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Date: 11 Jan 2023 7:15 AM Title: Epilouge

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Date: 11 Jan 2023 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 11 Jan 2023 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 11 Jan 2023 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 11 Jan 2023 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 11 Jan 2023 6:41 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 11 Jan 2023 6:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 11 Jan 2023 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 10:27 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:52 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 10 Jan 2023 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: redauntie Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 May 2016 5:34 AM Title: Epilouge

Very well done.  Excellent

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2014 5:06 PM Title: Epilouge

while reading this it seemed like there were some missing chapters.  Especially between chapters 14 and 15.  Thanks,

Xanath

Reviewer: Alybethed Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 7:52 AM Title: Epilouge

Fantastic Serie! Althought...where is Esme? She was being held by the Volturi.... I guess this was on the missing chapter, perhaps?

Reviewer: Alybethed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 17

Zafrina, Peter and Jasper are going to be in trouble when the fight is over...putting Bella in a ilusion....tsk tsk tsk... I get why the did it but Bella ain't ganna be happy about that.

Reviewer: Alybethed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 6:56 AM Title: Chapter 15

ummm... is there a missing chapter between 14 and this one?

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2012 5:13 PM Title: Epilouge

Great loved it

Reviewer: sprazinko Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Aug 2012 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 15

Not sure bit it seems like there is a chapter missing between 14 and 15, but otherwise this story is great.

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

So now Carlisle goes around trying to recruit others?? Hope many like the Irish coven will refuse and get away...good thing Fynn was there to save them or they'd be dead by now and Bella wouldn't have the werewolf allies...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 13

These boys always teasing each other and 'causing trouble... ^^

Poor Bella...She has so much to shoulder...I hope the news of their new allies among the werewolves will help her keep her sanity...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

Bella's house get's destroyed quite a lot...at least this time she destroyed it herself ^^

 

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh these good for nothing Volturi fuckers...attemting to hurt little Tia and raping Henri...they deserved the torture and pain they got and more...so pissed at them...but this was the final straw, they won't know what hit them when Bella goes in for the kill...

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh, this little family time was really sweet!! Bet they needed this after all the stress of the last few days and all the stress that is heading their way...

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:19 PM Title: Chapter 9

Ohhh, Jasper is pissed and rightfully so...they just assumed Carlisle and Esme got killed but didn't make sure...understandable in the heat of the moment after their last battle but a grave mistake nonetheless...So he really dismembered Esme...how could he do that??

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 8

Wow, can't believe Carlisle actually got away alive without anyone ever noticing...but who does he have in his bag?? he said he created her, it can only be Esme, he only created 2 females, Esme and Rose...and Rose is back in the states...But he couldn't have ripped his mate apart, could he?? Wouldn't it hurt him to hurt his mate...or is she not his real mate after all??

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 7

Wow, it's a really nice gesture of Jake to name his firstborn son after Charlie!! I hope Peter's talk helpede Bella a little to let go of the guilt about her fathers death...

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 6

Very hot Lemon!! Hard to believe it was the fort proper lemon you wrote!!

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

Glad she was able to teach them how to effectively kill the children of the moon...hopefully this will give them an advantage...

Oh, Bella is pissed...cool punishment to freeze them for a day *lol* he shouldn't have sneaked away... ^^

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 4

I hope Auguste will be able to help them...she sure seems very powerful...glad she is willing to come with them and help...

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Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 3

Doesn't sound good for them if the children of the moon are this strong in their wolf form...wonder how they will win this fight...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wow, so Peter is their spirit brother and a wolf, too...So glad Bella was able to save him...good thing her elemental gift is so powerful...!!

I have a feeling this fight will be so much harder to win for them with not only the Volturi as enemies but the children of the moon, too...but why would they help the Volturi?? Did Caius not try to wipe them out in your timeline for this story? I guess not, wouldn't make sense for them to fight alongside the Volturi if he did...

Reviewer: xXxArcanaxXx Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 3:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

Ohhhh sweet, Sam and Emily will become parents like they wanted for so long!! =)

But obviously no good news without bad ones...it's scary that Peter just collapsed and won't wake up...and Charlotte, mad with worry...hope Peter will sort this information fast and snap out of it soon...

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