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Reviewer: snowangel23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2020 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! 

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jan 2016 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 29

Poor Bella!  Thank God Edward finally figured it out!  Now, to get to explain everything to Bella!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jan 2016 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 28

I can't believe Edward is even considering Jane's proposal!  He needs to get his head out of his ass!  And of course their conversation would be interrupted. Wonder how long it will take Edward to figure out what Jane is up to?!

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jan 2016 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

Good riddance to Tanya!!  Love the build up between Edward and Bella!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2015 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 39

great job

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

cruel and a user

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 24

HOPE A HEA EVENTUALLY

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 23

HE'S AN ASSHAT

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

SEEMS HE IS ONLY MARRYING HER TO PROTECT HIS INTEREST IN SP

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 11:58 PM Title: Chapter 8

SO GOOD

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2015 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 2

A GREAT BEGINNING!!!

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2015 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 39

AWESOME!!! story thanks so much for sharing it on here ;D

Reviewer: Thirlestane Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 39

Hi again...as you've probably guessed I'm working my way through your complete works, and loving them all!

Thank you so much...and and having finished this now I think there is a new chapter for me of your creepy house tale too!...best get reading.... T



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know you enjoyed Wild Child - it's especially great to hear from readers after a story has completed.  I really hope you like Out of the Corner of My Eye just as much.

 

Liz

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 39

Loved reading this story hope to read more from you



Author's Response:

Hi Petra

Thank you so much for your very kind comment, I really appreciate that you took the time to let me know that you enjoyed my story. I am working on another fic, but making very slow progress due to other commitments. However, I very much hope to finish writing it by the end of the year, with a view to posting it in early 2015, but in the meantime, have you tried my story, Where Roads Converge? If not, you can find it by going to my author page.

Thanks again for your review.

Liz

 

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 39

Oh wow! What a fantastic ending. Their ceremony was beautiful and so them and now they can be together and get on with living life.

I've really loved this story, even when it was angsty and Edward was being a complete tool, lol. Thank you for sharing.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

Well, you made it to the end!  I cannot say 'thank you' enough for all your wonderful comments - it's always great to get reviews when a story is still posting as a WIP, but to get a chapter-by-chapter commentary once it's complete is really rare, and I am inordinately grateful for all your wonderful feedback.  This was my first multi-chapter piece of wriiting and it has many, many flaws, so your response to it has been doubly welcome.  Thank you so much for reading and for your kind words.

Liz

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2014 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 38

After all the drama and the angst I'm so happy that things have finally turned out right for them. Edward buying the rings was perfect as was giving them to Bella on her birthday. They've both come a long way since Bella's school suspension back on March. Who would have predicted that it would lead them to this point.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 37

Lol, Edward was getting really frustrated. How the tables turned first Bella and then him, it's a good job Jane's dead I don't think Edward could cope with his balls getting any bluer. I hope Bella doesn't let what happened with Jane overwhelm her and pray on her mind, of course she's bound to be upset she's a compassionate person which bitch features wasn't, she wouldn't have cared less if she'd killed Bella or Edward. Thankfully the law supported Bella in this case, woohoo!!

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 36

I loved these two lines in this chapter: She was magnificent. And she was fucking livid. I could feel Edward's awe, pride and love for Bella in those. Thank God the bitch is dead, please say she is, Bella will get away with it, it was clearly self defence and actually Jane committed suicide by under estimating Bella. I can't believe their drunken arises didn't close the patio door properly.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 35

Woohoo!! He told her, finally. I'm so happy for them now they have a starting point to carry on and talk properly.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 34

Finally she's awake. The Minge-keteers will ride again, lol, yes I did just say that. Will Bella blame Edward for what happened. I think what happened with Jane would have happened anyway, the woman is a psycho, Edward's involvement with her just brought things to a head sooner rather than later. It seems that Bella's been looked after by her mum and dad whilst she's been in her induced coma and they sent her back to Edward, well that's what I like to think anyway.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 3:32 PM Title: Chapter 33

