[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Small Gathering vs Ragging Kegger
Great chapter, she has her hands full with such a big secret! Almost like her father had in college only not so dark. Can't wait to see where you take us! Thanks for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Small Gathering vs Ragging Kegger
Again nicely written!!!! Another today?
Author's Response:
I'm up to chapter 7, but I'm publishing one a day. This way if I get a little writer's block, or need to fix something I can.
Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?
I really like this story! Yahoo! You were able to capture their personalities well. Please update soon! :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Small Gathering vs Ragging Kegger
Nice Chapter! Keep the story going!
Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?
It's still pretty early in your story to really review. So far it is good. I would suggest posting a few chapters pretty quickly to get your readers " into" your story. Good luck with your writing.
[Report This]Date: 02 Jul 2012 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?
Great beginning! Love it!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?
Great to have a new story line!!! And Phoeb is trying to be normal!! Love it. I can see this continue for awhile!!!! Keep up the good work!!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Jul 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?
I really like this story! You write well. I will definately follow it! Please update soon!