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Reviewer: mum2shane Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2016 3:29 PM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

I really enjoyed this story

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2014 6:06 PM Title: TEN YEARS LATER

Great end.  TY For writing and sharing

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 7:35 PM Title: GETTING ACQUAINTED

Ah so at least he gave a damn and went back.   Glad they are talking.   so no Victoria???

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 7:26 PM Title: MEETING

Loving bad ass snarky Bella

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2013 7:20 PM Title: BACKSTORY

Excellent start.   Can't wait for more.  Jake is such a pussy.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 10:15 AM Title: MEETING

Loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2013 9:41 AM Title: BACKSTORY

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jan 2012 6:54 AM Title: WHO ARE YOU...?

I have read this before. Not repetitive. Good story.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 4:34 PM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

thanks for the story!  thanks for not having bella forgive everyone and play all nice!  i really hate it when she just forgives and everyone is sooo happy!  thanks again!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 8:17 PM Title: ROAD TRIP

cool i wondered why she kept the bracelet too... that is a cool thing and to top it off it works!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the reviews!

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 7:55 PM Title: ANYWHERE

jasper is hot hot hot!!  i really like your story~

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 7:16 PM Title: THE WHOLE TRUTH & NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH...

cool they are going to have to "come back" soon i have a feeling.

Reviewer: Maria11 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: 17 Feb 2011 6:45 PM Title: GRADUATION

i really like the story and how you have grown their relationship and not just jumped into it.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:51 PM Title: GETTING ACQUAINTED

like it so far....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Feb 2011 4:06 PM Title: BACKSTORY

you betcha it's the sexiest thing you ever saw because it is jasper!!!

Reviewer: Momma-Jane Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 3:04 AM Title: INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE

Still really enjoying this.

I think that the slow building friend/relation/ship in this story is one of the reasons why I like it so much, it resembles real life more than most fics.

As for pixie-witch, I really don't care for that character @ all; even in canon she is controlling, manipulative & far too bouncy, for me that's just creepy.

Anyhoo; these are just my thoughts, I'm going back to reading more now.

 

TTFN ;) Momma J

Reviewer: Momma-Jane Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Oct 2010 1:28 AM Title: BACKSTORY

:) I really love this story.

    I actually found it first over on FF, but never got around to finish reading it, so now I'm going to have some fun and re-read it from the beginning. 

 

Reviewer: DanaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2010 11:45 PM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

Bravo! Great story and I am truely sad to see it end!

Reviewer: DanaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 11:23 PM Title: VIDEO CAMERA

YOu know what...FUCK Twilighted! I think your story rocks!!! I never go to that other site anymore anyway just here and FF so screw them, it's their loss!!

Reviewer: DanaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2010 8:17 PM Title: THE WHOLE TRUTH & NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH...

:) Lovin' every minute of this story!

Reviewer: DanaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 1:57 AM Title: GETTING ACQUAINTED

:)

Reviewer: DanaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2010 1:20 AM Title: BACKSTORY

So far,so good!

Reviewer: midnight_moon Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Aug 2010 12:36 AM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

great story really enjoyed the polt line and that it was J&B cant wait to read more of your lititure creations



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I have two more stories going on...check them out.

Reviewer: breakingdawnknoitall Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2010 7:04 PM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

i loved it!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 2:40 PM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

Well I finished your wonderful story. I really enjoyed reading it. Thank you so much for sharing it. Now I need to actually do some work (my job) and maybe make some time for writing the next chapter on my story...lol

Loved It --- Kat

Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to review even though the story is completed.  Did you check out the one shots that went with the story?  Well, if you find any more free time, I have another story that is doing pretty well.  Check it out if you get a chance.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 3:23 AM Title: WHO ARE YOU...?

Great job.  I hate to see this story come to an end soon,     Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 2:46 AM Title: TEN YEARS LATER

Will it be Alice or Edward?    Kat



Author's Response:

Guess you'll have to wait until tomorrow to find out, huh?  Sweet dreams!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 2:22 AM Title: THE PAST, PRESENT & FUTURE

I'm so excited.  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  Bed will have to wait. 

Kat



Author's Response:

Is it wrong that I'm glad you are depriving yourself of sleep to read my story?  LOL...hope you liked it.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2010 12:54 AM Title: JASPER'S VISIT PART I

Alice is going to be trouble.  Kat

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 11:01 PM Title: TEXAS

Still loving this.  Naughty Bella and Hot Jasper are just too much.   lol    Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 8:57 PM Title: VIDEO CAMERA

I'm still loving the story.  I'm really hoping that you don't put Edward and Alice together (not a favorite pairing of mine).  It's your story and I'll read it anyway - but I can hope...lol               Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing again.  No Edward and ALice aren't my favorite pairing either.  You won't see that!  :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 4:34 PM Title: THE WHOLE TRUTH & NOTHING BUT THE TRUTH...

