Date: 21 May 2013 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 16
What an awesome chapter! Thanks for writing. xo Kelly
Date: 21 May 2013 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
Awesome chapter! xo Kelly
Date: 13 May 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 28
thank god that dirty bastard is put away now Rose can heal and learn to trust Emmett with all of her. Poor Bella she is in bad shape I hope nothing as bad as her dreams come true.
Date: 13 May 2013 7:09 PM Title: Chapter 27
How freaked out is she now I think she needs to stay with him at his mom and dads. It has to be Jacob witht he rabbit but you are probley fooling me.
Date: 13 May 2013 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 26
I am with them i never wanted to come back home from there. Charlie is calling?//
Date: 13 May 2013 7:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
she likes it just as much as he does suprise to her lol.
Date: 13 May 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
Fun times it is so amazing there and Edward is going to be such a happy man when he gets his public sexy time lol.
Date: 05 May 2013 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 28
While yes the court sentence was not real realistic, it was damn close and we got the result and vindication that every rape victim should get. So yeah. I'm glad jasper showed up. It shows that he has grown up a little bit.
[Report This]Date: 30 Apr 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Apr 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 28
LOVE THE CHAPTER BUT I SCARED THERE IS SOMETHING BAD GOING TO HAPPEN TO EDWARD AND BELLA LIKE IN HER DREAM
Date: 28 Apr 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 28
Good, very good. Bella's nightmares are vry diturbing however, I see Rose healing. Jasper's lust of Alice, well maybe he finally see's what he lost. I cannit wait until the next chapter. Great job.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:53 PM Title: Chapter 28
This was a hell of a chapter! I'm glad Royce got his. I'm very nervous with what's going to happen with B&E. Charlie is a real piece of work.
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 28
Love it that Rose got justice for the hell Royce put her through!
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 28
Garrett and Alice's I love you's, not a moment to soon. Though I'm glad Jasper showed up to support Rose.
Poor Bella she seems to be slowly losing it. Glad Garrett was there for her until Edward could be.
Glad to see justice was served to Royce, he had it all coming to him in spades.
Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 28
I just served Jury Duty...you'd be surprised. lol
Great as always. Glad Garrett was there for B. aww for Rose and Em
[Report This]Date: 28 Apr 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 28
As alwas awesome chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2013 11:23 PM Title: Chapter 28
yeah lemons the best part lol along with the actual plot!!!!!!! so glad that that bastard is going to jail he so deserves it loooved how he got butt raped god damn mother fucker!!!!!!!!!!!! sorry just venting! update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!! kinda worried about what's gonna happen with charlie and jacob i hope its not bad.
Date: 27 Apr 2013 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 28
update soon please!!!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2013 12:37 PM Title: Chapter 28
Wow what a great chapter!! Its over for Rose...so she can move on with her life. Everyone should take Bella's dream serious...its gonna get bad I'm sure. Edward and Bella won't die. But it will be bad! Keep up the good work!!! I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!
Date: 27 Apr 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
Finally that bastard will be locked up forever!! Now Charlie and Jacob and everything will be okay, E/B-world!!
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2013 12:16 PM Title: Chapter 28
Great chapter. Glad to see Royce finaly behind bars. Update soon
[Report This]Date: 27 Apr 2013 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 28
:) loved this chapter
Date: 27 Apr 2013 5:43 AM Title: Chapter 28
Thank God Royce got the book thrown at him. Knew there was something between him and that lawyer. What woman would defend a man that did that?! I am so proud of Rose for taking the stand and for opening up some to Emmett. She needed to do both of those things. Great progress for her. As for Bella...I feel so bad for her! She's having a major freak out. Her damned father is going to come back in some capacity. Shithead. I hate him. I have a feeling Jacob isn't done yet either. I am now more than convinced Jacob had something to do with bonding Charlie out. FUCKER. I want to kick both their asses. Anyways...Thanks for sharing!
Date: 27 Apr 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 28
I hate Royce so much! But this chapter was so intense but really good! Can't wait for the next update!!
Date: 14 Apr 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 27
I'm glad that Bella got a little good news about school before the shit storm happened. Poor Rosalie while it's horrible What they are saying about her. I'm glad that she is going to fight them.
