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Reviewer: littlemadangel Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Feb 2013 5:20 PM Title: Sequel

You have the framework for a good story, but it needs to be developed.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2012 10:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:26 AM Title: Sequel

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:25 AM Title: Epilogue

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 54 - 95

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 53

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 52

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:20 AM Title: Chapter 51

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 50

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 49

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 48

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 47

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 45

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 44

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 43

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 42

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 41

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 40

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:40 PM Title: Chapter 39

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 38

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Reviewer: Twi-Mom2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 4:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

Ok this is throwing me for a loop. WTH was the light and is it going to cause damage?

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 37

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 36

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 35

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 34

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:59 PM Title: Chapter 33

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 32

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 31

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 29

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 28

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 27

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 26

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 25

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Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 37

I read his "romantic" sayings to hubby, who is currently cracking up!

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 24

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:55 AM Title: Chapter 23

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 22

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 21

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:26 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 23

It's a wonder she doesn't fall over from exhaustion. Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response:

Riight, It would be so much easier to give up but she has the will to continue on.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 21

Great chapter.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 19

That poor girl.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:39 AM Title: Chapter 17

Creepy.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 16

Poor Bella. I was so happy to see all of the updates.

Author's Response:

I forget to update here, but i'm trying to remember to. I will try harder tomorrow. 20 or more chapters up tomorrow. :D

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 15

That is a long way to walk.

Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Reviewer: NelumOnelius Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: sherylbaby Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 14

I can't imagine being in such a desperate situation, with a tiny baby, having just given birth..



Author's Response:

It would be one messed up time!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 14

Can't wait to see what happens next.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

Poor Bella.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

Well, I guess that takes care of the Jacob thing. I'm not a fan of his.

Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm not his fan either.

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, I think I'm hooked.

Author's Response:

Well I'm glad to have you... I will try to be better with updating here tomorrow.

Reviewer: texasbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

oh.... WOW



Author's Response:

Cheesy grin for the wow! I hope these next boring filler moving along chapters don't pull that wow to a boo!

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