Date: 09 Oct 2014 3:16 AM Title: And I thought it would take several attempts…
I suppose that white-hot pain was conception taking place and Ness figured it out. I was as surprised as Jake when she felt movement already! Now we can look forward to Emily's transformation and the new addition to the Black family! This is probably going to get a little exciting!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 3:08 AM Title: Phone calls, worried husbands and pacing the floor
You would think after all this time that Sam would have enough control to avoid a tragedy like this! Thank heaven Emily was brave enough to ask Bella to change her! It might make for a strange marriage, full vampire and shapeshifter, but at least they don't have to lose each other!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 1:34 AM Title: A disappearance
Good thing Ness has her pragmatic mother to rein in her emotional father! This whole growing too fast, getting married, and having a baby thing is a bit much for poor Edward! If he was human, he would need tranquilizers!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 1:14 AM Title: A wedding
That's a lot of fuss and bother, two weddings in the same week! It sounds as if all wnt well, though. Now I'm curious as to what Nessie has up her sleeve?
Date: 09 Oct 2014 12:52 AM Title: A confrontation with a teen vampire-human hybrid
My daughter would have a fit if I wanted to eat a shark or a dolphin! It's going to take Bella constantly reassuring him, for Edward to digest the idea of his baby girl and Jake the wolf boy!
Date: 09 Oct 2014 12:04 AM Title: mediator to vampire and werewolf
I knew it! It would take someone very special to father Nessie's baby, after all! It was kind of sweet that Kaure was so happy to see Bella , even when she noticed she wasn't human any longer.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 11:13 PM Title: Humidity, my teenager in a bikini, and a possible fight between werewolf and vampire
Poor Edward! I guess it was an automatic response and he just couldn't control himself! I kind of see where this is heading, I think. It looks like Ness is worried that her cycles will come to an end with her full maturity. This would end any chance of her and Jake having a child. Probably won't thrill her father to hear that!
Date: 08 Oct 2014 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Alice may be correct about Nessie being neither normal human nor vampire, but she sure acts like a pretty normal teen! Throw in her anxious dad and we may have the basis for a television series!Just kidding, I feel for him and Bella too, plus the rest of the family.
Date: 08 Oct 2014 10:01 AM Title: Puberty of a vampire-human hybrid
Of course Jasper wouldn't hurt Ness, he loves her too much! Her blood probably isn't quite as enticing as a human's anyway! It would be interesting to know what Alice really saw, not just what she told Bella!
Date: 08 Oct 2014 9:49 AM Title: The Talk, Vampire Style
That was only a supernaturally ramped up version of what some girls go through I guess. It's the consequences of it all that differ from "normal"! Anything pertaining to blood in a family of vampires is bound to be a bit more intense!
Date: 08 Oct 2014 9:35 AM Title: Unexpected
Poor Ness! That was no doubt a very traumatic event and one for which she may not have been too prepared !Shocked her father no end, plus her imprint!
Date: 08 Oct 2014 9:16 AM Title: Catch Up
Nice summary, concise and to the point. I admire that ability to give such a clear picture of her life, and not get too wordy with it!
Date: 23 Sep 2013 3:42 AM Title: Puberty of a vampire-human hybrid
i am a little concerned about nessie and what the future holds
so i guess i am with her family and not knowing what to think or what could happen
Date: 23 Sep 2013 3:33 AM Title: The Talk, Vampire Style
this is a very interesting story
loving it
Date: 15 Aug 2013 7:03 PM Title: Unexpected
Nice. It starts where the original stops. The period part is great. Looking forward to more.