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Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2018 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 3

THis is some crazy shit.



Author's Response:

Well, it is fantasy!  Enjoy.

Hard Hugs,

Dinia

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2016 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thank you for another well written story. I always enjoy your tales, this one tested me with the rapes but I soldiered on. Look forward to your future work.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I thought I'd posted that the violence was to show how much Edward grew more human as he fell in love with Bella, but to be honest that was written a loooooong time ago, and memory fails at my age.  LOL.  I am glad that you did enjoy it however.  Violence is a part of the human condition and the only way we seem to be able to grow is to realize it and what causes it both within ourselves and without.  

Have you read any of my more recent stories?  If you have and you've commented on them, please forgive an old woman (74) for not remembering.  

I appreciate your support, and if you haven't already, come find me on Facebook, Dinia Steel Fan Fiction group in which I've made pdfs for all of my completed stories; most have pictures that go with the storyline.

Looking forward to hearing more from you, and please tell me you've written before.

Hard hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2015 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 20

I thought that Riley was James' #2 and the Cullens already killed him?

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2015 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 25

I was a bit nervous to take on the challenge of this story based on your initial warnings. But decided to give it a try because you've always mention you are an E&B HEA type of writer.
It was a very interesting journey that Bella embarked upon when she fell for a vampire of questionable ethics. Your Edward grew in many areas of humity even when his was lost all those centuries ago.
I will admit there were parts of this story that had me cringing and others that had me engaged in naughty thoughts. Haha
Time to read the sequel!

You had previously asked if I'm on Facebook.
I am but find I rarely check it any more.
I can be found at: KMoltenhotforfanfction
Thank you for the inquiry though.
Time to read the sequel!

Kristi
Aka Moltz

Author's Response:

Thanks.  So it wasn't so bad after all?  I'm happy you're reading me of my stuff.  :D  EA was one of my earlier stories.

I tired to friend you at the "address" you gave me for Facebook.  This is the response I got:  


"We couldn't find anything for KMoltenhotforfanfctionLooking for people or posts? Try entering a name, location, or different words."

Looking forward to hearing your thoughts on everything of mine you read.  You get done with me, I"ll be happy to tell you some of my personal favorties of other authors.  

Hard Hugs

Dinia/Carol

 

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 May 2015 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 25

Just read this all the way through.  Excellent story.  Now I can read the new chapters!  Who is Adam?



Author's Response:

Thank you!  I appreciate your thoughts on the story.  In the original Twilight Saga story, The Short Second Life of Bree Tanner, Adam was a member of Riley Coven.

If you haven't read that story you probably should because it is an excellent addition to the Twilight Saga. :D  

I look forward to your comments on Cullen Rule. :D

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 20

they are all concerned about killing a vampire and no big deal killing a human. I know their food source who cares.. Me. LOL



Author's Response:

Oh My!  All the reviews for this story.  I posted the last chapter #25 in September 2012 and I believe it was the 2nd or 3rd story I ever wrote.  I've grown a little in my "style" since then, but I'm honored that you've been reading it.  Romance, I'm afraid is not my first choice for writing material.  I love the supernatural of occult story lines - harkening back to my love of SiFi stories of my youth.  Edward's Addiction was met to more of a story of brining into Edward's long dull life, some human elements that had been forgotten.  The mistreatment of humans falls right into the line with the treatment of any conqured race of people, or captured animals.  Any violence I may include in a story will generally speak as a sub-text to usual human actions in the real world.

Romance is something I'm now venturing into with my Moving On story.

Thank you so much for expressing all your thoughts on Edward's Addiction.  There is a follow up story called Cullen Rule when Edward and Bella have become equals and are very much in love.

I hope you give Cullen Rule a try also.

I do so appreicate your reading and reviews.  It's the only way I know if what I"m writing is being understood.  

Hard Hugs

Dinia

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 16

honestly after what she went through I would not want to be alive.  I would be looking for a way to either loose my mind or my life.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 15

ok Tanya is dead so is James..yea on all of that.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 14

why didn't he kill Tanya instead of playing her boyfriend?

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

sigh they made it but not really in time.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 11

oh this is sad. Poor Bella

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Mar 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

ugh. not romantic at all. She is nothing to them just for use. sad I guess

Reviewer: sarah38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2014 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

I have just started reading this story, and I love it already

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 12:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

wow, this expensive lingerie needs a great body i think most actors and model are wearing this i love la santa and cheaper lingerie

Reviewer: nilo24 Signed star [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: nilo24 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 2

wow, you are not slow writer you jump to hard stuff emmm

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 1

I am really loved reading this story very much!!! when will u be updating ???? please let me know!!!

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 2

fab chapter hes defo addicted hope he changes her.

Reviewer: sarah louise Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 1

wow that was hot!fab chapter.

Reviewer: midnightstar00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 2

Edward you evil man...i. can't. resist. must. go. on... 

Reviewer: midnightstar00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

Edward...what are you doing?

Reviewer: eumenida Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 2

  Patetic attemt to make mix of BDSM, horror, thriller (detailed description of the "crime scene" in the kitchen? Please.) and some medical documentary. Narative skills: zero.

   I don`t know what are you blabing in other 23 chapters, you said it all in first two. And staring with"emotional" Edward. Make yourself mind, girl.

Reviewer: keola Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 1

bit too crude for me



Author's Response:

How much did you read?  And it is rated N17 for a reason.  Thanks for trying it though.

;D

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