Date: 19 Sep 2012 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 14
Awwww...Edward gets his baby.
Author's Response:
Yeah :) Thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 19 Sep 2012 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 14
Aw, YAY! I am so happy for them :D I cannot wait for more now!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 14
I knew it! When will this divorce go through?! His ex is so going to come slither back and try to weasel her way into Edward's life. And I hope Bella kicks her ass right back out! Can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Divorce: soon :) Kate will make another appearance, though. Thank you for reading! xoxox
Date: 19 Sep 2012 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 1
Wow...Edward has been through so much. I can't believe Kate. How can someone do that to another person?? There is a special place for people like her.
I am glad that Edward has moved and is around friends and is meeting Bella. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thanks for checking it out-I hope you enjoy the story! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 19 Sep 2012 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh I'm so happy for them!!! He's not going to find those pamphlets and get the wrong idea is he???? I voted for you In the poll!!! :)
Author's Response:
I guess I wasn't clear enough (sorry) Bella actually handed back(to the doctor) the ones that were about adoption or termination. So no, he won't see them ;) Thanks for the vote! xoxox
Date: 18 Sep 2012 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 14
yay! baby!!
Author's Response:
*smile* glad you liked it! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter... loved edward's reaction to the pregnancy news and to asshole Laurent. grrr
Author's Response:
He stepped up on both fronts, eh? Thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 18 Sep 2012 9:30 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you for not drawing it out. Great chapte!!
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it! Thanks xoxox
Date: 18 Sep 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 14
Glad to see Edward happy about the baby.. I can't believe that they just assume you want to terminate a pregnancy when you find out your pregnant. I have never had that done to me ever..
Date: 18 Sep 2012 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 13
Oh no poor Bella! I hope you post the next chapter soon, I can't hold my breath for long! Lets hope Edward busts in and kicks his arse seriously hard. I love this story, so well written. I am now checking out your other stories too. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you. It's really nice to receive such compliments! I'm happy you're enjoying the story. I'll be updating later today! Thanks again xoxox
Date: 18 Sep 2012 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 13
I'm not cranky about the angst thing...I'm cranky about the evil cliffie!!!!! Please tell me you are updating soon...like now?? I absolutely adore this story. You are doing a fabulous job with it. Thank you for sharing it!
~allidel :)
PS - I seriously mean the compliments, not trying to kiss your ass in hopes you'll update sooner. I can though, if it would work! ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the kind words! I do appreciate it. I'm so glad you like the story. I don't do cliffy's often, so don't expect to see another any time soon. I'll be updating today, in the next few hours. Thanks again!! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2012 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my, so much happening. Glad Bella and Esme are getting along. I love Katrina and I love that she was Able to connect with Carlsle and his strories. I sure hope Laurent goes what's coming to him. Total creeper who just doesn't get it. Hope Bela is okay. Looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
Yes, I agree. A LOT is happening. I'm taking the word count down in my next fic. These long chapters are killers. I'm not one to include a massive amount of detail. I don't like to read it and I don't write it. Just enough to get a sense of what's going on and set the stage, so to speak.
Esme is great, she was just worried about her boy. Carlisle may have found a new calling? You'll have your answers shortly, I'll be updating before the day is through! Thanks so much for reading xoxox
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:15 AM Title: Chapter 13
Love Carlisle helping Katrina. so sweet. Glad Esme and B are getting along. Oh Laurant.....you've messed with the wrong girl
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading! It's so nice to have every chapter reviewed, thank you for that. I'm glad you've enjoyed the story so far! xoxox
Date: 15 Sep 2012 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 12
Esme and Carl are cool. Poor Jake. Glad the ranch is coming together. LOVE the name
Author's Response:
They are pretty cool. I can't take full credit on the name, a few reviewers suggested I use 'Corrine'. I hadn't even thought of it til then! Thanks so much! xoxox
Date: 15 Sep 2012 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 11
woo hoo Happy Times.
Laurant is a wanker
Author's Response:
LOL yep! happy, happy times. Glad you liked it xoxox
Date: 15 Sep 2012 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oh Eddie. Hope b has patience with him
Author's Response:
She has lots of patience! :) TY xoxox
Date: 15 Sep 2012 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 9
Woo hoo for girlfriend. Glad Tanya said friend route.