There's nothing like a life and death situation to make you realise your feelings and appreciate what you might lose. I hope that that Jane bitch loses control of her car and dies. Please don't let her turn up at the hospital to finish the job. I'm thinking Rose might have been better contacting the British Embassy. That police inspector is as much use as a chocolate fireguard, he has to be corrupt.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 32

So it was Jane in the car, it's a shame she didn't go over the side of the mountain whilst making her escape. As for the police, well either Charlie and Renee were killed and they were bribed to cover it up or they were paid off to not escort Bella to the crash site so Jane could get her hands on her. Funny how she turned up at Bella's door not long after her conversation with the inspector. I hope Edward gets there soon, Jane is so going down for this at least I hope she is, she can't get away with attempted murder.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 31

Who's the inspector calling? Was there something suspicious about Charlie and Renee's accident? Please tell me the person following Bella is Edward.

Poor Jules, in another life he and Bella would probably be perfect for one another.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 30

Thank God Lauren has been able to, somewhat, convince Jess that Edward is being truthful. I'm so glad that they've taken it upon themselves to try and get Edward and Bella back together. Edward has been a monumental dickhead, if it was an Olympic event he'd win the gold by a mile. I suppose it's hard to open up to love when, for most of your life, you've felt unloved and rejected. Maybe there was too much damage already done to be repaired before Emmett's family and Charlie came on the scene. Edward's always chosen the wrong type of woman to protect himself from feeling and rejection. He's still a huge dickhead and he'd better not fuck this umpteenth chance he's been given up, of course Bella has to communicate with him in some way for this to work.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 12:24 PM Title: Chapter 29

I'm putting dibs on Lauren to be my best friend. That whole exchange between her and Edward made me laugh so much, I really needed that. I hope Edward doesn't tell Jane where Bella's going on hols, I have visions of her tracking her down to put the frighteners on her or bump her off. Edward needs to watch his step with her as well. I can't believe that Edward has got himself into this position, as Lauren said so well, he's supposed to be the piggin' adult.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 28

It seems Edward may have actually just found his missing heart. I'm glad he didn't mention selling her shares but then bloody Jane chimes in, literally. What will Bella think and do now?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 27

Woohoo!! Good for Emmett, good things happen to good people. Now let's hope that something good happens for Bella. I want to be friends with Jess and Lauren, they're hilarious and Lauren's imagination knows no bounds, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 26

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He'd better not do what he's thinking of doing, stupid arsehole. Bella, dear God, Bella's too vulnerable to deal with this fuckery right now. I hope Uncle Jon is keeping his eagle eyes open and his ear to the ground and stops her doing anything stupid if she puts herself in that position. Maybe Rose will work it all out, that girl's savvy.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 25

Edward is an effing using bastard! How's that one? When he 'attacked' Bella in his room I was willing her to push him away and walk off but of course she wouldn't because she loves him. She needs her friends right now and a family surrounding her. As for graduation, well if I was Bella there'd be no way I'd be e-mailing him about it.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2014 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 24

Oh God, I don't know how much more of this I can stand, you've made me cry and Edward's still being a twat of Michelin Man proportions. *sob*

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 23

Oh Bella, my heart goes out to her. She has from now until when, about October time to make Edward fall in love and admit it to her before Uni starts.

I can't believe Edward, I could push his stupid face into the back of his head. I hoped he'd turned a corner but no he still had to shit on Bella again the next day. I would say she should leave him so he'd realise what he was missing but the stupid loon would probably just accept it for the best. God he's such an arsehole.

I loved the Jonathan Harker reference, it made me laugh which is more than Edward did, the dickhead.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

I can't believe that Edward spouted all that crap at Bella about their marriage and their wedding night being a colossal mistake, she should have lamped him one. Lol, your story is making me violent. Is he denying his feelings to protect himself? Does the fact that he's now taken Bella to his bed mean that he's accepted he has feelings for her or is he just going to shit all over her again in morning? He has the power to destroy Bella at this point more thoroughly than she could destroy him.

