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Reviewer: Blondie_xox Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Meeting Mr. Grey

Is that all to the story?

I love it! Does Brandon end up using Phoebe?

Reviewer: CARYMENARES Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Meeting Mr. Grey

Sigula Es muy buena :)

Reviewer: Davidcoty Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

LOVE this story!  Please please please tell me there is more to come!  P,ease! :)

Reviewer: Scarletdam Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2012 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

Is the story finished? I'm enjoying it very much. You have really taken the time to make it yours and I just love it! Will you be writing more?

Reviewer: Mari1023 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 2:19 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

Will you be finishing the story?  It's very adorable and loving grown up Grey kids. 

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Date: 18 Sep 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Fallout

Gosh Teddy Bear!!  He sounds Hot like his daddy!!  Great stuff

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Meeting Mr. Grey

Ah oui c'est une bonne question mais c'est normal que Christian soit méfiant !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 25 - The Club

Pauvre Brando ! Il est stressé je crois.

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 24 - Going Home

Brandon et Ana sont à la maison !

J'ai hâte de lire la rencontre avec Christian.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Reinforcements

J'ai bien aimé l'arrivée de Teddy !

Dommage si tu ne fais pas de suite !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 22 - No More Games

Bon et bien j'espère que ça va quand même aller car j'aime bien ce petit Brandon !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Oh What a Night

Pauvre Phoebe !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 20 - Dinner in Town

Les ennuis comment ? Non ?

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 19 - Snow Bunnies

Les règles du papa sont strictes !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 18 - Winter Break Begins

Sarah est en visite chez Phoebe ! 

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Making Winter Plans

Sarah a des projets pour Teddy !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Skype Date

Bon chapitre, papa veille toujours.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Thanksgiving Break

J'aime bien ce chapitre, c'est gaie, léger !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Sunset Over the City

Donc ils se sont embrassés, c'est bien, il est sympathique ce Brandon !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 13 - Preparing for the Night

J'aime bien ce chapitre.

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:20 PM Title: Chapter 12 - Back to Normal

Est ce son premier rendez vous ?

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 11 - Lunch at Maxwell's

Sarah a fait connaissance avec Christian Grey !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Ballet

Bon chapitre, j'aime beaucoup !

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Truth

Ouf, elle a dit la vérité à son amie, c'est bien !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Back to the Hospital

Je crois qu'Ana l'a fait expré pour que Sara sache qui est Phoebe.

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 1:27 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Touring the City

Enfin un compromis entre christian et sa fille.

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Fallout

J'aime ce chapitre !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In the Hospital

Bon chapitre !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Party Time

Wahou, je crois qu'elle va se faire "remonter les bretelles" !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Planning My Escape

C'est un plan diabolique !

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Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Small Gathering vs Ragging Kegger

Elle sait ce qu'elle veut et heureusement que maman est là pour l'aider...

Reviewer: aelita48 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2012 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

J'aime bien !

Reviewer: JL Tracey Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Sep 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Meeting Mr. Grey

Great story, please more updates 

Reviewer: wildcherry Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Meeting Mr. Grey

another good chapter ..... please post more soon x 

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Meeting Mr. Grey

Poor Pheobe. We're all cheering for Brandon. I would love to hear the rest of that conversation. It's almost like they're a reverse of Christian and Ana. She was intimidated by his wealth and now Brandon is intimidated by Pheobe's. Great fic!



Author's Response:

I wasn't sure how to write the conversation since I've never actually experienced it. That's why I took advantage of the story being in Phoebe's POV to prevent writing a terrible conversation.

Reviewer: Scarletdam Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Aug 2012 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 25 - The Club

Ahhh, leaving me hanging. It's wonderful, keep it up!

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Aug 2012 12:43 AM Title: Chapter 25 - The Club

No you can't stop there!!! Im dying to know how the first meeting goes. Please update soon!

Author's Response:

That's why I stopped there. I need to make sure the dinner is perfect.

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Going Home

Sounds like the fun is just getting started, can't wait, really enjoying your story, thank you for sharing!

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Aug 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 24 - Going Home

Ah i was hoping he would meet christian finally! Can't wait for the next update!

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:35 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Reinforcements

Love it another great chapter! Say it ain't so! The story can't be almost over. Lol. But a Phoebe/Brandon sequel would be fun!

Author's Response:

It's going to end with them returning to school for the spring semester. Not sure yet if they'll be going back together or not. I guess it will depend on how Brandon's introduction to Mr. Grey goes.

Reviewer: Acdc Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Reinforcements

Glad to see you are back.

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Reinforcements

Big brother to the rescue! Love it! Look forward to where ever you decide to go with your story. It has been a wonderful reading experience, you have really done a great job with it!! Come back soon.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Reinforcements

I'm glad you are going to finish your story instead of just not updating. It was a cute story I will be interested in how you end it.

Author's Response:

I always planned to finish the story, it's just taking longer than I expected.

