Date: 17 Mar 2017 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 36
Absolutely fantastic story. l I'm sure I have read it before as parts seemed familiar to me. I love is she is so kick ass. I hope that you get to finish some of your stories that you have in process thank you for sharing your words and all the time you've put into the stories.
Date: 26 Nov 2015 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 36
i really enjoyed this story. i have read a few of yours now but just stumbled across this one now. i love the different twist you put on this with the cullens being the bad guys for once. aro and his soft spot for bella is too cute and the whole majic mike moment was too funny.
Date: 10 Aug 2015 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Speklez, really like this story. Reading it again.
Ya know, we'd love it if you posted your stuff on BetterinTexasFiction.
I'll try and put a link here: http://betterintexasfiction.ning.com/
Don't know if it will work or not.
Jason (BetterinTexas) got a little fed up with a couple other sites and started his own. He wanted a bit more freedom than he could get at FF and other sites, and wanted to be able to post his original stuff.
Best part? He doesn't care what you post there. There are the general rules about no pedophilia, bestiality, etc.
Post any fandom you want or even your original stuff.
Another good thing? Flaming the authors doesn't fly. The general rule is if you don't like something, shut up and don't read it.
We've had a few folks who have never written before begin writing!
Folks who have written a few fanfics have even posted original stuff.
A very encouraging atmosphere.
Another thing I like about it is you can post pictures with your story and you don't have to go through a photo hosting site.
Think about it. We'd love to have you.
(I'm one of the admins there.)
Date: 28 Jan 2015 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 34
I'm still confused why the Cullens went through so much shit to have Bella killed when they were in a perfect place to do it themselves and avoid all this muck. Surely Alice would have seen the benefits of simplicity.Their thinking is so convoluted.
Your story, your killings. I wanted to hear how all of the Cullens went down.
Date: 28 Jan 2015 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 7
"I understand perfectly. What you seem to fail to understand is just how little I care."
The second thing I love about this story is this line. If only canon Bella had this attitude. "He left me in the forest for dead, and now you expect me to save him? What friggin' planet are you living on?"
Date: 28 Jan 2015 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
There are several things I love about this story. The first is the way Iz cleans herself like a cat.
Yes, there's more, I'll tell you when they come up.
This is the third time I'm reading this story.
Thank you for giving me a fall back fic for boring nights.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 5:40 AM Title: Chapter 36
I started reading this story a long time ago on fanfiction but just realized a few days ago that you moved here. I hadn't read anything past Aro leaving them in jail.
Loved the story and the ending with J/G hanging around was hilarious. Loved how you wrote Aro too.
Date: 26 Aug 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 13
This chapter was a little confusing. How did Alice cause fire to erupt ? I'm not sure what happened. How did Aro read Izzy?
I am so sorry I haven't responed to this sooner. Life has been a little hectic... the only one of those questions I will answer is the one with Aro... he is a soul reader in this story, not a mind reader. He can read Bella because she has a soul... plus, she isn't a shield in this... she has preservation as a gift.
Date: 11 Aug 2012 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh i could just kiss you right now. This little or shall I say big ditty surely was perfection through and through. The ups and downs and the hurtles, the funny moments, the happy moments the sad moments.. everything just blended together so beautifully. I loved every moment. And Bella got her two puppies!
god...bath sex with peter... bella is such a lucky bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!
I hope you make more bella stories where she's strong, bitchy, and just all over fucking awesome.. with PETER this peter is hot.. and the peter on the BANNER.. phew doggy! PERFECT VERSION OF PETER FOR BELLA .. delicious.
Date: 06 Aug 2012 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 11
I like it so far. I will keep reading. LOL!!
I really like Bella's new personality and how Peter has finally opened his self up as her mate.
Jasper better what his self with blocking Peter to much, LOL!!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 31
OOOH you just dont know how bad I want her to kill edward..
I never thought she should be with Edward... I always felt like she belonged with somebody like Emmett or something.. not edward, he's so controling.. you could see it even while reading the books.. His Era that he grew up in only making those customs sulify his controling parts..
I was only attracted to him b/c i find robert pattinson hot, but I never liked the Character that is Edward, everytime I write him, I make sure he's so different.. . I dont like Alice ether, both of them are manipulative and it just annoysme how Stefanie Myer wrote a girl that is the way Alice is.. ThEY ALWAYS TAKE BELLAS CHOICE AWAY.. best friends? Alice wasnt a best friend, she was a little girl who liked to have a human doll.. to tell her to wear this or wear that, do this or do that, oh edwards just lookng out for you this and that.. i hate it..
I cant wait till Edward dies,, and i hope he dies by her hands.. I hope she tortures him.. I'm honestly thinking of making an 'edward leaves' story.. making it go how i think it should have went...
I truely believe that she meshed better with Emmett, and if that wasnt going to happen since he's mated to that Blonde Bimbo Rosalie.. well then she should have been with somebody from the back like Jared, or Paul... or Jake even.. though I think I'm not much of a Jake and Bella fan with thema s a couple because they dontl ook like they go together.. but Paul on the other hand.. he's my favorite!
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
It has to be one of the Cullen's. They wanted proof she was dead. Why? So they could stop paying Vickie. Alice, Carlisle or Rose one of them. Seems like if it was Edward he would not have gone to Italy to be destroyed.
Date: 24 Jun 2012 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 7
I am fine with what you wrote. Everyone goes to pieces on Edward. Well the idiot told her all those horrible mean things and now they want Her to risk her life to save him. Well why? She doesn't even remember him. Good for her those memories are bad anyway.