Jane x 



Author's Response:

Hey Jane

Just thought I'd respond to your latest review, as you asked a question.  The fact is that Edward is absolutely terrified of his feelings for Bella and of letting himself fall for her.  All the important people in his life have abandoned him - his father, by his cold detachment, his mother by deserting him, and Charlie and Renee by dying.  It's why he's been incapable of forming a proper relationship with a woman, preferring to stay with someone like Tanya, who he could never love, and thus could never be hurt by her.  Bella's presence in his life and his growing attraction to her has completely stunned him, and he's flailing about in unknown waters.  It doesn't excuse his deplorable behaviour, but it does go some way to explaining it.

As ever, I'm immensely grateful for all your great comments, and am thoroughly enjoying reading your reactions as you read.

Liz

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 10:25 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bwahahaha!! Child-proof container, oh God that's a new one on me, lol. I love Jess and Lauren, they're comedy gold especially when it's all three of them together.

See this is what happens when you go from 0 to 60 in five seconds flat. They may know each other sexually but they've missed the getting to know each other on a romantic dating level. They need to do that and talk, say what they feel instead of trying to read one another's minds.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wow! I need a fan, that was hot. Definitely a first time to enjoy and remember. It was sad that Bella thought Edward was going to leave her in bed on her own all night, they really do need to talk, it's no good Edward talking to a stranger in the bar. I loved Edward's smugness at his recovery time and hard on, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 7:36 PM Title: Chapter 19

Condoms, he's gone to buy condoms, lol. Rose is a good friend and I'm glad she spoke to Bella to make sure that she truly wanted to be with Edward, what she doesn't realise is how Edward feels about Bella and how he's been trying to battle those feelings because he didn't think they were right. I really hope he tells Bella before they sleep together, she needs to know he's doing this out of love and not obligation. I think on some level she realises this from all the mixed signals Edward has given her.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 18

Thank God they found her, I really thought they weren't going to make it. Will Bella marry Edward like this or will they both come to there senses. I know Edward loves Bella, even if he's only just admitting it to himself, but I think he's doing this out of desperation to protect Bella and her interests. They should talk about it first.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 17

What about talking to the police a nd explaining what's happened, that Bella's under age, surely that counts for something. Maybe ringing around the wedding chapels and telling them if Bella turns up she's under age. I take it she's not old enough to marry without Edward's consent? God, I hope they find her before money grabbing James get the chance to do anything.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

Oh my God! I can't believe she's doing this, and Vegas. Noooo!! This is beyond monumentally stupid this could be personal and financial devastation. This is where Bella truly shows her age and how much growing up she has to do. Please tell me Edward reaches her before she either does something stupid or is forced into it.

My eyes nearly fell out of my head twice at the end of this chapter. I'm glad I don't have to wait for the update.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:46 PM Title: Chapter 15

Edward certainly made his point about Bella staying out but using her parents to do so was extremely cruel, he should have left them out of it. I know Bella scared him to death and what she did was also cruel but who's the adult here, two wrongs don't make a right. Lol, I could sulk for Britain at Bella's age and I would have stayed in but then I would have cut my nose off to spite my face in those days. I know it served no purpose but to ultimately hurt myself but I couldn't give in. Bella's a better person than I was.

Is this woman at the bar Edward's friend?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 14

Okay two steps forward, one step back. I think they're both as bad as each other, neither of them are blameless in all of this but being the full grown adult, Edward has to take responsibility for most of it. But then how do you reconcile the fact that you're falling in love with your ward and feeling guilty about that because she's his ward, only seventeen, the daughter of one of his best friends, his father figure and the girl he affectionately called belly button? How do you do that?

Edward went beyond in his rant at Bella implying she was a slut and a whore. That really was unforgivable and I really don't know how Bella didn't slap his face or kick him in the balls. Now he needs to be grovelling for an apology for those insinuations.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

I have to say I'm feeling sorry for Riley in all of this. He's going to be hurt and probably angry when he finds out how old Bella is, not to mention that he doesn't even stand a chance because of Edward. There's no way Bella can move on when she feels the way she does for Edward, it just won't work. Thank God Angela spotted her the night before or else who knows how long this would have gone on for. Now is Rose going to read her the riot act or what?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bloody Tanya, so insecure in herself she has to resort to threatening and belittling a seventeen year old girl. It looks as though Bella's asserting her independence and booking herself into a hotel. It's really not the right thing to do, I mean she wants to be treated like an adult, not a child and yet she's choosing to punish Edward by disappearing, very childish. They're both so full of conflicted feelings they really need to talk properly.