Author's Response:
They're kinda sweet. I'm not sure I could write a Tanya that E has feelings for, unless she were somehow related. Def not as a love interest! Thank you xoxox
Date: 15 Sep 2012 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awww so cute. Glad everyone is so cool with Jake and Seth.
Author's Response:
This was a fun chapter to write. I had the scene in my head for a long time. Thank you xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
Glad they had a good shopping trip and a chance to get to know each other better
Author's Response:
Definitely a step in the right direction! Thank you ;) xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
Poor confused eddie
Author's Response:
His misery and confusion is so much fun. LOL I hope you're enjoying it! Thank you xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:35 PM Title: Chapter 5
Aww jealous e is cute. A normal Renee...cool.
Author's Response:
I figured it was time I wrote a nice, normal Renee. I hate always making her out to be the bad guy. Thank you for taking the time to leave all the reviews! I appreciate it so much ;) xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 4
Jake is too cute. Lol for our kids and their misunderstandings. Ugh for skankya
Author's Response:
It was fun to write. And everyone just looooooves Tanya LOL Thanks! xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Omg!!
Author's Response:
I know! I'll be updating shortly-like, today! Thanks for reading xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 13
U cant stop there....more soon please.
Author's Response:
Sorry! I'll be updating sometime this afternoon/evening! Thanks for reading xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Lol misconceptions abound on both sides. Lol for a gay Jake.
Author's Response:
They got off on the wrong foot and it snowballed. Jake is great, eh? Thanks so much! xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 7:58 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow he is a bit of a judgemental Arse. Love em.
Author's Response:
Yeah, poor dude. He's still stinging from Kate's BS. Thank you for reading! xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wonderful start.. this is kelly from TWCS group on FB.
Author's Response:
Hi Kelly, glad to have you along! Hope you enjoy the story, thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 13
Good for Bella. Creepy Laurent needs putting in his place. Can't wait for next chapter. Loving this story
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
I seriously hope that's the end of it! I don't want her to get raped! I also see an unplanned pregnancy in the future! I hope I'm right! They would be so happy about it after they got past the shock! Great chapter! I hate that it will be ending soon!
Author's Response:
I don't think that I'd ever write a rape into a fic, unless it was a flashback or something. Not my style. As for anything else, we'll have to wait and see. I'm working on Ch 14 right now ;) Thanks so much! xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 13
OH SNAP! I am happy to hear that they have said I love you, and that karma came back to haunt Kate. I am also happy that this is the height of the angst, but I cannot wait for it to be over.
Author's Response:
Yeah, a lot happened in this chapter. My next fic will not have the longer chapters. Nothing but sunshine and rainbows from here on out. Mostly. :) thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 13
Hope Edward rescues her soon & kicks Laurent all the way back to the rock he crawled out from!
Nice chapter!
Author's Response:
Edward is on his way ;) Thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 13
Lets hope that someone saves her from this sick fucker soon!!
Author's Response:
Bella needs a hero. Hmm *taps chin* wonder who that will be? ;) Ch 14 will post soon-maybe a day or two. thanks for reading! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 13
Laurent is a dead man! please let him get there quick!!!
Author's Response:
I think you'll be happy with the next chapter ;) Thanks so much for reading! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 13
someone better have seen that and be coming to help....if there is rape with no warning to the readers in this story, I'm going to freak.
Author's Response:
One, I don't know that I'd ever write a rape into a fic, and two, if I did, you can be sure there would be a warning. That's why I added the end note about the angst. I can't write it well, nor sustain it. I'm working on 14 already and hope to post it early, so ya'll can breathe again ;)
[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2012 8:08 AM Title: Chapter 12
Loved the chapter. We finally get all the parents together. I can't hate on Esme. As the mom of two boys, I would be super protective if one of them went through what Edward went through. She's Leary and just wants to be sure that he won't be put through the ringer again. Poor Jake, it's so sad that that such closed minded people exist in the world. You are who you are and no one has the right to beat you for it. As always, looking forward to the next update.
Author's Response:
That is how I saw Esme. Not really judgemental or too assertive, just worried and wanting the best for him. We'll see more on her in the next chapter that may help to explain her motivation a little better.