[Report This]Date: 11 Apr 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 19
I'm so happy they are finally getting together
[Report This]Date: 10 Apr 2013 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 16
god they are adorable..I love your story
[Report This]Date: 09 Apr 2013 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 27
Update soon please :)
[Report This]Date: 08 Apr 2013 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 1
I trying not to dislike lauren and Jessica but its hard. Big girls needs love too.
Date: 04 Apr 2013 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 27
Just wanted to say I love this story and I look forward to updates when they come :)
[Report This]Date: 04 Apr 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 27
Rose was a spitfire at the club, that Rose needs to prevail throughout the trail. A woman defending Royce is degrading to woman in general, but he and his attorney seemed a little too friendly just to be associated by counsel representation. He's scum.
Volkswagon Rabbit tail... has to be Jacob seeking his opportunity for revenge.
The dream in italics wasn't hard to follow. That was a messed up 'nightmare' to have. It's almost like foreboding of something to come.
Seatbelt on and awaiting the bumpy ride.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2013 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for the update! Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 03 Apr 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 17
Well its good that Bella Can stand up for herself, but I think the treatment of Bella to Jasper is too excessive, and Jasper was also very crazy for hating Bella with the thoughts like that. Nobodys perfect, RIGHT ? And jelous bcs Bella and Edward relationship ? No make sense at all. But still good chapter ;)))
Date: 02 Apr 2013 5:59 PM Title: Chapter 27
Whoa!!!! What a craptastic dream to have :(
And there's fall out, no bueno. But if next chapter has potential lemons than yah!!! Means summin good for the couple that needs no more angst (even tho her big angst is on its way).
Can't wait for next chapt!!!
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2013 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 27
Great Chapter!!!! I can't wait for Rose to take the stand. I'm sure it will be hard but she will make the jury see what Roice is really like. Poor Bella and her dream. I'm sure its gonna be rough for her. Keep up the great work!!
Date: 02 Apr 2013 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 27
Yep Dream. Rabbit.. Jake. grr
Date: 02 Apr 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 27
So, I'm totally thinking the Volkswagen person is Jacob. He's stalking her wanting revenge on her for everything and blames her. I happy to see snarky Rosalie at the club. I'm OUTRAGED at Royce's lawyer being a female. Who would do that? I'm happy that the female scumbag lawyer has amped up Rosalie and she's going to defend herself and take the stand. That's good. And OMG that dream?! That's just messed up. I'm hoping that Bella's dream does not become reality...oh wait...you don't do messed up ending like that. However, I can see a potential scenario that would work that way....a bit. I love the amped up drama! Hope all is going well with the changes you've had in RL. *and don't be offended that I'm outraged at Royce's lawyer. It's NOT against you. I'm baffled why a woman would agree to be his attorney. She must be crazy!* Thanks for sharing and look forward to the next update! :)
Date: 02 Apr 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 27
the calm before the storm. great job Tuf. Love ya, hang in there.
[Report This]Date: 02 Apr 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 27
Love it! What a riveting chapter!
Date: 02 Apr 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 27
Wow hard chapter. Makes you want to hate all lawyers doesnt it? Poor B. I was worried dreams would come back.
Date: 01 Apr 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 27
Great chapter and I'm still with you, I'm even reading another story of you, La Cantante... That is also a very good one ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Apr 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 12
Go bella !!!
Date: 23 Mar 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 26
Loved the smexy island times, now I can't wait to fix out who their mystery caller is!
[Report This]Date: 23 Mar 2013 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 26
I loved the scenes from the island. The obvious guess who's calling would be Jacob or Charlie. But I think its Royce playing mind games, we will see though.
Date: 23 Mar 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 26
Enjoying the story so far!!...keep up the good work and can't wait for the next chapter!!
Date: 21 Mar 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
I'm really enjoying this story and really refreshing to read Bella as a real women I really hope that the"slut sisters" get what they truly deserve
Date: 19 Mar 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 26
I think it's someone from the past... I don't know who, but I can't wait to get an answer!! :)
Date: 18 Mar 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 26
And it begins!! At least they had a wonderful vacation. My guess it is Jacob.. Charlie in toe.
I like how you have helped Bella find her confidence and in turn helped her loose some weight. Being a see saw weight looser I like reading her progress. I think you have done a great job with it.
Can't wait for the next update.
Thanks for sharing with us.