Jane x



Author's Response:

Hi Jane

Just wanted to let you know that I'm really enjoying your reviews of Wild Child, and that I really appreciate that you're taking the time to comment on each chapter.  You've now seen Bella act out in a very foolish way, and I should probably warn you that this won't be the worst thing she does.  As for Edward, I'm pretty sure you're going to want to punch his lights out as the story progresses (everyone else did LOL!) but hope that you'll hang on in there while he works out how to extract his head from his arse!

Thanks again for all your great comments.

Liz

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 11

I love Emmett and Rose, no nonsense and fun loving. Edward really lets his guard down around Emmett and I think Rose saw a different side to him. They both definitely saw what passed between Edward and Bella, lol. Even though they're not admitting it to one another it's becoming obvious to those around them.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 10

I think they've had a breakthrough, they're actually communicating with each other without screaming, this is definitely progress. Now how is Edward going to actually deal with his ever growing, in more ways than one, feelings for Bella, lol. I hope it's not Tanya buying up these shares either directly or indirectly.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 9

Why didn't Edward just tell her that they were finished? He had the perfect opportunity to do that. It doesn't matter anymore when he dumps her because she'll always blame Bella and accuse Edward of sleeping with her. At least he can't ignore his feelings anymore. Have I said that before?

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 8

Tanya's increasingly being left out and ignored by Edward, how long will it be before she completely blows her top? She spent all that time working on herself and changing and still nobody likes her, well apart from her dad. I dread to think how awful she was before she became this version. Please tell me Edward's going to dump her soon, he can't even be arsed to go to bed with her.

I love the old black and white films, especially Cary Grant.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 7

Hahaha! Bella's comeback was brilliant, no wonder Edward was nearly choking. I don't know how he can still think of Tanya as one of the two most important people in his life when he previously listed her shortcomings and purposely avoided sex with her. His feelings for Bella are increasing by the day and Tanya's really not that stupid, he's going to have to face how he's feeling soon.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 4:10 PM Title: Chapter 6

Urgh! Tanya's here and suspicious of Bella. I get the feeling she's going to try and make Bella's life as miserable as hell whilst she's here. It's getting harder for Edward to ignore his feelings for Bella and did I actually hear him stick up for her....yes, I think I did. Edward better get his arse into gear if he doesn't want Bella to catch him ogling her, the perv, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 5

Uh-oh! What's Edward going to do? More to the point what's Bella going to do? If he agrees they both get something. Bella gets a part of what she wants but not what she needs and Edward gets what he needs but not what it's slowly dawning on him that he wants. What a pickle.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love that they call themselves The Three Minge-keteers, bloody brilliant. I also love your Author's Notes, as a Brit I follow them perfectly and really have no need to read them but they're so entertaining, your American readers must think we're crazy, lol.

Bella raised a good point, what if Edward deviates from his promise? He can't put the success or failure of this onto Bella, he has to realise and accept he's played a major part in what's been going on.

I'm still laughing at Jessica falling out of bed and the whole morning after scene, the bad language and close friendship they share, happy days. It brings back so many of my own memories which just goes to prove that teenagers never change.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2014 11:22 AM Title: Chapter 3

Hahaha! I love Jessica's and Laurens nicknames but Bella's is priceless, lol. Okay, it's official, I love Harriet and Lynda but I hate Kate. Harriet is exactly what Bella has been missing from her life. Edward would do well to realise quickly that Bella doesn't need flowers and chocolates, she needs his time and affection, I hope he gets there soon. Kate, urgh, she's after Edward and she's a complete bitch. If I was Bella she'd be on the sacking list or maybe demote her to be Lynda's assistant, lol. Of course she'll have to wait for that opportunity but maybe she could have some fun at her expense in the meantime.

Jane x

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Date: 05 Jul 2014 9:08 AM Title: Chapter 2

Bella's certainly screaming for attention and who can blame her after what happened. These two are the victims of circumstance. I think during this time together they need to call a truce, which is easier said than done with a teenager, and start from scratch. Edward needs to dump Tanya because as he said he only likes her, he doesn't love her. What's the point of being together if you don't love them? It's just friend with benefits, plus I think she'll monopolize Edward's time. The feelings both Edward and Bella have for each other cannot be ignored.

