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Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 17

Wow. this is sooooo good! You really are a talented writer. All the drama, choosing a boy, son or old lady, gang or friends, great job! Write fast!  Lol. 



Author's Response:

Awe your making me ****blush***** you know how shy I am. LOL! 

Seriously thank you doll but I am not a great writer. I enojy what I do.

I plan on posting another chapter this week!!!

This is what I would call sooooo good! This is Emmett at his best,

Reviewer: giannakylie Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 17

I am so sad! I love Bella and jax



Author's Response:

Don't be sad. We are  only about half way through the story.

There is a lot more of Jackson and Bella to come!

Here is some Jackson to cheer you up LOL!stories/58558/images/Jackson_smiling.jpg

 

Reviewer: inlovewithSethPaulJasper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 11:21 AM Title: Chapter 17

Ooh I loved it and I laughed at a lot of it.

I sooo hope Bella picks Jaxs, I just think they make a better couple and she grounds Jaxs in a really good way.

I also hope Gemma becomes a mom and helps proteckt Jaxs, Abel, and anyone else. I hope she says "Fuck you Clay, you aint shit" Sorry I really don't like Clay.

I also hope the Cullens can just go away, they do nothing but bring Bella pain and harteack. Well everyone but Jasper, Alice, Emmett, Peter, and Char.

I think Bobby did the right thing turning Clay down, and Piney did the right thing as well.

Opie is crazy but doing the right thing by sticking with Jaxs along with Juice and Koz and Happy.

I can't wait to read more Mama Bird, and you have a lot to catch up on in my story.

Love you to XOXOXOX



Author's Response:

HEY KID!!!!

 

Love you lots and I will talk to you in the day light. I love talking biker shit.

I am going to spend the afternoon reading today!!!

 

MAMA BIRD OUT "Over"

 

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 17

You know I am not for Bella and Jax. She needs out of this life. Able does to but that wont happen. He will stay with his daddy as long as he is alive.

 

Screw Rose. Who cares about Rose?? Not me.



Author's Response:

I know how you feel about Bella and Jackson. There have been sooo many reader bring up good points and bad points about each side. I am listing some of those in the next chapter to see if others feel the same way.

One of those is Abel. He will suffer what ever Jackson does just like any child does their parent.

Emmett has a good heart and Rose is a bitch that will under handed. He will have to deal with her too.

Thank you sooo much for reading me.

 

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

Hi dear sister. If the last update had been a surprise and this most welcome and pleasant driving me in ecstasy, then the third, and surprising me in the "Parthenon of Mount Olympus" way up high in the clouds (laughs). I confess that I melted by his praise again >.< (I think I look like a tomato ~.~ Lol). You're a love and I love you very much.

Glad you liked the e-mail, was a little insecure u.u

I think Gemma should get Jaxs complete contempt and perhaps isolation '-'

Already Clay .... I have some ideas I had better not expose to be very black. ô.-

I liked the brothers for supporting Jaxs, plus they can not download the quarda. So is the querra. What to do about the Cullens as it has more than one querra to blow in their face .... I'm excited here lol, I'll burst with curiosity to know more oh my god me calm lol.

And what's the story of Billy say that Bella goes with Jaxs, he turned witch or shaman now, he that falls so yes. Ô.o

PS. Honey I forgot to tell each chapter has indicated that this story the best Super Natural History / Fantasy, voted again and again, if you depend on me has deservedly won * - *

Again loved their surprises and lots of affection, you know you're tattooed on my heart sister love. XOXO




Author's Response:

I have been on vaction this week and I am going to respond to your email.

I love reader interaction and you never need to be insecure about talking to me.

Jackson is going to go to his dark place because of Clay. I am a little nervious myself about writing that.

Billy is wise beyond his years. A lot of things have to play out with Jackson, Bella and Emmett.

Thank you for voting for this story. I feel like it belongs to all of us and you guys are just as much a part of it as I am.

SEND YOU SOOOO MUCH LOVE BACK!!!!!!

 

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Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 3:40 AM Title: Chapter 17

damn more heavy! love it this story is the best and one of a kind. i just rewatched seasons ome through three of soa i havent seen four yet dying for it to hurry and come out on dvd, while watchjng it your story was running through my head lol.....



