Date: 21 Sep 2012 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 27
I feel really sad for bella.. Please post some more!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 27
Lovedddddddddd it xx
Date: 21 Sep 2012 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 27
looking forward to more
Date: 21 Sep 2012 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 27
Thank you for the assurances - just thinking and E and Jane yukkkkkk!
Date: 21 Sep 2012 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 27
well I can relax and enjoy the story more now i know they dont't cheat on each other and that there will be a AEH phew I have been getting quite stressed reading the last couple of chapters. Still love this story though x
Date: 21 Sep 2012 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 26
He is a stupid stupid man
Date: 20 Sep 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 1
You know for being so business savvy - Edward is a moron when it comes to matters of the heart. But I'm guessing that's point of this story to see if he can find his heart #shrugs. But I was still beyond pissed at him for having sex with Bella and then sending her on her merry way. I'm sure he's treated with his other skanks and one-night stands with more respect than that. I am hoping he can wedge his head out of his ass in time enough to see Jane for who she is and truly understand what he did to Bella. Because looking at it from Bella's point of view I would just simply think he played me to get what he wants -- sex and control of her interests in the company. Here's hoping Bella comes back swinging humbling Edward and keeping Jane out. It seems Edward and all his know it all arrogance isn't really capable of protecting Bella from all the big bad out there - himself included.
On a brighter note, I tend to reserve my comments til after the angst is over so ...
that's a testament to how much this fic has stirred me up. Looking forward to the next chap. Thanks!!!
Date: 20 Sep 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 26
OK, Edward is being stupid. Thought he was smarter than be caught by a pair of batting eyelashes. I can see Italy is going to be trouble tho. Can't wait!!! Thank you - Cheri
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
Thanks good chapter
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 26
I don't think Bella will fall for it. Edward is way too gullible.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 26
Jesus, I just got goosebumps. And, their are not the good kind. Edward is going to fall into Jane's trap and Bella is going to be the innocent victim. I'm going to sound childish saying this but, I hate Jane already. LOL
Date: 19 Sep 2012 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh boy, he is really digging a big hole isn't he. If he isn't careful, he digs his own grave figurely speaking
Date: 19 Sep 2012 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 26
Noooo you bitch!!!!!! stop this jane & edward crap right now!!!!!!!!lol
Date: 19 Sep 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 26
No, no not Edward with another woman, please no
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 26
Personally I don't know, what to think of this chapter. I mean on one hand both try to get on with their lives without the other, but on the other hand, both have too much to loose. Especially Bella.
And Edward falls prey for a seemingly good idea, just because he has a broken heart, and can not think clearly.
Perhaps when Bella is in Italy she encounters Aro and Jane at some point and hears/eavesdrop a converstation of them and their plans for the publishing company. And is either fast enough to warn Edward or strong enough to stand against these plans.
Althought perhaps she could interprete this, that Edward wants an out of the company and this is his easiest way.
Lots of potential for more drama, because they don't talk.
Apart from the heartbreaking content of the chapter, great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
$%^#2^*&( idiot. WTF. enjoying this, sorry and thanks
....lol
Karen
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
Oh what a tangled web! Edward is worrying that "the attentions of a pretty young woman could momentarily blind a man to reality" but apparently doesn't see that Jane is the one blinding him. He thinks he "should" be attracted to her, or someone like her. And I have a feeling Bella will not be as biddable and compliant as Jane would like!
Thanks for the story so far; I'm really enjoying it.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
Please update soon
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 26
WTF? I am starting to get pissed of at Edward. He so needs to get his head out of his ass. Poor Bella. I am proud of her and telling that Jerkoff that she won't give into him. I hope she gives him and Jane a whole bunch of trouble. I am sure it is gonna get worse before he does come to his senses, but it just sucks having to wait.
Great story. It is always the first one I read when it's updated before all others.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 26
OMG! He better not cheat, that will be the nail in the coffin for me with this Edward, he needs to start sorting his head out and fast where his real feelings for Bella are concerned and man up and fix it, forget Jane!
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 26
*Gasp* Edward can't be THAT stupid, now can he?
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
I cannot begin to thank you enough for posting often and consistently. I would feel like I was dying of the angst if I had to wait months between updates. Now Edward is going to get a long drawn out kick in the balls. I'm afraid to see his stupidity now. Did he and Bella agree not to see others until the divorce or am I thinking of another story? I would go back to retread but I'm afraid this is one of thos stories I cannot re read because it is to heart wrenchingly painful. No can do. But Edward is 'dead' to me. Do you hear me Edslut? You are DEAD. Bella needs to take the company away from him as soon as she has the legal ability. He is invested only in that and now he is even tricking her out of her family business so he can have it to himself with the beautiful engaging blond while Bella is a disingenuous teenager....really Edward you are the disingenuous one. Gosh I don't think I've hated an Edward in any other story more.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 26
PLEASE don't let Edward sleep with Jane-Please give him a non-functioning pecker- non-functioning for anyone but Bella. My heart hurts for Bella
Date: 19 Sep 2012 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 26
I could just scream! This chapter was beyond frustrating... But I have faith that you will not ruin the ending of your own story by Edward and Bella hating each other. I still have a little shread of hope that Edward won't be a complete F***wad and screw everything up being with the likes of that nasty Jane. Thank god you have Rosalie to balance out the various other blonde bitches within the story. Lol. Please update quicker than usual if you can! I think I speak for everyone when I say, "we're dying for more!!!!!!"
