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Reviewer: GIA80 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2018 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2016 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 3

Not at all. Very well written!  Thank you 😃

Reviewer: Eviepoo Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 11

Your stories have got to be the best that I have read! I have enjoyed reading stories that do not use slang words or inappropriate terminology.  thank you, keep them coming!

Reviewer: L01213 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2015 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! The conversation  w Teddy and Anna about Sam was beautiful. I'm eager to read the last trilogy. 

Reviewer: jjgoldmann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2014 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 32

Awesome story!

Reviewer: jjgoldmann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 31

Great chapter extremely emotional.  

Reviewer: jjgoldmann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2014 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 29

It's just heartbreaking.  

Reviewer: jjgoldmann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 28

So thrilled Elena is dead unfortunately not soon enough.

Reviewer: jjgoldmann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

LOL 

Reviewer: jjgoldmann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2014 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 18

Extremely exciting story. 

Reviewer: jjgoldmann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2014 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 11

Awesome chapter!!!

Reviewer: jjgoldmann Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2014 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 4

LOL

Reviewer: Jwb75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 32

Your writing is wonderful! Thank you! I really enjoyed the reading. Now on to Full Circle!

Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Aug 2014 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 22

You made a mistake in this chapter. In the first book when christian was shot. They removed his spleen.but in this chapter (22) in the second book when christian couldn't breathe the doctors checked him and said that he was lucky he didn't substain any injury to his spleen.....just thought you should know so u could correct it...thanks hope u have a great day

Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

On the start of this book you said if you read fifty shades more than you should start at chapter 3 cause chapter 1 & 2 are repeats of the last two chapters of more... From what I've read that is not true, I went back to fifty more and these first two chapters are not the last two chapters of more... I think you should correct that in your heading as it was a bit confusing at first, thanks 

Reviewer: Dymondgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Aug 2014 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1

On the start of this book you said if you read fifty shades more than you should start at chapter 3 cause chapter 1 & 2 are repeats of the last two chapters of more... From what I've read that is not true, I went back to fifty more and these first two chapters are not the last two chapters of more... I think you should correct that in your heading as it was a bit confusing at first, thanks 

Reviewer: mj36017 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 2

I'm now reading this through a second time. And I've made commits on the full circle. What about his sexual abuse he does to her? when he was anger and took his rage out on her and cause to a shell of person. Well half the time she wants him to stop, nearly sobbing but yet let's him continue.  He abuses her sexually, try looking into that more. Sorry does stop it. 

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 9

Yip.........Still loving ya ! Thanks xxxxxx

Reviewer: LST425 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 32

For the past three days I have read the first two books. I have laughed, I have been scared and I have cried. I have loved every word. You are a wonderful, talented writer, and I feel very privileged to be able to share in this story. Thank you very much.Off to start book III!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm glad you are enjoying them, Number 3 has turned intoa soap opera and is LONG. But it will be winding up shortly. Hope you continue to enjoy it. Thanks for letting me know. 

E

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 32

Very enjoyable storyline

Reviewer: RebeccaKukla Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 4

Gotta wonder if Christian fucked with her Pill. Just sayin'.... ~R

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 27

Brilliant..spot on .I nearly died when I was pregnant, high blood pressure and thats exactly what I said ..save my baby first please .She was 11weeks early 2lbs 8oz ,she had to fight too ,got her last rights as well .Now she is 14 and gives me headache lol but I love her to bits xxx Hey I thought Christian got rid of the playroom when they split up ?  When he asked her to go back later to the playroom ...see I did'nt miss that lol ...Your the best ...love ya 

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 22

he really never takes a telling from Ana tut tut x

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 21

Keeps getting better xxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 32

Great book now for the biggy ......loving it xxxxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 31

Ok you keep delivering ........brilliant xxxxx 

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 30

aw you are so good xxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 29

oh so sad xxxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 28

brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 25

this thing called love .....aw nice

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 24

yip another good one xx

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 20

aw great

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 5:08 PM Title: Chapter 19

great xxxx

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 18

brilliant 

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 16

brilliant x

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 13

great

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:34 PM Title: Chapter 12

bitch troll ......