Author's Response:

Thanks doll for reading me!

Season four is really good. Season five starts in September and I cannot wait!

Does it help knowing a face with all the characters when you read this story? I am just curious.

This is what Jackson will look like in season four.

 

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2012 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wow girl, it's getting crazy! What's a girl to do. You know me, and that I think she should choose BOTH!!! But I will trust you to choose the best man for her. And yes ma'am I think for new positions daily!!! I'm naughty like that! 



Author's Response:

BOTH!!!!! Would be my answer too sister. But I think that may just happen once in this story, because I cannot help myself!!!!

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Reviewer: inlovewithSethPaulJasper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 16

OMG!! Mama Bird no matter who you make Bella end up with I will love this story. I just hope it's Jaxs. She needs someone she can make a life with and be humen with.

I also don't like it when her and Jaxs fight like they are right now. I just want to see everyone happy but someone in the end is gonna get hurt.

Love you to XOXOXO.

P.S. I will be on yahoo tomorrow all day, I was on earlyer but I didn't feel so good and went and took a nap. LOL!!

Hope to read more soon. "Over" Were is auntie bird anyways? Also have you went and seen my new chapter yet? It's peter lovin all the way threw it. LOL!!

Talk later, Mama Bird. I also need help with our 6 some story, when you got time.

Sending you lots of coffeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee LOL!!



Author's Response:

HEY KID!!!

I was on yahoo ealry yesterday and lefts ya a message.

 

I am sorry that you dont feel good. Sometimes bad shit has to happen to get to the sunshine!!!!

 

LOVE BABY BIRD "OVER"    XOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Auntie Bird was on vacation she pm me today!!!!

 

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Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 16

Wow that was red again ^. ^ (Laughs). I am very shy with his flattery. I am very grateful for making me this affection, loved, really, you're a sweetheart. You know I'm here every day looking for their atualizaão and when I find I'm laughing happily, this latest update caught me off guard, was a huge surprise that the most pleasant, grateful.

As for the update, I understand how it feels to find Jaxs Bella biological daughter of Clay and a police officer legally because she should have told him. The more he got to hear her side, not condemning out without hearing the other party and that goes for Jacob too.

Now if I have to choose one the hard way (difficult, I still think you could twist the story a little and leave it with them, whatever the three live together, still could work, laughs * - *), I have nescessáriamente do an analysis without involving many feelings, or just involve feelings, messed?

It's like, Jaxs is beautiful, blonde, caring, biker (men love blondes, bikers, bike until I've had some time ago to run them love, laughter), half-macho and possessive, over the life he leads might make him die sooner sooner, perhaps she'll die early in life, or become a widow with children to leave the club without power, as once inside you can not get out. You still have the fact that Charles could not see and still be at risk of life without knowing just by being a cop.

On the other hand we have a vampire in love, very loving, friend, protector, playful, with a body that our hot even (oh that ABS), which would do anything for her without charge, (he never charged, he was upset because she relations with Jaxs because she said she would stay with him and they would leave together, but never was jealous sexist) Okay there problems if she does not intend to be transformed, the more she thinks about becoming a vampire, I think that he Emmett my choice. He is the best option, I'm with him and do not open.

Voi send something to your email if you let me direct my e-mail, please read and then answer me if you like it or not.

Again, I am happy and grateful for the very pleasant surprise for another update this week, you made my weekend lol. I love you sister, you know who lives in my heart. XOXO




Author's Response:

I posted the last chapter with you in mind and I am the next one as well is for you Darlin!!!!

I wanted to post it before I respond to your email (I did'nt want to give any secrects away ***wink***wink***)

I plan it being on here tonight or in the morning!!!

It is hard to decide between Emmett and Jackson. They both love her so much and would give their life for her. But they each have a bad side too!! Pluses and minues, but then again we all have them!

You brought up an excellent point with Charlie! Bella is putting her father at risk by being with Jaxs as an outlaw because he is a cop and they will come after him!! Emmett and the vampires are putting Charlie at risk because they will come for him anytime that they come after Bella.