Date: 18 Mar 2013 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 26
I will just say that as someone who has lost 20 pounds and is a comfortable size 10, i applaud you for keeping Bella real. Not all of us have to be a model in order to be happy with ourselves.
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 26
Great chapter...but they have all been great!!!!!! I'm sure the problem they are going have will be with Charlie and Jacob. They have been too quiet. Loved the horse back riding!!! Keep up the great work!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Mar 2013 11:48 AM Title: Chapter 26
I think the person is charlie or either Jacob but those are obvious answers. Update soon!
Date: 17 Mar 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 26
OH GRRRREAT!!!!! YOU LEFT ME HANGING!!! THE IDEA OF GIVING EDWARD A PROMISE WAS REALLY SWEET, I THINK WE DID THAT KIND OF STUFF IN OUR TEENS OR AT LEAST THAT'S HOW I REMEMBER IT DON'T YOU?? YOU REMEMBER YOUR GUY WOULD WEAR YOUR BRACELET OR CHAIN OR EVEN A RING..... NO! NOT YOU!!! OH WELL ANOTHER GREAT CHAPTER UPDATE SOON.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 26
I love the dog tag inscription. You are a very talented writer. I wonder who is calling and hanging up. Not good. I absolutely love this story!
Date: 17 Mar 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 26
tufano - you are a extremely talented writer. great chapter my dear. i loved the dog tag inscription.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 26
I bet it's her father. We haven't heard from him in awhile.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 26
Please please post soon!! Excellent chapter.
Date: 17 Mar 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 26
mmmmmm take us back there. like always it's wonderful
Date: 17 Mar 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 26
Wow, what a wonderful end to all things in Oahu. Oh...and are we foreshadowing with the sex without a condom. Is there gonna be a baby on the way soon? hehe. And I like the solution to Bella's "mark". Rosalie's suggestion of the tat as a wedding tribute to her works out even better. And dude, the shit storm starts the second they're home? That SUCKS! Poor them. It's either her douchebag father or Jacob. Or probably the both of them. And I certainly hope that Royce gets what's coming to him. Major jail time that he can't be released from. Rosalie deserves to be happy. He's a scumbag. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 16 Mar 2013 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 26
Wonderful vaca. Loved her present to him. Crank callers suck arse.
Date: 05 Mar 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
Really enjoying your story
Date: 04 Mar 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
Awesome lemon
Date: 28 Feb 2013 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 25
looikng forward to the next chapter!!!
Date: 28 Feb 2013 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter. Update soon
Date: 27 Feb 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 25
You aren't kidding it was long. I always read before bed and I was so tired after the car sex scene. That I stopped reading and finished it now on my lunch break. It really was a fun chapter. I'm glad that they have found out more about who they are as a couple and it was nice to hear about Edwards past.
Date: 27 Feb 2013 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 25
:) great chapter, but a weird ending, I love to read more! :)
Date: 27 Feb 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love, love, love it, please post more soon!
Date: 27 Feb 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great chapter my dear. I have to say I am truly worried about the storm brewing at home. My imagination is running wild on what you could be planning for our heroine. Until next time - thanks for all your writing efforts your stories are something I look forward to.
Date: 27 Feb 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
Bella should have told that girl where to stick her lei....
E/k
Date: 26 Feb 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well, Edward finally got his fill of public sex. And that was totally hot, btw! I totally want to go to Hawaii. I've never been there. It sounds fun. And for a guy that's so good in the bedroom, how in the hell does he suck so bad at doing a hula dance? He should be able to do that pretty well. But it's hilarious to think he was so bad that he wound up making it positive with the Macarena. That was absolutely great! Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 26 Feb 2013 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 25
Wonder ful as always. Susie is an obllivious idiot. Hate people like that. Glad they had fun at the luau otherwise. and of course all the great sex. LOL
Date: 26 Feb 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awwww! They really are perfect sexual deviants for each other.
