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Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Nov 2015 2:55 PM Title: Seth POV

Loved these extras. 

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2014 1:08 AM Title: Seth POV

really enjoyed reading the extras for the main story. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 6:35 AM Title: Seth POV

This was so good, I loved Seth's view od how their lives went, with and without Edward! These chapters can keep coming about the whole family as far as I'm concerned! Don't care to read any more about Charlie, Sue and Harry, the despicable ones who treated Bella so horribly. They weren't very nice to Seth and Leah, either, so who needs them? They all got what they deserved!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:16 AM Title: Jane's POV: Dispensing Deliverance

Jane is one of the the most complex characters I ever read about in an Edward/Bella story. You kind of need a strong stomach to get through all her stuff. At the same time, there are good things about her and a certain purity of thought in some of her actions! Probably enough to have a redeeming effect, I guess! After all how bad can she be if Bella loves her, right?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 1:25 AM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

It's even more heart-breaking from Bella's POV! Having a really good memory, this story will stay with me a long, long time!

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 4:10 PM Title: Seth POV

That was awesome! Seth, oh Seth a great kid that deserves happiness.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 6:19 PM Title: Seth POV

I'm so happy for Seth.  It seems all is going well for all of them.  How about Leah nest?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: roseblossome Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2013 4:21 PM Title: Jane's POV: Dispensing Deliverance

I was so glad when I found the follow up to His Crimmerian View.  I have enjoyed reading the 2 chapters so far...but you just have to love the way Jane protects the people she loves.  Keep up the good work!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2013 2:11 AM Title: Seth POV

Great POV! It's like a futuretake also. I would love to read Leah's POV ;)

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2013 7:22 AM Title: Seth POV

I loved going through events from Seth's point of view.  I'm looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 8:35 PM Title: Seth POV

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Dec 2012 7:56 PM Title: Seth POV

:) Happy New Year to you too



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: littlelizruth Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2012 7:02 AM Title: Jane's POV: Dispensing Deliverance

Wow Jane is a major hard ass. Crazy, but a good heart



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 5:48 PM Title: Jane's POV: Dispensing Deliverance

Thank you! Loved reading Jane pov. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 12:56 AM Title: Jane's POV: Dispensing Deliverance

looking forward to mroe 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 8:13 AM Title: Jane's POV: Dispensing Deliverance

Great writing girls.

Did you have fun thinking up all the evil things she could do?



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2012 8:12 AM Title: Jane's POV: Dispensing Deliverance

:)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing.  I am so sorry for the time it has taken to reply.  Many things are going on, and Nikky and I have been writing up a storm.  The next POV that will post should be Esme and Carlisle’s and from there we are thinking Leah’s, Zafrina/Aro/Elizabeth, and wrapping things up with a Jasper/Alice and Emmett/Rose.  Thanks for your wonderful patience, there is more to come on this.  Kasi (&Nikky)~

Reviewer: Marrojeanne Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2012 4:44 PM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

Bellas childhood was really fucked up. It was sooo heartbreaking to read it from her point of view, after already reading it from Edward. It is a wonder that she got out of this so loving and forgiving.

It is really something for Bella still see something good in Edward, even when he was treating her pretty bad.

To hear other charavters thoughts of the main story would be great. But not particularly from Sue/Charlie/Harry I think. Because their opinion was really clear in both stories (Edwards and this chapter of Bella). I personally don't need to read more of their sick minds.



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Janes pov will post soon.

Reviewer: sarah_amin1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Aug 2012 10:49 AM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

You were right about the tissue warning .. What's sad though that this actually happens in real life .. Actual fathers sell their daughters and mothers whore their daughters around . Parents sell their children on black markets. That's why i think your story is realistic even though some might not see it.

Our world is such a scary place now .. 



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

PS... Janes POV posts next

Reviewer: ecsc Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:14 PM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

I love it!!! I will like to hear from everyone's POV. The more the better!! :)

 



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

PS... Janes POV posts soon

Reviewer: krazi4TwiSaga Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 3:25 AM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

I know I'm tardee for the pardee, but I just wanted to let you guys know that I loved this chapter!  The feeling and depth you used to convey Bella's point of view was amazing!  I laughed, I cried, I screamed, you name it, I felt it reading this!  This story is amazing and I just can't thank you guys enough for sharing this with us!

Luv you gals to pieces!

krazi

xoxo



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you Krazi, we love you too!  Janes POV posts next.
 Kasi (&Nikky)

Reviewer: LeslieWhitlock Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 6:13 PM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

Okay, please tell me that the man/boy that gave her a muffin was Edward! That's the first thought that hit me. And maybe that is why he had such a strong reaction to her scrap books. He saw a drawing of himself that she had made. Maybe???

Thanks for letting us get a glimpse of Bella, from her own perspective.

I would really like a POV from Jasper, Emmett, Rose and Alice. I want to see what Jasper thinks from a pshyc point of view. And Emmett is such a loving person, I would like to see what he thinks. And as for POV's from Alice and Rose, it would be to see why they feel the need to be bitches.

Great job ladies!

Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky) 
PS.. yes edward gave her the muffin, the next POV is Janes and it will be coming to you very soon.