I get just as excited when you read me and thank you soooooo much for making my day!!

Jackson is such a bad boy that he is sooo hot. Emmett is such a cooool piece of vampire!

This is one of my favorite pictures of Emmett, so I hope you enjoy it!

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Reviewer: Shena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 16

Hmmmm... I swear your killin me, I tell ya KILLIN ME!!!! Im bouncing like Alice on crack over here dying for bella to make a decision, and at the same time I'm dreading what that decision will be. Still luvin ya sis. Keep it coming!!!



Author's Response:

You are still toooooo adorable. They will all have some decissions to make and our little Bella is effecting all of them! 

You can't help but to love both of  the boys even though they each have a bad side!

I am posting the next chapter this evening or in the morning!

LOVE YOU SOOOOO MUCH SISTER!!!

Even just looking at them side by side; it hard to choose!

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Reviewer: Byakuya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2012 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 16

cant wait to see what happens still hope to see the bella and jax pair he is way way better looking ;) hope to see more soon cant wait!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading me sweetie!

I am posting the next chapter tonight or in the morning!

Here is some more Jackson love for you!

 

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Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 11:34 PM Title: Chapter 16

first thank you for that sexy jaxs pic!!! loved it! now damn shit keeps getting heavy lol yes jax can take clay if he is smart about it......cant wait to see what happnds next!!



Author's Response:

Your soooo welcome!! Shit is gonna get a lot deeper before it's over!

I am posting the next chapter tonight or in the morning!

Thank you for me and here is some more sexy Jackson

 

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Reviewer: secret lover of him Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 16

OMG i cant wait to find out... I get so excited when i see a new chapter....



Author's Response:

I get SUPER excited when someone wants to read me!!

I will be posting the next chapter tonight or on the morning!!!

Thanks Darlin for reading me!!!!stories/58558/images/Jackson_smiling.jpg

Reviewer: hateme101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love the story. Can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Thank you sweetie for reading me. I also saw your penname on FanFiction!

I am posting the next chapter to this site tonight or tomorrow.

 

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Reviewer: hateme101 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

I Love Bella and Jaxs



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for reading me!!!!!

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Reviewer: Byakuya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2012 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 15

Omg can't wait for more!! Hope to see more soon love it and I'm still hopin for Bella and jax! Please please please



Author's Response:

I am glad that you are enjoying the story.

We are only about half way through with the story. So there is a lot more to come.

I am posting another chapter today!

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Reviewer: inlovewithSethPaulJasper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 15

WOW! I love it Mama Bird. I need more tho, you left it on a cliffy.

:( lol. I soo can't wait to see how everyone takes that tad bit of news clay just said out loud.

Yea I'm ready to post the 1st chapter of 1 of our new stories as well. I would just like you to read over what I have so far.

Love how Jaxs and Jacob are getting closer and are friends. I'm still waiting for that one special chapter you said is coming. LOL!!

Love ya to Mama Bird, XOXOXOXO..

And Auntie Bird (Monkeyman) Get a hold of me. I need to talk to you, love ya to. XOXOXOXO..



Author's Response:

Hey Kid!

I am posting another chapter today!

I have been writing, writing, writing!!!

I will get with you today. I cannot get Peters......peter to find a good ending.

LOVE YOU LOTS BABY BIRD! XOXOXOXOXOXO "over"

I have not seen monkey girl for a while!!!

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Reviewer: crystanroten Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 15

damn!! that about sums it up lol. loved the hott beach sex!  you know'i love me some jackson !! and clay had lost his mind.....



Author's Response:

Clay has.......lost his mind. But now the aftermath with Jackson and Bella is yet to come.

 

I know your my little Jackson girl!!!

Soooo I am sending you some Jackson love!!!!

 

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Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 7:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

Well we are drifting here. Jax how we wish he could or would get out of this Sons group. I guess he won't.  Em?  Who knows where that is going.  Of course Jax and Jacob would bond together.  Similiar.



Author's Response:

Jackson cannot be a Son with them anymore.

Emmett will be back of course. Jacob is going to be important for the nest few chapter.

Thank you sooo much for reading me!

