Date: 20 Apr 2020 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
I've read for the past 11 chapter or so how Bella isn't worthy of Edward love. I've had a shitty life, but i don't act as tedious as you have written her. I can't take anymore of this self pity so I'll have to bow out. Im sorry I love doctorward, but Bella is spoiling the story. Sorry
Date: 01 Mar 2020 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
You like putting your Edward and Bella's through their paces. ;-) So, so, so much therapy is needed. Plus, have you taken her ability to have babies away? I hope not. I thought she had enough pain in life before but this is a major set back. She is going to regress so hard and Edward will feel the pain I'm sure. I wish he had proposed in Hawaii now who knows. We all know HEA isn't always what we want. I hope she time jumps the healing and so does Edward. Good luck kids. *fingers crossed*
Date: 01 Mar 2020 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
Before you hurt Bella and Edward with the angst and based on Bella's dreams possible hospitalization or death can you have him propose already :-) promises and marking aside I think they are ready. And I think all the boys will like Royce's milkshake on the yard. Hehe
Date: 01 Mar 2020 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm glad Jasper apologized again but it felt sincere this time. The fact that he's leaving Chicago is good too. James I could care less about which means Jacob and Royce are the big bad angst here. Oh and Charlie. I know he's up to something. I'm confused why Rosalie can't find and buy her own home. Why do Bella and Edward have to move? I love the addition of Garrett. Edward needed a fun and cute side kick. Also I hope Bella gains more confidence now she lives with Edward. I mean what more does the poor guy have to do to prove he loves her. I hope the future angst doesn't include running. Please *hands in supplication* no New Moon type nonsense. ;-)
Date: 29 Feb 2020 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
So no redemption for Jake. That's cool by me not a fan. Yeah Bella should have been written up. She was so empowered that day telling Jake off she would have been fine with it as she said. This looks worse for Edward than Bella anyway. I guess now we have to find out who's running this drug ring.
Date: 29 Feb 2020 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Jasper I just don't get his hate. Cause jealousy? Really? You were in a loving relationship and you were jealous? Yeah not that bright. Hehe. He makes me think of Emmett in your geek story of love. Jadore that series. Anyway, I don't think he'll come around completely. Actually he's spiraling.Charlie either. He's bitter for a bunch of reasons. Being in jail didn't help. James? I'm not sure what he brings to the story. He's been so offline that I don't see his point beyond creepy neighbor who moved out. Jacob has a chance. Most asshole individuals need a life altering moment. Bigger than being demoted. You know. Either way family can cause the most damage I think. But we'll leave that to you my dear ;-)
Date: 28 Feb 2020 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 15
Okay I want to believe that Jasper will sort himself out but given we don't know what his real issue is I have doubts. Like for instance how did Charlie get bail for $25K? He's always been broke and only one person with money feels slighted by Bella's introduction in his family and that's Jasper. If Bella is gone Jasper gets his family and his girl back. That would be a good plot twist and fucked up too.
Date: 19 Nov 2017 11:57 AM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, I finaly found your story! yeah :) Saw a translation of it someplace (well, just the first two chapters). I like the plot and your writing style. So super excited to finally beeing able to read the whole story. Thanks so much
Date: 13 Apr 2016 3:26 PM Title: Chapter 35: Epilogue
awwww that was so beautiful. what a wonderful love story. so glad she got closure with charlie after he died. everthing about this chapter was just magnificent. thankyou so much for this amazing story even tho there were times bella pissed me off so much the HEA kept me going lol. only cos i'm a wuss. your pics and pervy pics are all fantastic. i thoroughly enjoyed it. now it's gonna take me some time to get through all of your stories especially when i get interrupted reading by RL shit. lol. i'm praying that i find myself a yummy APFL edward.
Date: 12 Apr 2016 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 34
Omg!!! This chapter has to be 1 of my faves. It was awesome!! I read the baby reveal to edward 4 times it was hands down the most perfect way/time to tell him. Just when he thought his day couldn't get any better apart from the wedding night. Lol. Yeah fuckawesome chapter. And bella giving charlie what for...woohoo good for her!
Date: 11 Apr 2016 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 33
yayyyy finally they're back to where they were before. i loved this chapter i have to say anj is such a crack up. they're engaged and have set the date so that's great. i do hope they can have children. love that they're smexin again...very niiiice
Date: 10 Apr 2016 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 31
huge sigh of relief. so glad that they got to talk it out. it was great that edward called garrett and gave her the space she needed. and yes she was being ungrateful but at least she realised it. did her asshat fucktard douchebag father get killed!! i fucking hope so...or at least he can get severely punished in every way in prison for what he did to bella and everyone else. it's great that her and edwards family have rallied to help her back to recovery. btw i love how garrett and emmett ambushed edward to get him to rest.
Date: 10 Apr 2016 1:49 PM Title: Chapter 30
what?!!! do they have to have this whole start over thing again?!!! when most people go through experiences like this it brings them closer because they know the value of life and their love and how it can all be taken away in an instant. it's just unfair that they have to have more shit plaguing them. why does bella have to let charlie continue to emotionally and mentally abuse her. she can determine not to do it. and be drawn to edward for support not fucking push him away....really?! guh! i hope it really doesn't happen :(
Date: 09 Apr 2016 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 29
ohhhh the IT is here!!! but i have to say that i love edward and the wonderful gifts he gets for his girl. mmm mm an audi. and that birthday sex yummy yummy, you alsways have me panting salivating and libido somersaulting with your edwards hotness and those lemons!! love your work.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 28
wow that was quite a chapter!! so glad edward went to be with bella. although knowing how much he loves her i didn't really doubt that he wouldn't go. glad royce got his ass literally handed to him lol. not looking forward to the pending doom that's coming up.
