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Reviewer: Kavyanjali Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2023 10:47 PM Title: Extended Epilogue

Oooooh this has been interesting story, set in completely different time period and I found it interesting how it all intersected with Carlisle's time with Volturi. I am curious as to how Edward was able to read minds despite being human.. did his mother know of it..? Any of his parents had at least minimal of the gift and passed on to him which was more powerful..? The multiple gifts was also interesting, Jasper said Edward's gifts weren't limited to shields and energy control.. so does that mean Edward too had shield abilities..? I was very interested in knowing more about the gifts, would have loved more of it too. I wonder who is Alice's mate and what more allies. Also the prophecy of children of Ares and Apollo were intriguing.. what was all that about..? And I really thought Caius would behave better with Jasper after he saved his mate from the werewolves but Caius is ungrateful jerk as always. And Jane is pain as always, I wonder what Alec thinks of his sister.. Alec and Dimitri being mates was nice and I am sure at some point in future both would leave Volturi and join the Cullen's though not for many centuries.

 

I wise there was squeal of the story.. I hope someday in future there is.



Author's Response:

I do have the sequel mostly written but I haven't had the time to complete it. This was meant to be a 3 to 5 part series of 5 chapter each.  I would need to find my notes in order to finish the whole series.  The whole children of Ares and Apollo is explained in the sequel. 

 

Reviewer: AJK Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2012 3:55 AM Title: Extended Epilogue

I really liked this story. I can't wait until the next one.

Reviewer: ale_swan Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2012 4:23 PM Title: The Reward

I really loved this story!!!! I'm waiting for the sequel.....please post it ASAP! :)

ale



Author's Response:

I do plan to finish the sequel soon.  However, I've been extremelly busy at my job for the past few months and haven't had much time to write.  I'm hoping to get some more of the story down on paper.  I've thought up a few outtakes/extra scene I'd like to add to the original story; so look for those too soon.

Reviewer: DemeRain Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2012 3:40 AM Title: The Reward

Thank you.

Reviewer: Yukosohma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:26 AM Title: Extended Epilogue

I absolutely loved this story!! It was different and fun! Pleas post the sequel soon!

Reviewer: mistydeb Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 6:21 AM Title: Extended Epilogue

I read this initially on FF and I have re-read it on here with the extended epilogue, what a great ending. Really looking forward to the new one. Thks for extending and continuing, Debbie

Reviewer: shewoolf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2012 6:19 PM Title: Extended Epilogue

I really enjoyed your story and am looking forward to the sequel!

Catherine

Reviewer: Rashell Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 8:15 PM Title: Extended Epilogue

totally loved this story on Ffiction but I'm not a member there so I'm living some love here..

Can't wait for the sequel:))

Hugs, Rashell

Reviewer: 35nanou Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 3:39 PM Title: Extended Epilogue

J'adore cette histoire, entre autre, pour son originalité et je suis ravie de voir que tu ne t'arrêteras pas là. La puissance de Jasper couplée à celle d'Edward peut amener à de grandes choses.
Pour ce qui est des lemons je suis entièrement d'accord avec toi, l'histoire est l'élément essentiel et le lemon n'est apprécié que lorsqu'il a un intérêt dans l'histoire, c'est juste la cerise sur le gâteau!
A bientôt.

Reviewer: maryhell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jun 2012 7:40 AM Title: Extended Epilogue

I don't think I have read a story of yours that I haven't adored. This is no exception. 

I look forward to reading the sequel to this.

Fantastic story.

 

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