 

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Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:50 AM Title: Chapter 15

I love you too sister very much and a little more than that, lol. Thanks for the reminder and praise at the end of the chapter, I rubra * - * I missed you so .....

I hit one of the true hypothesis, the package saved the confrontation, one left ..... more Jaxs Curiouser.

Beautiful bike Jaxs remake of Jacob as a gift.

Jaxs Bella is in love with the sand was hot, haha, more ...... where's Emmett, he did not appear in this chapter, I was feeling in him, snick.

Now that was Jaxs a surprise to discover Clay is the father of Bella was right?

Bella's love and knowing that the two have to choose one, making her want to escape this choice is finding it unworthy of the two right? Now I ask, if each of them to stay without it they will like? like, they have to think of it this way, since they last go thinking too much about it right I believe that none of them want to be without it, then they have to see each of your side. And there may come to a common denominator for both stay with it, eh. Like the idea?

Now changing the subject ... as the blonde knew he wanted to Emmett's bike? Edward has already arrived and told her what he wanted? And if Edward has returned may find this a chance to get rid of Jaxs once to get closer to Bella. I'm going crazy here both burn my neurons with assumptions, Lol KKK

PS. Please update soon soon, but without delay. XOXO

PS2. I loved the heap and a little more, the picture of the beautiful Jaxs, the answer to my last review. Sister you live in my heart, XOXO




Author's Response:

Yes Jackson is going to very surprised that Clay is Bellas father. But Bella is going to have to deal with the aftermath of that.

The blond is Rosalie and we will see why in the next chapter that she knew. Of course that wasnt what she was supposed to have done!

Our boy Emmett will be back in this next chapter and the hate that he and Jaxs have will come out!

The time is coming closer for Bella to have to decide which man to walk beside and who is more in her heart. You cannot do justis to two men at the same time no matter how hard you try!!!!

I will update as soon as I can. But I must give my Peter, Jasper  and Paul some love too LOL!

 

P.S. I love ya sister and peace til next ttime.  I hope that you enjoy this one just as much!!!!!

 

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Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 15

Damn, I have missed these boys! favorite line......." Ride me like my Harley" ummmm, yes please!!!!  H, O, T,   Hot girl!!! Loven how close jaxs and Jacob are getting. I can't wait to know what my position in your naughty girls club is!!! I can think of some positions for sure that I would try out with emm, jaxs and Peter!!,! Hahaha.  Great job sister! I can't wait to see whats next!



Author's Response:

I liked that line tooooo! Because who in the hell would'nt want to do that with Jackson!!!!

You are a very very naughty girl!!!  Peters naughty girl club will be posting soon LOL!  I am going back and posting the postions that I have already giving in the new chapter!! Of course I'm the PRES of the club LOL!

I was giggling at the postions with Emm, Jaxs and of course me boy Peter!!!

 

HERE IS SOME JACKSON AND EMMETT LOVE FOR YOU!!!!!

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Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 15

Wow this is gonna get good. I'm loving this story more and more. I CANNOT WAIT TO SEE THE NEXT UPDATE THANKS FOR THE CHAPTER I LOVED IT!!

Author's Response:

Hey my sunshine girl!!

 

I am glad that you are enjoying the boys.

I will update as soon as I can.

But I am sending you Jackson and Emmett til then!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

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Reviewer: Shena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2012 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 15

I wouldn't be anywhere else Doll!!!! I'm with you till the end!  Love Jacob and Jax!!! But Bella is givin me whiplash....not that i blame her DAMN! LUV YA SIS!



Author's Response:

You such a sweetie.

 

That damn Bella is the luckest girl. She gets all the vampires, wolves and now the hot biker boy too. Damn.......just to get to be her!

Bella is making things more comlicated for herself right now that she has to. She is about to face some of those complications!

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Reviewer: Shena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 14

Hot damn, all caught up and ready to roll! Love ya doll!



Author's Response:

I love you too!!!!!

I will be posting the next chapter today or tomorrow!!!

It means a lot to me that you came over here to read me!!!