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 11

keeping it real ....brilliant

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 10

brilliant

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 7

troll lol

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 6

awwwwww

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 4

Really good x

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 3

Aw so nice and getting to know the subs too x

Reviewer: bracken Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 2

Again, I love how you explain things with Flynn ....Excellent x

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2013 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 32

Passionate, breath taking, heart pounding LOVE story!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 27

Reading fast, breathing fast!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Aug 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 24

A woman standing up for herself!

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 19

Marvelous coorporate skills Mrs. Gray.

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 13

Christian is a Motherf****r.......that makes me a Smutlover! :0

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 12

Ana knows it! Body language says it all BabeZ!
Loving the 2nd book! ;$

Reviewer: olive_oil_4_u Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 8

Thought for sure Dr. Green was going to announce TWINS!!!

Reviewer: angelkrewe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 32

Thank you for making Ana and Christian so human. Having lost a child myself, I really related to the agony and helplessness you poured into these characters. You have made a love story into a real life story-- with all the ups and downs that true life often encounters.  can't wait to read your last book. I'm hopelessly lost in your story as I was for the original series. Thank you agian for continuing this wonderful tale!

Reviewer: Shenelle Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2013 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 2

Ana is a bit too much sometimes. Yeah, I get that she would like to know more but with her she pushes too much. First off she went to John on the low in order to get information. If Christian had not given permission beforehand she would have tried to get his personal info out of John. Not to say she had to tell him she was going to see John but she deliberately kept it from Christian because she wanted to get information that she should have waited to get from him, when he was ready to give to her. It didn't happen to her, it happened him. Yeah she could try to get him to talk and be there for him when he does, but he has given her a lot but she wants every grain of information and she pushes too much. That's how I see it. Hopefully in the next chapter she tells him that she went to see John.

Reviewer: Carmela_1986 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 32

You are amazing. I enjoyed even more your story than the origininal (if that is possible). I am so exited for part 3. Thank you

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 32

Nice story

Reviewer: Robsfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 31

Wow Christian is taking it badly.men.do I not.sure.how my.handled our loss.

Reviewer: paulaleja1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 17

hi i love the way you write.

until you get to chapter 17 which speaks of Colombia.

I live in Colombia and for your information Colombia is not as you describe Americans always, if you have severe problems but as it is you call themselves isolated problems.

the Verdas is brotesca offends so that you refer to this beautiful country.

 

you always believe that only somo jungle and I laugh that no imiginas the beautiful scenery and the wonderful people who have this country.

Reviewer: Oddball0612 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 28

Your story has been amazing. I felt the pain of the loss of the baby. I saw her falling down the steps. Reading your story has been like reading the story from EL James herself.  After this chapter my heart is in pain. You are talented! 

Reviewer: Ayaxav05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love the story, but chapter 1 of this is not at the end of fifty shades more, so the diclaimer about starting with chapter 3 is misleading, either that or these chapters are missing from more, i was only able to read 32 chapters in more.



Author's Response:

You haven't missed anything. More has 32 chapters and Chapter 1 of Clarity picks up there. Originally I had 35 chapters in More and then decided to end it at Chapter 32 and  make chapter 33 the  beginning of Clarity. I thought I had gone in and taken the  notes out. I'll go back and check, but  More has 32 chapters and Clarity as 32 chapters and Full Circle is still in progress. 

Reviewer: Chynna Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Feb 2013 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 32

This was absolutely a gr8 read.  I really enjoyed it.  Thnx for keeping it interesting.

Reviewer: Elisefan Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Dec 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 21

Just wanted to drop a review to let you know what an amazing job you have done with these stories. You have kept to the original charactes so unbeluevably so, while showing their development and maturity over the years. These are the best I have read on Fifty. I passed up your story originally thinking it was a true cheating story which is not my scene but I gave it a second chance not sure why and I am very glad I did.Thanks so much for sharing your talent!!