Jane x

Reviewer: Robsblueeyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

Mrs Banner's right, Bella is lonely and needs attention. Trouble is Edward's lonely too, it seems he spends all his time working. I'm not sure who's in for the bigger shock when they spend some quality time together, Edward or Bella, lol.

Jane x

Reviewer: sherry01 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 8:08 PM Title: Chapter 20

Hi I lovvve your story!!!! I think your an awesome writer and I cannot stop reading this story!! I am on chapter 20, but all the words are pressed together, an I'm going crazy trying read it!!! Is there a way you could send that chapter to my e mail? My e mail is sherry0129@yahoo.com.

Reviewer: Carinamason Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2013 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 39

Aww loved it! You rock with the ust!! Lol. X

Reviewer: gatorgrl91 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 39

Awesome story!!! The angst with "stupid" Edward and getting his head/heart straight was nerve wracking but worth it! Way to weave in Jane and the mob bit-very clever. :)
Thx for the ride!

Reviewer: andiwalker75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter 39

I really enjoyed this story. I expected Tanya to cause more problems especially after she found out about them getting married.

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Date: 07 Jan 2013 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

hello. I want to ask you for permission to translate this story on Russian I would be glad to see your written permission in the form of letters in the mailbox anyutik-k@yandex.ru . thank you in advance! and thank you for the beautiful story!

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Date: 06 Jan 2013 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 12

hello! First I want to thank you for is perfectly, interesting story Wild Child. and as an enthusiastic reader will want to ask your permission to translate your stories into Russian. I would like to post this fic on one site, of course and retains all of the author's reference to the original. I would be very happy to share this story with readers from Russia! Thanks in advance!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 39

Thanks for the story enjoyed it!

 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 38

Yeah!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 37

So they are back on!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 36

Wow shocking!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:35 AM Title: Chapter 35

Yeah it's about time!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 34

Did she loose her memory?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 33

She is way messed up!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 32

Wow what a twist!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 31

How sad for her :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 30

Barely with you.....

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 29

You suck Ed!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 28

Arghhh!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 27

I am to the point where I don't give a crap what happens!  Their stupidity is out of control!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 26

Why is Ed such a dumb ass?  I am soo put off with him I almost want to stop reading!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 25

What a douche bag!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 24

They coud mess up a nightmare!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 23

:(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2012 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 22

What is going to happen?  I am so anxious for Bella!  Ed is going to do om etching dumb I can feel it

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 21

I have a feeling this isn't going to be good

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

Don't tell me....it's all downhill for awhile isn't it?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 19

Didn't expect that to happen!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 18

This is not good!  At least he got there in time!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 17

Please let him find her in time!

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 16

This is too deep for you Bella!   This is not good at all?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 15

Oh the angst!

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

Ed you are such an ass!  How could you say all that to her?

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh my!  

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh bella don't step in the crap your bruing too deep or Ed won't be able to pull you out!

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 11

Glad he is treating her better!  Who wants the company?

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

But she is not gone permanently though is she?

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 8

Oh boy complicated doesn't even cover it!

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

Please Edward she is such a skank!

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 6

Oh what a complete mess they have found themselves in!

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh my didn't see that coming!

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 4

Oh my what wrong thing is he going to do next?

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 3

You are so clueless Edward!

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:55 AM Title: Chapter 2

Hummmm how is this all going to go...I am pulled in now!

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Date: 22 Nov 2012 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 1

Oh Bella you have yourself deep in this one!

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Date: 12 Nov 2012 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 39

Ive hung on every word for the last 24 hours, thanks for such an emotional ride!!!!

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Date: 11 Nov 2012 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 39

Enjoyed reading your story. Will be waiting until the next one. 

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Date: 03 Nov 2012 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 39

Loved the vows, they did fit perfectly for these two. 

What a great read this has been and thank you so much for sticking with it & completing it. Loved your sense of humor and am looking forward to reading more of your works.

Thanks again.

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