What a great job describing the loss that she felt in not only losing Edward but the entire Cullen family...and then again losing Jacob and the entire pack family.  What a great combination of tragedies that you have woven into this story for Bella.   Great Work!      Kat



Author's Response:

Hi...good to see you back today.  Thanks for the review again.

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 2:47 AM Title: VICTORIA

I didn't think that the chapter was crap.  I really liked it.  I know what you mean about losing motivation sometimes - it happens to all of us - I think.  Anyway, I look forward to checking out the next chapter tomorrow.

Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing again.  I'm looking forward to your reviews tomorrow.  :)  Time to get back to rl, huh?  I hear ya...thanks again!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2010 12:22 AM Title: BIRTHDAY

I love Emmett but he has really bad timing...lol          Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!  Love your story and I think its cool that you are reviewing mine!  :D  I know I'm a nerd, but it can't be helped.  :)

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 11:16 PM Title: INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE

I love that things are progressing slowly and realistically between the two of them.    Kat



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 10:05 PM Title: MEETING

Great job of handling the Alice/Jasper break up and them moving on.  So many stories that I have read have left me feeling like the breakup was either forced or incomplete.  Anyway - great job.     Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks so much!  I hear ya...I tried to make the story as realistic as possible...kinda hard when we play in the world of the supernatural, but anyway...hope you like the rest of the story!

Reviewer: MidnightKat Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2010 9:24 PM Title: BACKSTORY

You have me curious as to where you are going to take this story.  I'll read on to find out.  Great start.    Kat



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Well, I hope you like it.

Reviewer: bingohappy29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2010 4:00 AM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

that was gppd i liked it going to see what eles you have to read

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Hope you like my other stuff.

Reviewer: Jadiona Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jun 2010 5:48 AM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

I just finished this story and maybe I'll make you a banner for it as well



Author's Response:

LOL...Oh thanks.  If you do, I can't wait to see what you come up with.  :)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 2:10 PM Title: BACKSTORY

No problem.  I feel like I want to let author's of completed stories know that I read their story and what I thought.  Though I don't say a whole lot.  They all deserve recognition for hard work.



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: sweetmel21 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2010 12:56 PM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

I truly enjoyed your story and I look forward to more of your work.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review.  It was nice of you to review even after the story was finished.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: charv241 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Apr 2010 8:42 PM Title: BACKSTORY

i used to have the same schedule lol...liking where this is going so far!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review even though the story is finished.  I hope you enjoy the rest.

Reviewer: DestanyRose Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2010 3:49 AM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

Wow I am so sad to see this end but what an ending.  I am so happy Bella finally got her closure and the Cullen's back in her life.  I am sure it will take awhile for everything to be back to semi normal but at least it was a start.  I am looking forward to reading your next story.  Awesome work.

>



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I appreciate all of them.  Hopefully, you are still awake because I'm posting a teaser of my next story tonight.  :)

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Apr 2010 5:40 AM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

That was one of the best stories i have read..You always kept me looking for you udates..can't wait to see what your next story will hold.I lo ve how you ended it with edward and alice.



Author's Response:

Thanks!  I'm so happy you liked it.  It's a bit nerve wrecking putting your first story on for display.  Thanks again!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:53 PM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

that was the perfect way to end the story



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed it...

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 1:52 PM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

that was the perfect way to end the story

Reviewer: Nette91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 6:10 AM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

Very nice.  Can't wait for your next story!!!



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:32 AM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

The End of the wonderful story.  It is kind of sad here too!  But I can't wait to here more from you,  you sexy little vixen!  hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

*blushes*

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:30 AM Title: AFTERMATH

I'n so proud that your story is almost complete on TWCS also.  I'm sure that readers here love it just as much as I.  Can't wait for the full Peter/Bella experience as I have gone to calling it.  hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the support!

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 5:03 AM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

I loved this story, and can't wait for the new one! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Add me as a favorite author here or on ff . net and you will be alerted when I start posting.  :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:41 AM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

woo hoo......  cant wait till the new story.   text or email when is out.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'll probably start it over on ff . net so just add me as a favorite author and you should be alerting when it's up.  I'm only on chapter five so it will probably be a little while longer.  :)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 4:30 AM Title: ACCEPTANCE AND UNDERSTANDING

Yay, they finally accepted them! This was such an amwazing story and i loved it so much. It's a shame that the story ended but it was a great way to end it.  I can't wait for the Peter/Bella story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you are looking forward to the Peter story.  I'm having fun writing it out right now.  I actually just finished chapter five.  :)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:50 AM Title: AFTERMATH

Awesome chapter, really. It's a little sad that this is the last but one chapter of the story but all good things must come to an end i suppose. I seriously can;t wait for the next chapter :-D



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  What the hell...I'll post the last chapter before I go to bed!  :)

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:26 AM Title: AFTERMATH

I love some sexy Major! I'll take Edward to help him get over Bella!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review...hell yea...I'll take either.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2010 3:20 AM Title: AFTERMATH

anything p&b will be kewl.

hmmm  how many shirts did J have?



