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I know I'm late to the party, but I was just recommended this story.

There aren't too many true poly stories so it's always fun to find one.

Can't wait to see what happens.

I know I don't have to read or finish this story, but once I start something, I like to finish it. That being said, I have to say that this story has really upset me, so far. I think that Edward & Jasper are BOTH extremely selfish, and are into each other way more than they are into Bella - meaning that they are both GAY, not bisexual, and just stringing her along out of confusion, or because it might feel momentarily good. It's as if she truly is a third wheel, an afterthought, or just something new to play with or experiment with, most of the time. Not to mention the fact that she's a good and convenient cover story for the two love birds and their precious careers.

Perfect example : Here it was supposed to be Jasper & Bella's date night - he gives her a bracelet, tells her he finally loves her, which even Edward hasn't done yet, then drops her off at her door, and goes to Edward's room to have sex with him...very loud, graphic sex, that they both should've known that she would hear! Talk about rubbing salt in the wound! Not only would I have been extremely pissed, but I would've puked, then LEFT both their asses, had I been Bella! Too bad she didn't "pout" and slam some doors...interrupted their rude play time! 

It SHOULD'VE been Jasper & Bella's night, period - No Edward! Bella & Jasper should've spent the night having sex/making love, or whatever they wanted to do. She shouldn't have had to spend it alone in her room, listening to those two idiots! Then tomorrow should be her & Edward's time exclusively - No Jasper! I mean, Edward & Jasper are already going away for the weekend together, without her...how SELFISH can they be?!?

No matter what she says or encourages them to do, it's still hurtful and wrong to her. She's vulnerable and insecure enough as it is, and willing to do whatever it takes to keep them...putting herself & her feelings last, as usual. They are exploiting that, taking advantage, whether they realize it or not, ESPECIALLY Edward, whom I really want to strangle, then have his head examined! Doesn't he realize that she does all of this for him, really? Yet he can tell Jasper he loves him, but not her, yet. WTF?! Makes NO sense to me! He was willing to toss her away for Jasper - the lazy, inconsiderate, cold, cheating lover, from the very beginning, despite his loving, long, special history with Bella. If that doesn't spell out that he's GAY, I don't know what will! Shit...Jasper wouldn't even be half the lover he is now, without Bella...don't they even realize or appreciate that?! Not to mention the fact that Jasper could've gave him an STD! YUCK!

Anyway, if they truly loved or cared for her like they say they do, they wouldn't go along with it, just because she says so, or suggests it. They would include her in everything - tell her they love her - make her feel good, and worry about her thoughts & feelings, instead of just their own...put on their "big girl panties" like Bella has to, and quit their jealous, petty, immature behavior & pouting! She's thoughtful and considerate of their feelings, so they should be the same of her's, too! And buying her a bunch of stuff doesn't compensate for all the bullshit!

Hell, I've noticed that even in bed/sexually, they both go down on each other constantly, especially now using HER techniques, but rarely go down on her! They even "rim" each other, which is gross, especially for guys to be doing to each other, but yet, never do it to her. Plus, E&J sleep together in Edward's room most of the time, while Bella stays in her room...how's that fair or equal? They haven't exactly made her feel comfortable, like she's really, truly a part of them. What's up with any of this lunacy?!?

They certainly are getting the best part of this deal...they get to be gay, in a loving relationship, and are provided a safe cover, protecting their careers, all while getting to also enjoy all of the amenities of a wonderful girlfriend/wife, plus the occasional threesome (every guys dream), while still getting to enjoy each other. Not to mention that they both will also get biological kids out of this deal, which they would've never got, had it just been the two of them. They should be worshipping the ground that Bella walks on!!!

All I know is that this wouldn't work for me, AT ALL! I don't care what they look like, or how successful they are! None of it would be worth getting the short end of the stick that Bella does. Besides...I could and would NEVER share! But...to each their own.

Your story is well written...just upsetting.  :(

I'm going to bed two hours past when I should have because, I couldn't stop reading, you are an amazing writer, the plot and characters are well developed and the lemons are so HOTT. I am planning on finishing this either tomorrw or the day after. I just wanted to let you know how spectacular you are before force myself to go to bed.

their commitment ceremony was so beautiful. It was great that it was a surprise to Bella.

It was great how he outed their relationship to his parents and that they were so understanding

it's wonderful to see the change in Jasper. This was a great chapter.

I'm glad this story was recommended on facebook. There are too less poly stories and the backgrounds of the characters here seem interesting. 

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Loved the story. Thanks for sharing!

WOW really loved this story sad that it's ended thank you for taking me on a journey x

Loved this story!!!!!

Love Rose!

Awe Edward. Not to sure about JB? Interesting. Meg

Great start to what is what with the 3. Enjoying the building.
Meg

Jazz you are a little shit. Glad hE sees it. Meg

Bella?

:-)

I'm right for a change!

Carlisle and Same really rock! Literally '-)

Right about now I am glad these chapters aren't huge :-)

C & E rock!

This has been a great ride. This last chapter could have been your summary, or could be used as a way to describe this story in general. Great job.

