Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 24
I was so proud of tough Bella. Edward is being such an ass I just want to have a go at him myself. Of course I do have the luck of getting the insight of both so maybe I shouldn't be too harsh. Nah, I say kick his ass, make him regret ever speaking his worries. You know what I really like about your story though....it makes me forget that my RL is doing a tailspin these days. I enjoy the escape, no matter how desperately I wish to bean them upside the head.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great story, you've kept me up way late...I have to get up in about 5 hours now.... ugh!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
like the story, they just need to sit down and talk about everything that is going on.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
please update soon i love it
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 23
Ugh! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
I could never hate Edward but pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeee make it happy soon I can not take it xx
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
Thanks good chapter
Date: 10 Sep 2012 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it :)!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 23
Hard to live through even if we know it is inevitable
[Report This]Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 23
I don't like the word hate but I do use the word dislike alot. And right now , I seriously dislike Edward. I know he isn't using his head (well, he was using a head several times and has been thinking with it too), but he has been unintentionally leading Bella on. He has no clue as to how Bella actually feels about him. Does he not think that while he tries to distance himself from her, that she is going to maybe revert back to the person who felt abandoned before? I know what I think Bella should do, but I'd be acting childish. LOL
Date: 10 Sep 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 23
They really need a life endangering traumatic event, like a car acciden or heart attack or something that will let them have a good heart to heart! Great chapter!
Date: 10 Sep 2012 12:53 AM Title: Chapter 23
looking forward to more
Date: 09 Sep 2012 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
Feeling so sad for Bella right now-the man just keeps hurting her with his careless words.
"That man isn’t me… it can’t ever be me. I don’t do commitment. I don’t do kids and happy families."...I hope this isn't true.
Date: 09 Sep 2012 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awww poor bella xx
Date: 06 Sep 2012 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 21
amazing..;so welcome to the reality...again:) or not
thanks to share
xxx
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
Somehow it seems, that they have nearly always sex, with alcohol in their systems. I wonder what will happen, when they are sober and have sex? Perhaps then at least Edward will acknoledge his emotions and feelings for Bella and can start to really love her, like she loves him. But I guess this is a long way for Edward, after his declatation in the beginning.
Somehow he can really be a dick, but I guess he tries to keep some kind of control he lost, when Bella arrived from school and turned his world upside down. Although treating her as a business arrangement is also not the solution.
Cool chapter :)
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2012 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love this, really enjoying reading "Wild Child". Don't change anything, don't use tips on how it should be, what others want. You are doing great.
THIS .. reading is my favorite part of my time, which i don't have really, so i do it very early in the morning. So seeing my time is coming to an end i need to say the following :-) Have a great day/evening, enjoy writing the next chapter. Take care and God Bless
Date: 06 Sep 2012 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 22
God, his words were harsh. I was devastated right along with Bella. Obviously Edward doesn't realize how deep Bella's feelings are for him. That man is in so much denial, and if he keeps it up he's going to heading up that river without a paddle. I knew he wouldn't be able to stay away long. But just like the 'honeymoon', is he going to turn back to the cold Edward the next day?
Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 22
looking forward to more
Date: 05 Sep 2012 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 22
please update soon
Date: 05 Sep 2012 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 21
"He knew, without a shadow of a doubt, that this would end in tears."...WHY? Bella has wants him-he wants her. Is it because she isn't his type: tall & blond? That is f*cked up!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 21
Child proof container? BWAHAHAHA loved that! Great chapter.
Date: 05 Sep 2012 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward really is an idiot. It was obvious that she was acting out after feeling neglected, yet it took him that long to figure it out.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh oh, seems like they grow apart after one day of marriage.
I hope they have lots of comfort food at their hands, because they will need it for their talk. They have lots of things to cover, also how their marriage will function and what will happen with Swan Publishing. Now that Edward has technically over 70 % of the firm in his hands ;)
Great chapter :)
Date: 05 Sep 2012 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter! I'm both worried and doubled up in laughter :)
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 20
OK, got to say, you lost me on this chapter. What kind of fucking ass is Edward to be flirting with some blonde in a bar while his new wife is upstairs waiting for him. He doesn't even come close to deserving that sweet girl and I feel sooooo sorry for Bella.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
Poor Edward's probably going to get condoms... LOL! But what did Rose mean by he was going to break Bella's heart soon enough???
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 16
Stupid, Stupid boy! For someone soooo smart Edward is not very intellegent...lol!
