What a great story!  I loved it, as well as everything you write.  You are a true talent...

Thank you for sharing your unique story :)

Lol Never a dull moment in their family!! Loved it!!!!

Damn they are all growing up!!! 

Loved it!!!

Enjoyed this.  Thank you. 

Awww, that was so sweet, lovely and perfect.  I love how they're oblivious of everything and and everyone around them when they're together, lol, at least they got a little of their own back on Carlisle and Esme.  Seeing as though Edward has been calling Bella Mrs Cullen will any of them change their names?  They could change it to Whitlock-Cullen or Cullen-Whitlock, I think incorporating Swan would be going too far, lol.  If they did change their names then their kids would all have the same surname and, though it's sad to say, it might help them be more accepted in society.

Jane x

what a great ending

Well that sorts Irina and Alice out.  I would have thought that Alice would have thought about being with Seth and what that might mean for their future a bit more, especially as she'd been in a lesbian relationship prior to going out with Seth.  I'm glad she's finally happy and I hope this doesn't add Alice to Jacob's shit list or Leah's come to that.

Life for the guys seems to be settling down a little more.  Doesn't Jasper miss playing baseball at all?  I bet Edward misses him like mad.

Jane x

Oh you.  You keep throwing us those curve balls don't you and this one's in the shape of Renee, woohoo, not. Lol.  I bet Bella's really happy about this.  Will they tell her about their relationship?  She's crazy anyway so maybe she'll be okay with it, then again she could go completely the other way.  Is Emmett going to be gracious and re-build his relationship, such as it was, with Bella?

I think the guys should give real consideration to having kids but they should remember there's no great rush and they could afford to wait a couple of years yet, by which time they might be more settled anyway.

Jane x

Leah, what a stupid bitch

So they have a red headed sweet little girl:)

But now Edwards going back to baseball?  He will be gone alot, I thought that was one of the concerns to begin with. Especially now with 2 kids. 

I know it's his dream, but idk. 

Until tr next one:)

Oooooh Garrett knows.  Now you'd think women, being the way we are, would notice more and Kate would have picked up on something by now, but then there's none so blind as those who won't see.  Kate probably isn't going to stop her 'get Jasper fixed up' campaign until someone blows up at her.  I'm so glad that Garrett is okay with everything.

Jane x

I am so glad I found your story.  I just love your characters and the talks with Jasper's Mom was too funny.  I'm hoing she finds an adventourous man!

Happy for him, but he will be gone so much! I see hard times ahead!

Loved it!!!

I most definitely have nothing to complain about either!!!

Loved it!!!

looking forward to more 

Lol, they never seem to get any peace do they.  Now they're going to be tip toeing around Kate and Garrett, it's to be hoped that she's not one of those women that just walks through your front door without knocking first, lol, God knows what she'd stumble across if she did.

Jane x

looking forward to more 

Ooooh, my head's spinning.  Riley's mum is obviously the woman that Leah was doing the story on and Bella was doing the fact checking for.  I'm taking it that Riley's boyfriend is James and Vic is the 'girlfriend', why doesn't Riley just tell him that Vic took the money?  Too simple?  Yeah, probably.  Anyway as I don't have to wait for the update I'm off to find out more.  I really think Jasper should tell Edward and Bella about this before it comes back to bite him on the arse.

Jane x

Wow!  I wasn't expecting it to be Rosalie who had the photos taken.  Emmett is such a dickhead, I can't believe the way he reacted.  It's quite clear that the only people Emmett and Rosalie care about are themselves.

What else did Alistair do to Bella?  I get the feeling that whatever he did is going to send Edward over the deep end, I'm taking it that Jasper's not told him what Alice said.

At least they don't have to worry about the photos now.......Edward might want to keep his head down about that one though, lol.

Jane x

Again Carlisle and Esme are priceless and Edward's embarrassment is so funny, bless him he had no idea about Mistress Esme, lol. 

Okay, so I know, obviously, that our guys are all in a relationship together but at leas they're not related.  The cousins suggesting that Jasper should be with twins......well they're just sick, call me a prude if you like but I wouldn't want to share my sex life with my twin.....if I had one.....twin that is.......and sex life come to that, hahaha!!  They are the twisted twins.

I'd forgotten about Embry.  If the police can't identify the fingerprints then I take it the person they belong to doesn't have a criminal record.  If that's the case then won't Edward need to give them more information about who he thinks might have attacked him?  It still doesn't necessarily have to come out that he's in a poly relationship.

Jane x

BWAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!  Loved this chapter, still laughing, lol.