Let me guess Ben got this girl pregnant. lex is having some type of melt down, maybe even preggers herself or just maybe shes in a elationship like her parents? Anywho and EJ that boy is anyone's guess. Loving it.

Well atleast shes not googling the info and getting miss informed on some things. I dont blame Bella for being a little flustered. I would be too. Great job as always. off to read more.

i am glad caroline came around and wants to have a relationship with jasper and his family.

i worry sometimes that my son what have kids, but again if he is happy that is all that matters. if he chooses to adopt if it is what he wants more power. just cause someone chooses to love someone that doesn't meet the world's vision or family doesn't mean you accept them or love them any less. 

i am glad they are able to bring jasper's family in the fold

man oh man having a relationship is hard work

how these guys do it wow

another baby thrilled and it is edward

man they are going to have beautiful kids

Lol, their lives just keep throwing them those curve balls don't they, hahaha!!

Jane x

Wow!  That was time jump.

Ahhh, the joys of teenagers, especially teenage girls, grrrr!  It's only fitting that they each have a child that looks like them, it's only fair.  I like that all the kids are a real mix of all of them.  Lol, Edward and Bella laughing at Jasper and Lex going on their battlefield tour, they're like big kids laughing at the nerds, hahahaha!!

Jane x

I hope he does this, he's clearly not happy with his job right now.  He took the job to be at home with his family but he's still had to go away a lot.  Bella and Jasper can do their jobs anywhere.  The only tricky time will be when Ben has to start full time school.  I don't know how old your kids are when they start school but here it's age 4, bless 'em.

Jane x

I'm sticking my neck out here, I think the baby will be a girl.  My daughter was always very active before she was born but when she heard her daddy's voice she'd go crazy.  So from Bella's bumps reactions to it's daddies touches and voices I'm saying girl.........watch me be wrong now, lol.

Jane x

Jasper's like a little Boy Scout, 'always be prepared'.  Lol, ever forward thinking he'd cleared the attic so he and Edward could just jump each others bones until his mum comes back.  They'd better open a window or the whole house will reak of sex, bwahahahaha!!

Jane x

I'm so glad that Jasper and his dad made their peace.  It's so sad that it came at the end of his life.  His dad knows what he's missed out on and he likely regrets his decision to keep Jasper out of his life.  It's such a shame that Ben Sr couldn't offer an olive branch to his son all those years ago instead of just watching him on tv.  Now I hope that his mum doesn't let this go on any longer and is willing to rebuild her relationship with Jasper, that's as long as Jasper's willing also.

Jane x

Awww, Ben's such a good baby for them.  They're all anxious to get their lives back to how they were with a slight difference, lol. 

Yeah, why does it always happen that you get glamorous looking visitors when you're not at your best, it's always the way, lol.  It was so good of Alice and Irina to offer to babysit for them all so they could go out.

Jane x

I feel a little sad for Edward finishing his baseball career early but there was no way he could go on with the separations from both Bella and Jasper and when the baby comes along things will be a little more difficult until everything settles down.  He's made the right decision, I think he'll miss it but I hope he doesn't regret going early.

I hope that Bella's beginning to feel better about herself.  Edward was right to say the she needs to tell them what she needs, I mean, after all they are just boys and they can be pretty useless at spotting things, lol.

Jane x

When I first foudn your story I have to admit I started reading it for mostly the lemons and the love of baseball.  However, it ending up being a much better story than I ever expected and I really enjoyed it.  The way you wrapped it up was a perfect ending.  Thanks for sharing it with us.

Being pregnant is a scary time.  All those different things happening to your body and then the baby growing inside you becoming it's own little person.  The thought and then realisation that you will be totally responsible for all of that babys needs and wants without it being able to tell you, that's really scary.  What Bella's thinking and feeling at the moment is completely natural and I would say, at some point in every woman's pregnancy, we all have these thoughts and doubts.  The only way to get through is by one day at a time and then before you know it you're fifteen years down the line and by some miracle you survived only to be thrown into another kind of hell......don't do it Bella, don't do it!!  Lol.

Jane x

Thank God for that, all is right with the world once more, lol.  I must admit I thought Jasper was going to be a tougher cookie than that but he missed Edward and, after everything, he still loved him.

Jane x

I'm glad that Edward's going to fight for his family.  I don't really agree with the way Jasper's handled all of this.  I'm all for a short sharp shock and making someone realise what they're about to lose which I think leaving the house served to do.  To go further and say that he'd marry Bella properly and they'd bring up the baby together is a step too far.

Couples do stupid things and threesomes are no different.  Edward has done a really stupid thing, or two, but they need to listen to Edward tell them what he did and why before they try and convict him.  They all promised to be honest and talk about things and now Jasper is denying them the opportunity because he's angry.  They all have their own part to play in this meltdown that's going on because they didn't talk about what was going on and what they were feeling.  At this point I feel really sorry for Edward, he's the one that stands to lose everything because the three of them haven't been open and honest.  I hope he can force Jasper and Bella to listen to him.

Jane x

Well it's fifty fifty but I'm going to put my money on Edward.

What's going on with him?  Has Jacob reared his ugly head again or is something else going on?  I'm glad Bella and Emmett are trying to get along.

Jane x