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Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 10:38 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loved it! 

Reviewer: kerareneeatchley29 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2019 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 1

Loved it! 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 31

AWESOME!!! story i'm soo glad there is a sequel to this because i was going to ask if you would do one with the way you ended it ;) thanks for posting this on here for us ;D

Reviewer: tricklem Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 31

I really enjoyed your story. I gotta ask, is there any chance that you will finish posting the sequel here on TWCS? 

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Mar 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 31

:)

Reviewer: tululah Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 31

Very enjoyable story.

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 7

Jake really is a prick!

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 5

darn he is so cute

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 8:30 PM Title: Chapter 4

Jake for father of the year!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comments, I hadn't notcied them previously and don't seem to be getting my review alerts. Love your stories btw :)

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 3

LOVED IT

Reviewer: peoplelikeus Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 2

SO, THEY MEET AGAIN

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 13

awwww finally the big ILY...... yay!!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 10

poor dear!  nice of Esme!!!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 8

oh for the love of all thats holy JB is a drunken pain in the backside

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

awwwww

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 6

oh for pity sake, these people.... let them drink their drinks and eat their brownies in peace....great chapter....



Author's Response:

LOL!! Just saw this review, haven't had alerts for qhuite a few for this story. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

cute, Ang!!!!  

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:25 AM Title: Chapter 4

What a jerk.... TY Dr. C for thinking about the car seat....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 3

lol! she ran smack dab into him....

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 2

still liking this very much!

Reviewer: Twifan1228 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jul 2012 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 1

ive had this saved and marked for awhile now...looking forward to reading it....  good so far...

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 10:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

This is going to get even messier I can just feel it. 



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Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

I would of been on the phone reporting his ass for child  endangerment. Stupid jerk. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 3

It was great to see everyone getting together. I wonder what will happen after their crash meeting. 

Reviewer: Irish_charm Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2012 5:56 AM Title: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed the first chapter. There was a lot going on and I am looking forward to seeing where you take it. 

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 17

BRavo, Jake, bravo...

Reviewer: Joie Cullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2012 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh yeah!  Whatever Jake.  Get over yourself!

 

Oh, yeah, I've been lurking.  GREAT STORY!  :D

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 31

looking forward to mroe 

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 6

Man Charlie is shitting me !! His grandson got injured and he's still 'Team Jake' *Shakes Head* ...

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 5

I thought you were hot in high school too. << <Loved that line ;)

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4

Jake's an irresponsible ass ~~~

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 3

Sneaky little Pixie and friends !! LOL

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 2

Poor Edward got a shitty start too !!

Reviewer: SassYNoles Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2012 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 1

Loved how Bella gave it to Jake

!!

Reviewer: JaMarie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 31

very good story. it had the right combination of drama and happy, sweet. I know I will be keeping an eye out for the sequel.

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

I will get back a re read this story here soon :) Catch up with you then :) 

Chilly x

Reviewer: Chillzhowdy Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2012 12:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

Oooohhhh I love the Banner :) Femme done a beautiful job Hun :) Glad your posting here too :) 

Chilly x



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Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 31

Loved this!! Excited to see the sequel! :)

-Kate

Reviewer: Sunshine72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jun 2012 2:21 AM Title: Chapter 31

I loved it!

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 20

What a cliffhanger. Why won't Bella be there much longer?

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 19

What? She won't be for much longer? What does that mean? Great suspense building!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 20

wow! So Emily has lost her mind... hopefully Bella will wake up soon and tell them that Sam had nothing to do with it and that Emily killed Brady.  Can't wait to read more! :)

-Kate

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 18

Oh no. Were they abducted?

I just had a thought during this chapter that perhaps Jacob sent the letters to let Bella and more importantly her lawyer be lulled into a false sense of security. Afterall, why would a lawyer build a case for an issue that was not contested? But I never expected anything more dastardly!

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 17

I'm surprised. I didn't expect Jacob to be so reasonable without drama. Well done you for the twist. I still wonder if it's a divertion, but I'm eager to see what's next.

Alice seems to be growing up. 

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 15

Charlie seems so blindsided. It's sad that Renee seems to have not truly tried or even honestly communicated in an effort to save her relationship. So very sad.