Reviewer: vvply Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 7:26 AM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

 I really enjoyed reading BPOV. I will be rereading His Cimmerian View because there are bits and pieces that I seemed to have missed after reading this outtake. I love this story I always look forward to Thursdays now. 

Have you thought about a Renee POV and how she ended hooking up with Charlie the scoundrel.

Take care and thank you



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Reviewer: aabc Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 11:56 PM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

This outtake just shows how far Bella and Edward have come.  I look forward to more.



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:41 PM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

It was wonderful reading about all the things that happened to her and how she felt about Edward's behavior and how beautiful and Christian her attitude about his pain and warped views. Awesome out take.

Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 7:35 PM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

Thanks! I love outtakes. They are one of the best htings about fan fiction ;)



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Reviewer: Jennmc75 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 4:40 PM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

I loved reading Bella's POV of her life. She's lived such a hard, sad ilfe. I found myself tearing up quite a bit. I can't wait to hear from everyone else in these out takes.

Great job with this :)



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2012 9:17 AM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

:)

Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Reviewer: lazydaisy679 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 3:47 PM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

Oh, poor Bella!! She had such a horrible life!! To be so abused and mistreated!! That poor girl!!  I am so glad that she found Edward even if he was a total ass at the beginning.   What a love she has for him.   Looking forward to more, of EVERYTHING !!! Everyone's POV!!  Update soon please!!



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Reviewer: labonte18slm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 11:11 AM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

WOW! I don't know if I can even express how much this chapter moved me, it was simply amazing!!! This story has become my favorite and I wait like an addict for the updates, I will be crushed when the story comes to an end! The emotions that I felt during this side of the story where unreal, I don't think I cried like that in a very long time! You guys honestly had me living her feelings and I feel for her even more now, poor Bella. She has had such a hard life and now getting this glimpse into her past from her and so much more than what Edward has heard...just wow! So her talent for painting comes from her Mother, I am happy to hear that, and God I hope they find that those losers weren't able to take all her inheritance!

Can't wait to see where you take us from here, and I would love to have a Sue/Charlie/Harry POV!! I think I could see myself begging for all the POVs...even Rosalie (wow, would I like to see inside her horrible mind!) and Alice. Take care until next time, and thank you so very much for this simply amazing story!!!



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:31 AM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

Thank you thank you thank you!

Loved hearing from Bella's brain.  No tissues needed for me - more like a bucket since reading about her childhood made me want to throw up!  Why did Sue call Renee the husband stealing skank?  Hope Harry is found soon!

Great outtakes!  Absolutely love it!



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

Reviewer: just4u Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 5:29 AM Title: Outtake number 1: The Life of Bella Swan

really great,i would love to have a Rosalie POV as well!!



Author's Response:

Hello to all our lovely readers, thank you for reading and reviewing Enduring His Cimmerian View.  A lot of you were shocked by the level of abuse, but from the story in Edward’s POV the abuse was clearly going to be a factor.  Thank you for all the kind words and things said, trust us we want to hug Bella too, she is such a good person.  I personally feel a connection of sorts with our Bella, and I hope that Nikky and I are able to continue to write her in a way that allows you the ability to feel a connection too.  There was a few questions regarding the talk of Aro being married and mixing up of Aro and Marcus.  In Bella’s thoughts she is remembering seeing Edward outside of Gina’s office and then again outside Aro’s office.  Marcus did marry a girl who was one of Aro’s girls, and Aro married Sulpicia who is the girl that Bella witnessed being raped.  I hope this helps to make sense of a misunderstanding.   As for future POV’s we have planned, the next one we will write will be the Esme and Carlisle joint POV.  A lot of you have requested a Rosalie POV and we will do it, but it will be a while before we post it.  We are very honored that so many of you take the time to share with us your thoughts and we are so glad to have you all on board reading our stuff.  Thank you, Kasi (&Nikky)

Extra teaser just for you... from upcoming chapter
“Miss Swan, we saw the picture you did for Matt, and we were wondering if you could draw one of your mom and dad for us?  We’re in need of one so we have a clear picture as to what they looked like.”

Bella nods her head.  “I have a lot already. They’re at the apartment in a sketch book.  There’s one with both of them when they used to dress up. You could use that, but only if you promise to give it back so Seth and Leah can have it.  I drew it for them so they always have a picture of their parents.”

They both nod their heads at her, agreeing to return the original once they had a copy.  “Of course, thank you. When can we come collect it? Oh, and while I’m thinking about it, could we please get into your mother’s room to have a look around?  That may give us some insight on how to find Harry and Sue.”

Bella looks at me, almost pleading with me to help her, and I know it’s because she’s worried about people entering that bitch’s room.  “She can’t hurt you, Baby. I won’t allow her to.  They need to get in there because it sounds like she’s in a lot of trouble.”

Bella nods her head at me and then turns back to the detectives.  “You can. However, I’d like Edward to get everything for you.  I mean, if you just want the paperwork, then can’t he get it and take it to you?  If you still need to get into the room after that, I’ll let you in.”

They both nod again, and I think Spades is shocked that she’s so willing to help.  “That sounds fair,” Scully responds.  

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