[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 10:40 AM Title: Chapter 13
Lets see....Jasper is an ass, he could be nicer to Bella, after all it isn't HIS relationship. He needs to grow up.Maybe Alice needs to leave his ass and he will see what he is doing. I wonder about the email, waiting for the next chapter but I have some thoughts on that as well. Good-bye James!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 8:39 AM Title: Chapter 13
Good chapter.........
Date: 14 Sep 2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 13
The fact Bella stood up for herself and stopped being a victim makes me happy. Must be the new surgeon is a med school gal he dated.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 13
About time someone told Jasper how much of an Assper he is being. I mean so what if she isn't a beautiful skinny blond haired model. She is at least trying to fix herself to be better for herself. And she is working on the wright. Jasper needs to respect his brother's relationship with Bella and start respecting her. Or else he's going to loose more then just his brother. Good story so far. I love it. Can't wait for more.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
assper needs to go!!!!!!!! unless he gets his head out of his ass. thanks for writing.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
i'm glad this chapter had less angst, it's good to see them progressing and i'm guessing the new doctor is gonna be none other than jacob black. please update soon!!!!!!!!!!1
Date: 14 Sep 2012 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
oooh yummy yummy chapter. Glad she told Jazz off. Superficial arsehole.
Ugh afraid what is going to happen with creeper James though.
Date: 14 Sep 2012 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 13
OMG, Jacob's the new surgeon, now that's a problem , ¬¬ we can only hope that Bella'll be ok...
Uhrrrrrr, this Jasper is an ass, I almost wishing for Alice to break up with him!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 13
Bella should have kicked him in the balls when she left!!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
lol <----- hands up for Edward holding something back. Not sure what, but he's hiding something. LOVE the fluffy stuff. About time they move forward in that department. The cooking class was a great addition and made for a wonderful date. And yeah, I don't think we're done with the douchebag James. OOOh....I know....I bet ya the new Doc is Jacob. He's transferred from the other hospital to make Bella's life more of a hell. Girl just can't catch a break! I totally look forward to the Ohau trip! That's gonna be fun! Thanks for sharing!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 13
Jacob' coming to work with them, I just know it!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2012 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well I hope its not Tanya coming back into his life.. I thinking Jasper is gonna come around but I also think its gonna be after Tanya shows her true color when it comes to Bella and Edward... hopefully I'm wrong because I don't want to see Tanya bring Bella back her insecurities again... can't wait for the next chapter
Date: 13 Sep 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good for Bella. Standing up for herself against Jasper.
Date: 10 Sep 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor thing. So messedup in the head. Thank goodness for good friends
Date: 08 Sep 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Omg i got so choked up reading this chapter amazing xxx
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2012 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
she's so broken.. I love this story
but I don't thin a really fluffly and sweet chapter would be realistic. this has to go slow. that's why I like your story, it's real... please keep it real and don't give a darn about haters.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 12
That was a hard chapter to read but you did a good job writing it. Looking forward to the next update.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 12
This chapter was just so emotional. Glad to see Edward not giving up on her, as of yet. The intervention was an excellent ideal. At least now Bella knows she has people in her corner. Charlie's an ass, is the drama with him over or is there more to come?
Looking forward to more...
Date: 04 Sep 2012 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 12
I was just about to ask if you could get rid of James! He's slimy and creepy! I live in an apartment building in Chicago, and the idea of encountering someone so skeevy is just eeewww. Poor Bella she makes progress, then the reason for her issues hit her again. I can't wait until she gains some insight and has her true breakthrough. Love this story, and looking forward to see what happens for B and E!
Date: 04 Sep 2012 8:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
this chapter left me feeling, angry, frustrated, annoyed, but..... mostly sad i know we have to be patient but hopfuly next chapter will bring some happiness or lemony goodnes.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 12
I could not read the last part of this chapter. I know someone like this, she is dead now from a health reason.