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 14

Well, something's up with Renee. Billy took a cheap shot as he was leaving. Did Renee hear him? If so, she didn't defend her daughter.

How is Billy this indignant? OK, he wants his grandson to know his heritage. I get that. But it's HALF his heritage, not ALL of it. So, in the meantime Bella has to support this child 100%. Neither the "tribe" nor Jacob is supporting Carson. Put up or shut up I say. If it matters that much, prove it. Choose it.

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 13

I wonder how well Jacob's memory is working. Does he even remember what he's doing?

B & E are falling fast and hard!

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 12

Bella needs to save that answering machine recording. There's some hard evidence.

It's sad when someone has an addiction and the family and friends live in denial. This is often why tragedies occur.

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 11

While what Edward heard at the gas pump is heresay, certainly Sam and Seth could now be called for statements. Sure, they could lie, but then Edward, Bella, and Charlie would know. With Leah being Bella's friend, I imagine that Seth would find it difficult to lie.

I was out-of-town the past three days with virtually no internet/cell service. I am so enjoying reading through all the wonderful chapters that you have posted. Thank you!

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love your Bella. What a great character.

Charlie is illogical, but parents can't help it sometimes. They have good intentions. I'm glad his eyes have been opened.

Bella was awesome with the overwhelming Cullens. It's wonderful that Carson has a mom who is grounded and logical. He's a lucky boy.

I've often thought that various incarnations of the "Alice" character depict her as a 2-year-old throwing a tantrum. Great parallel!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 9

wow! I just found this and it is amazing! Can't wait to read more! :)

-Kate

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 9

It is kind of shockng how Charlie is finding every excuse in the book for Jacob's behavior. Does Charlie really want his daughter in a loveless marriage? Doesn't he question Jacob's lack of ability to get a job, pay child support, to just be an adult? Why did Jacob have to become an alcoholic for Charlie (or Billy) to question Jacob's ability or even desire to be a good father for Carson? I'm so glad that Bella read Charlie the riot act. I hope he gets it soon.

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wow. Jacob is becoming a serious danger to his son. It's so sad. He obviously doesn't care about Carson. He cares about what HE wants, not what's best for his son. It's so sad.

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 7

I hope Bella takes Edward's advice about involving the law. 

Does Jacob have a profession? Did he go to any kind of school after high school? What's his plan for providing for his "perfect familY" that he (and Charlie) so desperately seem to want?

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 6

What's up with the delusional fathers?! Charlie obviously believes that Bella's exaggerating Jacob driving Carson to the hospital while hungover and under the influence of 2 beers. While Charlie's right that children have accidents, the drinking after Jacob begged to have Carson is unforgivable and downright dangerous.

Billy is obviously being lied to by Jacob. Somebody better set him straight. Chances are he'll never believe Bella. Maybe Seth or Leah or another member of the tribe can convince him of his son's worthlessness as a father.

I loved how Bella is handling her father. 

Reviewer: LizE7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 4

Great story so far, looking forward to more. :)

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

Ah, Bella's words, "Not that I know of..." Dangerous.

Document Bella. Document, Document, Document. Assemble proof of Jacob's poor parenting because one day he may regret his actions and try to claim that precious boy. The legal system doesn't protect children; it protects parents. (and not only the good ones)

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

What a wonderful "meet cute." I love that you have made their "notice" of one another in high school so realistic. It wasn't a burning desire, but more an attraction that wasn't all consuming, but most definitely a marked impression. These seem like real people. Strong and dealing with the curveballs that life throws them.

Reviewer: darcy Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2012 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 1

Cute premise. While one can understand Jacob's immature, deadbeat dad/deadbeat adult approach to life (not condoning, just understanding), I'm concerned that he's "lying" to Billy. Bella didn't keep Carson from him. Or maybe Billy's lying. SOMEONE is lying. If it's Jacob, Bella not only has a baby daddy who's immature, but one who has some MAJOR character flaws. He LIES about her! That's huge. How can she ever trust him with her son? Believe what he tells her? Huge problems ahead there!

Looking forward to more!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for bing my first ever review on TWCS!!!

Jake is an ass who unfortunately is like so many fathers ot there. Don't worry, it all comes out in the end!!

Thanks for reading, second chapter is up now.

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