[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2015 12:51 AM Title: Outtake 2 - An Audience with the Chief
awesome story to re-read thanks for posting ;D
Date: 30 Mar 2014 3:28 AM Title: Outtake 2 - An Audience with the Chief
That was great, thanks so much for that little window into Edward and Bella's life. Meeting the father of your girl is never easy, but this went pretty well, especially in the circumstances.
Date: 30 Mar 2014 3:14 AM Title: Outtake 1 - Christmas with the Cullens
Not a very happy Christmas for the Cullens, without Edward and Bella. I think they had a lot better holiday with Ben, Angela, Abby, Charlie and Sue and her kids! Emmett and Rose are just n ot my favorite people in this story!
Date: 30 Mar 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 41
Loved this story, even the parts that hurt Edward or Bella, because they held on, loved each other and made it better! I hope you continue with the sequel, Living Life!
Date: 30 Mar 2014 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 40
Very nice New Years Eve, especially since Edward made it through quite well! Emmett made an effort to be civil, so maybe in time the brothers will be okay again.
Date: 30 Mar 2014 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 39
I would call that a really good Christmas, not just for Bella and Edward, but Ben and Angela too!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 38
Yes, Bella, just push back the crap like Edward said, just until the holiday is over. They really do need a good air-clearing talk, for sure!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 37
They are so good for each other! This is going to be an amazing Christmas!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 36
Boy, do I feel stupid! It never occurred to me that Rose and Emmett would be so closed-minded as to think that about Edward! I don't blame Edward for telling off his brother like that, it was probably necessary for everyone concerned. I only felt bad for Esme and Carlisle, and a bit for Alice and Jasper.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 35
What are Em and Rose, two-year-olds? They could behave and pretend for one lousy day, especially at Thanksgiving! I am so glad we never had family warfare any Thanksgiving I can remember! It was so cute when Carlisle swore never to shop for cranberries again!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 34
I thought Rosalie was Bella's best friend but obviously not, if she can be so nasty to Edward, plus her attitude must rub off on Emmett. I kind of like that you portray them as real, and not the lovey dovey , perfect family that never exists in real life!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 33
Embarassing and hard to hear for Charlie, maybe, but hilarious to read! Boy, did Bella ever tell off Jacob! Poor Billy!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 32
No long review, just a note to tell you how absolutely darling that chapter was! I loved it!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 31
I'm thinking there may not be trouble from Charlie, but maybe from Jacob? I don't know, but I hope it doesn't bother Edward too much and he and Bella just have a nice visit with her dad!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 30
The way Bella is holding on to Blake, I imagine that plan of Edward's might get advanced somewhat. I hope she takes the high school teaching job and wins in court against Newton! She seems to be fitting into the Cullen family with no problem.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 10:13 AM Title: Chapter 29
Just what you want to have when suing in court, a shifty lawyer who never loses! There's another one who is shocked to hear Edward has a girlfriend!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 28
Maybe not the best way for Charlie and Edward to meet, but it went rather well. On the other hand, Renee is on my list as probably the most self-centered, uncaring mother I have read about in a very long time! She should be ashamed of the way she treats Bella and what she said about Edward!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 27
Can't say I blame Bella for the way she feels, her always having to be the adult in the relationship with her mother! Now she gets a wild hair about adopting a baby, and Bella sees it happening all over again. It's great that Edward can ease her mind about all this!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 26
Why am I not surprised that Edward has a five year plan? That is just so him! I had to laugh when Bella figured out why there was blood on the sheet! Edward must be so proud!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 25
God bless the poor guy, he was so worried and it turned out fine, especially for a first time! They are just so great together, I love this story!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 24
Mike is a slimy son-of-a-bitch if ever there was one! I hope Bella sues his socks off and they kick him out of that school! Edward was so sweet to take her mind off the problems she has! I believe they will be okay, just as he told her.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 8:30 AM Title: Chapter 23
Is it any wonder she loves this man? Could he be any sweeter, or caringor considerate? He's got so many more good things, it's easy to factor in the OCD! Hope Rose and Emmett make up and work out theirproblems.