You have to decide to stand up and not be a victim. Say HELL NO. If you can not love yourself no one else will either. I get she is over weight and that bothers her but this father is beyond bad.
Date: 04 Sep 2012 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 12
It's difficult to change when you don't love yourself, everything is hard and impossible!! I understand how Bella feels.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great update. Yes Bella is a mess, but with Edward, Michelle and whoever else she lets in, I think she'll be great!
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2012 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Great chapter. Update soon.
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 12
Let Rose have James for bothering Bella. She would kick his nasty sorry a*s.
Date: 03 Sep 2012 7:02 PM Title: Chapter 12
j'aime cette histoire
Date: 03 Sep 2012 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
poor Bella, a father that treats her like dirt and has destroyed her self esteem. Thankfully Edward loves her and has stuck true to her and their relationship. He is so good for her. Happy to hear the next chapter will be happy, this one was tough for sure! great writing
Date: 03 Sep 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
I like the way you are handling the story. I have read most of the stories you have posted here...and I have enjoyed all of them. Keep up with the good work!!!
Date: 03 Sep 2012 5:27 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love how Bella realized that she really loves Edward and that he really loves her. I think that they will make it.. He loves her too much to let her go.. He is very patient with her and she will get better and more confident.. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
Well jail is a good place for Charlie. They have free medical care warm hard bed and food. keep him there!
Date: 28 Aug 2012 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
time for her to go past the kissing only stage.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 6
I am so glad for both of them. You know she might loose weight now that her attitude about her own life is changing. :=)
Date: 28 Aug 2012 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
He needed a good friend and so did she. I feel the same way. Charlie going to lock her out? ass.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Once she starts caring about herself all the rest falls into place. Not everyone is a size 4. We all come in various sizes. After getting really sick in 1995 I was put on massive doses of prednisone. I gained 35 pounds so quick and it never came off no matter what I did. Then the down side of the illness was the loss of over 50% of my lungs. So exercising.. ha tieing my shoes was exhausting. etc etc.
Date: 28 Aug 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 2
People assume because someone is heavy they are lazy. That is just the beginning of the assumptions.
Date: 25 Aug 2012 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Whoever gave you bad reviews were way off. I absolutly love this story. I've read it twice so far and am impatiently waiting for more chapters from you. Thank you for entertaining me with such an amazing Edward.
Date: 23 Aug 2012 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow! Bellas dealing with her dad that was shocking. A litte lime action was excellent!
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2012 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Send him to anger management in jail for a bit. Let him realize just what he has lost. This was a great chapter with progress for the love birds. I am interested in the coffee date between Rose and Bella and how they can help each other.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 11
I don't have any idea of what will happen with Charlie and Bellabut bravo Bella for sticking up for herself. Love how she is at least thinking about going to the gym. Also love how she is considering and trying to eat healthier. I can kind of relate to Bella where as I've recently lost a bunch of weight. When you are heavy people look at you and treat you like you have a dieses. I'm not where I want to be size wise but I'm working on it. I love that we are seeing Bella's self esteem build.
I can not wait to read whay is going to happen next!
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2012 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter. Maybe this will be Charlie wake up call. Maybe u should have Charlie go to jail for a bit bad when when he comes out Ihe will be nicer.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 11
I don't even know what to say about Charlie, but if not even losing his leg AND his daugther made him change, nothing will, so maybe he needs a little time in jail!!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 11
okay, Charlie is an asshole of the lowest order. I think that he needs to be arrested and let him rot in prison. I have a feeling though that somehow he is gonna get Sam to say it was self defense....Lord only knows who would buy that. If they do I have some ocean front property in Arizona to sell them.
Nice lime....Bella is slowly opening (no pun intended) herself up to Edward. I love it. Great job.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh no you can't stop it there!!!! love it~~
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
Your story is so good you are a great writer and i love everything i read from you
Date: 22 Aug 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 11
lOVED THE CHAPTER!