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 15
Edward is being such an ass!!! Even if he does just see Bella as a ward, he shouldn't lie to her or invite her out to watch him hang all over some whore in a bar. That is just rude!
Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 21
Boy do these two need to talk Or better yet spend two weeks never getting out of bed! Thank you - Cheri
Date: 05 Sep 2012 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh dear God, a cliffie? Really? LOL
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it, now hope they act like a married couple since they are home & hope Edward don't get all weird now.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 21
looking forward to more
Date: 04 Sep 2012 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
Back to life, Back to reality.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 21
They better stay together.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
Dayum! Loved sexy time! Rina is totally a spy for Tanya. That bitch is going to cause problems! Bella totally said she loved him so much! How cute!
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2012 10:59 AM Title: Chapter 13
Seems that Bella and Edward need nearly a week to really talk about their issues, after both have calmed down from their anger and hurt.
Hopefully Rose can now talk some sense into Bella and also kick Riley out. I fear, that this is not the end with Riley, and we will see him some more. I just hope that he has no hidden agenda to get Bellas shares for Swan Publishing.
Date: 31 Aug 2012 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 12
Seems like Edward fucked up royally. I mean first he lied to Bella and than she phoned him, just to get Tanya to answer. It is clear, what she is thinking and feeling.
But at least Bella made friends with Rose, she will be there to help her get to Edward.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
Going to buy some prophylactics?
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
So the witch is gone, but the question is how long, and is this time enough for Bella and Edward to be something serious. Fortunately Edward started to see how artificial Tanya is and is probably able to make a real break in their relationship.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 8
Awww, pooooooor Tanya had to go alone to bed, poor little thing.
Not really :P
Great that Bella and Edward are spending their evening together, despite of Tanya.
And that they pretty much ignored her during the dinner was priceless.
Now that Edward has seens Bella (nearly) naked on the bed, I wonder how long it will take these two until it happens again, but with Edward on top ;)
Anyway, great read.
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 7
So after reading the first 7 chapters I must say that your story is really great. The characters are really great and to see the releationship between Edward and Bella change is also pretty interesting. and now Tanya is in the mix, but the question is how long until Bella can get rid of her for good. ;)
It is also a nice change, that the story does not take place in the US but in the UK.
Date: 30 Aug 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 20
YESSSSSS FINALLYYYYY!!!!!!!
Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 20
i hate that right before they finally do it edward meets someone completely opposite of bella and calls her his "type". if bella had known what he was doing i doubt she would have been so eager to do the deed:/ although it was freaking hot, i'll give you that;)
Date: 30 Aug 2012 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 20
Ahhhhhh loved it! Thank you - Cheri
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 20
I will have to admit, when Edward was in the bar talking to Rina and what was going on in his head upset me a bit. But then, the guy just married his ward and he's had these feelings for her and he's not in control of anything going on in his head right now. LOL Well, you wrote the "deed" very well. That was some awesome sex. Does Bella realize how lucky she is to have someone like Edward for her first time? I think back to mine and cringe. LOL So it sounds like Edward is going to try to make their marriage work though it seems he's worried about the age difference. Fuck that. Who cares. It's their business. We know Bella's all in. And her talking in her sleep? I think she was saying... Edward, I love you so much? *shrugs shoulders* I can't wait for Rose's take on all this. And Tanya? Hehehehehe Loved the chap!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 20
Glad Rina was not a predatory bitch-I'll admit I was worried.
Their wedding night was sexy and beautiful-GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 20
Gah!! Now back to the real world . Hmm bet they are going to raise a few eyebrows lol thank you can't wait for more .
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 20
Awesome sex! I was so afraid Bella was going to see Edward with Rina in the bar. Then I was and still am pissed with him for considering her availability and then flirting so openly with her especially with what he said in the end. Nownim afraid she's going to show up at their door with her handing Bella the sex toy bag that I think he left behind at the bar giving Bella the wrong impressions leading to more misunderstandings. I anxiously await your update as always.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 20
Tee hee! I speak slurred pass-out, and that was totally "Edward, love you so much". *pumps fist*
Date: 29 Aug 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
I have been reading this story and absolutely loving it over all other stories lately, its been exciting and well written, but I now feel fed up with it because I have come to the realisation from this bar scene that Edward really is just a typical bloke that thinks with his knob! I was under the mistaken impression that he really was feeling something that he had never felt before for Bella, but I think its his dick thinking as his reaction to that Blonde was a real eye opener. He really seemed more interested in being with her and spilling his woes to her but grudgingly trudges up the stairs to Bella then only reacting to her again because she is naked in the bed. Its just a sex thing for him, whereas for Bella I think she really has fallen for him and is going to be hurt badly, just like Rose said. Shame I was hoping this was going to have a HEA ending :(
Date: 29 Aug 2012 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
Loved it!!!! Can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 29 Aug 2012 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 20
WOW-that was intense!!
Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
Edward...love you so much
Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh she loves him so much..great chapter
Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 20
love it:)
great chap:)
but yess what now ...go to school...for bella?
thanks to share quickly...
xxx
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 20
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 12:51 PM Title: Chapter 20
How I love this story...
Date: 29 Aug 2012 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 20
looking forward t omore
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 11:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
Awesome lemon & I think she was trying 2 say she loves him.
Date: 29 Aug 2012 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 20
At last loved it loved it loved it. sigh. Loveeeeee this story so much. xx
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
He's buying condoms! Lol. This is crazy! I love this story! It always surprises me.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
Fuck, is Edward going into meltdown mode??? afraid???
hé tahnks to share:)
xxx
Date: 28 Aug 2012 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 18
Fuck... a wedding:)
thanks to share
xxx
Date: 27 Aug 2012 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Part of me is hoping Bella does get pregnant so we can have a sequel about their happily ever after :)
Great chapter - can't wait for more!!!!
Date: 27 Aug 2012 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 19
please update soon
Date: 27 Aug 2012 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 19
NOT A NICE CLIFFY!! Ok, was that Edward going into meltdown mode or just a quick run down the the phramacy to pick up supplies?? WRITE FAST! Thank you for the double update, was fun to read two in a row! Cheri
Date: 27 Aug 2012 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
I bet Edward went for condoms! Good choice--the poor girl shouldn't be exposed to Tanya's sloppy seconds.
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 19
oh, I can't wait until they consummate their marriage and I hope nothing bad happens and/or he breaks her heart. & it better not be condoms he's after.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Pleassssse hurry up with the next chapter. I can not wait. x
Date: 26 Aug 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 18
OMG I read that chapter way to fast I just needed to know Edward got there in time. So now I will go back to the beginning and take my time reading it. Love this story x
Date: 26 Aug 2012 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
I LOVE BELLA- ROSE TOO! I am so f*cking happy that Bella told Edward she wanted a "real" marriage. You go girl!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
Again holy shit !!!!!!!!!! and yeah cockblocking not cool hun not at all x
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, their married, with a condition, but Edward doesn't seem too adverse to it. LOL I do remember Bella saying Marry me when they were in his office a while back. What did Rose mean by "Be kind to her, Edward. You'll break her heart soon enough?" Edward didn't seem to like that comment. Could it be because Rose really doesn't have a clue how Edward really feels about Bella? Or does she think this is a marriage of convenience, on Edward's part, since she knows how Bella feels? LMAO, is Edward running out for condoms? By the sound of his urgency to leave, he must be pretty 'worked up'. Damn your cliffie, but it's a goodie :) You have to update soon!!! PLEASE
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 18
Holy.... what? Married? Heading to the next chap, like right now!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
So excited for next chapter!
Date: 26 Aug 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
Going to get condoms???
Date: 26 Aug 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 18
Holy shit !!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 16
oh Bella, what are you doing??
thanks to share
xxx
Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 15
great chap:)
thanks:)
xxx
Date: 23 Aug 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
wow...; not cool:)
thanks to share
xxx
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2012 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks good chapter
Date: 20 Aug 2012 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 17
Please, please, please don't be duped into marrying that dirtbag! Ugh. Great chapter!
Date: 20 Aug 2012 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 17
Please update soon
Date: 20 Aug 2012 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 17
Did not see that coming with James.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2012 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 17
Well, Bella sure got herself in a mess and she doesn't even know it. At least she wanted to contact Edward, but James thwarted that plan. I feel bad for Edward. What an awful feeling of being helpless and worrying about what might have happened. Or... is going to happen.
Date: 19 Aug 2012 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 17
Ok, one question. Will Bella be able to sit down for the next week when Edward finally catches up to her? Please write fast! Thank you - Cheri
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 17
I hate james
Date: 19 Aug 2012 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
looking forward gto more
Date: 19 Aug 2012 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
Fantastic story so far checking everyday for updates :)
Date: 18 Aug 2012 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
UGH! okay so I love Bella but now she's just doing the most lol
Date: 17 Aug 2012 1:52 AM Title: Chapter 16
She is insane! Edward's gonna go apeshit.