Date: 29 Mar 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
In many ways this was kind of a cute chapter, with serious overtones! I love Charlie's caring for Bella, as well as Edward's. Charlie pointing out that Jacob would never call to check on Bella's safety the way Edward did is rather telling. Glad to see that Charlie has Sue in his life, so he's not alone. Too bad Bella had to see it in action, that is a shock for a child at any age!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 21
I had a sneaking hunch that Rose was pregnant when Emmett called and then ruined the moment for Bella and Edward by showing up looking bad! I loved that the brothers kind of made peace with each other, now Edward needs to tell Emmett to go tell Rose he loves her and wants the baby!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 7:17 AM Title: Chapter 20
I hope Bella quits freaking out over the fact she loves Edward, and oh yeah, her mom is adopting a baby! That was so cool when Edward calmly laid it all out how Renee and Phil would be okay and he and Bella would lend a hand, if needed! Bless his heart, he really is the voice of reason in this!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 19
Tickled me that Edward is taller and more intimidating than Jacob and he ran him off, protecting his woman! Looks like he got his reward, too, when Bella told him she was getting the shot so they could have sex! A couple weeks should be sufficient for Edward to wrap his mind around that epic moment! Maybe they will go talk to Jasper and convince him Edward doesn't hate him!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward did real well at Alice and Jasper's party, but I would love to see those pictures they took!
Date: 29 Mar 2014 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 17
How embarassing to be caught like that, in your own place and at his age, too! Edward is just having all kinds of new and exciting experiences with Bella! She sure calmed his fears of passing on his genetic OCD tendencies, and making him dream of a future with her at the same time! Sure did shock his mama when she found out they were going to the Halloween party!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 16
People are just going to have to get in the habit of calling ahead or knocking first, something!By the way, Mike is a horrible jerk, screwing teachers in school like that! What is he thinking, doing that around little kids?
Date: 28 Mar 2014 10:46 AM Title: Chapter 15
I AM SO LOVING THIS COUPLE! They are as cute together as I thought they would be, and I really liked when Bella told Rose off! Can't wait until she tears Emm ett a new one!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 14
Who has showed up in Bella's apartment? Obviously someone she doesn't want to see!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
Alice shrieks, Carlisle hugs him and applauds, and Esme is dreamimng of green-eyed grandbabies! I think they are all thrilled, to say the least! Edward updating his Facebook page was sweet!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
What a day! Alice has another little boy, Edward takes care of the first one and Bella's dad gets shot! The threads connecting her to the Cullens are amazingly intertwined!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 11
I can just picture Emmett with his mouth hanging open, dumbstruck at seeling his brother kissing a girl! I'm on Edward's side, why wouldn't he be able to care for Landon, like anyone else? It's so very encouraging that Edward wants to be a better person for Bella!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 9:26 AM Title: Chapter 10
That was quite a Sunday, all things considered! Edward had a restful night in someone else's bedding, showered in a strange bathroom, ate breakfast out, talked for hours and kissed the heck out of Bella! Some progress I would say!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh boy, I told you I loved Bella, now I love Edward too! What a sweetheart he is under all that fussiness . It makes me want to hug him just like Bella does! I know why she can see that great man insider him, I'm beginning to see a glimpse of him myself!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
God bless Bella Swan, she is one of the good ones! With a heart like that, no wonder she enjoys teaching first-graders! I got a little misty-eyed when she was cleaning and bandaging Edward! That was such a sweet thing thing to do for him, then she goes and gets his gear and feeds his cat and makes him stay the night. This is a truly nice person and she does have some feelings for him!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh please, please someone help this poor, disturbed man! It sounds so much like he's sinking into depression, and that worries me ! Bella's hairdresser is a hoot, and a really bad gossip, since he can't get names straight!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 8:14 AM Title: Chapter 6
Looks like I'm dealing with slightly crazy people, and I really like that! My sister and I have always been like Rose and Bella and everyone thought we were nuts, too! It's just fun to be silly, now and again!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
With Carlisle being a doctor, I wonder why Edward has never been evaluated and diagnosed? There has to be some medication or therapy that would help. It's just sad that he hurts himself trying to be so clean!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
I want to find out what Edward thought when he saw Bella for the first time, because he definitely made an impression on her!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm thinking Rose is comfortable with Edward because, first, she's a nice person, and secondly because her best friend is a bit odd, sort of like Edward. This makes me think Carlisle is right when he tells his youngest that there is definitely someone out there for him!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
Okay, I'm not sure Edward will appreciate her, but I already love Bella, partly because of her relationship with Rose, but mostly, it's her personality! She is my kind of girl, snarky and a bit weird! I can tell this is going to be a really fun read!