Date: 22 Aug 2012 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 11
Glad to see Bella getting stonger with her confidence.
Damn, lock Charlie up and throw away the key. Go Bella for finalyy standing up for herself.
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2012 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 11
Woo hoo for mini lemon. Ang is a trip. Charlie is a major douchebucket
Cant wait for more
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 11
Ok, Charlie needs a serious dose of reality. Bring on the law! How dare he pull her hair out!
I'm glad Bella is going to start using the gym at her apartment, but beware of slimy James! Loved that she ate a healthy lunch, but the burger and fries with Angela? Big no no! She needs to stop eating crap like that. Feeling healthier will only increase her confidence and her new relationship will thrive.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
Love this story, so glad that Bella is slowly building her confidence. I have someone in my life that your Bella reminds me of.
Date: 22 Aug 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was more than lime...that was more like limeade, lol! I loved it, Bella is opening herself up to new experiences in more ways then one. Charlie should suffer more than he already has. Big jerk! I'm glad there were witnesses. I don't think your able to mend that relationship.
Screw those that complain about this story.....they must like it if they keep reading...:)
Date: 22 Aug 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 11
Good chapter....
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 2
It brought tears to my eyes. Rosie souded just like my daughter when she had eating problems. My daughter stopped eating when my other daughter died. She felt guilty eating when her sister couldn't. xx
Date: 19 Aug 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
I really really enjoy this story and can't wait for an update!
Date: 16 Aug 2012 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 10
Looking forward to more.
Date: 16 Aug 2012 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
Just want to say I love this story!!
Date: 13 Aug 2012 2:16 PM Title: Chapter 10
What the hell is wrong with those jerks?? Bella never never did anything to any of those people but they still treat her horribly... They need to grow up!!!
I want a Edward for me, because Jasper is on my black list with what he said about Bella!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Aug 2012 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great story, looking forward to the next chapter.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
great job. Wow Jasper is an even bigger arse than I thought. Newton and Crowley need to grow the F up. Although they are like many men, esp here is Vegas....sigh. Glad Alice and Rose and Ang are supportive of B.
Date: 13 Aug 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 10
In love with this story. I can tell you that I'm not looking for the sperm donor to come back. I'd also love to know why people hate Bella. I mean, there has to be something besides the way she looks, maybe jealousy? Also, I can't believe how much of an ass Jasper. I'd love to see what in the world goes on in his head. How incredbly shallow. How would he feel if Alice wasn't so thin. As you can see I'm not quite ready to forgive him yet ;)
[Report This]Date: 11 Aug 2012 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
That was awesome! Bella will get there and I can't wait to see how she does it!
Date: 09 Aug 2012 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
I really like this story, even though Bella, at times has me feeling depressed. I can't wait for her to be happy with herself. I do wish she could have gotten a little more furious in her letter to Jacob.
At the ball, will Jacob be there?
Creepy James... I'm curious as to where you go with that now. That's all Bella needs is for him to force himself on her. Her self esteem would be squashed.
[Report This]Date: 09 Aug 2012 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Screw the hater, I love this story and it's so great to see Bella start to believe in herself.
Date: 08 Aug 2012 10:34 AM Title: Chapter 9
Whoop whoop go Bella :0)
Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 9
Another great chapter! Love this story!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 9
I adore this chapter! I love how sweet Edward is and the girl's night out had me laughing out loud!
Date: 07 Aug 2012 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
...sorry I still get dreamy over Dr. Kovac too lol. I am glad she is having a breakthrough good for her.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter. is Bella going to meet rose next chapter? Please udpate soon.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 10:57 AM Title: Chapter 9
Loved it. Thanks for the update. And to the idiot who left you that review....go to hell! I love this story and your writing. I hate when peopleleave anon reviews because they are essentially announcing that they are cowards! Head up, keep writing and I'll keep reading! Can't wait for the next update.
