Date: 26 Aug 2016 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 20
Cute ending. TY for writing and sharing
Author's Response:
This was one of the very first stories that I wrote. I never had aspirations of writing. The only I had done previous were papers in my college years. My studies were for psychology and anthropology after the freshman english requirements. The very first one that I wrote was The Dominatrix and Ms. O' since bdsm was all the rage. Still is I guess.
I have always had thoughts of re-writing this one and to be honest, it's been so long since I did write it that I honestly don't remember much about it.
I really appreciate your thoughts.
I'm really looking forward to your comments and impressions on any other of my offerings that you will read.
Very Hard Hugs
Dinia aka Carol
Date: 26 Aug 2016 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
Glad she is taking the changing well
Date: 26 Aug 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
Glad the whole family is there to support him.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
wow surprised Charlie left. But can understand his need to be away as well.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh my.....what a cliffy. Good think the next chapter is there for me. :-)
Date: 26 Aug 2016 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 15
can understand his reluctance to leave along with her need for him to do just that.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 14
was wondering about him sitting in the sun sparkling.. That must have been shocking for Z.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 13
B's def got a lot to think about.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
oooh flashbacks...don't blame her fro being confused
Date: 26 Aug 2016 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 11
awww for being nervous. I love Em's enthusiasm.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
Poor E. Waiting can be hard
Date: 26 Aug 2016 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Interesting backstory.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 7
nice seeing thier original meeting
Date: 26 Aug 2016 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 6
lol for Charlie playing the Dad card. With all the changes, I wonder if Rose will be nice or her usual standofish self. hmmm
Date: 26 Aug 2016 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 5
Glad that she is thinking and asking questions, not just blindly going into things
Date: 26 Aug 2016 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 4
Yea dreams can be crazy. I had the wierdest ones while I was pregnant. I'd die in it each time in a different way, gun, sword, car... never figured it out either.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 3
Like the differences you've made with how many joined the family.
Date: 26 Aug 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 2
Like how you are developing this. Wonder who the African Vamp is....Early Aro maybe??? Glad Carlisle got his mate. :-)
Date: 26 Aug 2016 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the twist you've added about her reincarnation and such. Different than the typical Twilight story. Charlie is too funny.
Can't wait to see where you take it.
Date: 05 Aug 2016 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 20
That was lots of fun. Enjoyed following Edward's long journey, and very glad he got to find his soul mate. Patience is a virtue that few appreciate.
Author's Response:
Thank you! This is one story that I've always wanted to get back to, but don't know if possible!
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 05 Aug 2016 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
Hmm
Author's Response:
*smile*
Date: 05 Aug 2016 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 8
Beautiful.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!
Date: 05 Aug 2016 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 6
Yup, these are good people. What adventures will they end up in?
Author's Response:
Not too many. This is mostly Edward's search.
Date: 05 Aug 2016 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
Death can mean something different to each person. Endings and beginnings.
Author's Response:
There is no such thing as death, only an exchange of matter from one form into another.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 04 Aug 2016 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
Not disappointed. These guys are going to be fun I think. An interesting kind of fun.
Date: 04 Aug 2016 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 2
Again we have my kind of people. Liking this Edward and Carlisle a lot. Betting I'm going to like the rest as well.
Author's Response:
You are so good for my ego!
thank you
[Report This]Date: 04 Jul 2015 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 20
i thought this story was a bit confusing in parts but overall a great concept ;) i really hope you manage to post some o/t or f/t because it was such a small story but it had great potential ;D
Author's Response:
I am going to re-write this one some day. It was the second one I had ever written in my life. It was one that had been hatching for a very long time. It is confusing in places I know. I had an editor who talked big but did and understood little. Things have changed. I have people now pre-read for me as well as one who's job it is to keep my timelines straight and me more orginized. :D
Thank you so much for taking the time to read and review. I LOVE the interaction FF allows us. I've learned so much from my readers. I think you might be one of the special ones. I hope to hear more from you.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 09 Jun 2015 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks for another entertaining story.
Author's Response:
Thank you! This was the second story, I think, that I wrote. I've always thought I'd go back some day and spruce it up a little.
I am so happy that you enjoyed it.
See you next story!
Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Have you checked that spot on your body for a birthmark? I have an arrow head shaped mark on my stomach and my grand dad has one on his back. He told me thatwe were native amreicans in a previous life and that is where we were killed by arrows in that life. I have always felt close to native americans and lived to ride horses. I have had a way with horsed. Just look at the spot and check to see if there is any kind of mark there. Thanks for the story I really like it - Zanath
[Report This]Date: 21 Apr 2014 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 20
Dinia, I very much enjoyed your story.
I do believe in reincarnation & past lives. Some of my dreams have made me believe
I have lived at least three lives before this one. I have very vivid dreams of being
either on the Titanic, or the rescue ship. Also, more vivid dreams of WWII, as a nurse.
This one has been a living hell, as I feel I have been in search of a long lost love from
my past lives, but we were not reincarnated at the right times for our age not to be a major factor.