About Jake...It is a terrible thing and happens more often than most people hear about. The experience was just another point that cemented his close relationship with Bella and her parents. There will be a little more on that in the next chapter, as well. Thanks so much for reading!! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ok. Now I feel like a complete idiot. I said on face book that I was going to start reading this story when in fact I had already started it and LOVE it! I think I may be reading too many WIP stories and am having trouble keeping them straight. I really like these characters and the interactions between them. I'll be sad to see it end. I hope we'll get to see the therepy center in action before the story ends! Thanks so much for writing it!
Lisa
Author's Response:
That happens! LOL I'm happy you like the story, however. There's a few more chapters yet, so it won't be over too soon. I can tell you that we will see some of the therapy in action-not a lot, but hopefully enough to satisfy. Thank you for reading & leaving your thoughts! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 12
Not too sure how I feel about Esmeralda. Loved the communion of the group.
Author's Response:
I knew that some people would have an issue with Esme, I wasn't sure that I liked her much when I wrote it. She just kinda came out that way and I went with it ;) She's a good egg, though. She just needs to back away a little and let Edward live his own life. Thanks so much for reading! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2012 3:44 PM Title: Chapter 12
I think I like Esme....she's a little much at 1st but she explained herself so u think she'll be ok now.....poor Jake, such ignorant and hateful people in the world.....:-( I think Bella blew Edward away with the ILY...his will come in time.....
Author's Response:
Esme is a nice lady, she's just a little overbearing at times. Bella was spontaneous about telling Edward that she loved him-surprising herself as well as Edward. He's getting there :) xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2012 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 12
I loved it! He will say it soon and hopefully he will be divorced soon as well!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Stay tuned, it's going to happen soon-the divorce and the ILY. xoxox
Date: 07 Sep 2012 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 12
That was amazing! I really loved it! Esme is great, so glad she is giving Bella a chance :) I also was shocked at Jake's story, but something good did come out of it, so that made it a little better :)
Author's Response:
It's very unforunate that things like that happen (referring to Jake). I'm glad you liked Esme, not everyone did. I knew that would happen, though. Some moms are meddlers, some are just involved too much, but it comes from a place of love. We're going to hear a little more on that in the next chapter. Thank you for reading! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2012 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 11
My goodness, once Edward finally broke through those road blocks he had built up, it was full steam ahead. Over and over again!!! Loved it. Laurent is going to be an interesting character, I believe. Very smarmy. Loved that you made him short and "rotund"! I see trouble a brewing with him. Can't wait for the next update
Author's Response:
Yup, and as he continues to progress, he's only going to get more comfortable and 'willing'. LOL Laurent is a smarmy guy, and you're right to be wary of him. Thanks so much for reading! xoxox
Date: 30 Aug 2012 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
lmao i like the idea of laurent being a small round little man lmao that shit is hilarious.
looks like edward finally stuck it to bella,, or in bella. lmao
Good for them!!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I wanted Laurent to be this slimy, social climbing snob. Somehow he also became short and fat. LOL He stuck it rather well, eh? :) Thanks so much! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2012 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yay! It was so good to have Edward finally give in.
I don't like Laurent. I have a bad feeling that we haven't seen the last of him
Author's Response:
Everyone feels better now that the deed has been done! :) And yeah. Laurent is the only 'bad guy' in this fic. He will be back. Thanks for reading! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2012 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 11
“I want a thigh.”...LOL!
Author's Response:
Ya know, that came to me as I was writing, and I just went with it. Glad you liked it! Thanks for reading ;) xoxox
Date: 28 Aug 2012 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
LOVE IT!!!! Hope Edward will open up to Bella more. Please update soon.
Author's Response:
Thank you!! I think things will be much, much better between them now! Thanks ;) xoxox
Date: 28 Aug 2012 1:33 PM Title: Chapter 11
Wow that was a great chapter, Hot!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!! xoxox
Date: 28 Aug 2012 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
Finally! Wow...very hot.
Author's Response:
I'm happy you enjoyed it! Thanks for reading ;) xoxox
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 9:33 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it! i think Bella was about to seriously go off and put some distance between them if he hadn't had the revelation the night before ....!
Author's Response:
Yes, I had considered that myself. If he farted around for much longer, she would have put on the brakes. Thanks so much-glad you liked it! xoxox
Date: 28 Aug 2012 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
YES!!!!!!!!!!!! So happy for them! YAY!