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 26
What do I think will happen? I'm just wondering what the hell you've done with Edward. After the whole Vegas fiasco, you turned him into a total asshole. No nice way to say it, and I really hate that he's considering having something with Jane.
I can only insist that you do NOT make Edward cheat on Bella, or anything at all. If he does that, I would hate him. Bella has suffered enough already, and this would just destroy her. Please, start fixing things between these two. It's time for that.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 26
I don't know if I can get more dissappointed in him. Great chapter.
Hope you can update soon!
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm not liking a cheating Edward. This leaves me sad. Hopefully he wades up and smells the coffee.
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
I'm so pissed at him! Surely he will see Jane for what she really is. UGH!!!! You are a fantastic. Writer. I feel like I'm there with the characters.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 25
All together now… Edward is a complete fuckwit/arsehole/eejit/cretin/steaming pile of shite! Arrrgh,you've turned me into a pirate.haha
Im geting really worried that there is only one more chapter to read...
Date: 19 Sep 2012 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 26
I think she is going to wind up getting Edward into bed, he is a married man., when bella finds out she should divorce him and take him for the other half of the company..because these two are running circles around each other, they both can't admit that they love each other
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 26
Since Bella is very smart, I would like for her to become leary of his offer and move closer to SP to work part time and attend the uni. I would also
like to see her live separate from Edward while he watches her become a beautiful women. I think he deserves that for being such an arse.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
Good grief!! Edward is a bigger idiot that I thought originally. At the rate he is going he will run the company in the ground before Bella has a chance to make a decision. Someone (preferably Rose and her stiletto's) needs to put a foot up Edwards ass and pull his head out. Poor Bella--at least she got her point across in her last email and I'm so glad she is exerting some of her own decisions in her future. I really hope that it won't take long for Edward to get it together (this is after all his idea) and crush Jane before she has a chance to go after Bella and her shares. Jane might just have met her match with a stubborn and very intuitive Bella. Looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
Ok, he is pissing me off big time! Right now he is beyond stupid and we are in chapter 26!. How far are we to see him doing the right thing? And please no cheating, pretty please, I do understand you making him and idiot, but a cheater....
Date: 19 Sep 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 26
Sooo!! Let me get this straight.. Your Edward is an ass, and stupid.. I so want to feel sorry for him butt.... Just hurry and get Bella in here to save HER company. I'm having a hard time with my faith in (sneering) Edward.
E/k
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loving your story. How far into it are we?
Date: 19 Sep 2012 12:53 PM Title: Chapter 26
He is really starting to piss me off. He has absolutley no redeeming qualities at this point. I hope Bella bitch slaps him and tells him to fuck off.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 26
OH NOOOOOO WHY! PLEASE DONT LET HIM CHEAT. BUT I THINK ITS GONNA HAPPEN. LET BELLA LEAVE HIS STUPID ASS FOR GOOD AND TAKE HER COMPANY FULL ON THEN LET HIM GROVEL FOR YEARS!!!!
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:45 AM Title: Chapter 26
bon si il la trompe,j'espère qu'elle va le faire aussi,
ou il divorce et elle lui laisse ses actions et quand elle a fini ses études elle revient pour se venger , racheter toutes les actions de la société et le ruiner
ou le mieux pour une fois dans une fic ils déclarent leurs sentiments avant d'attendre des années comme dans la plupart des histoires
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 26
Please tell me he doesn't get involved with Jane. I really like this story so far but don't like this turn of events.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 11:30 AM Title: Chapter 26
OMG He is so stupid!
Date: 19 Sep 2012 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 26
loved the chapter i hope that edward gets his head out of his ass soon !
Date: 19 Sep 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 19
"Be kind to her, Edward. You’ll break her heart soon enough.". What the hell, is this a forewarning to us readers that Edward, as Tanya surmised, would tire of Bella and break her heart?
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
Holy Elvis is right, to the Luv shack, luv shack baaabyee.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 16
Arghh, boy, immature teenager, she has filled the bill. Crazy girl.