Reviewer: Shena Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2012 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 10

Yep.... I found ya here too.... Not a stalker I SWEAR!!! lmao I just wont have to wait for updates till I catch up with ya....damn i think i might be converting to Emmett... what are you doing to me woman?????



Author's Response:

It is not an easy choice to make. I posted that note on chapter 8 (A lot of you want both or you will)

You can stalk me anytime LOL!

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Reviewer: Byakuya Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2012 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

Ahhh I can't wait for more!!!! I'm still hopin for Bella and jax to get together! Love it and hope to see more soon



Author's Response:

I will be adding another chapter this week!

Thank you so much for reading me!!!

HERE IS SOME JACKSON LOVE!!!

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Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

I LOVE IT!

Reviewer: coolbikermama Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2012 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 13

No Jaxs cannot be a vampire!! No No No

But you know that I will read it anyways LOL!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 14

OMG I love Jacob and he is the last one that I would think would be in this story. Now they will have to tell Jaxs the truth about everything. This shit is just fucken awesome.

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 13

NOOOOOOOO do not turn Jaxs into a vampire. All though he would be 15 times hotter so maybe. Hell I don't know I love both Jaxs and Emmett. I would be sad if Jaxs died.

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 12

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 11

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 10

LOVE PETERSGIRL

 

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

 

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 9

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 8

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 6

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 5

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 4

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 3

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 2

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: witchywoman000 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 1

LOVE PETERSGIRL

LOVE HOT HARLEY BOY JAXS

LOVE COOL EMMETT

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER XOXOXOXO

 

I am so excited about getting to read new chapter from you!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 14

HOLY SHIT Now the wolves are in this story tooooo

how much better can it get

 

PLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEAAAAAAASSSSSEEEEEEE update ASAP!

 

I am wolf kind of a girl. Now if you would have Jackson and Jacob doing Bella well that would be the best lemonaid ever!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 13

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU EMMETT AND I AM REALLY HOT AFTER JACKSON!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND HOT VAMPIRE BIKER NAUGHTY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU EMMETT AND I AM REALLY HOT AFTER JACKSON!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND HOT VAMPIRE BIKER NAUGHTY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 11

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU EMMETT AND I AM REALLY HOT AFTER JACKSON!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND HOT VAMPIRE BIKER NAUGHTY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 10

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU EMMETT AND I AM REALLY HOT AFTER JACKSON!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND HOT VAMPIRE BIKER NAUGHTY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 9

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU EMMETT AND I AM REALLY HOT AFTER JACKSON!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND HOT VAMPIRE BIKER NAUGHTY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU EMMETT AND I AM REALLY HOT AFTER JACKSON!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND HOT VAMPIRE BIKER NAUGHTY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 7

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU EMMETT AND I AM REALLY HOT AFTER JACKSON!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND HOT VAMPIRE BIKER NAUGHTY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 6

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU EMMETT AND I AM REALLY HOT AFTER JACKSON!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND HOT VAMPIRE BIKER NAUGHTY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 5

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU AND PETER!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND THE GANGS CRAZY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 4

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU AND PETER!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND THE GANGS CRAZY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 3

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU AND PETER!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND THE GANGS CRAZY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 2

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU AND PETER!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND THE GANGS CRAZY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Cherry Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

WE ARE HERE!!!!!

WE LOVE YOU EMMETT AND I AM REALLY HOT AFTER JACKSON!!!!!!!

IAM POSTING THIS TO EVERY CHAPTER UNTIL YOUR ALL CAUGHT UP!!!!!

WE HAVE MISSED YOU AND HOT VAMPIRE BIKER NAUGHTY SHIT THEY DO!!!!!!!

 

LOVE YOU TOO SISTER!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 14

I loved it. It so amazing everything that you have done with this story.

Now that Jaxs knows the secrect how will that shit play out (a ittle biker talk)

CANNOT WAIT UNTIL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!

 

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 13

has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group voted you:

 

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 12

has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group voted you:

 

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 11

has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group voted you:

 

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 10

has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group voted you:

 

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 9

has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group voted you:

 

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 8

has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group voted you:

 

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 7

has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group voted you:

 

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 6

has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group voted you:

 

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 4

t has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group voted you:

 

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMEETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

t has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group voted you:

 

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMEETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

Reviewer: Lemonaid Gang Fruit Punch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 1

 

 

t has taken forever to get over here with all my sisters.