Author's Response:
Awesome! I love it that everyone is so happy for them! Thanks for reading ;) xoxox
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2012 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
That was some sexy first times..... for our couple. yummy and hawt :)
Author's Response:
I thought it was pretty perfect ;) thanks so much, glad you like it! xoxox
Date: 28 Aug 2012 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Finally! Kudos to Bella for telling him how she feels! Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Yep, this Bella isn't going to sit back and let him guess. lol Thanks for reading!! xoxox
Date: 28 Aug 2012 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah that was hott! I hope that he tells her soon.. she needs to know.. they are so perfect togeher..
Author's Response:
Glad you liked it ;) Thanks so much for reading & reviewing! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2012 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 10
Tubing was fun. Glad you included that.
I could see James an Tanya maybe becoming an item :)
I love seeing Edward falling for Bella. It kills me to see him put on the brakes with the physical part of their relationship. I totally get it but I feels so bad for Bella.
I cried when I didn't see the lovely little next link. Guess I have to wait for updates like everyone else now.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're all caught up! Thanks so much for all the reviews :) Edward, the poor guy. He wants it, just isn't quite there yet. xoxox
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2012 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awe. They ate so cute together. So glad everything is out in the open now about Kate.
That was a nice encounter with Tanya. Glad things are amicable between them :)
Author's Response:
Yup. As I said somewhere at the beginning, this is looow drama. Very little will be upsetting the apple cart. Actually, most, if not all-of my fics are like that. I have enough drama in my own life. I don't need to create any of the fictional kind! Thanks so much for reading, I'm so happy you like the story! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 8
The aha moment for Edward realizing jake was gay was priceless. I had tears in my eyes from laughing so hard.
It is so nice to see the difference in the interaction between B&E now that he knows. I can't wait for them to get closer.
Author's Response:
Oh yay!! I'm glad you liked it ;) It was one of the scenes that I've had in my head for a while. Thank you for reviewing! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 12:49 PM Title: Chapter 7
I can not wait for Edward to see jake and Seth together and of WTF. That will be so entertaining.
Awe, B&E were so cute shopping together. I think Bella opening up like that will get Edward to open up to he about Kate. Baby steps ate better than going backward.
Author's Response:
You're so right about the baby steps! I think they are progressing nicely. Thanks!! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
I can't help but laugh every time Edward thinks the wrong thing about jake and Bella. If jake is not flamboyant then there would be no way for Edward to know he was gay. I can't wait for the big reveal. That will be epic.
Oh the glorious wonders of soup. Gives such great material for alone time ;)
I love seeing B&E slowly coming together. Yes it's a slow burn but it is more realistic that way.
Author's Response:
Exactly! Poor misguided Edward. It sure is fun to write, though ;) I'm so glad you're enjoying it! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 11:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
I don't hate Tanya. I can see how he would go out with her since she did after all appear to be available and actually interested in Edward. I'm just glad nothing felt right to him.
I love jake and Renee gossiping about Bella behind her back. That is definitely something your best friend and your mom would do. Maybe that little chat will get Bella on gear to talk with him like momma said :)
Author's Response:
It was a natural progression for him to go out with her. But yeah-no way would I make there be any sparks! I may do an outtake later of Jake and Renee- I think it will be fun! Thanks so much!!! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 4
I love jake. I don't like Tanya.
Edward and Bella need to get their heads out of their asses and talk to each other. I know easier said than done. The slow burn is just torturous. I can't wait for Edward to realize her back hurts and help her out.
Niw that Alice knows there is a problem I hope she will stick her nose in the middle of it.
Author's Response:
I don't think anyone likes Tanya. I don't LOL even though I made her nice in this. The slow burn is hard, but necessary :) Alice isn't going to be involved in this fic as much as my others. Thanks for reading & reviewing! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 3
Jake being gay makes sense. I like that he won't interfere with B&E.
It was nice it get into Bella's head and know what she was feeling. That was so sad about her twin.
LOL! I'm dying to know who will catch him sleeping naked.
Author's Response:
It hasn't been written yet, but I know who and how that someone will catch some naked Edward butt ;) Thanks so much for reading! I'm glad you like it! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 26 Aug 2012 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
Edward is killing me. It breaks my heart to see him so angry and taking it out on Bella. I'm dying to know who jake is. I'm thinking maybe brother.
It is so obvious that Edward loves kids and would love to be a father.
