Date: 11 Jun 2017 6:46 PM Title: Epilogue
I read this story straight through!! I loved it! I kept trying to sneak and read at work because I didn't want to stop until I finished it!
Author's Response:
That is great! I haven't had a review for this in a few months but much longer before that one. This was my first fanfic. Thanks so much for reading.
[Report This]Date: 13 May 2016 2:44 AM Title: Epilogue
Great story
A 10+
Date: 25 Apr 2016 12:55 PM Title: Epilogue
Great fic! I just found you! I'm reading Saving Natalie, too.
[Report This]Date: 18 Jul 2015 8:22 PM Title: Epilogue
AWESOME!!! story including the ending ;) are you going to do anymore epov o/t, f/t? and i thought bella in the 'domme' role would be AWESOME ;D
[Report This]Date: 05 Apr 2015 12:23 AM Title: Epilogue
:) Loved this story
Date: 13 Jan 2014 2:53 AM Title: Epilogue
wow! An amazing story! :) Loved it!
-Kate
Date: 18 Nov 2013 7:03 AM Title: Epilogue
I just finished reading this and have enjoyed every minute of it!!!! It took me a week but only because I had to take breaks to eat and play with my grandson and focus on my family otherwise this would of been finished in 36 hours!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 03 Nov 2013 11:54 PM Title: Epilogue
This story was great! I was shocked that it had so little reviews, but once I got into the story, I was pulled in. It makes me hopeful that I (a fellow divorcee) will find my Edward. Thank you for sharing your story with us and I can't wait to read what you have planned next. ;-)
Date: 18 Sep 2013 8:25 PM Title: Epilogue
Well written and interesting story.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2013 2:20 PM Title: Epilogue
Loved the story. It was a great wrap up.
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2013 11:36 PM Title: Epilogue
I started this story when it was complete. It was wonderful. Exciting, dramatic and full of fun!!! Thanks for writing it.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 2:26 PM Title: Epilogue
that was really good. i loved the story!!!! sad its over tho.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 10:48 PM Title: Epilogue
loved every word!! thankyou you put alot of love in this story which is why its so good and why i love it cant wait for your next one!
Date: 13 Aug 2013 10:08 PM Title: Epilogue
What a great end. I really enjoyed reading your tale of Bella and Edward.
Thank you for sharing with us.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 7:15 PM Title: Epilogue
Hate to see it end it was an amazing journey.
Date: 13 Aug 2013 2:36 PM Title: Outake from Edward
really good post more soon.
[Report This]Date: 06 Aug 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 26
PLEASE,PLEASE UPDATE THIS AMAZING STORY!!! It has been 2 months since last update. I have been impatiently waiting for next update!! I have truely loved reading this beautifully captivating & truely intriging story!! I most definatly give this story a 10 star rating!!
Author's Response:
That was the last regular chapter. I am working on an epilogue now actually. Thank you so much for loving it. Thank you also for the awesome review! I can't tell you how much it means to me!
Now I'm gonna plug my other story. It's called Love is the master and it's an original fiction. It's a WIP.
Thanks for reading!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 24 Jun 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!
Date: 22 Jun 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 26
This is such a great story. I want to see them married and with kids. But that is just me ;)
Author's Response:
I'm working on the epi now. Well an epi, maybe the first of a few. We will see.
Date: 21 Jun 2013 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
I THINK THIS WAS MY LEAST FAVORITE CHAPTER ALTHOUGH OVERALL I REALLY LIKED THIS STORY. I ALSO THINK A SEQUEL WOULD BE VERY MUCH WELCOMED.
Author's Response:
I don't think I will do a sequel because it would be all fluff and family. I am working on an epilogue now. Thanks for the honest review.
[Report This]Date: 20 Jun 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 26
Love it Would love to see them with the four children Edward wants.
Author's Response:
We shall see. I'm writing the epi now. It has taken on a life of it's own.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
I loved this chapter. They will definately need another story. That one is not one to share with the children.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jun 2013 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
love it, but I hope that this is not the end.
Thanks for the wonderful chapters.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jun 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 23
AWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE DON'T END THIS BEFORE YOU TAKE US THROUGH ALL THERE HAPPY TIMES LIKE YOU DID WITH THE SAD. EVEN AMOUNTS OF CHAPTERS WOULD VERY MUCH WELCOMED!!!!!
Date: 05 Jun 2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
Wow... You have carried them a long way. So proud of the way they have handeled themselves..
Can't wait to see little Edwards and Bellas running around..
Great stroy. Thank you for sharing with us.
[Report This]Date: 03 Jun 2013 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 21
ohhh, I have run out of chapter... love the story and I cant wait for more of it.
Please update soon.
Author's Response:
I updated with 2 chapters today! Thanks for reading!
Date: 19 May 2013 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
MIKE IS A LOSER! HE WILL ATTACK SOON?
[Report This]Date: 18 May 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
Oh my!! Mike needs to die!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
Really wish Edward would have ended Mike, but would LOVE it if Bella got to!! love this story
Date: 17 May 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
Why aren't people freaking out about the fact that Mike is stalking Bella and Edward and has the gun he stole from Bella? Shouldn't they have some police protection?
Date: 17 May 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
I like Bella's attitude, but I agree with Edward. They need to keep their pants on after dance class.