Reviewer: slynnmitchell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 32

Fabulous story. just as good as the first one. Great job!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Glad you enjoyed it.

E.

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2012 12:49 AM Title: Chapter 32

Bravo Bravo! What a fantastic story.  You had me welling up at the point when Ana is explaining to Teddy what happened to Sam.  I will keep reading.  Thanks for keeping this story alive!



Author's Response:

Thank you. On to book 3.

E.

Reviewer: jg0107 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 29

So sorry to hear that some were so critical and offended by your last chapter.  I think you did a wonderful job in covering a very sensitive topic. Pay not attention to the haters!  I really enjoy reading your work and will continue as long as you keep writing.  Thank you for keeping these characters and story alive for all of us 50 Shades fans.



Author's Response:

Hi,

Sorry I didn't respond to you sooner. Sometimes the reviews don't  always pop up for me to see. I appreciate the support and the kind words.  I appreciate your reading and leaving the kind words.

E

Reviewer: chakwayteow Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2012 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 32

I just wanted to thank you for your love and attention that went into such a beautiful story. It was an emotional rollercoaster but in the end Christian and Ana's love for each other makes up for all the angst and turmoil. Started reading book III and so far it is so precious and so well written. Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  And thank you for reading.

E.

Reviewer: Scamps Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 32

Thank you for carrying their story on! x



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading it.

E.

Reviewer: nincyh Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Sep 2012 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 32

Ah, I just love their love.
It's a good read :)

Thank you!
n-boston



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading. New book is finally posted.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: znadias24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Sep 2012 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 32

Oh Thank Goodnes! I was scared you were done writing this series!

 

I'm excited to see where you take Book 3



Author's Response:

It is posted.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 32

What a beautiful ending to the chapter Christian and Anna will always make it through.

Author's Response:

Yes they will.

Thanks.

e.

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 32

E, You are a conductor of the symphony of emotions! What a beautiful symphony it is, the low cello in the begining with her sorrow and boardom, that segways into the violins sweetly playing thru Teddy's discussion of Sam. (tissue needed), then the flutes start a happy trill as Grace comes on the scene, and then a full on awe inspiring run when Christian arrives to the rescue!! You take us thru a lovely sound with visitors of love and finish us up with a sweet concert of love at the end that makes us all sigh with a grateful smile. You have a standing ovation from all that have read this and love your work!

Looking forward to Fifty Shades Full Circle!  I would be more than happy to help Ana with designing a new office? :) Liz



Author's Response:

Sorry not to get back to this sooner. Busy week. 

I like that... 'sweet concert of love'.  

Office on the way.

E.

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 32

LOVE IT! So is Book III Fifty Shades Full Circle posted yet?

Author's Response:

Just posted.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 32

that was marvelous... Look forward ro "Full Circle"



Author's Response:

Thanks.

E

Reviewer: yayaroman08 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 32

I can't wait for the next book! Good work! Thanks! :)



Author's Response:

It's posted.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 31

so many rivoting and enchanting moments in this wonderful story, but by far my favorites are with Teddy and his little grown up thoughts...Of course, he knows Gracie can't read.... duhhhh.... that's why he drew a picture of a Monster!  Rurnt .... OMG, I knew what he was saying.... LMAO!!!  Love me some Teddy..... Laters E - Kathy

Reviewer: songii Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 32

I have really enjoyed your stories! I am also glad this does not end here... I see these two with another child or two thru adoption.

 

Thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

You have a good crystal ball.

Thanks for following.

E.

Reviewer: muses220 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 32

i love that man Christian! ana and christian's love story is one of my FS favorite stories. well done nuwriter! can't wait for the next FS saga.



Author's Response:

I love that man too. I always wish for him to be real, but that wouldn't do me any good either.  

Thanks for following.

e.

