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Reviewer: Lelly Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2018 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 4

Maybe Bella is going to some crappy state school where even an average amount of effort will get you an A because your work is miles ahead of the other slackers that are enrolled. However, if she is going to a real school, top 20 in the US, her school work should come before going out to dinner, especially and many of the other chores mentioned. There is plenty of time for that AFTER her paper is completed. Unless Edward works at the school Bella attends, it would be impossible for him to know whether Bella is being given enough time to do her paper. Even for the same class, if the sections are taught by different professors, the work may be vastly different and the grades given to the same paper can also vary widely. The fact that she is not procrastinating is something that should be encouraged, not chastized. That is the difference between going to Penn State and the University of PA. If Bella is going to a school that is the caliber of Penn State, I can understand why she shouldn't stress, but it is also doubtful is 4 summer school classes would have burned her out. Right now, Edward is coming off like a huge jerk who just wants what he wants and makes no allowances for the responsibilities of other people. Very OOC.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2016 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 8

I am glad that Bella stood up to her father.  

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2016 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 7

Edward really can be a brat. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2016 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 6

I think Esme is going to have more of a problem with their whole arrangement 

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2016 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

I wondered how they really got started. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2016 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

Glad Carlisle and Bella talked

 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 3

I was a little worried there for a minute that everything was going to blow up. Glad the girls have talked and are getting along now. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 2

I hope Esme and Bella getting along. I am a little worried with Bella saying that Esme is a bitch. Maybe she had changed 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2016 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

This is different 

Reviewer: TinaF Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2015 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow! Loved it.

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 6

Well things get craxy in that household lol

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2015 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 4

That went good

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

Dun dun dun

Reviewer: momomacka Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2015 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

Dannnng

Reviewer: Dani_147 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 8

I love this story so much! I wish it was longer! GAH!

Reviewer: bevey99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 8

Good story. The only part I wasn't happy about was Edward not letting Bella study.  Did he want her to fail? Seems that way.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 8

love is in so many combinations

there is nothing wrong with their relationship as long as they communicate and it is all consensual

too bad people judge people by who they love. people are people doesn't matter what sex or color. it should be about what you are on the inside. they love each other and that is all that matters.

loved the story

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

kinky very much so

Reviewer: C26P Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Great! Love it!

Reviewer: littlemadangel Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 8

You ended it there that's so cruel!!

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 7:26 PM Title: Chapter 8

I love this stoey could of been a bit longer but still loved it xx

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:25 PM Title: Chapter 2

:)

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 1

:)

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

I read this over at ffn just thought I'd let ye no lol I think u shud continue with it bu that's up2 u xx

Reviewer: BlueLightsFlash Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 8

Okay the story was weird....... But in a good kind of I know now what I don't like and I just feel like the story could have been just a little longer because there are some things left unsaid...like the possibility of kids and why all of a sudden Charlie wanted Bella because that excuse was just plain vague and how can Bella fall in love with Esme when there obviously fighting...seriously u just don't know what to make of this story. :( sorry I don't mean to sound mean.

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