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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2015 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 32

wow!! rather cheesy and short but a fun read ;) thanks for posting on here and i'll get to read the sequel soon ;D

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 32

Yeah

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 31

Knew it

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 30

Goimg to sing to her

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 29

Ok

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 28

Momma shouldn't fight her son's battles

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 27

Ok I don't think she was too harsh...I don't think she is the one that should be trying to get him back

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 26

How sad for her...he did lie and withheld information she wouldn't have offered it up if she knew

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 25

Knew it...she is going to think he used her :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 24

They will be coming for Ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 22

Sweet ed

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 21

:(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 20

Cool...poor Charlie 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 19

Ed you are going to be sorry...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 18

For sure...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ok

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 16

It is fine 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 15

Just do it!  LOL

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 14

He is being sweet

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

:)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 12

Very forward of you Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 11

Yes yes yes!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 10

Hummmm what else is she going to who him!  Lol

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 9

The # seems bogus the more he says it

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

Mysterious!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 7

Oooohh....put in your place Ed...bet that doesn't ever happen

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

Beautiful music

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

Sweet

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 4

Woot woot!  Bring on Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 3

:)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 2

Lets hear it Bella!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

Lets see...

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 13

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 11

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 10

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 9

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 8

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 7

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 6

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 4

loved it!1

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 3

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 2

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it!

Reviewer: nannygoat Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 32

yes I love this story can not wait for part 2 x

Reviewer: Robieswife Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 32

i definitely need more of this story!! bring on part 2! :)

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 32

Aww loved the chapter!! :D

Reviewer: masochistic lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 11:52 AM Title: Chapter 32

Such a cute story. Glad that's not the end!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 31

Aww he's so sweet and cute!! :D

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 31

Yeah!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 31

Hell Yeah!

Reviewer: twifan788 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 31

Yay ;) I knew it because i am a believer;) happy ending is near i think'_'

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 30

Oh oh what is he going to do?? :D

Reviewer: twifan788 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 10:37 AM Title: Chapter 30

He is going to sing for her i think.



Author's Response:

<3

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 29

Aww I love this sweet Edward *swoon*

Reviewer: Terrabella Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 29

Yea! I knew he would!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 29

Good I like to hear that he is on his way back to her!  awaiting for  more

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 28

Oh damn that's funny he's mom went to plead on he's case lol but we all knew she was going to forgive him :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 27

Yay for Google!!! Lol I hope she gets a chance to talk to him!! :D

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 27

send him a recording of her singing a torch song

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 26

Oh I had a feeling something like this would happen. And I love the whole American idol thing.

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 26

Aww poor Edward and Bella both are suffering but for different reasons!! :(

Reviewer: Lantus123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 26

How is she supposed to handle anything, she has no way of getting to him. I wish this story had no hurt.



Author's Response:

Me too.  But the hurt ends, I promise.  I *always* write HEA.  Hang in here with me....

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 26

awww poor kids an amazing spark and they can't follow through

Reviewer: twifan788 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 26

I have no comment. Author's note is clear enough;)

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 25

when will (all the Edwards in the fandom) learn that honesty works better!

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 25

Aww he's going to break her heart :( he should have told since the beginning poor Bella :(

Reviewer: twifan788 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 25

Oh boy really.

Time to make explanations...

Reviewer: Lantus123 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 25

Why

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh damn I don't think she's going to like that he didn't mention he was a singer and in tour :(

Reviewer: Terrabella Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 24

I was thinking the same thing, is Bella Edwards Yoko?



Author's Response:

If you are asking is she the love of his life, then the answer is yes.  :)

Reviewer: kkbeau1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 22

i like the story, but will there ever be longer chapters?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.  Yes, some chapters coming up are longer.....others are more drabble-ish.  I always have a hard time figuring out where the cutoff should be.

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 22

Aww that's sweet of him :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

Aww poor Bella :(

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 21

She's so sweet, I hope Edward is kind to her.

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

imagine her life if her father had been responsible. Sigh

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 20

Oh damn who would have thought her dad was a famous producer!!! :D

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 20

oh dear, thats why she isn't famous. Poor Girl

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 19

Aww he feels guilty that he has to leave :(

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 19

I hope it doesn't hurt too bad when it bites him in the ass! 

Reviewer: masochistic lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 19

Oh she's not going to like his secret

 

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 19

going to bite him on the ass...hard

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

Cant wait to see where they are going. And I guess we will have to see if not telling her will come back and bite him in the ass.

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jul 2012 2:48 AM Title: Chapter 18

Lol :D

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 18

omg that would be this 46 yr old, mother of 2 dream come true ... sigh

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 17

At least he was sweet to her and he cared in some point for her :D

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 16

:D

Reviewer: crazykatwp Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 16

Keep going.   Love it.

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 16

2 thumbs up

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 15

:D

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 15

and from pics I have seen of that man going commando, she will have to be brave...at first lol

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

Its hard to hear him call her sissy....



Author's Response:

He won't be for long....

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 14

:D

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 14

lol, I will be there at the next chapter!

Reviewer: vickic Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 13

ditto, with my hubs 22 yrs together from the first night on. Congrats to you and this wonderful story

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

:D

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

I like how natural sissy is. And they seem so comfortable with each other. Who was her dad?



Author's Response:

She's going to tell Edward all about her dad very soon....please stick around...and thanks for reading.

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 12

Ba bye

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 11

Hell yes

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