Date: 19 Aug 2014 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 20
Jeez, I'm one big hormonal, old woman right at this moment!!!! Wonderful story. You did an awesome job writing and putting it into a format that drew your reader right into the story. You made me feel just like Bella. I want to jump his ass, too!!!
I was looking for something that I could read over several days intermittently between housework (dust bunnies are getting to be the size of Texas because of FF) when I found "Walk." Yeah, right. "Next" flew by like it had nitrous oxide pumped into it!! And what a ride. I absofuckinglutely loved your story (sorry for the ugly word).
Loved the ending!!! Kate finally got her comeuppance and Lilly got a reprieve (“You're off shit shoveling duty, squirt.”). And let's not forget these words "When I first met Bella, I thought she was too young to know what she wanted. Too naïve to make decisions that would affect her entire life. Now that she is surrounded by our five children, I can see how wrong I was to assume such things. She taught me how to live again. She taught me how to love again. She taught me how to walk." Only thing I could add would be the joy of watching both Edward's and Bella's characters go from lost lonliness to love forever, together.
I've already looked for your other stories so I'm sure I'll see you there.
I also owe you an apology. I'm normally a much better reviewer even though I only read "completed" stories. You deserve so much more that just one review from me - so - for that, please accept my apology and promise that I will do better next time.
Thank you for writing for our fandom. I enjoy reading all the wonderful stories that authors give so freely to their readers. I appreciate you so much!!!
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Date: 05 Apr 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
I can't wait for Edward to tell her that he feels the same way!! It is just a matter of time I am thinking! I just wish I could find someone to love me just as much!! That is so sad what happened to Jacob...I don't like to see people hurt because of their sexual preference. Esme is certainly different in this story, but I like her.
Date: 10 Dec 2012 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 19
That was amazing! I really loved their names. The girl weighed a little more than I did; I weighed 5 pounds 7 ounces, but I was 20 inches long ;) I really am also happy for them for their happy ending! They deserved it :D Cannot believe it is over, but there is still the epilogue :D
Date: 30 Nov 2012 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 18
Aw, that was AMAZING! I am SO happy the babies are coming! I am also glad Edward didn't do what my dad did when my mom went into labour...he changed the oil in the car and washed all of the windows (which normally takes him about 15 minutes!) and then almost forgot her bag! My mom was also on bed rest for 6 weeks with me, because she went into preterm labour. I was the first baby too, so it wasn't like they had done this before, oh dear. Anyway, I cannot wait to see what they name the babies and what their birthday is...you haven't mentioned it yet. :D
Date: 30 Nov 2012 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
I did the same thing when my water broke, but the contractions hadn't started yet...check the cats, call the boss, grab the bag, then wake up the husband to drive us to the hospital. He reacted similar to Edward - not quite sure what to do or what was going on for a few minutes!
I can't wait to meet the babies! And see the suprise Edward's been working on!
Thanks for sharing!
Date: 26 Oct 2012 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 16
That was amazing! I really loved it! I cannot wait to see what the babies are :D Although, I can relate with Edward about "Subway, again?" Because Subway was one of three places to eat in the town where I went to college...besides the cafeteria/dining hall and a Mexican restaurant. I don't like it very much now.
Date: 24 Oct 2012 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 16
So damn cute, these two. I'm assuming since Kate commented about them still being married that she signed the divorce papers back before she was caught tramping it up? Maybe she was just hoping he hadn't signed them yet.
Date: 12 Oct 2012 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Loved the chapter. Twins!!! Yea! Can't wait for the next update. Yeah, those vaginal ultrasounds are not fun. Had one when I was pregnant with my oldest. He's 19 now and I still remember that exam!
I'm happy you liked the chapter! Thank you for reading :) I don't think those exams are easily forgotten... :( xoxox
Date: 05 Oct 2012 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 15
Thank you for the update..I just adore this story........I'm so happy for Edward & Bella....Bella parents are happy and Edwards parents are going to be estatic........Alice was about to lost it...wait till Emment finds out...lol.can't wait to see what happens next................WELL DONE!!! ......BRAVO!!!
Thank you for the kind words :) I'm really glad you're enjoying the story. The next chapter will be up soon! xoxox
Date: 05 Oct 2012 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 15
You're right. Vaginal ultrasounds aren't fun
Ugh. I cringe thinking about it. I love how attentive Edward is being. It makes me mushy inside. :) happy days!
Yeah, he is awesome. I love him :) Thank you for reading! xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 15
Yay! Yay! Clapping jumping up and down for Edward and yes, Bella too! Edward has wanted to be a daddy for so long.... Yippee!!! TWINS
Twins. He's going to be on cloud nine, eh? Thanks so much! xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 15
Aw loved it! Having a rubbish week, so was happy to see this update today and with such a great chapter :) So sweet.
That was nice-thank you. I'm glad that I could help brighten your week just a little :) xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
THIS IS AWESOME.. EDWARD IS VERY EXCITING TO READ WHEN HE'S LIKE THAT.. ALL HAPPY AND SHIT.. ITS WONDERFUL!!!!
Thank you ;) I like him all happy and shit, too! LMAO I'm glad you're enjoying the story, thanks for reading! xoxox
Date: 04 Oct 2012 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 15
aww that was an awesome chapter... Oh please Bella you need to marry that boy before that baby is born... I agree with Edward call me old fashion but I like to see the parents get married before the babies are born...
Thank you :) I haven't decided yet when Bella will marry Edward... I have an idea though ;) Thanks so much for reading! xoxox
Date: 23 Sep 2012 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
Go Edward!! Way to pay back the slimy weazle for hurting Bella. So much excitement coming up. Edward is FINALLY going to be a daddy!! Loved how this chapter ended. Looking forward to the next update.
I'm so glad you liked the chapter-thank you for reading! xoxox
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 14
Yay, glad Edward kicked Laurent's ass and Bella is ok! Aww, I wondered if a baby was on the way when she was feeling faint when she stood up in the bath. So pleased for Edward as Bella will happily have his baby, not like that evil Kate.Can't wait for more - love this story :)
I have just read your Across the Hall story since I typed my last review (pretty fast reader) - thats a great story too! Great writing!
I'm really glad you liked the chapter! Thanks for reading (ATH, too!) xoxox
Date: 19 Sep 2012 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 14
Squeee!! Love them. Ok, now let's take this Kate bitch to the cleaners and tie that loose end up. Oooo, I hope she gets what's coming to her good.
LMAO Kate will be showing up again-Thanks so much for reading! xoxox
Date: 19 Sep 2012 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 14
Thank you, thank you, thank you...for not making us wait a week!! I love the chapter, and the whole story. It actually pops in my head every once in awhile, when I'm not even near a computer. It's that good!
Thank you for sharing,
That is really cool! I'm glad you're enjoying the story. xoxox