Jane x

I'm glad Jasper's mom is more open minded!! He needs her in his life.

Yummyyy lemon!!!! Lol. Loved it!

Poor Jasper! It was too little too late with his dad. Very sad.

Sooo sad. But at least it's out. 

I'm glad that Jasper's put Bella's mind at rest about not leaving.  Babies, now there's something for Jasper to think about.  I suppose he never really thought about it before not being in a comitted relationship, but now things are different the question is will he be able to imagine a little baby that's half Bella and half Jasper?  I think so.

Jane x

Wow!  So is whoever it is really after Jasper and not Edward?  If Bella's the reason for this attack then it could be both Jasper and Edward that the stalker person's after.  Edward really needs to call that investigator.  Oh, and Bella really needs to knee Jasper in the balls for that leaving shit.

Jane x

Does Jacob have something to do with this as well?  He's always going on about them being a couple.

Jane x

They really do need to have that talk.  Jasper's had all night to think about what Edward said about having kids, being a family.  Things are going to get complicated and if two of them end up getting married there's definitely going to be jealousy, not to mention who gets to father the first child because I think Bella would love to have both their children.

Jane x

Awwww, but he still has some things to make up for even if jasper and Bella wont voice it. great job, loving every minute of it.

Oh shit, Jasper ups and leaves with a shitty excuse. bella's preggers, and Jasper is happy about it. WTH is with Edward? Hopefully some good will come out of it and soon. Hope jasper isnt out getting into trouble.

I should thing the green eyed monster will rear its ugly head quite a few more times as well.

I'm wondering who's been following our intrepid trio and what they're after, is if just money or is there more to it?  Does Jasper's old agent have anything to do with this?  Why was he dropped so suddenly, is that normal?  Hmmm, intriguing.

Jane x

I guessed right!  lol! 

Oh I hope Bella gets a chance to beat the shit outta Maria!!! Lol

 Loved it!!!

Awww I think he's Edwards son! If so they should name him

Anthony Samuel. But if it's Jasper's it should be Samuel Anthony!!!

Loved it!!!!

I hope they can all fix this soon!!!!

Loved it!!

Poor poor Jasper! Being jumped 24/7 is so hard for a man!! Lol

They should pick out a girls nursery and a boys so when Esme finds out

the decorator can do what they chose!!!

Loved it!!! Especially the car sex!! Lol

hahaha love it lol
cnt wait for more nd a new baby
wonder wat it is going to be this time lol x

looking forward to more

Awww, Bella's in for such a surprise.  I hope she likes all her gifts.  Rosalie certainly lays down the law doesn't she, I'm glad she's going to try and get the boys back on a team together.

Jane x

Oh, I knew this feeling. During my pregnancies I was always worried that my husband would leave me, because I ate his food, again. That's not funny, so I feel with Bella.

Things are getting hectic for these three.  What will they do now their story has changed?  Thanks to Embry, Bella is now Jasper's girlfriend, not his manager.  Where Edward and Bella seen together as girlfriend and boyfriend, I can't remember?  Will Emby say anything to anyone else especially if Bella reverts back to being Edward's girlfriend.  Oh what a tangled web we weave when first we practice to decieve.  That's the second time I've said that today.

Jane x

Lol, I think he can, I'll find out in a bit anyway.  I bet that's the last time that Jasper has a bet with Edward about Bella and her Swan Call, hahahaha!!

I can't believe that Jasper's still admitting that he might stray if he was left to his own devices.  Surely, knowing what he'd be jeapordising would give him the incentive to stay on the straight and narrow.

Edward's going to be so lonely without them.

Jane x

loving this story but for some reason I am not getting the updates

Please do not forget me

i so love your writing

thnak you

Sex talk with the mother-in-law is one of the ebst things you can do with her.

Great chapter

This chapter makes me wish to learn to cut hair. *evil grin*

Great chapter

I think their "routine" to have date with only two of them not bad. In this way every one get his or her fair share.

Great chapter

Jesus effin Christ!!  Two men going down on you at the same time.....*jumps up and down screaming 'me next'*  I'm lost for words, that was so hot.

Jane x

Jealousy and possessiveness are going to be their major points of contention in this.  It's all well and good them saying that they'll have to be open and honest with each other but truly, how many people are actually that open and honest with the ones they love?  It's human nature to keep things back so you don't hurt the ones you love too much, it takes a huge amount of guts, trust, faith and love to be completely honest.

I'm looking forward to see how they work this out.

Jane x

loved it looking forward to more