
looking forward to more
Date: 02 Aug 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 51 - WotK Pt. 2
looking forward to more
Date: 02 Aug 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Working out the Kinks
I have to say that if anyone was going to be tougher on Edward, it should've been Bella. If she could forgive him, then of course Jasper should. I'm just wondering if that is going to cause insecurities for her as she gets further along. I'm also wondering if we've seen the last of Renee.
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2012 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
I'm still going with my thinking that Jasper feels more for Edward than he's saying and hoping that he's not just in this relationship to be 'taken care of'. He clearly still wants to be with Edward, he has to feel something or else he'd just walk, he wouldn't go to all the trouble of trying to change for nothing. C'mon Jasper don't be a dickhead all your life.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
Edward's right his and Jasper's relationship isn't the healthiest but it seems, after heir argument, Jasper's willing to try harder. He's been very selfish so far, now he feels threatened by Bella, he has to do something to keep his man and obviously Edward means more to him than maybe he'd like to, or is ready to admit.
I love poly stories, you'll find no arguments from me, lol I'm such a perv.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2
Yummy
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up
I like it. It will be interesting to read how these three become an item.
Great chapter
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
This is a story completely after my taste.
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 42 - The Keys to Happiness Pt. 2
Awww poor Edward nowknows his parents little secret.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 49 - Fallout Pt. 3
I'm glad they talked. Jasper is gonna go apeshit when he walks in that room!!
I really hope Bella can get them to talk!
Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 48 - Fallout Pt. 2
At least he didn't have sex with anyone! But still he sooo fucked up!
Well I really hope they can all sit down and talk this out!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 47 - Fallout
OMFG!!!! I can't believe he would do that!! Very VERY disappointed in Assward right now!!!
Date: 01 Aug 2012 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 49 - Fallout Pt. 3
Ugh you ended it there! I want to read the wrath of jasper. So much emotion in these 3 chapters
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 49 - Fallout Pt. 3
well im glad they talked, now i cant wait for jazz to see him!
edward is a emo dumbass! but we love him anyway!
poor bella was going to have a panic attack when she thought about his response at the club of her being preggo
cant wait for the next one!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 48 - Fallout Pt. 2
hes a dumbass!
the waynhe handled the club i think is best!
now how will bella and jazz respond?
Date: 01 Aug 2012 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 47 - Fallout
he thinks bella loves jazz more
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 49 - Fallout Pt. 3
looking forward to more
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 45 - Mystically Yours Pt. 2
shes preggo?
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 44 - Mystically Yours
poor jasper!
finally jacob!
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:24 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
Kind of seems to me that Bella is getting the short end of the dating stick since they both left her at her bedroom door two nights in a row and stayed with each other. Not sure how she feels but I'd be jealous as hell....
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 49 - Fallout Pt. 3
i like jasper so much more in this story then edward he is just a spoiled brat.. its a strong testiment to a superb story to get me to dislike edward in any way lol.. great job i am so into this story and grateful for the quick updates
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 46 - Mystically Yours Pt 3
omg please update soon
bad edward
i hope he's not doing somthing that he sudn't be
cnt wait for more :D x
Date: 31 Jul 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
Love it! I think it's Edward's baby, too. I can't wait for an update. The suspense is killing me!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 46 - Mystically Yours Pt 3
I think it's Edwards!!!! Oh I bet pissyward got drunk and Jazz had to pick up his drunk ass!!! Trouble trouble trouble!!!!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 45 - Mystically Yours Pt. 2
Uh oh I think little miss bitchy is preggers!!!!!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 9:18 AM Title: Chapter 44 - Mystically Yours
Awww poor Jasper!!!!!
I loved her artical!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2012 8:35 AM Title: Chapter 46 - Mystically Yours Pt 3
The way Edward is behaving right now I hope it's Jasper's baby.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 46 - Mystically Yours Pt 3
I think Jasper is the father of the baby, and I can't wait to read more of this story.
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 46 - Mystically Yours Pt 3
Edward. Baby daddy has to be Edward. :) Just started reading this and I love it!!!
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 46 - Mystically Yours Pt 3
i think baby daddy is edward ... looking forward to mroe
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 45 - Mystically Yours Pt. 2
her eggo is preggo ... looking forward to more
Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 3
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Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 2
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Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Unexpected Skills
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Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2
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Date: 30 Jul 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 22 - When Panic Sets In
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Date: 30 Jul 2012 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Details Pt. 3
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Date: 30 Jul 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Details Pt. 2
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Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Details
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Date: 30 Jul 2012 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3
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Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Date Nights Pt. 2
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Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Date Nights
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Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Occasions Pt. 2
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[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 40 - Complete Insanity Pt. 2
Seriously what the fuck is Renee on?
Holy crow! That was crazy!
Now is the start of the rest of their lives
So when is jacob being dealt with. I have a couple more to read so hopefully in those?
Date: 29 Jul 2012 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 14 -Occasions
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[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 43 - The Keys to Happiness Pt 3
Lol!!! Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 42 - The Keys to Happiness Pt. 2
Lmfao!!!!! Poor Edward!!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 41 - The Keys to Happiness
Lmao Alice!!!!!! Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Complete Insanity Pt. 2
Renee is bat shit crazy!!!!! Jacob needs to have his ass outed and soon!