Author's Response:

LOL...Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 2:33 PM Title: WHO ARE YOU...?

I think ,fight scenes aree like ballet...you choreograph them.  Move for move, line for line, exchange for exchange.  You did really well.  Repetative works here in the way you used it.  Bella has not killed before and is trying hard to avoid it.  It's a bit like her trying to talk him down from a window ledge.   Whatever needs saying, however many times iy needs to be said.  Doing that only makes the scene far more believable than it would be without it.  I think the chapter is terrific!  And the end fit in perfectly.

Kudos!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the review.  Thanks for putting some thought into.

Reviewer: chelle cullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 8:58 AM Title: WHO ARE YOU...?

i enjoyed this chapter and i thought the fight scene was cool xx lokking forward to the next chapter xx



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Glad you liked the fight scene it was difficult to write.

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 6:49 AM Title: WHO ARE YOU...?

it was awsome



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you think so!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 4:45 AM Title: WHO ARE YOU...?

go bella



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 3:48 AM Title: WHO ARE YOU...?

Wonderful chapie as usual!  hehehe  I'm waiting patiently for more from you you little sneak!  hehehe  Start posting that wonderful story soon!  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  It might be a little while.  I want to write the majority of it out before I start posting.  I'm on chapter five right now; I'm almost finished with it.  Hopefully, it won't take me too long.  :)

Reviewer: Nette91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:28 AM Title: WHO ARE YOU...?

Nice Job!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2010 12:20 AM Title: WHO ARE YOU...?

I really liked the fight scene, it was quite believable for as believable as a vampire fight can be lol. I hope you update some more soon and i am so looking forward to the Peter/Bella story you mentioned as i'm sure it will be brill just like this story :-D



Author's Response:

Thanks...I'm really excited about it.  So far I only have four chapters and I'll start working on the fifth this weekend.  Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you liked the fight scene...I didn't realize how difficult it would be to write.

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 10:50 PM Title: THE CULLENS

Please get us the next chapter. Can't decide who the male will be..



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Soon... :)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 1:32 PM Title: THE CULLENS

Oh no you ended on another juicy cliffy, please update soon. I'm dying to know what happens next.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Probably update tonight or tomorrow.  Thanks!

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 12:11 PM Title: THE CULLENS

I was great..can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review...glad to see a new reviewer.  :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 5:28 AM Title: THE CULLENS

sorry but esme is naive.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2010 4:48 AM Title: THE CULLENS

You sexy beast writer, you!  hehehe  Give those Cullens hell!  hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

hahaha!  Thanks!

Reviewer: Mana Lusk Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2010 3:46 AM Title: TEN YEARS LATER

wow love where the story is leading.i knew one time Rose was going to follow Emmett.Can't wait to see who has shown up ot the party now.



Author's Response:

Thanks foe the review.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 9:27 PM Title: TEN YEARS LATER

I'm so glad that everyone on this site is finally getting to read all of your yumminess!  hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  :D

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:20 PM Title: TEN YEARS LATER

i think that it is edward or alice. can't wait



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review...will be revealed soon.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 4:07 PM Title: TEN YEARS LATER

Seriously...... Wow! That was such an amazing kickass chapter and i'm dying to know who it was that gasped though my bet would be on Alice for some reason. I am really looking forward to the next update. Hope you are able to update soon :-D



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I love seeing your reviews.  Next chapter should be up soon.

Reviewer: dacoops Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 3:43 AM Title: INTERVIEW WITH A VAMPIRE

I just rewatched Interview with a Vampire and I saw alot of Edward in Louie too!! LOL 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Yay!  I'm so glad it wasn't just me!

Reviewer: dacoops Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Apr 2010 3:28 AM Title: GETTING ACQUAINTED

First of all i like the slow burns too, so keep it up! Secondly I also have a rabbit so no problems there! Thirdly, Edward will probably freak out, thats just him. I also think that when Bella is ready for them to know it should be a joint decision... Bella still feels betrayed by Alice at the very least! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the great review.  I'm glad you enjoy it...there is more too come.   :)

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 10:07 PM Title: THE PAST, PRESENT & FUTURE

woo hoo vampy bella



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 5:50 PM Title: THE PAST, PRESENT & FUTURE

Oh wow that was such a brilliant chapter and i've got to say i am totally in love with the wedding Claddagh ring, it's absolutely gorgeous but understated as well. I am really excited for the next chapter as it means that Bella is gonna be a vampire soon lol. :-D



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you like the Claddagh ring; it means more to me that people like it since the picture I posted is a picture of my actual wedding ring.