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 1
The poor little OCD thing! I like a bit of organization in my life, too, but this is beyond ridiculous! The only hope I hold out for this guy is Lincoln, because a person this set in their way having a cat is just a bit out of character!
[Report This]Date: 08 Nov 2012 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 1
Oh I totally forgot to rate this story!
Date: 08 Nov 2012 9:35 PM Title: Outtake 2 - An Audience with the Chief
I don't even know why you only have like 30 reviews for this amazing story. At first I thought this Edward will be so boring, but you really make him interesting and make want to know more about his life. Are you going to write a future-take or something in the future? Because I really like to see how their lives going to be when they have children like they planned. I have to admit I want to read more about Daddyward.
PS: Write more stories like this. I love it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 2
Good chapters so far. Bella can share Mr. lincoln with Edward. ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 8:28 PM Title: Outtake 2 - An Audience with the Chief
Perfect. This was a perfect ending to an amazing story. Ugh... *GUSH*
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 8:16 PM Title: Outtake 1 - Christmas with the Cullens
OMG, this had me in absolute tears. I totally understand that family. Emmett and Rose are just so selfish. All he had to do was tell her that was his brother's chair. UGH.....assholes.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 7:49 PM Title: Chapter 40
TEARS!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 36
YES! *touchdown dance!* OMG! This had me in tears but YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Go you, Edward! Go. YOU!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2012 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 33
THIS WAS THE MOST ENTERTAINING THING I HAVE EVER READ! EVER! I CAN'T STOP LAUGHING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 30
I get it, I really do, but Bella needs to stop being so hard on herself, and stubborn. But, slowly she's figuring it out.
That's GREAT news from Ms Cope! I hope the law suit goes well and that she gets to keep doing what she loves.
[Report This]Date: 10 Jul 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
Such a sweet man! Charlie, too! I'm glad she has her two strong men in her life, especially when Renee is a bitch!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 8:43 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awe, I'm glad she took it there. The way he is, he would have never enjoyed himself, worrying too much about everything else. That was a great first time for him!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 23
I am so glad they said it to each other!! Such a sweet chapter!
[Report This]Date: 09 Jul 2012 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 22
Holy cow! You know, I was thinking something was off with Rose. For her to have SUCH an attitude, this makes perfect sense!
Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 19
Jacob is a douche bag!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 9
I just want to squeeze the shit out of him not gonna lie.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 8
I cheered Bella on this whole chapter. I hope she can help him out noone deserve to live in emotional pain.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 5
Oh man I just feel so bad for his compulsions. I want to help him so much. Great chapter.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
Poor Bella was caught off guard. Is Edward more than just exteremly OCD? That little fact about Rose made me love her more.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 2
I am completely in love with this Bella. Her relationship with her mother and Rose remind me of mine own with my mom and my roommate. After a date like her I would consider being alone with cats too.
Date: 07 Jul 2012 1:35 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have a friend like your Edward and it's very hard to get her to change her routine. I look forward to seeing how this story progresses.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 10:04 PM Title: Outtake 2 - An Audience with the Chief
I loved this story. Hated Rose. Hated Emmett...how could they treat Edward that way? UGH! Anyhow, I loved it!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 16
That was HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 14
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 12
OMG! CHARLIE!
LMAO! Dr. X! I can't WAIT for them all to figure this tangled mess out!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
WAY TO GO EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
Bella might think she's in over her head, but I believe Edward is going to really work on things. This is going to end up being really good for him.
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
OMG am I glad Bella found him! That poor boy!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
Awe, poor Edward. Emmett has to get it through his head there's more than just a phase going on here.
LOL At Bella!
[Report This]Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, it's so weird how the world is so small! Peter is hilarious!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 5
My brother has episodes like this. He's not bad - at all - but there will be times when his OCD comes out full force. He's an EMT so he uses a bar of soap in 2-3 days where as a regular person would have it for a little bit. Things have to be in a certain order, if I want to play a ps3 game of his I have to take the case out, put the game in the system, then put the case halfway back into it's place so he knows what I'm using if I turn the TV off. Once I go to change out the game it has to be right side up in the box, title on top, picture straight, and then place it back where it came from. Same with books or CDs. I'm glad I worked as a Page at my local library for a few years in HS! LOL!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 3
Awe, I'm glad Edward approves of Rose!
[Report This]Date: 05 Jul 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 1
I loved this story..