Date: 08 Jul 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 34: Rejection
Post pardon sucks. I suffered pretty bad the first few weeks. Add on Bella's absent mother...it's a struggle. Great update. A great expression of feelings.
It feels awesome that someone with personal experience thinks I did a good job :-)
I have had one too many reviews from anonymous readers that say that Bella's a bitch for not caring about the child and that she should get her head out of her ass, etc.
Date: 07 Jul 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 33: Baby
I know it must be scary for Bella, but she better face reality that it is her daughter.. but I have a feeling it won't go that eaisly, and so times your body doesn't let you know your pregnant, I didn't know I was pregnant till I was almost 6months.
So you have personal experience then :-)
Date: 05 Jun 2013 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 29: I'm Fine
I knew I should have waited to read this story... I knew once I started, I would not be able to stop. Now I have no chapters left to read.
Thanks for a wonderful story to read. LOVED IT so far and as you can tell cant wait for more.
God, do I know that feeling! :-P But don't worry! My betas are fast workers :-) I'll have another chapter up for you in no time :-D
Date: 20 May 2013 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 26: The Wedding
after reading the prolouge again, I am thinking that with all the stress with George to come, that she didn't relize she was pregnant with Edwards baby and was father along then she knew and she has gone into premature labor..maybe i am totally wrong, but can not wait for more.
Date: 10 May 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 20: Meet Again
Great chapter, I wish her well in her new life with George.. I hope Edward finds a nice girl... and I hope Bella will leave Edward alone and not flaut her relaionship with G in front of him...and I would hope that his parents wouldn't suggest they come to dinner or anything that would be just wrong, and how can they have open arms for Bella for what she has done to there son..He did nothing wrong it was all her insecurities that lead to this..
Date: 09 May 2013 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 19: 2 Years Later
I really hope when Edward makes a reappearance, he has moved on and the story can end with Bella pining for him. The fact that she doesn't even know Alice's boyfriend's name says so much about her. Selfish, selfish, selfish.
Date: 02 May 2013 7:45 PM Title: Chapter 18: Fix It
i hope she dont go to chicago and she needs to stay and listne to what edward has to say running away wont maker it better for her if she sitll loves him and she needs to saty
I'm sorry, but she's going to Chicago...:-)
Date: 29 Apr 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Truth Won't Always Set You Free
If she won't listen to him then she needs to leave. Do not room with Alice anymore. That is her brother and it is not fair to her. Bella wants a new start and so she should just move on. Next Edward could not get it up. But the intent was there, he made out with that girl and would have slept with her. Bella was the reason he was so upset, but you would think he would have at least waited.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Truth Won't Always Set You Free
I know she's hurting, but she's really over doing it. She's the one that broke up with him. Like it or not, she hurt him and set all of this in motion. She at least owes it to him to hear him out instead of shutting him out of her life. Again, I've been there, I know she's hurt, but it shouldn't rob her of her common sense.
Date: 29 Apr 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 17: The Truth Won't Always Set You Free
Why won't she let him explain I know she is hurting but if you love someone that much you can get through it.. but I guess she really doesn't love Edward like she said she does..
Date: 28 Apr 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 16: Fight
This chapter is a hold your breath heart breaker. You captured the torment of this situation, one that would make it hard to breath normally again for a long time for both of them.
I so look forward to the next part of the story and very curious about Alice's reaction to this emotional trauma.
Date: 24 Apr 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 16: Fight
poor B. Makes me wonder though if a) mike didnt set the whole thing up b) there was more than just alcohol in the drinks and c) that the only slept in the same bed but didnt actually have sex.
Well, you're close :-P It's either a, b, or c :-P
Date: 24 Apr 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 16: Fight
GAH!!!! I'm a hormonal mess and then I read this and now I can't stop the tears. So sad , but a great update. In my humble opinion you best chapter. Awesome.
sorry about the tears, I guess I forgot to warn readers here that this would be an emotional chapter...
Thank you for the praise! I am quite pleased with this chapter :-D
Date: 20 Apr 2013 11:20 PM Title: Chapter 15: Drinking and Thinking
So first he has to wait years for her to even give him a shot at dating her. Fast forward to him having to deal with her not only taking him for granted, but dumping him in a fit of anger. Now after she dumps him, he gets drunk and sleeps with someone else and now he'll be the jerk. Don't get me wrong, I love your story, it just seems like the poor guy can't catch a break.
I just hope she doesn't decide to torture him and play victim as a result because even though this situation is awful, she broke up with him and she should at least let him explain what happened. What he can remember anyway. After all, she was being completely unfair.
I simply love to read how you all differ in opinion :-) and how you're able to look at it from different perspectives :-) You're obviously on Edward's side while others are on Bella's :-) Oh, I love it!! :-D
Date: 20 Apr 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 15: Drinking and Thinking
Aww man! I hoped that wouldn't happen. Damn it Edward!!!! Damn it Bella, but damn it Edward a bit more. Loved the update.
Lucky thing that the story is far from over. Still a lot of things waiting to happen :-D