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Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2017 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Hmm, glad they are concerned about Bella’s needs.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2017 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3

I’m curious as to how this is going to work!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2017 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Date Nights Pt. 2

Hmmm, will be interesting to see Alice’s reaction!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2017 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Date Nights

They need to be careful or they are going to get outed.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Occasions Pt. 2

Glad he realizes he loves Bella more.

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2017 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Occasions Pt. 2

Glad he realizes he loves Bella more.

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2017 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 14 -Occasions

Sure hope they listen to Rose.

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2017 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Welcome Home

Love that they plan to,beat up Bella’s former BF!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2017 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Take Me Out...Pt. 2

I was a little confused by this chapter.  I thought Bella was going to be Edward’s girlfriend and Jasper’s agent but she was introduced as Jasper’s girlfriend.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2017 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Take Me Out to the Ball Game

I like the shorter chapters

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2017 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 9 - She's Gone Pt;. 3

Love how BeLla jumped right in for Jasper.  Do we get to meet Alice in this story?

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2017 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 8 - She's Gone Pt. 2

Awww, he bought her a phone!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2017 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone

Glad they are going after her!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3

I like that Edward doesn't really want Jasper to be with Bella without him. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2017 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3

I like that Edward doesn't really want Jasper to be with Bella without him. 

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2017 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2

Well, that went better than expected!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2017 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up

Hoping we get Alice in on this triangle soon so they can be with the appropriate partners.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2017 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3

She is certainly open minded!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2017 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2

I'm liking this more every chapter.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Aug 2017 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up

I never read slash,but I really like your stories so I'm going to give this a try!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2016 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2

Excellent!

Reviewer: cupcakebabe25 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2016 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up

Loved it!

Reviewer: 1renae1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2015 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

Loved the story. You are a great writer, Thank you for the journey 😊

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2015 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2

Fucking awesome!

Reviewer: Suzanne Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2015 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3

I'm really loving this!

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

What an amazing story. I will rec'd it in a group I run tomorrow, The Twilight Fan Fiction Finders. Thank you for writing & sharing it! :)

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 68 - Epilogue Pt. 2

Hoooshit...

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 67 - Epilogue

That's a day I do not look forward to.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 66 - Bottom of the Ninth Pt. 2

So sweet..

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 65 - Bottom of the Ninth

Whooo.. gooo, Edward!

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 64 - Ch...Ch...Changes Pt. 3

Whoohoo.. go Edward!

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2015 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 63 - Ch...Ch...Changes Part 2

Oh my gosh.. she'll have those men wrapped.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 62 - Ch...Ch...Changes

No complaints from me on the smut level!

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 61 - Uncomfortable Conversations

I think his mom , in time, needs to find a man & learn about sex through trial.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 60 - Life's Lessons Pt. 3

Giddy on up..

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 9:12 AM Title: Chapter 59 - Life's Lessons Pt. 2

Defending her honor.. sweet.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 58 - Life's Lessons

Awww.. He got some closure.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 57 - Who's Your Daddy? Pt. 3

Another baby.. yay!

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 56 - Who's Your Daddy Pt. 2

Awww.. they had a girl? Kristen & Benji could end up married in the future. :)

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 55 - Who's Your Daddy?

Oh my.. we have a baby!

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 54 - He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not Pt. 3

I'm proud of Edward for wanting to cover them both under him.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 53 - He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not Pt. 2

Hot flashes are a bitch.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 52 - He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not

Of course she's not thinking clearly.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 51 - WotK Pt. 2

Pregnancy hormones are a bitch.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2015 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Working out the Kinks

I'm glad he didn't make him suffer. Love isn't about that.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 49 - Fallout Pt. 3

That went rather well. I hope Jasper can forgive as easily?

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 48 - Fallout Pt. 2

Playing dirty, Edward. I like it.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 47 - Fallout

Drunk or not.. no excuse.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 46 - Mystically Yours Pt 3

I knew it, a baby. Oh Edward, get your head outta your ass.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 45 - Mystically Yours Pt. 2

Oh.. I think she's pregnant & she's afraid they won't be happy??

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 44 - Mystically Yours

Awww...

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 43 - The Keys to Happiness Pt 3

So I know she's on BC, but with all the baby juice they're squirting in her... JS

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 42 - The Keys to Happiness Pt. 2

Poor Edward! lol

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 41 - The Keys to Happiness

Have mercy, Edward.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Complete Insanity Pt. 2

Holy buttplugs .. ;)

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Complete Insanity

Wow, just wow, Rose.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 5:25 AM Title: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2

Love that song.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!

Was she after Bella? Please don't tell me she was after Edward?

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 36 - Spring Fling Pt. 3

That was pretty cool of him.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 35 - Spring Fling Pt 2

Oh hell.. that neck lick..

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 34 - Spring Fling

Lay the law down!

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2015 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 33 - TPOGI Pt 4

Jacob is throw so much shade because he's the biggest tree. Did that make sense?

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 32 - TPOGI Pt. 3

Wow.. what a way to ruin a night.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 31 - TPOGI Pt. 2

Cheaters never win.. remember that, Jasper.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 30 - The Price of Good Intentions

What low lifes..

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Road Trip! Pt. 3

Good riddance to them..

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Road Trip! Pt. 2

Jane & Dakota.. I LOL at that.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2015 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Road Trip!

Fly 'em high!

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 3

Me..

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 2

If I cut their hair they'd look like Buckwheat.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Unexpected Skills

Wow.. Esme & Carlisle are leaving already?

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2

Go Esme...

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 22 - When Panic Sets In

Shew.. lots happened.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Details Pt. 3

Wow.. who would beat the shit outta Edward? His parents took the news of his relationships well.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Details Pt. 2

Bella's so worried.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Could L.C. Waters have something to do with the pictures Edward got?

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Date Nights Pt. 3

If they did get married it would be more believable to people if E/B were to do it. No that they seem to care what people think.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 17 - Date Nights Pt. 2

I want to see Edwards red ass.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Date Nights

For Bella to have been Edward's HS sweetheart this seems to be revolving alot around her & Jasper. I get the E/J portion of if & love it, but there's been hardly any B/E in it.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Occasions Pt. 2

Yep, just a matter of time.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 14 -Occasions

Awww.. their going to surprise her.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Welcome Home...Pt. 2

Niiice..

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Welcome Home

Don't forget your bats.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Take Me Out...Pt. 2

I bet that'll be some home coming.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 10 - Take Me Out to the Ball Game

Go for it!

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 3:54 PM Title: Chapter 9 - She's Gone Pt;. 3

Yay.. big leagues.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 8 - She's Gone Pt. 2

They really care for her.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone

Go, go get the girl.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 2:57 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3

It's a really good idea.. at first, but it never truly works out in the end.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2

Did I mention that I am so OK with that?

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up

Soapy Edward..

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3

I wanna sit on his lap.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2

It isn't all about sex.

Reviewer: CSG Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2015 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up

Oh wow..

Reviewer: deborablack Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 63 - Ch...Ch...Changes Part 2

Vixi maria!!! That was fast!!!!

Reviewer: deborablack Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2015 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Welcome Home...Pt. 2

unff I wish I had that one day, no kidding,

Reviewer: Dutchess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2015 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

What a good story. Well written, well done. Thanks

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 8:29 AM Title: Chapter 31 - TPOGI Pt. 2

amazing!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jan 2015 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 30 - The Price of Good Intentions

uh-oh!

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