So where were you when 9/11 happened. I was at Temple University in class. It was weird my class had started at 7:45 am so no one knew what was happening. My second class of the day had been cancelled so a bunch of us sat in the quad just talking around 10:30 we went into the Anderson building to get something to eat and someone was pulling a tv into the room. Once the tv was on we thought it was some kind if movie it took us all a couple of minutes to realize what was happening. Then it seemed like all hell broke loose. Apparently there was a list of potential targets and Temple along with the Penn were listed on it so the campus was evacuated. Let me tell you that gain ride home was the longest of my life. It's funny how you can remember it like it just happened yesterday.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 14
So much drama! So much is going on! I needed to go to bed about three chapters ago, but I can't stop reading; I have to see what happens next! :) I am so happy for Bella, she is doing so much better. Yep, I figured Jasper would blow his relationship with Alice. Poor Alice. She will be fine though, she just needs a little time, and the love of her friends. I honestly don't see her with Jasper anyway. In my eyes, there is nothing he can do or say to erase the crap he said about and to Bella. It was unforgivable in my mind. His narrowminded, vain thinking has screwed up the relationship with his siblings; I wonder if Edward or Rose will speak to him again someday. Now as far as Dr. Black goes; I can't tell you how much I laughed my butt off at the fact that he has to deal with all the really icky cases in the ER. haha! Like I say, "Karma is a bitch." I can't wait until he and Bella are face to face; I wonder what she'll say to him, and visa versa...As far as Charlie getting out on bail, *frowns* I can't imagine who would pay that for him. I think I'm too tired to analyze right now, maybe after I get some sleep I'll be able to really think about it. I do have this nagging feeling about James too, although I'm not sure if his character is done in your story. Well I'm off to bed now, but I'll be back; I'm half way caught up! xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter, but I can't remember what all I wanted to comment on. Jasper has me seeing red! What a shallow little bastard! What does he even mean when he asks Bella if she's seen pics of Edward's ex? I can't believe he said to her face about how tall, thin, and gorgeous Tanya is. Bella already knows that she isn't tall, and that she has curves, but Jasper made it sound like Bella is ugly. Ugh! He is the one who is ugly, inside and out. I'm glad she called him out on his prejudice. I'd love it if Bella tells Edward what Jasper said, and then watch Edward come unglued on his brother. And poor Alice...You know even if Jasper were to apologize, I don't feel he deserves it. There is no excuse for his shitty attitude toward Bella, he should be happy for his brother. I can't wait to see what happens next. xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
*Heavy sigh* What a heavy chapter, but so, so good. I can really feel the character's feelings, and emotions as I'm reading. You know that's because of your words and writing don't you? Well if you don't, you should. You're a really good storyteller.
Damn that Charlie! I just knew what he did and said in the ambulance bay was going to suck all the progress Bella has made right down the drain. I'm not sure if I knew to what extent though. And yeah, if she and Edward make it through this, they will come out on the other side much stronger in their relationship. xoxo Kelly
Oh, and yeah I love Michelle too! I hope if they go to couples counseling they get a counselor half as good as Michelle.
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh yes; Edward and Bella had some sexy fun up in that suite, and it was goood. ;) I have to admit that I wanted to smack Bella for wanting to grab her overnight bag and leave just because Edward sighed. All she had to do was ask him what was wrong; I guess maybe her nerves got the best of her. I was just surprised because she was so confident in the ballroom. I was so proud of Bella for how she handled Charlie. I wanted to bitchslap him for grabbing her hair and causing her to fall, not to mention all the crap he was spewing at her. I don't blame her one bit for wanting a restraining order put on him, and she's definately justified in pressing charges. After all she's had to endure from him throughout her life, and then this latest fiasco, he deserves worse. In my opinion. I can't wait to see what happens next. xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 7:47 AM Title: Chapter 10
I loved this chapter! I'm really glad that Jasper saw the light as far as Bella is concerned, because I was ready to kick his ass for being so shallow! :) I swear Edward is going to spoil Bella rotten, she deserves it too. (By the way, Tanzanite is my favorite stone, I love, love, love purple!) Rose seems to be getting better, and I'm so glad that she and Bella finally met each other. It blows my mind at the shitty things that Crowley and Newton say about Bella; I just don't get it. I was thrilled at how Edward ripped them a new one, though they deserve much, much worse. With any luck, all of the jerks who have said crap to and about Bella will get theirs. After all, Karma is a bitch. :) xoxo Kelly
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 6:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