Date: 08 Apr 2016 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 27
Jacob and his cheap ass car no doubt.lol. royce is defs fucking his lawyer. And i geel for rose whi does have a boyfriend and parents for support but now that bella needs hers hes not there.bella is very understanding hasn't once complained about the the fact that edwards sister needs him more than anyone.
Date: 07 Apr 2016 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 26
ohhhhh man their sex is through the fucking roof!!! so frickin hot it just makes you squirm or turns your bones to liquid especially when edward talks dirty. mmm mm. such a yummy chapter. wouldn't hawaii have been the most ideal place to propose? oh well absolutely loved the chapter!
Date: 04 Apr 2016 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 24
Oh i love sexy pervy horny doctor.lol. bellas not complaining though i wouldn't either. It's great that they're away alone together and enjoying each other without work or friends n family around. Loved the whole chapter
Date: 30 Mar 2016 3:11 PM Title: Chapter 21
oh wow definitely heaps of awesome stuff in this chapter. the icing on the cake of the birthday being the passionate foreplay and lovemaking...mmm mm. bella really surprised me and yes it sure was one helluva lemon. frickin awesome! great to have garrett on board and so sad about what happened in his life. so good that he is getting friendly with alice. love your work.
Date: 29 Mar 2016 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hmm what a dick jacob is. Be interesting to see what he's plotting. Bella took the write up well i figured she might. I'm loving this story so much. I like to try n read at home in private. But sometimes I can't help myself and read on the bus or at work
Date: 28 Mar 2016 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved this even if assper really is still.a dickhead. And how about that jacob huh. But yeah most of all the wonderful romantic date and fiiiinally she didn't go overboard with over thinking and accepted edwards invite. Phew!!
Date: 24 Mar 2016 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
lol assper that is hilarious. he is a douche and should maybe go live with charlie. cos he's a douche as well. oh and jacob. they all a bunch of fucking haters! bella is doing very well but i'll kick her ass if she hurts edward again
Date: 22 Mar 2016 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 12
i guess i understand to a degree why she withdrew. but geez if i had someone like edward as my boyfriend i'd be drawn so much more to him knowing how much he loves me and supports me. i would be content with that. and good for angela to remind bella she has some very good supportive friends. so yeah bella needs to get on it!!lol i think she realises she could have easily lost edward. she'll get there
Date: 22 Mar 2016 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
hope charlie gets thrown in prison and gets abused in there. he's a dick and i'm so glad bella stood up to him. he can't get away with it. some fucking cop he must've been. her gifts sound great i'll have to go check out the pics. i had a feeling something would happen to her while she was out getting coffee but i thought she might run into james.
Date: 16 Mar 2016 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 4
all right, i'm loving this story but i'm from chicago and when edward and bella both said "cubs!" i had to bite my lip and force myself to read on. white sox all the way, baby! my family was and is from the SOUTH SIDE!!! GO SOX!!!
Date: 13 Mar 2016 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 8
hmmm yes she was rather silly not to at least let him explain. and i'm glad that angela ripped into her about it all. edward is so fucking sexy it hurts lol. i just love your stories i actually started another one before i realised i was reading this one..omg trying to read too many at once plus the updates i get. so i thought i'd finish this one first lol. then continue the other one then read more. love all the pics too.
Date: 12 Mar 2016 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 7
wow that was an awesome first date. i'm so glad that everyone is trying to help bella get over her low self esteem. but it sure seems like she's gonna give a darn good go and she's changing already from being with edward and away from her fuckwit sperm donor. awesome chapter!
Date: 10 Mar 2016 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
I love that bellas so happy and mmm yes that kiss and that she's going to give them a chance. And emmett sparking rosalie lol nice
Edward is such a frickun awesome bf. I need someone like him to love my cellulite and rolls lol
Date: 28 Aug 2015 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
I don't review often, but I feel this deserves it. There are a lot of things I love about this story, but Bella is driving me mad. (This is not critical towards you at all!) I get that Bella is going to have some confidence issues, but I feel like no one is really giving her the tools to solve her problems. She is being completely irrationally. Someone needs to show her that her emotions are not the same thing as reality. Her criticism of herself is never constructive and never something she would say to a friend. She needs to stop unconstructive criticism in her head and her mouth cold. It's okay to feel like a part of yourself needs improvement, but not through mean thoughts. She needs to examine her actions and choices without adding her emotional understanding of herself and then she will stop having such horrible esteem issues. Also she needs to think about how her words about herself affect others. Edward and her friends don't tolerate others being mean about her and it makes them feel horrible when she is, and that is her worst quality. Her words are constantly hurting her friends. She needs to fake it until she makes it in her head and reality. Zero tolerance for unconstructive criticism. She can begin doing it for the sake of her friends. Strong work on getting an emotional reaction from me.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
I am enjoying the story so far. The problem I am having and I know she has had a shit life but Bella cries way too much. Sorry, I dont want to offend you but I have never known anyone to cry over so much. Also, everyone tries to reassure Bella she isn't fat but they are all saying to her yes you are heavier, but that not going to help her self esteem at all. Speaking as a larger woman if my husban was always telling me I was heavy it would be a blow to my self esteem just as bad as if he said I was f fat. I find that for the size you are trying to have her pictured as a better thing for people to say would be ya your not a size 4 or 6 but you are not fat, that seems more incouraging then ya you are heavy.