You know that we formed our discussion group because of you and MY JOURNEY

You are our favorite author and we could not love our naughty petersgirl more!

So here is what our group votoed you:

BEST AUTHOR:  PETERSGIRL

FAVORITE QUEEN OF PUSSY:  PETERSGIRL

 

FAVORITE VAMPIRE/BIKER STORY:   Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE BIKER:   JACKSON TELLER        Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires


FAVORITE VAMPIRE ON A HARLEY:   EMMEETT CULLEN    Hot Harleys and Cool Vampires

 

 

I cannot wait for this story to start posting new chapters because we have missed you sooooo much!

I am posting this on every chapter until you post a new update

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 11

Hey I am a FanFic sister and I love you too.

 

I am really falling in love with this story. But don't tell Peter that LOL!

 

I am kind of torn between Emmett and Jackson. I think that they both complete her in differnt ways. I also think that they make her a better person too.

It is to bad that they could not make enough Bella to go around. LOL!

 

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 10

That would suck big time finding out that way.

 

I love you too!

Reviewer: NikkiBlue855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2012 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 9

I think that I am just in love with JAXS

I hope you continue writing all your stories because I love your work.

You are the only reason that I came to this site!

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Date: 27 Jun 2012 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 14

omg i absolutly love this story i just cant stop reading it its the best one i have read yet i cant wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

I am glad that you are enjoying it. This story has never been my most popular story but it is my favorite one to write.

Your making me feel really good that it is the best one that you have ever read!

I will have the next chapter chapter out in a few days.

Thank you sooooo much for reading me!

 

 

Reviewer: NikkiBlue855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 8

I am just ...... um... Emmett on one hand and Jackson on the other..............she just cant lose no matter who she chooses.

Reviewer: NikkiBlue855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 7

Bella and Jackson so belong together. I am just falling head over heals for this biker. I LOVE YOU PETERSGIRL!

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 6

More shit is going to go down. I was talking shit like they do.

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 5

Bella has to be the luckest bitch I know. She gets them allllllllll

Reviewer: NikkiBlue855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 4

THis story is as good as MY JOUNREY. I love Jackson but I am still in love with Peter too.

Reviewer: NikkiBlue855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 10:35 PM Title: Chapter 3

Oh shit is probably Dickward coming to visit!



Author's Response:

Your close but you know DICKWARD will make an appearance sooner or later!

Thank you soooo much for reading me!

Reviewer: NikkiBlue855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 2

Um.....I am starting to really like the biker dude!



Author's Response:

I really like the biker dude too!

I hope that you will contiinue to enjoy him!

Reviewer: NikkiBlue855 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:46 PM Title: Chapter 1

I am here because I love you and missed reasding MY JOURNEY!!!!!

But I kind of like this one too!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you Darlin for coming over here to read me!


It means alot to me!!


I will have this caught up by the weekend!

Reviewer: analitica1234 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 14

Omg this is getting good! I cannot wait to see what happens next and who stays with bella.

Author's Response:

Hey my little sunshine girl!

I am glad that you are enjoying Jaxs and Emmett.

I will post the next chapter in a few days.

Thank you sweetie for reading me!

 

Reviewer: Cullensbabymama7 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh man, the girl has such will power. The dirty things I would do to Jax, even in Billy's bed i dont give a damn. Girl should have got her freak on!

Now I know I said that I wanted Bella to be with both Emmett and Jax, but I changed my mind while I was reading this chapter, not to mention I've been thinking about it ever since I read through the story two other times since I reviewed.

I want Bella with Jax, I feel like she is meant to be with him. To give him peace and settle his soul along with Abel. He's been through alot, and he deserves to have Bella, to have her with him and Abel. She's really the only mother Abel knows and it's fucked up to take her from Abel too.. It's not just about Jax.

