Date: 15 Nov 2014 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 19: One and One Make One
I enjoyed this but I am sorry it wasn't really finished. Maybe some day you'll be able to wrap it all up.
Author's Response:
You are welcome to read the sequel on alphafang.wordpress.com. Sorry for such a late reply, I only now saw there was a comment added to Put Me First.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:13 AM Title: Epilogue
Great ending. Cant wait for more. Hope you post the sequel here as well. If not I'll chase you down on wordpress.
Is that Preston at the end or someone else?
Thank you for writing and sharing.
Author's Response:
That's Niall, thinking of his great granddaughter Sookie.
Thank you for reading and commenting. Welcome to read the sequel on my site!
Date: 05 Oct 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 19: One and One Make One
great chapter. Love that they had a great talk and got most everything out in the open and that Sookie is finally growing up in the supe world.
Hmmm burned him in the brain... interesting.
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 18: Expect the Unexpected
Great Job. Silly Eric closing the bond. Kentucky is an idiot. Ah the AP appears.
Date: 04 Oct 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 17: Bad Dream
Wow. Busy chapter. Buh bye silly drainers. Those two think better together. Valerie is a cool guard-psudo friend. Yea for her supporting him
Date: 04 Oct 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 16: Miracle
Wow. First part def is NSFW. Lol.
Buh bye food/pests.
Date: 03 Oct 2012 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 15: Want... Not
Hmmm now who was the deer I wonder. Valerie...a new player in the game. Love rodolpho. Yummy play time at the end
Date: 03 Oct 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 14: The First Date. Part Three
Think Andrew was set up and feel sorry for him. The broad... not at all. Love that she is maturing and thinking.
Date: 03 Oct 2012 8:17 PM Title: Chapter 14: First Date. Part Two
Wonderful insights about the music. Uh oh with the dinner
Date: 03 Oct 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 14: First Date. Part One
Wow what a wonderful date. The plane and the performance.
Date: 03 Oct 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 13: According To Plans
Hmm interesting info about the govt stuff. The necklace is pretty. Hope Claude telling Niall doesn't hurt sookie. I like Dermot
Date: 02 Oct 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 12: Family
Love the Italy crew and doggie. Wonder what is up with the call thing.
Date: 02 Oct 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 11: Not The First Date
Great chapter. I like the virtual library thing. Its cool. Ugh for protester/v User dude. Yummy forest time
Date: 02 Oct 2012 4:11 AM Title: Chapter 10: Changes
Glad she is becoming more reasonable. Good thing she remembered Tara's party. I'd like to find a nice big check.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 9: Proposals
Hmmm alluni's request is interesting. I can see part of Sookie's point but she needs to communicate it better
Date: 01 Oct 2012 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 8: All Is Fair
She really needs to learn to communicate better and accept simple gifts better. Freaking out over a remote is pathetic.
Author's Response:
Thanks for all the reviews! Sookie is freaking out about the commitement that comes with the remote. She's not sure she's ready.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 7: Follow the Money
Glad they talked out some things. Inventive punishment for Pam. S does tend to think outside the box sometimes huh?
Date: 01 Oct 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 6: Monster
Glad she seems to be doing better.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 5: Sweet'n'Sour
The archives thing seems interesting. Ludwig is a trip. Hope sookie will grow up and give the relationship 100%soon.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 4: The Glass House
She really needs to get over this "kept woman" business. Glad she is trying though.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 3: Late Night Snack
At least they are starting to talk and share
Date: 01 Oct 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 2: Damage Control
Victor is such an annoying PITA. Liked seeing it from his POV.
Date: 01 Oct 2012 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 1: Convoluted Conversation
Good start. He is right in saying she needs to be ready too. What exactly is put her first? Would any man not have a job to deal with? Always thought she needed to grow up in the books
Date: 05 Sep 2012 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 7: Follow the Money
Very creative
Luv the high bond between E/S
Date: 05 Sep 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 6: Monster
Great chapter
Luv the lemon
Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 15: Want... Not
Awesome chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 04 Sep 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 14: The First Date. Part Three
Wonderful chapter
Well written
Luv the pic
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 14: First Date. Part Two
Wonderfully written chapter
Thanks for updating to this site.
Author's Response:
Thank you for kind praise! You can read the whole story with art and music on my blog if you don't want to wait while I update here.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 14: First Date. Part One
Just found your story - really liking it, hope you will update.
Were you kicked of FF.net for adult content (I was).
And...most importantly...how frequently to you update?
Author's Response:
Dear Mazie,
It is so unfair your stories were pulled out w/o giving you the option to revise or leave yourself. That's a shame. I don't mind FF net enforcing their policy, but it's how they did it that bothers me most. Did you start your own site?
I pulled my stories to explore other options, and I'm just slowly testing out posting at FF net again, but w/o expclicitly sexual or violent content. All my works are at my personal blog http://alphafang.wordpress.com. The complete PMF is there, too, and the sequel Die Tonight; Rule Tomorrow is being updated every three-four weeks. In between, I wrtie one-shots and articles about TB, SVM, Alex S, and everything else that may flick my Bic ;)
Feel free to visit me at my web site There's more to it than blood, sex, and vampires...
Thank you for the review, I appreciate it very much! I have just logged in to update the story and saw it.
Best.
AlphaEN