Author's Response:
I know. He has to go thru this, though. He was hurt so badly, he can't see past it at this point. Thanks for reading, I'm happy you're enjoying it! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2012 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, Kate was a real bitch. I couldn't imagine having an abortion and telling my husband I miscarried. Especially when said husband was so anxious to have kids. Poor Edward deserves a better life and relationship.
Nice reaction to Bella :) this was a great first chapter and I'm looking forward to the next.
Author's Response:
Betrayals of any kind can be crushing. This one is especially heinous. Kate is a bitch and I can't wait for her to get hers! I'm glad you liked the chapter :) Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts! xoxox
Date: 20 Aug 2012 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 10
I so want to go tubing down the river with that group. What a blast that would be. I know Bella is frustrated, but Edward needs to get there at his own pace. It seems like he is starting to realise all that is in front of him. He just needs to continue to let the past go so he can focus on the present that will get him the future he desires. Hmmm, looks like we need to find some one for James. Maybe Edward can shoot Tanya his way!!!! :) Loved the chapter, can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
I know, right?! It would be a hoot. You're right, Edward needs to get it straight in his head then put that shit to rest! lol Good idea about James and Tanya, i was thinking the same thing! Thanks for reading & reviewing!! xoxox
Date: 16 Aug 2012 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 10
No don't let things blow up!!!!! Netiher one of them need anymore heartache please! :-(
Author's Response:
Nah, things are going to blow up in good way ;) Thank you for reading! xoxox
Date: 16 Aug 2012 4:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aw now I wanna go on a river thing, tho if somebody tipped me, i'd cut them lmao. Poor Edward and his peen, and poor bella and her lady bits! Edwards holding back on the love of thrusting , but I hope he gives it up to bella soon... She's most likely to explode if she doesnt get her some Edward Peen!!
Author's Response:
LOL I wouldn't be too happy if I got tipped, either. I think you are right-they may both explode soon! I'm happy you liked the chapter-thank you for reading and leaving your thoughts! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 16 Aug 2012 4:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edward's head and heart have to be fully in, i hope Bella can understand that. i know he has to explain that all to her as well. loved the tubing!
Author's Response:
You are so right. He needs to get over his issues. Thank you for reading/reviewing!! xoxox
Date: 16 Aug 2012 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
OH wow, that was amazing! I loved their day at the river! I have only been tubing once, but it was a lot of fun...I would have had more fun if I were tied to the other people instead of being dead last and I had a clue as to what I was doing. But, oh well ;) I wonder how long before it boils over ;) I cannot wait to see what you decide on as a name for their place :)
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! I haven't been tubing, but we used to canoe a lot down the river here, and it was a lot like that-just a floating party lol I still haven't decided on the name, though I am fairly certain that 'Corrine' will be part of it. Thanks so much for reviewing! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
BINGO! Now that's what I'm talking about. Let the games begin. Giddy up.
Author's Response:
Aahaha Giddy up << love that ;) Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 10 Aug 2012 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 9
Damn that was good!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy you liked it ;) xoxox
Date: 10 Aug 2012 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow, SO amazing! I am SO happy they are together now!! YAY!!! Name for a therapy farm? One of the ones that is near to me is Tally Ho. I also like the names (I used Google to see some example names) "Hope Springs", "Dream Rider", and "Hands and Hearts" (since horses are measured in hands, I thought it was cute). Of course, I could go on, but these seem like enough for now :)
Author's Response:
Thank you for the suggestions! I'm glad you liked the chapter, the next one is posting soon :) xoxox
Date: 10 Aug 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 9
Wonderful chapter. Loved that they are moving forward with the relationship and that Edward called her his girlfriend. Edward made an important step forward when he told Bella about Kate. He's healing and slowly starting to learn to trust again. Can't wait for the next update.
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you liked it! I was a little worried about him calling her his girlfriend, but I think it was a big step for him. Thanks so much for reading! xoxox
[Report This]Date: 10 Aug 2012 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
Love it, now they're talking and kissing......:) yay!
Author's Response:
I'm happy you liked the chapter! The next couple are going to be fun ;) xoxox
[Report This]Date: 02 Aug 2012 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
I have been dying for this chapter and you didn't disappoint!!! That was fantastic. The "Ah Ha" moment was priceless!! It's a wonder what a little bit of clarity can do to move things forward. So glad that Jake and Seth are "out" now. Can't wait to see how Bella and Edward proceed from here. You rocked it, girl!!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad it lived up to your expectations!! Even though I had this scene in my head for a while, I was sweating this one. I'm thrilled that everyone was happy with it :)
Thanks so much for reading!