I've done lots of research on both reincarnation & past lives.
I truly enjoyed your quotes from Kahil ....they are truly insightful.
Thanks muches for sharing your story with me.
Off to check out more of your completed stories.....
Jamie Crabtree (Messenger)
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
it was great, did you do a sequel? gonna go check
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 17
will probably need time to consider it
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
I think she will live for now
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 15
can't wait to hit next
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 13
you have AlwaYS been worth the wait
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
she is catching on quickly
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 11
the Cullens are awesome
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 10
poor lonely boy
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
you deserve more reviews
[Report This]Date: 01 Feb 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 1
I found you and realize I have read a lot of your work, but not this one. So I off on another journey with you
Date: 01 Dec 2013 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 20
Just right, I thought, as far as length goes! I can just picture the two of them hunting big cats around the world. Good story and I hope more readers show up and then leave a review or twenty!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 19
The easy acceptance of what Edward and his family are, has always been one of my favorite parts of Bella's character!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 18
I cross my fingers as I assume Carlisle is calling Edward to change Bella. Hope this turns out well for all concerned!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
Not to quibble, but the plan Carlisle and Edward came up with isn't a really good one! Someone injured as badly as Bella would not just simply disappear out of the hospital! The need a better story if she has to be changed.
Date: 01 Dec 2013 10:04 AM Title: Chapter 16
One of two things will happen. Either Carlisle will save Bella, or Edward will learn he has the strength to change his beloved!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 15
Have faith, Edward I think it's all going to turn out well!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 14
Another bit of information, though a little different than what he learned from Buddha. What a gift, to be able to travel, literally forever and learn!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Hopefully the story helps Bella truly remember on her own. That seems to be the way it must happen, otherwise I'm sure Edward would tell her outright!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 12
Now he'll have to decide whether or not to tell her the truth! That was amazing, that just kissing brought that memory back to her!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
No friendly greeting from Rose, I see! Big surprise there! At least Esme hugging her made Bella's fears disappear for a moment!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 10
Though it obviously frustrated him, the advice Edward received from Buddha was what he really needed to hear! Plus, he was given the name his love would take so he at least had a clue!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
How very fortunate that Edward crossed paths with Siddhartha, and found some answers to his quest! Fascinating stuff, by the way!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
That was lovely, I'm really glad she gave you permission to use it here!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 9:02 AM Title: Chapter 7
Great back story to Edward and Bella's love , especially beginning that many millenia ago! I have always kind of wondered if we have been here before!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 6
I love protective Charlie, loving father that he is! The first date went very well, even if Bella felt like things were moving pretty fast. So, tomorrow she meets the family! Can't wait to see how well that goes!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 5
That's a good way to answer a question without answering a question! Why is it so important if Bella remembers Edward, as long as she loves him again?
Date: 01 Dec 2013 8:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
I wonder if that dream you had as a young girl meant you were that person in a former life? Something to think about! The dream interpretation Bella got from Emily Young was pretty scary, talking of looking for Death, while Death searched for her! That tip about amber eyes was surely something Bella should have paid more attention to!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 3
This just so much fun to read and I'm loving the family history! Poor Edward, all those mated couples and him still searching!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like this so much, you have given the characters such similar and yet different histories, it's a lot of fun to read! I am enjoying the assembly of the family so far!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I try to make my characters different.
Have you tried my book? Carrying the Torch? It's an ebook on Amazon. You might likt it too..
Your email address didn't come through. FF.n doesn't allow any links that aren't theirs. You have to put spaces between the parts of the address. Like: gardiniasteel @ gmail . com When I'm sitting I'm 40 when I stand and walk I'm pushing 140.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
Date: 01 Dec 2013 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Edward really has waited a very long time for Bella, in this story! How sad to chase a reincarnated soul through the centuries, trying to find your only love!
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 20
I liked it it was different but at times hard to follow you did one part twice but writen differently so that had me confused a little but I really love the concept
Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 1
I have really enjoyed your story. Please tell me you are writing a sequel quickly :)
Date: 26 Aug 2012 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
This looks neat!
[Report This]Date: 21 Jul 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
Woohoo! Meeting with the Buddha! Or, I suppose Sidhartta was more of a pre-Buddha. Either way, very neat. There's a book that I love called "LAMB; the gospels according to Biff, Christ's childhood pal". It's extremely tongue-in-cheek, yet poignant at times, and the premise is that during the 20-plus year period in the bible where Christ is not mentioned growing up, he (and Biff) journeys to the east to meet up with the three wise men who gifted him when he was born. He goes to thank them, and in the process learns philosophical, cultural, and spiritual ideals from them. It's a fascinating, yet funny (again, tongue-in-cheek) look into what Jesus' life could have been shaped by. This chapter made me think you might like it.
Date: 21 Jul 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 7
Akashic records? I assume we will learn more about those later! I enjoyed the priestess interaction, and the Atlantis reference. Unfortunately, now those with red hair are mocked and called Gingers! I think they're beautiful.