Reviewer: Boots Hopson Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 32

Good job!!  Am enjoying your story....keep up the good work. 



Author's Response:

Thanks. Busy week, sorry I'm late responding.

Thanks for following. New book is posted.

E.

Reviewer: Luvdisney2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 32

Awwww.......I feel so sad for Ana but I love how sweet Christian is acting.  Having Christian buying the breast pump and pads is just another loving thing that shows he would do anything for Ana.  I hope your future chapter keep their relationship in tact because I would hate if anything happen to them as a couple.   



Author's Response:

Christian and Ana always together in my books. What is one without the other? 

Thanks for following. New book is posted.

E.

Reviewer: GreyFan513 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 32

I loved book 2. Your writing is very good. Can't wait for book 3



Author's Response:

It's posted , finally.

thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 32

My teenage daughter said to me when she saw me typing on my iPad " Mom you are not one of those weird people that review every chapter that you read are you, oh my gosh you are such a loser!" then she laughed and kissed me on the top of my head and walk away smiling. Well yes I am one of those weird people who review after every chapter. Reviewing is my small way of saying thank you so much for taking the time to write this amazing story with the caracters that we all love so much. I am just amazed at the talent that is shared freely to anyone who wants to read it. This story and the sandandsurf stories are by far the best out there! I must admit I am a little obsessed with reading your stories. I love that you update as often as you do and yet maintain the quality that is top standard. I can not tell you enough how talented you are and how amazing your writing is! So each chapter you write I will continue to be the loser I am and review to say thank so much for sharing your talent! Now as for this last chapter oh my goodness the talk Ana had with Teddy was just PERFECT! No mother could have done better with her child. As for Christian he may not be perfect but he is the sweetest husband and the best dad a wife could ask for. You make us love these caracters even more then we did in fifty shades. Bravo! Can't wait for the next "book". Again, thank you for sharing with us!

Author's Response:

No. Thank you for reviewing. The authors appreciate every review after each chapter. It's sort of like tipping a fter a meal. We like to know if we did a good job or not. 

sunandsurf and I follow each other as well. I just love her stuff. mkmrider is another of my very favorites. I talk to both of them, they are good people and very helpful. Both are so very good at what they do. 

Tell your daughter hello and  let Mom review all she wants.  Teddy appreciates you following this as do I.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Sep 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 32

Well done my dear! Can't wait for Full Circle!!! ;-)



Author's Response:

As for Full Circle, just like Christian, it is up.

Thanks

E.

Reviewer: Solshine Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 32

Awwwww..... love, love, love this!  The conversation between Teddy and Ana about Sam had me all choked up.  How tender!  And I would LOVE to have seen the clerk if he/she recognized Christian buying that breast pump!  LOL!  



Author's Response:

I know! I'm surprised he hasn't tried to use it as some sort of sex toy. Give him time. He'll figure out a use for it. LOL

Thanks for following.

E

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 32

Ms. E,

 

I just left a review on FF, but wanted to reiterate my deep appreciation for your brilliant writing.  Your version of the C and A we have come to love, is far superior to the original.  Thanks for taking us on the ride looking forward to Full Circle.

CJ



Author's Response:

Goodness! From your lips to E.L.s ears. As you know Full Circle is up. 

E.

Reviewer: gigi9598 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 32

Well that was a fantastic story, looking forward to part three..........

Author's Response:

Finally posted.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: ChelseaDear Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 31

I've been reading and following since "More" and I just absolutely cannot get enough. I check to see if you've posted a new chapter multiple times a day... It really is a problem. :) This is by far my favorite FF I've read. You really are extremely talented and I want to say thank you for sharing your passion with us! I love how much character, dimension, and depth you've given Christian and Ana. Thank you again! Can't wait for the next chapter and what you have in store! Much love to you!



Author's Response:

Well, thank you. I post on fanfiction the same time I post here. If you sign up they will notify you when a new chapter posts, then you can come here to read it. That way you won't have to keep checking. But feel free to check as much as you like. 