I know Emmett loves her too, but is she even his mate? Let's say she isn't his mate, then what? What he meets his mate down the road after Bella is turned into a vampire, and She ends up having to go through what Emmett is going through now, waiting to decide who he's gonna choose? And lets say she is his mate, then what about Jax? I dont see him with anybody else really but her. She makes him a better man dispite SAMCRO and SOA's dealings in his life.

Your the writer, it's your story.. but I'm the reader and I'm giving my imput on what I think. Either way I know I'll love the outcome of the story, but I'll still cry at whatever choice she makes, out of happiness and sadness. Happiness for the guy she picks, and the sadness to the one she doesnt..

BTW it looks like Jax is gonna find out those bulletts arent really gonna injure the fuckers that want Bella.. VAMPS OUT OF THE BAG NOW isnt it?

Love the update btw too. I stll would have got my rocks off in Billy's bed.



Author's Response:

Bella is the luckest bitch I know. She gets all the vampires and wolves. Now she gets the hot bikeer boy tooooooo. I agree I would do dirty naughty things to Jackson and just could not help myself!

I do not know what to say. Seriously you read my story three times?????? That is like getting a naughty Emmett and Jackson award for me!!!

There is always some readers that I connect with. It is like they are in my head. I know I sound like Jackson right! I would say that..................you are one of those. It should be very interesting your opinion over the next couple of chapters.

Bella makes both Emmett and Jackson want to be a better man. But she cant always have it both ways!

I love reader interaction. I have only been on this site for going on two weeks now. I send SHOUTS OUTS to my readers in MY JOURNEY, HARLEY REV UPS in this story and WOLF WHISTLES in Little Red Riding Hood and One Bad Wolf. I was not sure if people would think I was crazy for doing that here. But I want my readers to get involved, have a good time reading and in MY JOURNEY be as naughty of girl as you can. That is probably why FanFiction deleted my ass LOL! I was just tooooo naughty. But so were my readers!!!! I fucken love that!

I was thinking........THE WOLFS OUT OF THE BAG NOW! So I was giggling at your response of the vamps.

Thank you soooooooo much for reading me and I look forward to hearing from you!!!!



 

Reviewer: mymonkeyman12 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 14

So now Jaxs will know their secert. I really am starting to love Jacob being in this story. GREAT CHAPTER.......update soon



Author's Response:

I am glad that I made my little monkey man happy !!!!!


I love Jacob being in here tooo!

 

Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 14

I loved how long this chapter was. They could all be this long, just kidding.

But see what I am saying........,.......BOTH OF THEM SHOULD GET BELLA!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Well all the chapter will nor be this long LOL!

Alot feel like you do because they cannot choose over Emmett or Jackson


Thank you soooo much for reading me!

 

Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 13

OH BIGGER FUCK! Jaxs would not make a good vampire!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading me.


I know my SOAGirl is cheering Jackson. Yeah he is a hottie!

Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh Fuck. Jaxs got shot!!!!!

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Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:38 PM Title: Chapter 14

love this chapter. funy how jax gets along with jake , i feel bad for both em and jax. bet jax ends up finding out about vamps and wolves now....ready for more!!! glad you are back i was starting to wonder where you went!



Author's Response:

Jaxs getting along with Jacob is very important!

I feel bad for both of them too. But Bella is the luckest bitch I know. She gets all the vampires and wolves. Now she gets the hot biker boy!

That is sweet that you were wondering  where I was. Does that mean you missed me or..............Emmett and Jackson LOL!

I will be posting again soon!

Thank you sooooo much for reading me!

Reviewer: fanette Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 14

Oh girl, you know my style, jax's Emmett's and Peter's love!!!!! Yummy!  Wow, it's about to get crazy. I think they are going to have to tell jaxs what is going on, or he is going to get himself killed! Loveing it sister!



Author's Response:

Oh girl we both have the same style!!!! Because I just love them allllllll

You are right about that. It is just about to get real crazy! 

Jackson is about to step into a world that he knew nothing about and so are they.

I LOVE YA SISTER!!!!!!!!!  Thank you so much for reading me.