Reviewer: Scarletdam Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 23 - Reinforcements

I would love to see more of the interaction with Christian and his children now that they are older. You know let them bat their eyes at him and they get their way. The overprotective father!

Reviewer: Scarletdam Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 22 - No More Games

The story is so believable...so real! You are a fantastic writer.


Will you continue?



Author's Response:

I'm working on it, but I've had some personal things come up that have taken me away from the story.  It'll be updates soon.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Aug 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 22 - No More Games

This must be hard for  both of them

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 22 - No More Games

Looks like Brandon and Ana have more in common than they know. Maybe Ana can help Brandon see beyond the money, and that Greys are good people. Poor Pheobe the lie was necessary for her own self worth, she needed to make friends on her own just to feel like she could. Hope they can work this out.... Thanks for a dynamic plot and well told.

Reviewer: BurchGirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 22 - No More Games

:( Poor Pheobe! It's like she's going through what Christian went through with Ana. Hopefully Brandon pulls his head out of his ass. And where's Teddy? We need some Teddy randomness! ;]

 

 

 



Author's Response:

I was thinking of having Teddy show up but I'm not positive where to go with it yet.

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jul 2012 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 21 - Oh What a Night

Ah the truth has come out! I love it! I can't wait for more!!!

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Oh What a Night

That's much better. I like that her friends know her secret. I wonder if they will keep it or speed it.that will be the true test of their friendship.

Reviewer: SCK Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 21 - Oh What a Night

Great chapter. Hope you continue in aspen for at least one more. 



Author's Response:

Next chapter is still in Aspen and that's all I have written so far.  I'd say at least two more in Aspen based on my train of thoughts.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 20 - Dinner in Town

The truth will set you free! Phoebe don't lie to your friends! I would be totally pissed at her if I found out later that she was lying to me and could not trust me to keep her secret. These are already her friends so it's not like they are just using her for her money. Tell them.

Reviewer: Jcp77 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

I really like your Phoebe story. I keep feeling like this boyfriend may know exactly who she is and is using her can't wait to see if I'm close. 

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jul 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 19 - Snow Bunnies

Good chapter, However I seriously doubt that his vacation home is bigger then his house in Seattle. Looking forward to fun, snow, and a little trouble.

Author's Response:

The house itself isn't bigger, but it has all the extra "indoor" fun of a vacation home so it looks bigger.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 18 - Winter Break Begins

Good chapter, I understand that some chapters are transition chapters to move the story forward however there needs to be some twists, action or humor. Just a thought. Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: paolobbuttons Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

Thanks for the story!  Interesting to see Christian and Ana from Phoebe's perspective.  Thanks for updating so often.  Keep up the great story!!!!

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: marksdaughter Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Making Winter Plans

There are so many interesting fanfictions.....I haven't had time to read everything....what with my husband insisting that I keep the house clean, meals cooked and dishes washed.....so I have only been reading the stories about Christian and Ana....not their children....but today, I had some extra time....so I read this one about Phoebe........and it was amazing....I enjoyed it so much....I just wanted to let you know....keep up the good work!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 17 - Making Winter Plans

You are doing such a wonderful job on this story.It is great that you update everyday thank you for doing that.

Author's Response:

I'm trying. I think I missed yesterday but we were having thunderstorms. Power was on and off all day.

Reviewer: Lilimarlene Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 10 - The Ballet

I do like this, it's a fun read and flows really well but the misspelling of Christian's name is driving me crazy. If its deliberate then I apologise.



Author's Response:

Thank you for pointing that out. I guess my spell check "fixed" it and I didn't even notice.  I'm going to go back through and correct it all ASAP.

Reviewer: Kern11232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

I wasn't interested in reading about Pheobe because of my obsession with Christian and Anna. But when I became impatient waiting for postings about Fifty Shades I decided to read your story. I must say I was just as captivated with your addition to the story as much I was when I read the original books. Your a great writer. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for that very flattering review.

Reviewer: Kern11232 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Skype Date

This story is a real page turner. Amazing work capturing an authentic perspective of what the Grey kids would be like...wow!!...great job.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 1:14 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Skype Date

Cute chapter!
A little advise... Let your humor show through on these kinds of transition chapters.
Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: kmm1993 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2012 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 16 - Skype Date

cute!!!

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 7:23 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Skype Date

I liked Pheobe.I hope Brandon is on the up and up because our Princesss  really lilkes him.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Thanksgiving Break

As always another good chapter. I love that Teddy and Pheobe are such close siblings.

Reviewer: kmm1993 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2012 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Thanksgiving Break

Lol good chapter!!

Reviewer: SCK Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Sunset Over the City

Great story. Can't wait to see what happens next...

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 14 - Sunset Over the City

Ok Brandon seemed sweet. I love the story of his hard working dad and him holding a 4.0. I think he could have budgeted his study time better so he could have spent more time with her,but as they say always leave them wanting more...

Author's Response:

I told you he wouldn't turn into a creep.