Date: 07 Aug 2012 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 9
YOU!!! ARE AN AMAZING WRITER. I HAVE ENJOYED READING AND RE-READING ALL YOUR STORIES WHEN LIFE GET'S CRAZY SO DON'T EVER LET ANYONE EVER TELL YOU OTHERWISE.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 9
I loved this chapter! Possibly the best yet of this story. I say that with all sincerity I have, as I love being able to feel what the character is feeling, and this chapter did that. I love reading stories that are so well written, that I can imagine myself as the character and therefore feel what's going on. Yes, Bella did go thru quite the gamut of emotions this chapter, but I wouldn't have it any other way. As anyone who knows what she's going through, she's finding her way thanks to her friends, boyfriend, and therapist. I'm looking forward to the day when she looks herself in the mirror and says, "I'm beautiful."
Love this story so much! Can't wait for the next chapter!
xoxo
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! Can't wait for more! Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 9
First off, screw the anonymous reviewer. I like this story and think you do a great job at story telling. Now my question is what the hell is up James? He is really freaking me out. I'm almost scared to see who it is he will attack. I can feel it coming. Can't wait for the update. Thanks, Maria
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
I think your story is wonderful and I think it's real. I read this story where the characters said ILY within hours of meeting each other and then when Bella left and came back, they had make up sex and Bella said I'm sorry and it was over. I'm a firm believer that people don't react that way. As much as I love fluff and stuff, things are not all happiness and rose colored glasses. Your characters react in ways I would expect real people to react. Just because Bella apologized for not trusting Edward with Rosalie doesn't mean that the hurt Edward felt goes away. Sure, he understands where she's coming from but it still hurts and just because Bella finds an amazing guy doesn't mean that years of awfulness goes away. Thank you so much for making this story about real people and not just the canned MFEO crap a lot of authors put out. There are hurdles in real life, it's not just smooth sailing. Again, I think your story is wonderful and to hell with the person who said you wrote Edward like a 15 year old girl! I look forward to reading the new chapter of your story everytime it pops up in my inbox.
Date: 07 Aug 2012 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
I understand Bella, no one did to me what they did to her, but I think it's in my nature to not trust very easily, in a way it's good, but at the same time it's very lonely.
I hope that Bella's able to change, but not give all her trust to anyone, she needs to guard her heart a little bit...
Date: 07 Aug 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 9
LOVE LOVE LOVE Angela and Cynthia in this chapter. I think B writing letters is a great idea. Edward is so cool
Date: 31 Jul 2012 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
Man, we women really take everything personally when our self esteem is low. I hope Michele gives her some tough love and that Edward can bring Bella and Rose together soon. Thanks for the update and love this story.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awe...wow he said it early. Or maybe its not. I've lost track of how much time has passed. Newton needs his ass handed to him on a stick, preferably inserted into an unpleasant orafice...
Date: 30 Jul 2012 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 8
LOVE IT!!!! YeS!!! she needed to be smacked!!!!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
B def needs a shrink. Go rose for venturing out
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
OMG!!!! I LOVE IT!!!!! Thank you SO much!!!!
Date: 30 Jul 2012 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 8
At least Bella realises that she still has some problems to trust people, but hoppefully she'll get help from the therapy and from her friends...
Date: 29 Jul 2012 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 8
excellent chapter please update soon!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
I really, really love this story. Excellent chapter. Having had issues similar to this Bella, this type of situation was practically a given. What type of update schedule do you have, if any? Great job! =)!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Great chapter. Please udpate soon.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 8
Good chapter.......
Date: 29 Jul 2012 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wow I feel like Ive been through the flu and an almost breakup. I need a nap! LOL! Thanks for writing.
Date: 29 Jul 2012 8:57 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well.....I'm glad that they survived their first fight. Poor thing.....Bella's dad really did a number on her and her self esteam. Poor baby :-(
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2012 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wonderful chapter, had a little bit of everything but the sexin' ;-) - understand the need for some angst but thank you for not dragging it into multiple chapters!