Date: 19 Sep 2012 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 13
Go Mama Rosie! To the rescue:-)
Date: 19 Sep 2012 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wow, great chapter, loved the drama & Bella's ability to cut straight to the heart of Tanya's remarks & be unperturbed, or at least appear to be and have even wittier comebacks to Tanya's rude insults. I'm always impressed when writers can do that and disappointed when they fall flat or short of their mark. You've hit the nail on the head for witty banter.
Date: 18 Sep 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 7
“Of course, Tanya—no blood, no foul. And you’re right, of course. No doubt, when I’m your age. Hillarious.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 9:35 AM Title: Chapter 25
Fuck that hurt. Edward is an idiot.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 25
What a complete prick. That was his goodbye? He lays her one last time then escapes before she wakes up?! What a class A jerk!
Date: 18 Sep 2012 1:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
Seriously? Gotta think about this one.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yes he is quite the Ass, I hope he gets his head out of it soon and go get his girl..
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 25
Like I said in my previous comment. Somehow they have only sex, when one or both have been drinking. This chapter is no exception.
I am really curious, what Edward must have thought, when he decided to escape and his reason to is just work. Hopefully Rosalie will wash his head and put him straight, after she consoled the heartbrocken Bella.
Both really needed to start talking, but probably they are both pretty afraid to open up to each other and start talking about their feelings. With always assuming what the other is feeling/thinking, they are not going any further.
Date: 17 Sep 2012 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
OH MY GOD THAT FREAKING JERK! HE BETTER HAVE AN EXPLANATION FOR THIS, NOT THAT IT'LL MAKE IT OKAY TO LEAVE HER LIKE THAT BUT STILL!!!!!!!
Date: 17 Sep 2012 12:08 AM Title: Chapter 25
Update soon please!!! The angst is getting to me!!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 25
Reading this chapter was like watching a train wreck. You know something major is going to blow up or go bad, but still you keep reading. I would glady slap Edward a few times! Seriously... Idiot!
Anxiously awaiting next chapter
Date: 16 Sep 2012 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
Edward is an asshole, but Bella isn't really doing much to help it. They are playing cat and mouse they need to stop and tell each other how they really feel
Date: 16 Sep 2012 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
Edward you ASSHOLE!!!!!!
E/k
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 10:05 PM Title: Chapter 25
I would say Edward's a fuckwit & everything else u said.lol!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks good chapter
Date: 16 Sep 2012 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
Edward is a f*cking asshole!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! He thinks this " She’s mine, fuckers.". Next he has hot sex with Bella, then forces her to fly off alone to London, then tells her her probably won't see her for months. He get the award for the shittiest husband ever!!!!!!! It would really serve him right if she just took a solo trip and disapperared from him for month or two. He is just killing her!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 8:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
wow is all i have to say ! he is such a duche!
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 25
He just pisses me off! He is such a dumb f*ck! Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 25
Yes he is. He needs to get over himself and his hang ups about their relationship. They'd be great together if he would just get his head out of his *ss. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 25
what the fuck is he thinking?!!!
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
Poor bella...I'm crying with her.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 25
While I do love Edward and HEAs, still there's only so much rejection a girl can take! I feel for Bella. I can see a lot of groveling in Edward's future. ;)
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
Think you named him very accurately actually! Lets see what kind of trouble can Bella get into to get Edward across the pond?!? Thank you - Cheri
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 25
Edward you are a plum mate a total plum,loving the story x
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
What the hell is he doing? My God, he needs to quit thinking with his dick. Maybe he needs to go to school and take lessons on constraint and how not to break someone's heart. If his game plan was to get her away from him then he should have kept his dick in his pants. Does he not think that his actions gave her hope? Did that tat she got not show him how she feels about him? If I was Bella, I would head back to London, have no contact with him, finish her exams, ask for a divorce(not sure if she can, but would serve him right) and go on an extended vacation, not letting anyone know where she is going. Make sure she is photographed having a wonderful time and let him die a single old man. Gah, he so f**king irritates me. And on that note, that just goes to show what an awesome story you are writing :)
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 25
I would so kick his fudging ass til the cows came home. What a fricking prick. I almost don't care what his feelings are - now i just want fuckward to hurt. Damn you got me all riled up. Seriously though, when is he going to pull that king size stick out of his ass? If he isn't careful he will blow it and never get her back. I hope his dick chaffs and won't work fir him anymore (at least until his moron self buys a clue, then it can work). Idiot man.