Reviewer: Nette91 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 4:31 PM Title: THE PAST, PRESENT & FUTURE

REALLY liked this chapter... nice job...  congrats on the job!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and the congrats!  :)

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Apr 2010 3:13 PM Title: THE PAST, PRESENT & FUTURE

You are a great writer!  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!  Hey, did you get my email?

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 4:45 AM Title: COMING HOME

Nicely tense and thoroughly painful...good one!  Poor Bella!  I know what she needs.  She needs a visit from Emmett.  Just Emmett.  He was always able to make her smile and see the bright side.  Loved Jasper's reaction; as angry and upset as he was he had the patience and gentleness to wait for Bella to find the words. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I'm glad you enjoyed it...more to come!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 2:58 AM Title: COMING HOME

yay!  Jasper to the emotional rescue!  hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

:)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Apr 2010 12:34 AM Title: COMING HOME

Yay another update! Thanks for updating so soon and don't worry the chapter wasn't too short, it was really good and explained Jasper's travel from the Cullens to Peter and Char's as well as Bella's incident. I am really looking forward to the next update i hope your pc isn't out of comission for too long. :-)



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Oops.  I meant to take that part out...my computer is fine...that happen while I was writing the story.  Next update should be this weekend or tomorrow.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 4:29 PM Title: JASPER'S VISIT PART II

Oh wow, such a good chapter, i'm glad you did a 'normal' attack situation as most of the times it's a vampire attack or something of the like so... Looking forward to the next chapter, hope it's soon!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:20 AM Title: JASPER'S VISIT PART II

go peter and charlotte!!!    love the tattoo idea



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:11 AM Title: JASPER'S VISIT PART II

Good chapter. I've already read it on FFN, but I love that Char saves her.  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks as always.  Since you have been so awesome I think I'm going to send you the first chapter of my Peter/Bella story.  PM me on ff.net with your email address if you are interested and I'll send the first chapter.  :)  Thanks for all the reviews.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2010 3:02 AM Title: JASPER'S VISIT PART I

first half is one of my most fav parts of the story



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  That's awesome; I'm thrilled you have a favorite part.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 10:35 PM Title: JASPER'S VISIT PART I

you better write more soon because i can't take that kind of cliffy



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Should post this evening.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:42 PM Title: JASPER'S VISIT PART I

Oh no, you just had to leave it there didn't you?! Please update fairly soon, please!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I know...I'm a brat.

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 12:35 PM Title: JASPER'S VISIT PART I

I hope that everyone else appreciated the hotness of you and your jasper.  hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for your wonderful reviews.

Reviewer: OonaCullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 11:42 AM Title: BULL RIDING FUN

Well now  i am hooked! Love the story!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  Glad to hear it; thanks for reading.  Check out my outtake!

Reviewer: goldfishie1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 7:07 AM Title: BULL RIDING FUN

Holy hot sexy Major!! I would love to see him in that sexy uniform! Preferably here with me!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  I hear ya...the major is coming up next.  Check out my outtake from chapter 13.

Reviewer: ein_gutes_leben Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 5:11 AM Title: BULL RIDING FUN

oh you are cruel.... haha. I can't wait



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review...I know!  I'm a brat!  :D  Check out my outtake/one shot!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 3:57 AM Title: BULL RIDING FUN

This chapter was delicious!  hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 2:38 AM Title: BULL RIDING FUN

oooooohhhh   this looks to be a yummy next chapter.   and I  Love the bike sex



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review!  Check out my outtake!

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:47 AM Title: BULL RIDING FUN

that was a way to end a chapter



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Check out my outtake for chapter 13!

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2010 1:06 AM Title: BULL RIDING FUN

Oh now, that is really evil to be leaving it there. I love the whole way your doing the Bella/Jasper relationship. I am dying for the next chapter, please update soon!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review.  Check out the outtake for chapter 13!

Reviewer: trbuie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 6:39 AM Title: TEXAS

Just giving you your just props!  hehehe  Love you.  :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for still reviewing.  It means the world to me.

Reviewer: ellaryne Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 5:55 AM Title: TEXAS

i think that it is vicki



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review....are you sure?  ;)

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2010 4:52 AM Title: TEXAS

I am so totally in love with this story, this was such an awesome chapter update. Is Bella gonna speak to or see the rest of the Cullen soon? Should be immensely interesting to see what happens. Please update more soon :-)



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  The Cullen's will appear, but not for a while.

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Mar 2010 4:23 PM Title: VIDEO CAMERA

Wow such a cool update!! I am so excited to see where you take the story next!



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review.  Update should be soon!

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:57 PM Title: VIDEO CAMERA

Love you! hehehe  :)



Author's Response:

;P

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Date: 28 Mar 2010 3:40 PM Title: ROAD TRIP

Love you!  :)



Author's Response:

DITTO  :D

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