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Reviewer: Fiona Fresh Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 5:16 AM Title: Elizabeth's Story

YAY!!! i love anthony! what a good man!

Reviewer: judyblue95 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 6:40 PM Title: Elizabeth's Story

I wonder how many times things like this went on in real life, both years ago, and maybe even now.  I think this stuff, or things similar, go on much more regularly than people think.  This was a brutal chapter, this outtake, but it explains how Aro came to be who he was and what he was like. I'm so glad that Anthony came to get Elizabeth and that they made a good life together. Now back to the other story....

Reviewer: princessjustine Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2013 4:57 PM Title: Elizabeth's Story

great prequel story 

Reviewer: DarkDesires Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 02 Mar 2013 6:53 AM Title: Elizabeth's Story

I think Anthony really needed to go back there and stomp the crap out of Marcus' dick as well so neither of them had anything that worked. And perhaps since they were living on an island where there were really no laws, perhaps Marcus and Aro needed to be doing a bit of dying as well. But then Involuntary Rapture wouldn't exist. I know, I was warned. I am not complaining, just hoping for female justice.

I really do love all the BDSM stuff in here and Involuntary Rapture, but I am safe and sane, and prefer my BDSM to be consentual, like Midnight Caller. Or the Birthday Spanking. Those are really HOT. As are your picture drabbles. I have to say you are one of my favorite authors at this point. Keep up the fantastic work.

I also love how well everything is written. I don't have to read through spelling errors and incorrect words. It makes a real difference, placing you above the crowd.

Reviewer: too_cute_24 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jan 2013 5:53 PM Title: Elizabeth's Story

Damn! I can't even begin to imagine what something like that must have been like for her. Elizabeth's father needs to be strung up by the balls for selling his own daughter. It's sick! This story was really hard to read, but not because of how it was written. You did a great job with it! :)

Reviewer: MrsAuburnCullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jan 2013 9:33 PM Title: Elizabeth's Story

i don't think i can tell you what happened when i read this chapter.....

Anyway it's not strange Aro is a nutcase with a father like that!!

Reviewer: DanaLynn Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2012 5:18 AM Title: Elizabeth's Story

NE, kick ass out take! I take it that Anthony's assult on Aro is how he ended up sterile?? Even if not, I still have to say, WTG Anthony for kicking Aro's ass for what he did to Elizabeth!!! Great writing! 10 out of 10 in my book! Dana

Reviewer: Scarletdam Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2012 6:18 AM Title: Elizabeth's Story

Very good...It's nice to see part of the back story. Thanks.

Reviewer: DayDreamerCozmo Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2012 11:39 PM Title: Elizabeth's Story

I loved it..... I mean the last part not her gettijg abused.... I think that Aro got off easily but i gues we'll see him and James getting throughtly fucked up ehen Edward gets his hands on him.... Man id love to read Bella joining in the punishing giving....

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2012 3:44 AM Title: Elizabeth's Story

Aro and his father are some really sick puppies!!!!!! Poor Elizabeth .

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2012 9:58 PM Title: Elizabeth's Story

What a fucked up family the Masens are and with parents like Elizabeth's who needs enemies?

Extremely well written. It may be a twisted little tale but it flows so well.

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2012 7:20 PM Title: Elizabeth's Story

Read this on my lunch hour. It was a very intense lunch hour, to say the least. You have an amazing talent! It was so well written, and had me forgetting to swallow.... I had to keep reading to see what happened next. Wow, Aro and Marcus are some sick boys! Would Aro have done this, though, if he had been raised differently? (The age old "nature vs. nurture" question) Now you know I'm going to have start reading IR immediately! Sneaky little devil, you!!

Thanks for the HEA. I have to have my HEA.... Please let me know if you ever intend to kill off someone I really like. 

Back to work for me now. Thanks for the very exciting lunch hour.



Author's Response:

you are soooo welcome!

Reviewer: Kitacullen89 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Aug 2012 5:22 PM Title: Elizabeth's Story

Loved it and loved ye end note lolssssss

Reviewer: Edwardskeilo75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2012 11:07 PM Title: Elizabeth's Story

FUUUCCCKKK!!!!! INTENSE!!! But learned alot.

Reviewer: Princess Mishawaka Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2012 1:59 AM Title: Elizabeth's Story

Very good writing. Very difficult story to write but you did it very well. I feel so sorry for Elizabeth and all she had to endure but in the end she had the  man she wanted and her baby. It seems Anthony loves her so much that raising the baby as his own is no impossition. I did love the ending you wrote for Aro. Smashed peen. I wish his father had one too and mouth too. I hated the father more than Aro. I wonder if Aro would have even done this if his father hadn't made him. I guess Aro's mother had to go through it too so Aro probably thought it was acceptable. 

Reviewer: Mona Rider Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2012 1:49 AM Title: Elizabeth's Story

 

Okay I know, I said I would put this in my TBR bookmarks but it was calling my name. 'Mona, hey Mona come read me... I'll make you happy!' I had to... it made me. *turns all sorts of reds. I'm a living human tomato* Oh my god... The rapes, vivid. *shifty* Fuck it... *throws my security blanket aside* I am a fucking deviant. It was amazing. I was on edge the whole time. I almost thought maybe Marcus was coming up the stairs pissed his son deviated from the schedule. 'Cause I could so see him mad over Aro getting more time than him but nope it was Anthony to the rescue. White stallion masked as a boat and all. Fuck yeah... Penis stomping FUCKING epic!!! Loved it! snuggles in next to everyone else with my cocoa and my blankie Bitches betta respect this story!



Author's Response:

i love this... cant wait for you to read IR!

Reviewer: archy Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2012 6:24 AM Title: Elizabeth's Story

are the Masen males genetically crazy?or was Marcus one and Aro was conditioned by his upbringing?

i am only sorry Anthony did not kill Aro.there weren't even any witnesses!anyway,now we know why Aro can't have children.

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