Date: 24 Jun 2015 7:16 AM Title: Outtake 2: Bad news with a silver lining
An infection in one ovary = total hysterectomy ??? I think I missed something here.
Date: 24 Jun 2015 6:19 AM Title: Epilogue: Teenage Dream
I'm hoping Jacob gets a lap dance he can "fully" enjoy at some point.
Date: 23 Jun 2015 5:49 AM Title: Into the Nothing
I'm Hoping Jasper gets some peace, he's been through enough.
Date: 23 Jun 2015 5:18 AM Title: Who are you really?
I stopped reading anything on FF because I was sick of stories getting pulled, it's irritating as hell. Now I only look for my favorite authors here and on Twilighted, at least then you know you are not going to get screwed halfway through the story and need to go looking for it somewhere else. So thanks for making yours available on a site that doesn't censor, your readers will get the word out and you will get more traffic.
Date: 22 Jun 2015 5:24 PM Title: California King Bed
Sounds like trouble......
Date: 20 Jun 2015 8:55 AM Title: Sex Jeopardy
I realize that when I review I tend to make comments to the characters.....I guess that tells you how much I get into the story. So, Bella.....tell him already.
Date: 18 Jun 2015 2:28 PM Title: The Interview
I love this story, especially love Jacob. Having said that, no Paramedic -ever- would advise, or even allow an unconscious patient to be taken anywhere other than any Emergency Room for an evaluation. At the very least Jacob should have been monitored until he regained consciousness and then given a complete neuro exam. If he was hit in the head with enough force to knock him out he could have a concussion or a bleed, people have died from less. So.....public service announcement, Head injury with loss of consciousness = go to the Emergency Room. Do not pass go, do not collect $200 dollars. Do not take an unconscious person home - call an ambulance.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 9:21 AM Title: Breakthrough
Nothing good comes from lies.....nothing.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 7:31 AM Title: Lullaby
I would hope if she had been living with a raging STD for 10+ years she would have some clue, and and if she passed it on to Dickward he should have some idea as well. Granted there are a few that have some subtle symptoms, but I can't believe she could be that clueless.
Date: 17 Jun 2015 4:19 AM Title: So Help me God
Huggles for Paul and baby Alex
Date: 17 Jun 2015 3:00 AM Title: Save Me
She is making progress, but she has to stop lying.........
Date: 16 Jun 2015 8:03 AM Title: Savin' Me
So Edward's going to be okay with his brother's taking the fall for this?
Date: 16 Jun 2015 6:52 AM Title: Better than Me
I get that Jess was hurt, but they were not dating...... at all. She should cut him a little slack.
Date: 16 Jun 2015 12:38 AM Title: Stupid in Love
No, don't break my Jake's heart.....you stupid, stupid bitch ! Ughhhh I'm totally hating Bella right now.
Date: 16 Jun 2015 12:06 AM Title: Lost In You
Date: 15 Jun 2015 11:39 PM Title: Everybody Hurts
I just love Jake
Date: 14 Jun 2015 9:10 AM Title: Stop Standing There
I really want Bella to find out that Eddieboy is screwing around, maybe that will help her see him for who he is.
Date: 14 Jun 2015 9:09 AM Title: Falling In
He's making progress, God I love Jake !
Date: 11 Jun 2015 5:19 AM Title: Someone to Love You
I love my Jake.
Date: 11 Jun 2015 2:34 AM Title: By the Way
I don't get how Bella is suppose to be a IV drug user and a stripper....and no one notices the track marks? If she's using on a regular basis in addition to starving herself, she is going to have track marks and a delayed healing time. She should be looking like shit about now. Perhaps when you have barely dressed women grinding in your face track marks don't really matter, but the addicts I've seen don't continue to look "perfect" for very long. Having said that.... I am happy that Leah has found Sam, I hope things work out for them.
Date: 11 Jun 2015 12:16 AM Title: I Hate Boys
It's okay Jakey, I will make you feel all better.......
Date: 10 Jun 2015 10:04 PM Title: Teenage Dream
I wasn't sure about this to start with. A story with the Cullens as the assholes and all. I am not team Edward, but I do love my Cullen men. You have gotten me very attached to Jake and Paul lately though. I was worried that Bella was going to be very unlikable as a drug addicted stripper, but I'm feeling suprisingly sympathetic at this point. Can't wait to see when you take this.
Date: 10 Jun 2015 7:07 PM Title: In Love with a Stripper
Okay, so at this point we are suppose to rip Edward's balls off and feed him those for dinner - ugh
Date: 24 Sep 2012 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 36 Take Care Part 2
Haha Jacob can be soo clueless!Awesome Story!!
Date: 12 Aug 2012 10:43 AM Title: In Love with a Stripper
All the love for this memorable journey!! I don't review much, but am a regular reader of this piece.
Really quite an effort on your part to make this idea of 'Cullens- the Villains' work. Although I'm a big Twifan of all characters(Edward, Bella, Jacob, Cullens, Wolves etc.) alike, I'm a hardcore Edwardian. So, it was hard for me in the start. But, you managed to gain my hatred towards this Edward. Finally, I know what a menace Emmet can be, were he not a 'teddy bear'!
Only thing I didn't like in your story was Jacob's long hair, for I prefer short hair on him. But, since its your story, I'm gonna stop right here.
Now, I only am waiting for a suited ending for this well-crafted piece.
Date: 09 Aug 2012 6:13 AM Title: Into the Nothing
wow. that was great. how i like a good drama chapter. i really thought jacob will badly end up in the hospital. but now bella is hurt as well. and jacobs feeling, when she was hit. i love that. i am evil, i know. i really hope the next chapter is not the last. need more.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 11:30 AM Title: Who are you really?
when is chapter 35 coming out??
Date: 28 Jul 2012 1:06 PM Title: Who are you really?
updates please!!! some of the fans are really dying of suspence......
P.S. love your piece......<3