Date: 28 Mar 2010 2:33 AM Title: ROAD TRIP
love the Harry & Sally moment
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 26 Mar 2010 1:57 AM Title: ANYWHERE
Hotness! I have finished reading your wonderful (no pun intended) story on FFN. But I like rereading it. Let the readers (me included) know if you change any of the chapter or add more lemons to them on this site. hehehe I would so love that! LOL! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. You make me so happy.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 7:22 AM Title: THE WHOLE TRUTH & NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH...
Please, please continue.... personally I vote for the passion.....
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review...stay tuned...
Date: 24 Mar 2010 4:31 AM Title: THE WHOLE TRUTH & NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH...
Definately when making love. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 11:03 AM Title: THE WHOLE TRUTH & NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH...
Wow i really loved this chapter, especially the dedication to Jasper in the front of the book!! The chapter turned out very well so don't doubt your mad skills lol. In my opinion i think Bella should be changed during the passion of making love becasue in a way her turning in BD was due to an accident because Reneseme broke her bones and spine etc...
Author's Response:
LOL...thank you for the review. I'm glad you liked it.
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:50 AM Title: THE WHOLE TRUTH & NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH...
I'm getting ready to read ch. 23 on FFN. But I thought I would say that your story is great here for those who don't know. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review as always. FF.net is slacking...there is a delay or something. So I probably won't be able to get that sneak peak out until tomorrow. Sorry.
Date: 23 Mar 2010 3:33 AM Title: THE WHOLE TRUTH & NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH...
hmmmm now who is going to think that dedication is to someone else...... lol
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I know...
Date: 23 Mar 2010 2:02 AM Title: GRADUATION
cant wait till you get caught up to FFn.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2010 10:37 PM Title: GRADUATION
Love you girl! :)
Author's Response:
:) ditto...
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:19 PM Title: GRADUATION
Love this chapter!! So excited to see more :) And see what everyone's reactions are going to be when they find out about Jasper and Bella and then that Emmett knew all along!! :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. It's going to be a while so buckle down. :)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 9:15 PM Title: GRADUATION
This was such an amazing chapter, you're a great writer and i am so excited for the next chapter!
By the way, i loved how you made everyone understand the way Jasper feels about his scars and that when you're with someone who loves you for you, something like a scar will only enhance youre features!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Your words mean so much to me. Thank you for your kind words. :)
Date: 21 Mar 2010 5:18 PM Title: VICTORIA
Well...here's at least one review..I know I want a lemon.
I do like this story. I am NOT looking forward to Edward coming into this story. I want to focus on this couple and this relationship.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. Lemons will come shortly...I promise...I also have one shots to post that I'm sure you will enjoy. Edward will come into the story, but there isn't much focus on him since the story really isn't about him. Thanks again!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:58 PM Title: VICTORIA
I actually really LOVED this chapter!!! The whole drunken night was awesome! I am so excited to see the progress more in their relationship now!!! :)... and about Emmett... they said he is going to visit everytime that Edward is home...won't they all start to wonder why he leaves everytime Edward is home? LOL ... and is Alice still blind to everything going on... so she couldn't see Emmett the whole time he was there either? Keep writing... can't wait to see the next one :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the reivew. The relationship will start picking up soon. Yeah, just like the wolves when you mingle your fate with theirs your future disappears. so when Emmett visits he disappears with Jasper.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 4:46 PM Title: VICTORIA
Wow -- great story. This chapter isn't crap at all. The pacing is just right. I'm glad that the sexual intimacy doesn't take hold until many months after Bella's brazeness.
On the whole the story is light and funny and very genuine. I'm only sorry that we don't get to see how their first encounter goes.
I did notice that there were a lot more spelling and grammatical errors in the ending chapters 5 through 7. You might want to proofread.
The emotional journey you take all 3 of the characters (Bella,Jasper and Emmett) is well done. I read another story recently that focuses on Jasper and Bella, but yours is much lighter. Your Bella suffers through great emotional and psychic pain, but you don't go overboard. Your Bella is a strong and confident woman who is still very feminine.
This is a wonderful story. Since Alice can't see Jasper's future, I assume at some point Jasper and Bella will meet up again with Jake and/or the Quileutes. I hope your story line will take the couple back to Texas where Bella can meet Maria, Peter and Charlotte. I wonder how you will deal with the vampire immortality choice Bella will have to make eventually. I actually dread the inevitable confrontation with Edward. There's an emotional honesty about all of the characters that I appreciate in your writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the massive reivew. Yeah, prepare yourself the typos will remain throughout the story; I stopped proof reading after the fourth chapter. I'm writing the last chapter of the story and I'm starting my next story and I don't have the time to proof read. Hopefully it doesn't take away from the story. Thank you for your insight and your kind words. :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Mar 2010 3:52 PM Title: VICTORIA
Love you babe! Keep writing. :)
Author's Response:
:D Thanks!
Date: 21 Mar 2010 12:42 PM Title: VICTORIA
Please please update some more soon!! I am loving this story so much, i can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I'm glad you are enjoying it. I may post another one tonight it depends on how much writing I get done; I'm working on the last chapter right now. So we'll see.