EEEEEEE!!! Things are getting better for these two. As Bella feels better and happier, it makes Edward feel better and happier too. I can not believe how much I love your story, and your Bella and Edward! And they love each other!! Sorry, I'm just such a romantic sap. :) I'm trying to remember everything I wanted to comment on...Oh yes!! I loved the girls night out, it was a blast to read that part! And I can't forget the sex shop, now Bella just needs to play with her new toys! ;) I'm really glad that Edward and Ben installed the girl's new locks; James is really creeping me the hell out. At least the guys know about his creeping ways, but they can't always be there to protect their girls. I hope nothing bad happens to them, or Alice. I can't wait for the ball! xoxo Kelly
P.S. I'm sorry you had that rude anon reviewer. I know a lot of you authors get those, but just remember that they aren't important. What's important is that you are having fun writing, and that there are bunches of us out here that love your stories! I'm a big fan of yours, and I know that I am not alone. :) :) :) xoxoxoxoxoxoxo
Oh by the way, your Edward is nothing like a fifteen year old boy. He is sexy, handsome, loving, caring, patient, giving, selfless, and on and on; another cool thing about your Edward is that he is not afraid to show his feelings and emotions to Bella. He can do that and still be a strong man. Just sayin... :) <3
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2013 4:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awww, I've really missed your Edward and Bella; I love them so much! I'm so glad to be able to log in to the Coffee Shop again; I've missed my stories! I really hate computer gliches! :( Anyway, I'm back, and now I can (hopefully) catch up with you and all my other stories. :) xoxo Kelly
Date: 24 Feb 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great story! I think their relationship is so sweet.
Date: 23 Feb 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 14
Why in the world is he not paying his rent or medical bills if he has that much money? Was he a dirty cop?
Date: 23 Feb 2013 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love your story. :D I just wanted to give you a tiny heads up and it's not critical at all. When a judge sets bail the defendent is only required to pay 10% and he or she gets it back if they show up for the trial date. If they don't show up, then they have to pay the whole amount. Bail is just an assurance that the defendent will show up. It's not punitive because people are innocent until proven guilty. Although, I don't think this Charlie could pay $25,000 either, so it's not a big deal at all. :D I just thought you might want to know that for future reference.
[Report This]Date: 23 Feb 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 5
That is a shame that someone could be so cruel to be critical of someone that has a wonderful imagination such as yours. I love your story & I certainly do relate!! Keep your chin up!!
[Report This]Date: 22 Feb 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
I just simply want to cry...I truly know how you feel...I am overweight as well & I feel that no one could ever love me for me...God knows that I have waited all my life for that. I hope that you find it for yourself some day.
Date: 20 Feb 2013 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I like the plot... seems interesting. :)
Date: 19 Feb 2013 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
Personally, I find that your stories are some of the best that I have read. I have loved and favorited every single one that I have read so far, including this one. I think that anon review was cowardly in my opinion. To leave a nasty comment and then not even take credit for it by being anonymous, is cowardly. Ok, rant over.
Date: 18 Feb 2013 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter. Very fluffy and lemony.
Date: 18 Feb 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 24
UPDATE SOON!!!!
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 1
Liked the story, but that girl in the picture is not as fat as the Bella you are writing, IMHO. The girl in the picture is maybe full figured, but not so fat people would make fun of her.
Date: 18 Feb 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2013 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 24
Well Edward got a result after complaining about that flight attendant, four free vouchers, woohoo!! He should still get her arse sacked though, that was totally inappropriate and really slutty, she should have more self respect. I'm loving their holiday, it's like Edward's become a different person with his obsession for public sex and now Bella's promised him it'll happen, lol, I can't wait to see how she masterminds this one. Holiday lemonade is the best, I think it's the lack of stress and the sense of freedom and relaxation that does it. God I need a holiday.
Jane x
[Report This]Date: 17 Feb 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 24
I don't usually leave comments but after seeing your post on the Facebook group, I felt compelled to come back and leave a comment. I have been many sizes in my life, from a 0 to a 14, and I find that I feel the best at a size 10. Is it a perfect size? To me it is, but I still exercise and feel better because of it. Am I a 10 right now, no because I've slacked off and skipped the gym. I don't feel healthy but I'm going back to the gym to feel healthy, not to be a size, but someone who feels good about myself. So to whoever judges and nitpicks you for making your character lose weight, which you didn't, you made her take charge of her life and choose to be healthy. Bella isn't striving to be a string bean, she's striving to be healthy and feel good about herself. Marilyn Monroe wasn't tiny and she was beautiful.
So thank you for writing a character who is real and beautiful.