[Report This]Date: 17 May 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 19
Love it! kick his ass Bella!!!
Date: 13 May 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 4
Hi Froggie ;-)
Author's Response:
Hey Beach!
How do you like this one?
Date: 13 May 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
Mike is such a jerk. Bella needs a security system on her house, especialy since she travels and is sometimes home alone. They also need to keep their after dance sex parties until they get home.
Author's Response:
Yes they probably do but sometimes ya just can't wait. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 18
Love that she got the watch
[Report This]Date: 06 May 2013 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 17
Please let the guy sell her the watch that would be so awesome. Love it!!!
[Report This]Date: 04 May 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 16
i love this and cant wait to read more, i hope you can update again soon.
Date: 14 Apr 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 15
Found your story and ..... I love it!!
Date: 13 Apr 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 15
MORE!!! MORE!!!!! MORE!!!!!!! I CAN'T WAIT! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
Date: 13 Apr 2013 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 11
WOW!!! I HAVE TO GO HUNT DOWN MY HUSBAND RIGHT NOW!!!!!!!!!! THANKS.
Date: 13 Apr 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 15
Can't wait to read more please!
[Report This]Date: 13 Apr 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Loving the story so far! Keep up the good work ;)
Date: 12 Apr 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
I think that Edward should get a new #
Date: 12 Apr 2013 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 8
I TOTALLY ENJOYED THAT CHAPTER AND I'M HAPPY FOR THEM.
Date: 12 Apr 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
OH SO CLOSE!!!!!
Date: 12 Apr 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
OFF TO A GREAT START!!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks, It gets better I promise!
Date: 12 Apr 2013 2:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
I don't review often. But I do love you story. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I'm glad you like it!
Date: 01 Apr 2013 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 14
beautiful story, can not wait to read more...sorry about not reviewing all the chapters..
Author's Response:
No problem, I'm just happy that you take the time to review at all!
Date: 29 Mar 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 5
It might not have been phsical abuse, but it was mental abuse andit can way heavy on ones self esteem. great chapter
Author's Response:
Too many people suffer from this same kind of abuse. Especially teens.
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: 28 Mar 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 14
New reader here and I absolutely love your story!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks and welcome!
Date: 28 Mar 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 4
these two are just to cute great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I love when people review as they go! It is such a buzz to get the little notification that I got a new review!
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
well they are getting to know each other slowly. great chapter
Author's Response:
Thanks, I wanted them to really get to know one another. So many fan fictions just jump in with Bella and Edward and don't really let their "new" characters fall in love.
Date: 28 Mar 2013 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 2
excellent chapter...your doing very good for your first story
Author's Response:
Thank you, this story was a lot of fun to write and flowed so easily. It is complete on Fanfiction but I am posting it here after having a beta review it. The one on FF is pretty rough. I am also writing an original fiction if you want to check it out it's called Love is the Master.
Thanks for the review!
Date: 27 Mar 2013 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved it.
Author's Response:
thanks
Date: 27 Mar 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 3
LOVIN IT!
Author's Response:
Thanks!!!!!
Date: 27 Mar 2013 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
SO LOVE IT!
Author's Response:
thank you
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 14
Love it!!! date didn't change with the updates. Just thought you'd want to know
Author's Response:
I did notice that and it is so frustrating. I kept getting an error message when I uploaded the chapter and accidentally uploaded it 3 times. Thanks.
Date: 10 Dec 2012 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 13
Love this story! Looking forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I just updated as well. There is something wrong and the date was not updated. Don't want anyone missing my new chapter!
[Report This]Date: 19 Nov 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 11
thank you for the update.Mike & Edward in the store was to funny!!!!..Edward & Bella at the club was hot!!!..until you post again
Author's Response:
thanks, i hope you got to read the new chapter. i had a lot of trouble updating for some reason. thanks for all the reviews they mean a lot to me.
Date: 17 Nov 2012 3:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
Lovin it.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 16 Nov 2012 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 11
Mike sure is a douchebag!
Author's Response:
Yep! He's not very bright either!
Date: 09 Nov 2012 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
Love the story!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks! Love the review!!!!
Date: 09 Nov 2012 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 9
KATE NEEDS TO DIE!
Author's Response:
Naw that's a little harsh! She gets her just deserts!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
thank you for the update.............well done...their relationship is moving right along.........I love it.I hope Bella is able to get Edwards things back.I also hope Kate gets what she deserves...until next time.
Author's Response:
Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review!
[Report This]Date: 21 Oct 2012 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 9
ooo someone is going to get their ass kicked.
Author's Response:
Yeah but probably not who you are thinking of! LOL! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 9
thank you for the update.very well done.......Kate was not happy Edward had company, but when she found out said company was a girlfriend she was none to happy..........lol..........Kate is so wrong for selling his things, I hope there is some trouble she could get in for doing that.she already ended up with the house , car and most of his belonging...........Bella deck her
Author's Response:
I know right! Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
I just love their relationship
Author's Response:
Thanks! I was hoping it would come off as easy and meant to be!
Date: 17 Oct 2012 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 9
I have so enjoyed this can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Sorry for the delay in responding! Thank you so much for reading!
[Report This]Date: 17 Jul 2012 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 2
that was cute.I wonder what's going to happen at the house
Author's Response:
Thank you!