Date: 21 Mar 2010 6:21 AM Title: VICTORIA
i love em.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review.
Date: 18 Mar 2010 8:30 AM Title: CHRISTMAS
OMG you ended it right there!!! Keep writing... so excited to see the next one now :)
Author's Response:
I'll post it soon so you don't have to wait long. Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: 18 Mar 2010 4:40 AM Title: CHRISTMAS
I thought that I would tell you that I love you on this site as well. hehehe :) Keep writing.
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for reviewing over here too. :)
Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:31 AM Title: BIRTHDAY
amazing chapter!! It was so great that he took her skydiving!!! So fun! :) Keep writing....can't wait to see more!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Next chapter is ready...I'm just waiting for a couple more reviews and then I will post. I'm glad you liked it.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 3:13 AM Title: BIRTHDAY
can't wait till the get together...in the non-friend way.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review...it will be another couple chapters...I think. Stayed tuned...the story is done and written, I'm just taking my time posting in hopes of more reviews.
Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:52 AM Title: INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE
I am so glad I got to read Chapter 3 it was really good and absoutely loved Chapter 4, my favourite so far. I so would have copped a feel....Can't wait to read more.
Suzanne
Author's Response:
Thank you again for reviewing. I forgot to thank you for rating too. This is the first site I've used that rates and it's interesting to see. I'm glad you have a favorite that makes me giddy.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:02 AM Title: BIRTHDAY
I wish that you could just put your whole story here all at once and get this site caught up to where you are on FFN. Keep writing. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. I want to, but I'm trying to milk some reviews from this site before I start posting my next story.
[Report This]Date: 12 Mar 2010 2:01 AM Title: GETTING ACQUAINTED
Hi, Just wanted to let you know that the text for Chapter 3 is missing. This happened to my own story earlier in the week. You should just be able to add the text back in with the edit function and and submit. Really interesting story so far. Looking forward to the rest.
Suzanne
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know...I had no idea. Thanks for the review.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:18 PM Title: INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE
Haha i loved this chapter. I loved how her and jasper are getting along so well and how she wished that she could have ended her relationship with edward better. I thought it was pretty funny when she copped a feel and actually burst out laughing which earned a few weird looks from one of my sisters lol.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I get the same thing from my husband...always asking what's funny...I just have to shake my head at him. Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 08 Mar 2010 12:52 AM Title: INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE
try this website for a banner
http://mybannermaker.com/
Author's Response:
Thanks...I will.
Date: 07 Mar 2010 10:47 PM Title: INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE
awesome story...love drunk Bella! LOL Keep writing..can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I had fun writing that part.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 9:49 AM Title: GETTING ACQUAINTED
Love this! Hope you update soon!
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review. The majority of the story is written so the updates should be fast. I was hoping for at least ten reviews and then I would update, but since that doesn't seem to be happening I'm waiting at least a week for each update. Thanks for reading.
Date: 05 Mar 2010 3:45 AM Title: GETTING ACQUAINTED
awesome chapter! I love that you are creating a relationship with them slowly and not just rushing it! :)
I love your comment about the rabbit LMAO!!! it is so very true!!
As far as Edward is concerned.. it wouldn't be him if he was ok with it right away but to be honest his opinion shouldn't matter much LOL I would assume he would be upset but maybe after seeing them together will learn to live with it and then eventually be happy for them. And I don't think that Jasper should tell everyone right away.. maybe hold off for a bit as long as they are friends.. but when they actually get together then they should inform everyone :)
Keep writing...can't wait to see more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I''m glad you are enjoying the story. As I said in another review; the majority of the story is written so I'm just waiting for at least ten reviews before I post the next chapter. If I don't receive the reviews I wanted I'm waiting at least a week before I post each chapter. Thank you for reading and reviewiing.
Date: 28 Feb 2010 5:12 PM Title: MEETING
Very interesting twist to the story, can't wait to see where it goes.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
Date: 27 Feb 2010 1:02 AM Title: BACKSTORY
Hey, I'm all caught up on your wonderful story from the FF site. But I put it as a favorite here too! hehehe Thanks for the info on how to get updates e-mailed from TWCS. Keep writing. :)
Author's Response:
:)
Date: 27 Feb 2010 1:02 AM Title: BACKSTORY
Hey, I'm all caught up on your wonderful story from the FF site. But I put it as a favorite here too! hehehe Thanks for the info on how to get updates e-mailed from TWCS. Keep writing. :)
Author's Response:
Will do...I'm glad I was acutally helpful...consider yourself lucky it doesn't happen often. :D I usually created more problems than I fixed...totally unintentional though. Thanks for adding me here too.
Date: 22 Feb 2010 9:35 PM Title: BACKSTORY
This is a really good start to the story, can't wait too see what comes next!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! It gets better , swear!
Date: 22 Feb 2010 8:55 PM Title: BACKSTORY
like it so far
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! It starts off slow but it gets better, swear! :)