Huh.....I feel better. Seriously though, poor Bella.i think she needs to have someone kick his ass.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
Please, please, please tell me that Rose will pull his head out of his ass at some point in time. Since she has access to part of her trust fund now she should just go and take a nice long and relaxing trip to lick her wounds. Also she should not tell Edward or anyone affiliated with him where she is going. I mean how much of a screw up can one man be? I really hope that Rose hands him his ass for toying with Bella's affections the way that he has and I can only hope that he gets what is coming to him.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
Moreeeeeeee pleaseeeeeee
Date: 16 Sep 2012 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am starting to think this Edward is quite evil, this behaviour is emotionally abusive towards Bella! I was hoping for a HEA but at the moment, I think she should go back to London and forget about him and get her divorce when she's 21 and come back with a serisouly hot (was it Italian in earlier chapter?) man in tow who she then marries and has babies with and a HEA, Edward deserves to have his face rubbed in it with that after the way he has used her for sex basically and messed her up so badly when he should have been caring for her, I think the moment he had sex with her for the first time he crossed a huge line and should have stuck with that and had a 'proper marriage' like they said they would have, not go back on it the minute he got what he wanted from her.
Date: 16 Sep 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Please update soon
Date: 14 Sep 2012 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
Poor Wild Child! Thank you - Cheri
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 24
Really heartbreaking chapter for Bella. All she ever wanted was to be loved by Edward, but all he seems to do is breaking her heart further, just because he doesn't look very closely and ignores all the signs, that Bella loves him. And if one rejection is not enough, he has to always deepen the hurt, with an aditional comment.
I guess Rose needs to wash his head, or slap him a few times to knock some sense into him.
Lauren and Jessica are also not really helpfull, so Bella is really on her own, in a different country, no friends (besides Rose), poor, poor girl.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 23
Not really talking about their feelings and wishes is killing them both, just because they assume things, that the other possibly thinks, when that is not the case.
I am really curious, how they are getting through this, or if something tragic has to happen to open their eyes.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2012 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, you were so right. A shit load of angst and it was breaking my heart.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2012 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 24
I hope Bella has the upper hand & not let Edward get 2 her 2 much. I want a strong, sassy, bossy Bella. Edward needs 2 be put in his place.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh man, I seriously want to bang their heads together now! I am a Cambridge England Woman, born and bred - love that my home town is in this story and yep gotta get the pronunciation right :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2012 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 24
wow, things really exploded between them, auwtch! feel bad for both of them. Hope they can work it out eventually.
[Report This]Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
Man I am always just so out of sorts when I read. I get nervous when a new post pops up but I read anyway. Maybe Im a closet masochist?....
So I want Edward to understand he destroyed her self worth. That is almost the worst thing. I almost am ready for her to get a divorce and find someone else. That crap about he can't be what she want burns me up
Date: 12 Sep 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 24
She should have let him feel the pain much,much longer. Don't forgive him or let him off the hook. (yeah im bitter. lol) He should suffer more. As we say here in New York,"FORGET ABOUT IT!!"
E/k
Date: 12 Sep 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ugh...that was a tough one. Hope these two figure it out.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 24
Ahhh great angst writing. I guess it is Edward who has a major transformation ahead of him, beeing used to a life of no commitment. Looking forward to next chapters already
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 24
looking forward to more
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 24
Edward is an insensitive jerk
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
“Don’t worry, I won’t run away. Where would I go? I have no one, Edward, just you, and hey, waddya know, turns out you don’t want me."...My heart is just breaking for her. Edward is a total f*cking douchebag! Doesn't he realize he has completely broken her heart? I was so happy when they married, but now I wished they hadn't. I wish something bad on him-erectile dysfunction, perhaps? Especially if he ever tries to have sex with anyone other than Bella-like his junk only works for her-won't even work if he is fantasizing about her?
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 24
boy Edward F**k up bad, will these two every get it right.
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 24
Arrrrghhh! I wan tto stragnel edward-please tell me he comes ot his senses before it's too late !!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 24
they are both idiots. tsk, tsk. =/
Date: 12 Sep 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 24
Love this story and I originally found it on the Fictionators website on their teaser day. I just want to smack Edward and then shake him and then smack him again. He is old enough to know that words have a profound impact on the people that care about you and he should choose his more carefully. I know that Bella frustrates him greatly and he is fighting with his own feelings of lust (and something he isn't quite sure of) but his whole conversation was crap. How hard is it to have a conversation and tell her his feelings without making her feel like a burden he has inherited? Bella is another matter all together but I think her whole problem is that Edward left her in that school after her parents death without any counseling and just never bothered to check on her. He simply chose to ignore her and never even see if she was alright or to let her know that he cared for her. Any school will give them an education but it is not their responsibility to give them the stability and caring that a family would and he is for all intents and purposes her family now. He obviously never wanted to be her guardian in case of her parents deaths and he should have told them so and not taken the request so lightly. Now he has basically destroyed a young woman with such potential. Hopefully Bella will somehow get the counseling she needs and can gain some semblance of a normal teenage life. I only hope that when Bella gains the rights and knowledge to run the company that she throws him out on his ass and never looks back but we all know that won't happen. I think that a person can only take so much before they are done and I can only hope that Edward doesn't give her any more reason to hate him than he already has.