Date: 02 Aug 2012 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 8
OH WOW...YAY!!! SO happy for them! So, I read this and think you meant "head board", because I don't know what a "bead board" is, "Emmett and I are getting the bead board..." Still loved it :)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it! Bead board is a specific kind of paneling-like paneling but it's solid wood. You can Google it ;) LOL sorry- I couldn't resist. Google image has lots of pics of what bead board looks like, though. :)
Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 8
Awesome chapter but damn what s plsce to end it. Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
You'll be happy to know that Ch 9 picks up right where 8 left off ;) Thanks so much for reading!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 8
Well finally!!!!
I love how you "outed" Jake & Seth!
So cute how Bella & Edward got caught in their little bubble. Edwards personality change after he found out & Bella calling him on it? Loved it!
Author's Response:
Bella may be a little timid, or that might be the wrong word. Reserved? But she isn't shy. I plan on her pushing him every step of the way! Thanks so much-I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 8
priceless! that was too funny! what a way to find out :) good now he can pursue!
Author's Response:
I'm happy the reveal was a hit! Thanks so much! :)
Date: 01 Aug 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Loved it. Great reveal.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy you enjoyed it ;)
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 8
I swear, him realizing Jake was gay, was so damn cute. I can just picture that look on his face. Priceless. Well done my dear.
Author's Response:
I'm so happy you liked it! Thank you for reading!! :)
Date: 01 Aug 2012 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 8
Thank goodness you put the poor man out of his misery. I would have paid good money to see his face once the lightbulb came on. I did give a few extremely ladylike (that's my story anyway) snorts once the big reveal occurred. Now Edward can finally make his move guilt free. ;)
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm glad it made you laugh! Thanks so much for reading :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 7
;-) another wonderful chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you! The BBQ is up next, it should be a lot of fun ;)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
Can't wait until the Jake reveal ;-).
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you again for reading, and for all the reviews! I really appreciate it :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
Damn you scared me with that warning but that was nothing! If that's all it is it's not too bad. Please say that's all there is! ;-)
Author's Response:
Sorry about that-a lot of people were sweating the Tanya thing. I thought it was better to warn them off rather than lose them.
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 4
Continues to be interesting. I wonder if Tanya will be a problem?
Author's Response:
You prolly know by now, she isn't an issue-thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 11:10 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh man - love when a story has the two them thinking the others reactions are from other reasons than denying their own attraction. Bella backstory is interesting. Really didn't form an opinion about Jake yet other than I love when he's gay an not a "threat".
Author's Response:
I won't ever write Jake as competition! I'm glad you're enjoying their ignorance :)
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 10:49 AM Title: Chapter 2
Ooh- he's bit rough around the edges after what Kate's done to him... (understandably so)
Can't wait to see inside Bella's head.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he's still hurting and lashing out at Bella. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 31 Jul 2012 10:30 AM Title: Chapter 1
Outstanding start! Glad I found it!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm glad you're liking it :)
[Report This]Date: 30 Jul 2012 5:04 AM Title: Chapter 7
That was a great bonding chapter. They are getting more familiar with each other and that is a good thing. Start to build the foundation even if Edward is still clueless about her relationship status. Still looking forward to that BBQ. So, we were all worried about Tanya and she turned out to be necessary in Edwards progression forward but basically she was a none issue. Now we are going to be seeing a James. Should we be worried??? Can't wait to read more. Love the story.
Author's Response:
You hit the nail on the head regarding Tanya. That's exactly what she was, just a step in the right direction :) James.... nope. No worries, there. In fact, you might end up really liking him! Thanks so much for reading & reviewing! I can't express what it means to me :) See you Thursday!
Date: 27 Jul 2012 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 7
Oh wow, So amazing :) I really loved it! I cannot wait to see how much longer before Edward finds out the truth about Jake. Loved it!