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 31

Madame E, sorry to be so long getting here...I have read and reread this chapter and have savored in it's pure and honest expression of so many feelings and life affirming elements that make this so authentic. The challenges of coming home to reality and all it entails with sibling rivalries, dealing with mother nature in a creative way and being there for loved ones all that is the Ana you have given us. You have given us lumps in our throats and nodding smiles of understanding, again I curtesy to you in appreciation for what you have been able to put into words! We are so fortunate to read you, I am touched once more,Liz



Author's Response:

Lady Liz,

Why in the world haven't you written something yourself, or have you? Your reviews are far more eloquent than my writing could ever be. I am always humbled by your kind words and good thoughts. I think Ana will need a remodle soon. I'll keep you in mind. 

Thank you again.

E.

Reviewer: only1niqui Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 31

Well written as usual. So sad and you were able to still show the love and tenderness between them in such a traumatic time. Thanks for sharing



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading.

E.

Reviewer: iamkaren10 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 31

what a nice chapter, even though a little sad. i feel for them both. great read.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

E.

Reviewer: Fefe Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 31

So sad and touching the love the two of them share is so special she tries to be strong for him and at the same time he's putting on a brave face and trying to lift her up it's what marriage and love are about. Well written

Author's Response:

Yes that's what it's all about. It takes work and a lot of love to keep a marriage together. These two have it.

Thanks.

E.

Reviewer: LaurRawr Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 31

Love your writing. I wait anxiously for you to write a another chapter!!!Keep up the great work.  



Author's Response:

On the way.

E.

Reviewer: Sfuentes77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 31

Really hard for anyone to go through something like that.  There is something that Ana said that is bothering me.  I don't know if you have ever lost a child, but it is one of the worst things anyone can say to you.  "it was God's plan" or "things just happen the way they are supposed to". I'm not offended because I've heard even worse than that. Just a heads up.  Good chapter though.



Author's Response:

' I just have to trust that things happen the way they are supposed to happen. Doesn’t help any.'

I had Ana think it to herself, not someone else say it to her. That would be condescending. I think she was grasping at trying to find a reason for it, when there isn't one, and she knows it.  She did say that it doesn't help. I would never have someone else trivialize it by having someone say it to her. I'm sorry if it offended. I'm on the same page with you.

E.

Reviewer: Luvdisney2007 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 31

Such a sweet chapter after dealing with a horrible loss. Great writing as ususal.  



Author's Response:

Thank you.  Thanks for reading and reviewing.

E.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 31

So good! Such deep emotion to go through, you write it so well!

Author's Response:

Thanks again. And thanks for following. I look to see what you think after the chapters. I know who follows.

E.

Reviewer: jaxfan Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 31

Oh! Hoping for sme happy times ahead for these two!  



Author's Response:

I'm writing a happy chapter now. I prefer to write them that way.

E.

Reviewer: Zora Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 30

I am not a fan of Kate, but you actually made me like her in this chapter.  I still think she is too nosy, but at least now she has some compassion for Christian.  Great story!  Keep up the good work!

Reviewer: Kerriann Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 16

You nailed it. Thank you for more!!

Reviewer: patriciamarie Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Sep 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 1

GREAT!  GREAT! GREAT!

Reviewer: rafogel Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 30

Such a dark cloud over my favorite pair, but I trust you (our faithful) author to see them through this to happy times. And as they say, every cloud has a silver lining ; )



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Reviewer: only1niqui Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 30

Great chapter as usual......I loved the girl time and how Ana just started spilling once Kate put the pieces together.  You do such a wonderful job of letting us live through every moment with them beajse of the thought and detail that goes into each chapter. It is never rushed which I sincerely appreciate!  Are you planning a third story? 



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Reviewer: Soapnanny Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 2:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

I loved the Kate and Ana talk!! Sometimes a girl just needs her best friend! :)
Great chapter!

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Yes, she does. 

Thanks.

E.

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