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Reviewer: The Vampire Goddess Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2023 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 32 - TPOGI Pt. 3

This next chapter is going to be evil!

Reviewer: The Vampire Goddess Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2023 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Details Pt. 2

Hello, new reader here. Im sure Leah will be a problem, as will Jacob. (Isnt he always LOL)

Reviewer: triinity Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2023 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2

Smexxxxxxxy time with Jasper and Edward, yes please!!!!  *fanning myself*

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2022 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2022 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 7 - She's Gone

Loved it 

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2022 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3

Loved it!

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 5 - The Warm Up Pt. 2

Loved it

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 9:14 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Warm Up

Loved it

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 3 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 3

Loved it

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Starting Line-Up Pt. 2

Loved it

Reviewer: snowydreamer32 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2022 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The Starting Line-Up

Loved it

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2022 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

I absolutely love this story. It's one of my favorites and I reread it every couple of years. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2022 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

I absolutely love this story. It's one of my favorites and I reread it every couple of years. Thank you so much for sharing it.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2022 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

I absolutely love this story. It's one of my favorites and I reread it every couple of years. Thank you so much for sharing it. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2022 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 42 - The Keys to Happiness Pt. 2

A wedding!!!!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2022 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 42 - The Keys to Happiness Pt. 2

A wedding!!!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2021 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Warm Up Pt. 3

he is more of a man of action not talking

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2021 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

Late to the party as usual but I just had to tell you how mucg I enjoyed this story. I've read other poly stories but this one one really captured the thoughs a feelings of all three of them. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.

Reviewer: anakinsmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2021 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

Late to the party as usual but I just had to tell you how mucg I enjoyed this story. I've read other poly stories but this one one really captured the thoughs a feelings of all three of them. Thank you for sharing it with all of us.

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:06 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: ageise02 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2020 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Details

Whatever happened with the pics Edward received in the mail? Did he ever tell Bella ans Jazz about it? 

Great story BTW

Reviewer: mlbf1970 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2019 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 41 - The Keys to Happiness

That bitch Alice shows up on their door step with her drama and then wants to cast a dark cloud of doubt on their relationship. Then she, being the leech she is, ask to stay with them. And as soon as she meets Irina, she's in love. Wasn't she just in love with Seth.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Apr 2019 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 59 - Life's Lessons Pt. 2

That was difficult to read. I know bigotry is everywhere,but it’s still really hard to comprehend and deal with. I think Jazz handled it better than I would have. 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2019 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 50 - Working out the Kinks

I’m glad Jasper didn’t drag it out. They needed reconciliation so they can move on and so Bella won’t be stressed out.

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2019 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 44 - Mystically Yours

Great surprise!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2019 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 43 - The Keys to Happiness Pt 3

Great surprise!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2019 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 43 - The Keys to Happiness Pt 3

Great surprise!

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2019 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Spring Fling

I live in Surprise, AZ and I’m pretty certain that WE also have spring training here. Do they have it in Peoria too? 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2019 8:58 AM Title: Chapter 31 - TPOGI Pt. 2

My theory is Jasper is going to Aro, the owner of the club and find out who pays for Riley’s membership and while he’s at it, hopefully get both of their memberships revoked. As for who, maybe Jacob Black? 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2019 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 31 - TPOGI Pt. 2

My theory is Jasper is going to Aro, the owner of the club and find out who pays for Riley’s membership and while he’s at it, hopefully get both of their memberships revoked. As for who, maybe Jacob Black? 

Reviewer: JDThorn Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Apr 2019 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 31 - TPOGI Pt. 2

My theory is Jasper is going to Aro, the owner of the club and find out who pays for Riley’s membership and while he’s at it, hopefully get both of their memberships revoked. As for who, maybe Jacob Black? 

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2018 10:02 PM Title: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

I started this not expecting to like it, but I really did.  Good job.  

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Apr 2018 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 65 - Bottom of the Ninth

Loved this chapter!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2018 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 64 - Ch...Ch...Changes Pt. 3

Oh, what a great twist!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2018 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 63 - Ch...Ch...Changes Part 2

Glad they got their girl

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2018 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 61 - Uncomfortable Conversations

Interesting conversation!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2018 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 60 - Life's Lessons Pt. 3

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2018 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 59 - Life's Lessons Pt. 2

I’m so glad for Jasper’s Mother’s reaction.  I’m hoping she relocates to Washington so she can be closer to her grandchildren..

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2018 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 58 - Life's Lessons

I’m so glad he reconciled with his father before he died!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 56 - Who's Your Daddy Pt. 2

Hope Edward likes his new job!  

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 55 - Who's Your Daddy?

Nice name.

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2018 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 54 - He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not Pt. 3

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2018 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 69 - Epilogue Pt. 3

wonerfil second read

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Mar 2018 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 56 - Who's Your Daddy Pt. 2

she will have to wear that diaphragm 24/7

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 53 - He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not Pt. 2

Loved Esme’s. Talk with Jasperr!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 52 - He Loves Me...He Loves Me Not

Very mature thinking!  Highly emotional, but mature.  

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 51 - WotK Pt. 2

The scene with Edward and his parents was very touching!

Reviewer: Divyvicki1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Mar 2018 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 49 - Fallout Pt. 3

That was very mature of them!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2018 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 47 - Fallout

Now why would u have Edward behave like this?

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2018 1:54 PM Title: Chapter 46 - Mystically Yours Pt 3

What has Edward done now?

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Feb 2018 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 45 - Mystically Yours Pt. 2

Could she be pregnant?

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2018 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 44 - Mystically Yours

Jacob is back????  Ewwwww!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2018 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 43 - The Keys to Happiness Pt 3

Loved their surprise for her!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2018 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 42 - The Keys to Happiness Pt. 2

Poor Edwar!  He really didn’t want to know that!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Feb 2018 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 41 - The Keys to Happiness

Edward really can be a dumb ass!  Glad Alice found someone she could love!  I was, of course hoping it was Jasper!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2018 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 40 - Complete Insanity Pt. 2

Glad they cleared that up!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2018 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 39 - Complete Insanity

Wow,  thought Rose wanted to help!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2018 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 38 - WHAT?! Pt. 2

Knew that sleezball Biera would try to cause trouble!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Feb 2018 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 37 - WHAT?!

Interesting twist!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2018 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Spring Fling Pt. 3

How wonderful of Garrett to speak up and offer to help with the Irina situation!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jan 2018 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 35 - Spring Fling Pt 2

Pitchers are so temperament!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2018 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 34 - Spring Fling

Loved the disclaimer at the end!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2018 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 33 - TPOGI Pt 4

Well, at least they know who to look out for now!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2018 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 32 - TPOGI Pt. 3

Well,that was an interesting twist!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2018 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 31 - TPOGI Pt. 2

The plot thickens!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2018 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 30 - The Price of Good Intentions

Hmmm, wonder who is after them?  I m wondering if it’s not Alister

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Dec 2017 12:17 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Road Trip! Pt. 2

Sounds like it’s going to be an interesting Thanksgiving dinner.

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Dec 2017 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Road Trip!

That was so funny!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Dec 2017 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Unexpected Skills Pt. 2

I’m interested to see how they are go8ng to work the baby thing in.  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2017 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 23 - When Panic Sets In Pt. 2

Well, glad he got his head out of his ass so Bella could hand it back to him!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2017 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 22 - When Panic Sets In

Well, that was unexpected especially after Esme and Carlisle were so supportive!  

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2017 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Details Pt. 3

I’m so glad his parents were so accepting!

Reviewer: divyvicki Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2017 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Details Pt. 2

Bear spray?  Too funny!

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