Reviewer: Louise Clark Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 1:41 PM Title: Chapter 14

Jacob and the pack are involved now too? Holy cow, woman! LOL! No zombies, though, I hope. ;)

Can we have Charlotte kill that psycho hose beast Rosalie, and soon?! Thanks. That bitch makes me so angry, I swear I was reading cross-eyed! Grrr!

I cannot wait to collab with you on you know what! ;) Should it be in the forest, on the beach, or in a bedroom (any other ideas?)?? ;) Kitchen...Clubhouse... I feel like it's going to be an impromptu thing. Maybe two of them are already kissing and the third walks in and gets invited to join them?? Let me know! :)

Reviewer: Angelik Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

Loved him very much to get your update now full of novelty and flattery to myself lolll. Thanks to the two.

I noticed two jealous (even Emmett). They want it, and the two think it leaves too. The situation is quite controversial. Thankfully, there's no more to add Jacob, hehe. Oh I forgot, is that Edward should be plotting what will make.

Now it is tight with Jacob and Bella Jaxs two vampires. Does Emmett will now appear suddenly or the package?There is Jaxs imagination to discover the secrets smart huh wow.

Now comes the second most important thing after reading giving my opinion ..... when is it expected new update, I'm crazy here, as these three will get out of this??

Kisses and update soon, please.

XOXO




Author's Response:

I just love you!! You make my day.

Emmett and Jackson are fight with each other for Bella. But they are  fighting with themselves too about who is better for her.

There always could be a few more surprise vistors in this story!!!!   Jackson is going to start doing a lot of discoveries over the next couple of chapters. It will get complicated!

I am going to send the next update in a couple of days!

Thank you for wanting to read me and making my day!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

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Reviewer: inlovewithSethPaulJasper Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 14

Smacks my own forhead.. OOH! Yea I totaly forgot about that convo. LOL!!

I loved this chapter Mama Bird. You never got on yahoo either, so we could talk about our story.

Damn it, not only is this a biker and vamp story now it's a wolf story as well. and you got all the hot and sexy men in this story.

Jaxs, Emmett, Paul, Seth, Carlisle, Half sak, and a hell of a lot more.

Well get a hold of me when you wanna work on that story.

Love ya Mama Bird XOXOX..

P.s. this is for all my Auntie Birds out there XOXOXOXOX Love ya



Author's Response:

Hey Kid!!

I have been busy. I am keeping up with two sites and trying to write like hell!!!!!


LOVE YA!!!!

MAMA BIRD OUT!!!!! "OVER"

I am posting this picture because it is one of my favorites!!!stories/58558/images/article-1322134922411-07EC12C7000005DC-941192_431x650.jpg

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2012 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 14

You are going to kill Jax or change him?  Make up your mind!  Whiplash !



Author's Response:

I am not sure how to respond. This chapter was not about doing either one of those. It is about him knowing the secret and what is to come after that.

No one else that reviewed thought I was going to change him or kill him but I now wonder if other readers did.


Thank you sooooo much for reading me!

Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 11

Okay I am going to have to admit that Emmett is a hot lover. But I was thinking that maybe she can have the best of both worlds. Jackson can light her up and Emmett can cool her off. Im just saying................

Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 10

OMG I am so glad that you wrote this. I have never read a story like it before. It is fucking awesome.

Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 9

Edward should pit a new and exciting twist to this story.

But Bella is falling for both of them

Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:40 PM Title: Chapter 8

Damn I knew Emmett loved her toooooooo................no Jackson is the one

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 7

Awe to Jackson when he was holding Abel and telling him that he would bring his mommy home.

Why is Clay so hell bent on them not being together.

I hate Tara. Someone should kick her ass.

I would choose JACKSON

 

Reviewer: SOAGirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 6

I love the shit out of this story

So now we the mom drama being thrown in the mix

Emmett is in love with her right?????????????

Ugh I wish I knew but I will keep reading to find out LOL!

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

Well Shit, Emmett is going to tell her that he loves her????

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO She belongs with Jaxs.

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Date: 22 Jun 2012 1:20 PM Title: Chapter 4

YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES YES give more like this.

Bella was a bad ass in this. Jaxs was so..............yummy.

Emmett did save Bella and Abels life. But I hope that he doesnt want her because she belongs with Jaxs.

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