LOved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Complete Insanity
Uh oh!!! Rose has some nerve!!!
Loved it!!
Date: 29 Jul 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 43 - The Keys to Happiness Pt 3
Nice to see Edward and Bella getting quite a bit of time together lately. Sometimes, the relationship does seem a little unbalanced.
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2
OH PLEASE OH PLEASE write more I really like these kind of stories a HUGE TY for being dirty enough to do it
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 43 - The Keys to Happiness Pt 3
looking forward to more
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 42 - The Keys to Happiness Pt. 2
looking forward to more
Date: 29 Jul 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Complete Insanity Pt. 2
Renee is a fucking piece of work, and man oh man did shit get crazy twisted right then and there. I take it thats not the last we will see of that nut job?
Date: 29 Jul 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Complete Insanity
oh shit, they bout to have a battle with bella and renee?
Date: 29 Jul 2012 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Complete Insanity
Okay I need to say this, cause it pisses everyone one here in the bay area when they can't get the right city.......,The Rays play here in my hometown of St. Petersburg not in Tampa, the Bucs play in Tampa..........the team are called the Tampa Bay Rays & Bucs......cause it is the bay area........
Other wise I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Welcome Home...Pt. 2
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Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Welcome Home
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Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Take Me Out...Pt. 2
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Date: 28 Jul 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Take Me Out to the Ball Game
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[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2
Loved it!!! The Raining Men song, hilarious!!!!!!
Date: 28 Jul 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 9 - She's Gone Pt;. 3
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Date: 28 Jul 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 8 - She's Gone Pt. 2
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Date: 28 Jul 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone
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Date: 28 Jul 2012 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3
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[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!
If I was Bella I would have taken that little cum guzzler to a quiet room and beat the shit outta him!! Lol. I bet Irina was hitting on Bella!!!!
Loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Spring Fling Pt. 3
Ohhh I like Garret!!! Irina, like always is a skootch!!! (skanky hootch) lol
Loved it!!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Spring Fling Pt 2
I hope Edward pulls his head outta his ass soon, or Jasper will end up in St Louis!!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Spring Fling
Lol!!! Poor Bella!! 3 weeks away from them would have driven me crazy!!!!
Loved it!!
Date: 28 Jul 2012 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3
YOU SOOO have to keep it up PRETTY PLEAAAAAAAASE
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2
First I love this story. Just one little question, is there a reason why we nevber get a full scene with just Bella & Edward?
Date: 28 Jul 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2
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Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up
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Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3
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Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2
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Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up
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Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2
so will thre be drama in Fl, I hope not I lvoe Fl. But you had to send that stupid ass Jacob Black here.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!
oh thank god I can hit teh next button, and I don't have to wait. Thanks sweets
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Spring Fling
LOL love the endnote, no offense. so now we are in the desert.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Details Pt. 3
Isn't it amazing how we never know just how much I parents really knew...
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2
Seems they just can't keep their hands off each other... so much for discreet :) I still sense an imbalance in their relationship, but the more they talk/work things out, the better their relationship seems to be shaping up. Good job!
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2
I love the article on the fridge. can't wait for more.
Date: 28 Jul 2012 6:04 AM Title: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2
looking forward to more
Date: 28 Jul 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Welcome Home...Pt. 2
OMG, Loved the 'meat' sandwich!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Thank you - Cheri
Date: 28 Jul 2012 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2
Thanks for listneing to whining, and I thought that might be it, but wasn't certain. Read ya tomorroww!
Date: 28 Jul 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!
Shes wants Bella, right?
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!
looking forward to more
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!
oooh...one more so I can sleep tonight? pretty please?
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!
i love this story so much i also thank you for the amout you update.
[Report This]Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!
shes got the hots for bella! hahaha
fung riley & jacob!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 33 - TPOGI Pt 4
WOWZA, thats all.......
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 33 - TPOGI Pt 4
I called it right!
That is fing crazy!!!!
Until your next one!
Poor Alice, just wanted to spend some time with Bella!
Oh, oh! Is the party up next??
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 32 - TPOGI Pt. 3
I actually thought it was going to be Rose & Em!
But Leah & Jake, that is freaking classic!
Holy moly!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 31 - TPOGI Pt. 2
No, don't slow down!
That was alot of info!
I have no clue who it is... My first thought is Embry & Jake. But, with what Edward said, I'm not sure......hmmmm
Onto the next one!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 30 - The Price of Good Intentions
Baggage yes!
WTF is wrong with EM! I get defending the Love of your life, but F, not defending his sister!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 33 - TPOGI Pt 4
Thank you, I really need more lemons and fluff to get thru this clusterfuck of a week. Are you a rob-kris fan? Well I am and I have just been sick to my stomach over everything. Love your story !!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 33 - TPOGI Pt 4
Ahhhhhhhhhaaaaaa I KNEW it was them!!!!! Damn I'm good!! Lol I can't wait to see what happens next!!!!
Loved it!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 32 - TPOGI Pt. 3
Daaaaauuuumnnnn!!!! I hope Bella bitch slaps Leah good!!!!
Loved it!