Author's Response:
Not much longer, at all! I'm happy you enjoyed the chapter-see you on Thursday! Thank you ;)
Date: 27 Jul 2012 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
Thank goodness Edward will be getting that clue soon. It is funny how the stars just keep aligning to keep it from him. I am looking forward to his reaction. I am glad Bella opened up about her sister - I think it helped Edward a bit. I can't wait to see what Edward finally does once the Jacob (non) issue is taken care of. I enjoyed the update - gave me a much needed warm and fuzzy feeling. :)
Author's Response:
Yeah, I think most ppl in the fandom needed some warm fuzzies! I'm glad you liked it, and hope the next chapter will be worth the wait. Thanks so much for reading/reviewing! I appreciate both so much :)
Date: 26 Jul 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yay.....progress!! Hmmm....maybe the 4th shed more illumination than just the fireworks, eh?
Author's Response:
The 4th should be rather enlightening! See you then, and thanks for reading!! :)
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 7
Thank you for the update.......It's Edward turn to share.........Please somebody tell Edward Seth and Jake are together........until you post again
Author's Response:
Thank you, for reading! Edward's sharing time will begin soon, and I hope you enjoy the next chapter ;) Thanks so much!!
Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
I thought that Emmett might have said something to Edward when they were together about jake and that's why Edward finally asked Bella to spend some time with him but nope. Oh well, it will come, at the BBQ, right? Can't wait and I'm glad to see Edward understand that age is just a number and go through experiences at any age. Great chapter, they are finally moving forward ;)
Author's Response:
It's been my experience, that when it comes to attraction with an older/younger person, there is always some trepidation or insecurities. That's really his only issue. As he gets to know Bella, the anxiety is lessening. You'll love the next chapter :) (I hope!) See you Thursday!
[Report This]Date: 26 Jul 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 7
Damn why doesn't he listen when she says vital info !!! easily distracted man! Lol! nice day they spent together
Author's Response:
LOL Yep! Convieniently distracted at opportune moments! Guess what's next??? See you Thursday!!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 6
THATS OK EDWARD JACK OFF ALL YOU WANT BECAUSE BELLA IS NOT JAKES GIRL FRIEND
Author's Response:
LMAO Go Edward! Thanks so much for the reviews ;)
Date: 23 Jul 2012 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 5
BELLA'S MOTHER IS A SMART WOMAN I HOPE IT WORKS OUT WHEN BELLA TRY'S IT.
Author's Response:
Renee is full of great advice, Bella would be smart to pay attention!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 4
FIRST I THINK BELLA IS WAY TO HARD ON EDWARD. AS FOR TANYA SHE IS OUT TO GET HER HOOKS INTO EDWARD ISN'T SHE? I DON'T LIKE HER. AND JAKE I THINK HE WANTS WHAT IS BEST FOR BELLA AND HE LET HER KNOW HE KNEW THERE WAS MORE TO BELLA BEING KNOCKED DOWN THEN WHAT BELLA WAS TEELLING HIM HE MADE HER COME CLEAN AND TOLD HER TO CALL EDWARD AND THANK HIM FOR HELPING HER UP.
Author's Response:
Jake see a lot more than Bella gives him credit for. Bella was pissy to Edward, she was lashing out because she expected it from him. Tanya, Tanya. Everyone hate the woman. LOL
Thanks for reading!!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
DAMN EDWARD SLEEPING NAKED. BELLA AND HE BOTH LIKE ONE AN OTHER BUT THEY BOTH THINK THEY DON'T WHATS UP WITH THAT THEY NEED TO GET A CLUE DON'T YOU THINK?
Author's Response:
LOL they'll be getting clued in soon! Thank you ;)
Date: 23 Jul 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 2
YES HE WAS TO HARD ON BELLA AND I HOPE BELLA DOESN'T TURN EDWARD DOWN WHEN SHE FINDS OUT EDWARD IS THE ONE WHO WANT TO GO IN ON HER RANCH. BUT I GUESS I'LL FIND OUT IF I KEEP READING SO I' OUT OF HERE.
Author's Response:
He was hard on her, but people do that. If they're going thru a tough time, especially if they're at a breaking point, it's taken out on others. By now, though, you know it all worked out ;)
Thanks for reading/reviewing!!
Date: 23 Jul 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 1
IT'S A REALLY GOOD START I LIKE IT A LOT BUT YOU HAVE 5 MORE CHAPTERS UP TO READ SO I'M OFF TO DO JUST THAT.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked the first chapter! Thanks for reading & for the review.
I love your name, btw! ;)