Reviewer: kmm1993 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2012 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Sunset Over the City

Sweet!!

Reviewer: lainel Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 12:32 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In the Hospital

cool story!I hope you'll continue this soon :)

 

 

 

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Preparing for the Night

I really enjoyed reading. Please keep writing. I love how Phoebe is her own person. I can't wait to know how the rest of the story unfolds. I hope Brandon doesn't turn out to be a bad guy.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Preparing for the Night

Short and sweet. Loved the secret wall safe with the stash of jewels. I would have freak out to if I I found out I asked a friend to barrow her real 4ct. diamond earrings that cost who know how much! Omg!
Well I can't wait to see how the date goes. I know you said he is not going to be a creep but I still need to read it and " feel" it in my heart. Sorry I know you are the writer but as the reader I just need to wait and see. So with that said please post as soon as you can. Thanks for the update and sharing your talents.

Author's Response:

I understand.  I just finished writing chapter 16 so I do have an insiders edge to what's coming.

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:50 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Back to Normal

Ok give the guy a second chance but not a third. I hope he does not turn out to be a creep.

Author's Response:

He's not a creep, I promise.

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Back to Normal

Great story! Can't wait to see how this turns out. She is so like Ana, but she is a Grey so she can't be that innocent. Lol.

Author's Response:

She's very much like her mother.  However, Christain did keep her on a tight leash as a kid.  We'll see.

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 12 - Back to Normal

Innocent for how long? She is the child of Christian & Ana Grey for Pete's sake.....Hot is in her blood. Wonderful chapter, keep it up please!

Reviewer: kmm1993 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Lunch at Maxwell's

love this story

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2012 9:37 AM Title: Chapter 10 - The Ballet

Wonderful chapter,love the shopping sooooo Grey! 

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2012 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 9 - The Truth

Truth is so freeing, glad she came clean for her friend. All one can hope is that her friend doesn't use it against her. Good job! Well written keep going!

Reviewer: kmm1993 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 9 - The Truth

Another great chapter!

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Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Back to the Hospital

Busted!

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Back to the Hospital

Busted! Lol. Love the story, please keep the updates coming!

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Back to the Hospital

Uh,oh hope the cat isn't out of the bag? Ana is cool and should help her once she knows the ground rules. Great chapter! Well written and great story line!!! Can't wait to see what happens next!! Thanks so much!

Reviewer: linay1122 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Back to the Hospital

This story is fantastic! The idea behind the duck tour is great. It's so different from seeing and hearing people sing YMCA when they're riding the duck,LOL.
Always looking forward to your updates! Thank you.

Reviewer: gunchsmom Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Touring the City

What a wickedly good chapter!  Classic Christian.....loved it!

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Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Touring the City

Hahaha a duck boat tour given by The Christian Grey! Classic.

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Touring the City

This is an awesome hilarious (but oh, so believable) chapter! You have hit a vein of gold with this story! Look forward to every 24 karat chapter! Thanks

Reviewer: Lynne3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Touring the City

Where did you come up with the idea for a crime scene duck tour? Lol, that was just so funny and so over the top it was perfect. Your story is getting better as you write. Thanks for the update.

Author's Response:

The idea was originally just the duck boat because I thought it would be funny. The crime scene part just kind of fell in place. It felt like something Mr. Grey would do.

Reviewer: kmm1993 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 7 - Touring the City

Lmao!!! Love it!!! The humor about the gun lessons!! Classic!!! Love Taylor's input on it as well as Anna!!  Great job!!!

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 6 - The Fallout

This I believe! I really think our favorite Mr. Grey would do and be like this! Poor Phoebe, can't wait to see if you get her to a FREED of her own;) Thank you.

Reviewer: jhpuffy Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Fallout

Poor kid, must be tough being the daughter of a control freak.

Reviewer: bluebelle11 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 6 - The Fallout

This is great! It's the first fanfiction I've read of Fifty Shades but you've done a wonderful job! I can't wait to read more!

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In the Hospital

Great chapter! Please keep them coming!

Reviewer: wendemyre Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In the Hospital

I am enjoying your story ... Thank you

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 5 - In the Hospital

Poor Pheobe, she will never get a chance to play....but she sounds like she has a lot of good values and she did the right thing to take care of her friend. Thanks for writing such an interesting story.

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 4 - Party Time

She is such a Grey! Great chapter, keep 'em coming!

Reviewer: Atterbury Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Planning My Escape

You are a Star! Shine lady shine!!!well done and great character development ! Thanks we want MORE! 



Author's Response:

What a confidence builder. Thank you!

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Planning My Escape

I really like this story!

Reviewer: lisalilac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 3 - Planning My Escape

She is trying to get away! Aunt Mia helped her! I love it!!!

Reviewer: cherrygrly Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

Good start can't wait for more! Love she said it was a small gathering of her entire class…Lol.

Reviewer: Acdc Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 1 - The East Coast?

Thanks for the quick update, I like the story line. Looking forward to the next chapter

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